The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

congrats on ur second FF shilpi.....sorry i 'm late naaa..... actually didnt gt d tym,,,,busy naa..

still nt read ur latest part....but start ws awsome n great story👏👏👏....n very nice style of writting 'keep it up👍🏼...... thanx 4 pm,,,dear,,,,,latest part ....i'll read it soon ,,,,n coomment😳.... if i missed maafi😳,,,,,dont forget to pm me next tym😳,,,

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Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

very nice and long part . love nakku and duttas bond . their relationship has been beautifully depicted . well done 👏

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Lifu18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

wow yaar this ff is awesome as i read each of ur updates i keep wanting more sigh will wait for ur next update patiently

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usha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

So sweet ...they are so sweet 2gether.......they really care and are moral support fr each other........a very nice updt...........an emotional one............

looking frwrd fr the nxt part..........updt sooooooon.........

Thanx fr PM

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

awesome update

awww tasha sleeping in the sme bed...awww they r one another's strength n their friendship has been so beautifully described in ur ff... it shows hw strong it is... tru friends r those tht r with u thru ur highs n lows......its gd they hav 1 another

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prettywoman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

whatever i write will be too little to espress the joy i have felt reading this story.. i am actually living every moment, when reading it. the two kids, their tears, fears and joys are all so real..i am totally totally awed reading this part.. cant get enough of it and really wish and hope u update soon.. here in UK it is snowing non stop, a very beautiful sight if you are indoors , but freezing you in seconds when you are outdoors.. i had to go out for the usual grocery, market shopping.. people were so disgruntled and cold cos of the snow, but pls believe me when i say that i had the biggest smile on my face thinking of your two adorable characters , esp the name Nakshu is soooo sweet..i liked it better than nakku.. and tudu doll.. ha ha..this story gave me so much warmth that i did not feel the cold when i was outdoors!

now coming to this part, i really thought i wont be able to see LTL's nakku in nakshu, but i can .. in a diff way.. the way she feels for Dutta, the way she can read his mind, the way she is trying to be the stronger of the two all bring back memories of nakku.. wow.. i loved the kids scenes, esp how you turned her from a princess to a tomboy.. just like my sanju.. and who was following her best friend without batting an eyelid.. gosh he has even taught her to climb trees!!! just need to get her to stop the waterworks huh.. hey, that aint gonna happen D.. and i can forsee how you are gonna go weak seeing those big eyes filled with tears.. and i loved Nakshu's mum.. she seems a very charming lady with a great intuitive mind, esp when she says that after that 1st Xmas, you took away my daughter.. almost like uski bidaai ho gayi.. gosh, i am mad! but the two are inseparable and she knows that the two are made for each other.. she has hinted that only na.. why oh why did he go away after his mum died.. i am sooo curious now.. even after his dad dies, no one could bring him out of his sadness, and all it took was her being there for him to let down his defences.. i really adored the way she crept into bed with him now and in the past.. the way she sleeps with her back to him, his hand on tummy a replica of what had happened 1st time around.. i had a hearty laugh when she said that they had slept together before also.. how innocently she said that line.. and poor D is so frustrated that she is near him and cant control/hide his feelings na.. he was so protective of her when she was a child, and i can see that happening now also.. he is scared of showing his love lest she does not reciprocate and he ends up losing her even as a friend na..poor thing..

will update later as kids calling!

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Awesomeeee update...

their past n present is so painful...

Dutta became a stone after SP's death n Naksh brought him back n made him cry.. awww they shared the bed,.. how cute..

n then present... she lied down next to him again so he could take her pain away... amazing... history repeating itself but under different circumstances.

Love their friendship... how he changed her n took her everywhere with him... n the way he's protective towards her just says it all...

Im sure he will bring happiness back in Naksh's life... she will be happier with him. Good Daniel went lol adventure freak!

Love it shilpi.. ur awesome..

Thanks for the PM... Continue soon.

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

omg dey died..hw dd hz mum die?? awhh bles hm it wz such an emptional update...rli had tearz in ma eyez😭 bt luvd it hw tasha hav olwaiz bin der 4 eachoda..awh naku wnt 2 sleep wv im evn wen she grwn up..awh i bet D stil has da childhoon memoriez hiden behind sumwer .. he had 2 grwn up at such an earli age..enwy enuf of my crap gna b ere 4eva lol..thnx 4 pm hun continue soon.xx