The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

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MAAHI_RCKZZ

@MAAHI_RCKZZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

wow awesome update

i wnt to knw wat dutta iz hiding & i wnt him to confess his love

update soon yaar

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suhana19

@suhana19

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Hey Shilipi thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM 🤗Loved the moments the spend near the lake ....just like a couple 😍...

Omg is dutta hiding something from naku ..i wonder what 😉

Awww i really loved the scene btw naku and her dad.....so cute and sweet ..

Dutta is still feeling bad that he is going to leave....but i bet he wont able to leave😆...

Omg u left at cliffhanger ...pls pls jaldi update karna.....

Thanx once a again for the treat .....u take care and see ya around

👍🏼👏🤗

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: shilpita87
Ch11: Joy to the World

hey hi shilpi,.......

wat a scene to end dearie........ u want us longing for more na.......😆

dont take too many days to update dearie........... max by tomorrow........ weekend special de do yaar.

ur update was superb......👏👏👏

oh sure, dutta wud hav taken to drugs to overcome his dil ka dard....... n might b in the process wud hav lost a coworker or friend.............. not sure...........

oh he is such a sweetheart, wud never lie to nakusha....... right..... he wil come up with it in the night to come........ isnt it.............

hope they hav a heart to heart convo....... so many of their questions wil b answered........

oh u wil make me end up writing ur ff with my horrible guesses.........

tc
divya

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: KavitaDR
RES😊

Hey Shilpi,

Gosh, today has been one of those crazy days at work and just could not get back to the spot I had reserved.....Apologies😳. I will compensate by quoting Kevin Brook's Everlasting Love which I feel suits Dutta's intensity to the T. Read it and let me know. I would love to see him bare his soul and admit to what he has deprived himself of for years.

"-From the moment I saw you
I knew we would be like glue
-Stuck together forever
Even through the worst endeavor
-Our souls have bonded
And love responded
-My heart melts when you are around
Without you all I have is this frown
-Someday we are going to part
And we are going to have a new start
-You have become a love in my heart
Which I know that will never depart
-The impact you have had on me
Will stay for eternity
-My love for you is strong
And will be life long
-Life with you has been great
I sometimes think I have found my soul mate."

He just needs to change the parting bit to Somehow, we are never going to part.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Hugs,

Kavita😊

don't need to appologies..i am so glad that even in most busy day you took the time to read my FF..the poem is beautiful..yes it does suit him doesn't it....oh....what a bunch of mushy soppy ppl we are...!!!😳

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#265

hey it was great update dear.............
tasha scenes at lake was sooooooooooooo cute n naku-ben arguments was nice.........
finally dutta became soo happy n enjoyed with naku n her family..........i loved it............
y dutta was freezed ,when he open the door????????????
it's not fair,y u stopped at this point???????? yaar.............
update ASAP................

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

mindblowing update ... simply love the way u describe each n every scene with so much of detail ... the berry seed throwing scene was superb ... enjoyed the way they were competing with each other ... omg dutta has tried drugs ... oh god why did u stop at such a crucial point ...updt soon

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#267

shilpi........loved this part.......seed throwing was awesome.......why Dutta reacted like this......what is he hiding from her..........plz solve the mystery soon........

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Hey Shilpi,

I feel for D...what happened w/drugs?!? Did someone took wrong ones under his watch? Is that why he feels guilty, survivor guilt....

I think N's parents need to say something to him....otherwise both N & D will suffer!

Waiting for next part, pls...I think N should propose to him in church!

-Sona

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#269

hey shilpi,

i have only just started reading ur ff becoz i was a way and i'm catching up with everything i've missed do sorry for not commenting earlier.

it's such a great FF yaar, so far i've read up to ch 7 and i am just in a daze you write so fantastically!! prologue shocked me i really thought it was Dutta who stood her up lol, loved the way you tricked us. my fav ch was 2 and 3 hearing the death of Duttas death and the way he handled it and just everything about it made me cry literally bought tears to my eyes, i have never cried at reading something but ur FF was just so good that it really did touch my heart😭.it as so beautiful the way you described his pain and what his mother went thru and how naku couldn't bear to loose her friend it was just wonderful. moving on to the other ch, i love how they both have feelings for eachother and Naku is determined to get it out of him abit like the show.

i am determined to catch up with the rest of the chapters and when i do i will leave another comment, the best thing about being behind tho is that i won't hav to wait 4 the next update lol😆

P.S i will get on to reading ur other ff to, as soon as i can.

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mozart66

@mozart66

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#270

Lovely Shilpita!! I always eagerly await your updates!!! You might wonder why don't I write something more in my reply to your updates. Well, kya kare? you render me speechless every time!!!

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