The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb - Page 25

Present day

Telankhadi lake,Nagpur

YOu have described the scene so beautifully

the first para is out of the world

i cant even comment on it

it was just too xceptional

Dutta getting drown in his memories

his youth days when he was someone so differenet what he is now

and when they laugh

it was like in all those sorrows , sadness n tears

they still have so much to laugh on !

the memories they though they have forgot !

and when Naku questions him abt hw he was at church

the questions which is running in her mind may be when she saw him there or how much she tries not to know Y he was there at the church

But she had to cuz now she dont want any assumptioons fromher mind to give her answer now she needs to get face to face with the truth !

A week back,17^thDecember 2009

Somewhere over Pacific Ocean,Lufthansha flight.

OH well i just say Im sure Dutta would really be tired

cmon anyone can be annoyed with those long flghts ,no first class

and Lmao the best of the best companionship

(i think at this time he should have got the sign that this trip isnt going to be his way )

well wow it does feel nice to meet ur old friend

and wow this Kartik guy is really talkative

he wants to show his son pics to the man who is least bothered abt it :P

and wow Love has totally changed Kartik though Dutta didnt realize

love has change him too but not in the way mostly ppl want to

and hre he gets to know the news of the person he didnt want to know

The one person who he ones owe his childhood to , who do everything he wants and now from a third person he knows that he didnt know abt the most special day of the lifeof the persons which used to be integral part of his life !

His Naksh getting married to another man

and ahhhhhhh the dream so beautiful ,so close to his heart and yet so far from !

the dreams whom he fought for 5 yrs but finally give in

and finally the part the battle between heart n mind

and again the heart wins and he went to the place

where he didnt know his whole life will change !

Present day

Telankhadi lake,Nagpur

You make Dutta mad in this part just to make him realise what was the moment !

what was the thing , what made him fell for HIs Naksh so hard k he cant get over her ever !

He was looking at her like he has never seen her before

he was trying to fing his Naksh in her new face !
its like he is discovering her !

ad every discovery is making him loving her more and more though now his desires change !

Eight years ago: 27^th January 2003

Pebble nightclub,Bangalore

And ah Finally The Realization came to him

at the wrongest place , wrongest time and most probably wrongest position he was in !

He was contentful in his life

one year successful relationship , a nice internship

he was on the road of sucess

he was enjoying evry bit of it !

His girl loving him , caressing him and making him keep his promise of loving her being with her

Though he wants to but now His Heart cant lie anymore or maybe Avanti plea make the Heart realise

its not IT want , its not the heart carve for

and the HEart make the mind and tongue say what was kept inside his heart for soooooooo long !

he in the most awkward position realised thta he is totally , madily is in love with Naksh !

At that point of time i think Dutta realised

"It better be late than never "

and i think Avanti let go of him so easily cuz she knows a man in his arms is aying others woman name !

he really cant be hers ,a realization for Avanti too here :)

well I dont know what to say but u reallly did superb job with this part !

First tme i feel its not just naksh who is suffering the loss ,

he himself has suffered alot !

uperb Shilpi !
you cant imagine how much high hopes i have with u on this FF !

Keep up the great work dear

GOd bless u for entertaining us with such amazing story

which not only open my hearts door but my mind door too !