New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
put it under ur 1st update...thts hw sana has dne in her ffs...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful updt loved reading something from ur side after such a long time
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

wonderful updt loved reading something from ur side after such a long time

thank u so much rose...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update yaar update soon
tanx u da pm n dnt forget 2 pm wen u update 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Bushy🤗.. Toh tujhe tera ff yaad agaya😡.😆..i thought u gt gajani disease...😆 waah yuvi and sophie did amazing job...😆....if it happen next tym wil not tk chappal or hocky...wil wrt wrong spelling of ur name ...u knw me😉 hai naa??😆😆😆
ok cuming to update....nice part dear...D's proposing style ws very nice wit childhood pics...hmmn soo sweet...but B4 dey left party...why dont u show...sum dance n music?😒...chal its next part me daal diyo😳😆....Baaji's taunt to kala...ws too gud...👏....i luv Baaji's dialouge ..."abhi jaao....warna main emotional hojaunga"....nice😆😆😆... end on Tasha ws very cute n romantic 😳...very nice part well writeen too....wit explanation at end ...wht happened and wht not😉hun??...
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a sweet update, Bushy!!..and thanks for updating...
itniii der ke baad...
aww he proposed her...and the speech was so cute...and I love Baaji's reply to Kala..hilarious!
OMG Last wala TaSha scene toh rocking..so romantic..and haye Bushy..making love is the same as consumatting is it not?
update sooon
oh and how did the assignments, exams etc go
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone....and Sorry for updating so late.... without further bak bak here's the next part 😆

Yeh Mohabbat
Part 16

Next morning.....Dutta wakes up with the chirping of birds and the sunlight glowing on his face.....he wakes up to see Nakku by his side....he has a smile playing on his lips....he tries to get up but Nakku pulls him closer to herself....Dutta waits there patiently for some time and again tries to get up....but this time Nakku wakes up with him too....she looks up at him...

Nakku: hmm...good morning...*in a lazy tone*

Dutta smiles and says good morning..

Nakku: Tum itni jaldi kyun uth gaye...abhi toh subah ke 6.00 baje hai...(she gets up and wraps herself in his arms)

They both look at their rings.....

Nakku: Abhi bhi wishwas nahi hota ki hamari engagement hogayi hai...

Dutta: hmmm.....tum kaho toh ek baar phir engagement karlein...

Nakku: Shut up....*her phone rings..it was Riya*

Nakku: Hello!

Riya: Goodmorning doll.....u woke up so soon..

Nakku looks at Dutta and then answers: Good morning...haan...alarm ne jaga diya..*looking at Dutta*

Riya: Alarm kaafi handsome hai na?

Nakku: Bohat....

Riya: Oye hoye....accha sun aaj teri office mein chutti hai na...

Nakku: Haan...lekin main tujhe drop kar dungi...dont worry

Riya: Nahi..tu aaram kar....main chali jaungi...

Nakku: Ek kaam kar na...tu Baaji ko bol woh tujhe drop kardega...

Riya: Nahi yaar...Baji ko uske match ki practise karna hai na...tu chod main chali jaungi.....driver haina woh chod dega...u tc...baadmein milte hain ok...bye...

Nakku: Arey but meri baat toh...*b4 Nakku could complete her sentence Riya disconnected the call*

Nakku was a bit tensed...Dutta senses this and asks her...

Dutta: Nakku...is everything alrite?

Nakku: Pata nahi...pata nahi kuch theek hai ya nahi...

Dutta: Matlab?

Nakku: Matlab yeh ki...ek ladki ko yeh batadene se ki tum ussey kitna pyar karte ho, usey hamesha ke liye khush nahi karsakte....tumhe apna pyar dikhana bhi padta hai..

Dutta: Nakku tum kya bol rahi ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai...

Nakku: Dutta...main Baji aur Riya ki baat kar rahi hoon....dekho hum jaante hain ki Baaji Riya se bohat pyar karta hai....aur Riya bhi yeh jaanti hai....lekin kabhi kabhi uss pyar ko dikhana bhi padta hai...Baaji apne career ko lekar bohat serious hai...jo acchi baat hai...lekin in sabmein woh apni personal life neglect kar raha hai.....usey apne personal life ke baare mein bhi sochna hoga...Tum samajh rahe ho na...?

Dutta: Hmm....main samajh raha hoon....tum chinta mat karo...main baat karunga Baji se...theek hai...

Nakku: Theek hai....

Dutta: Ok now i have to go....

Nakku: Jaldi kya hai..baadmein chale jaana...

Dutta: Jaana kaun chahta hai....lekin jaana toh padega na...warna agar kisine mujhe yahan tumhare saath ek kamre mein dekhliya toh problem hojayegi....

Nakku wakes up with a jerk: Haan...maine toh socha hi nahi iss baare mein...abhi hamari shaadi bhi nahi hui hai.....omg...agar Papa ne tumhe yahan dekhliya toh woh tumhe maar denge....*she starts panicking* Dutta tum..tum...jao...darwaze se jao....nahi nahi nahi....darwaze se nahi....tum khidki se jao...yeh khidki se nahi doosri khidki se jao.....sambhal ke jaana....aawaz mat karna...chalo utho....*while Nakku was talking non stop Dutta was just admiring her...Nakku stops and looks at Dutta*

Nakku: Kya hua...tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho...?....Jao...

Dutta: Sshh..*he holds her hand* ..Pata hai...jab tum chup rehti ho toh bohat acchi lagti ho.....lekin jab tum bolti ho toh bohat khoobsurat lagti ho....jab tum meri itni fikar karti ho...toh jee chahta hai ki tumhe apne baahon mein chupa loon aur iss duniya se kahin door lekar jaaun....jahan koi bhi hamey disturb na karsake...*he sighs*..ahhh Nakku...tum agar meri zindagi mein nahi hoti toh mera kya hota??

Nakku who was all tensed was now confused coz she never saw Dutat talking so seriosuly....

Nakku: Kya hota?? Wahi hota jo mazoore khuda hota....*she starts laughing*

Dutta just looks at her with amusement.....with a gentle smile on his face....he felt lucky to have her in his life....he was amused by her innocence..by her kiddish nature...he cud not say anything to her..he just took her into his arms and felt at peace......he then kissed her on her forehead and left....Nakku touched her forehead and smiled to herself....

AT PN:

Dutat was slowly peeking in....he was abt to go to his room when Baji stops him from behind...

Baji: Raasta kaafi lamba tha shayad na Bhao....aapko itni der lag gayi ghar aane mein....

Dutta was feeling a bit shy: Err woh....traffic...

Baji: Traffic?? Haan...mumbai ki traffic.....ek baar usme phas jao toh subah tak hi nikal paate ho....hmmm

Dutta now sensed that he was being bullied....he pulls Baji's collar: Ey Baji....tu meri taang kheech raha hai...?
Baji: Arey bhao....nahi main aapki taang nahi kheech raha hoon..main toh bas thodi fikar kar raha tha aapki....woh kya hai na bhao...abb ek jawan ladka ghar ke bahar poori raat rahe toh uske chote bhai ko fikar hogi hi na....

Dutta: Haan haan...jaanta hoon tujhe kitni fikar horahi thi....nautanki kahin ka...

Baaji: Bhao.*he smiles*..aapko khush dekh kar bohat accha laga....aapke chehre par yeh jo chamak hai na..usey dekhne ke liye taras gaya tha main....aapne baba ki jaga leli.....mujhe baba nahi bhai chahiye tha...aaj mujhe mera bhai wapas mila hai....sirf Nakku ki wajahse....*Dutta hugs him with tears in his eyes* Dutta: Ey Baji...tu ro raha hai re....mujhe nahi pata tha ki mera chota bhia itni badi badi baatein bhi kar sakta hai.....*he pats his head*

Baji: Bhao.ro toh aap bhi rahe ho....*gives a warm smile* abhi aap jao...fresh hojao.....

Dutta stretching his arms lazily: Hmm....Tu kahan jaa raha hai?

Baaji: Main jogging par jaa raha hoon....

Dutta: Tu ruk....main fresh hokar aata hoon.....saath mein jogging par chalte hain...

Baaji: Ho bhao.....jaldi aana....*he goes and sits on the couch...stretching himself...he takes the enspaper lying on teh table and was looking at it aimlessly.....waiting for his bhao*

Kala comes there....: Arey Baaji...tu jogging par nahi gaya...?

Baaji: Arey Tai....nahi...woh bhao bhi aarahe hai na...toh main unka intezaar kar raha hoon...

Kala: Accha.....tu coffee piyega main banakar laati hoon....

Baaji: Nahi Tai....jogging se wapas aakar piyunga..

Kala: Accha bata naashta kya karega?
Baaji jumps from his couch: Tai?? Aaj naashta tum banarahi ho?

Kala: Haan....abb batayega kya khayega.....

Baaji: Ek kaam karo na Tai.....aap ko jo accha lage woh banadena...aapke haath ka khaana badiya hoga....*he shows his dimpled smile*

Kala cups his face: Mera chota bhai abhi bhi chota hi hai....*Dutta comes from behind*

Dutta: Haan tai abhi bhi chota hi hai....

Kala: Arey Dutta tu bhi aagaya.....

Dutta: Haan Tai...kyun aapko kuch kaam tha mujhse...?

Kala: Kuch kaam ho toh hi yaad karsakti hoon kya tujhe...haan?

Baaji interrupts: Arey Bhao...aaj naashta Tai banarahi hai....boldo kya khaoge...accha mauka hai...

Dutta: Tai tu jo bhi banayegi na...*b4 he cold complete his sentence Kala interrupts*

Kala: Woh accha hi banega...hai na?

Dutta: Haan....*Three of them hug together*

AS looks at them from her room and her face was shinign with happiness she looks at Bappa and thanx him*

Baji and Dutta go for jogging...after some time of jogging Dutta asks him to sit...

They both sit on a bench...

Baji: Kya hua bhao....yahan kyun baithgaye...?

Dutta: Mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai.....

Baji: Hana bolo na bhao...

Dutta gets up: Pata ahi Baji......jab main aur Nakku sirf dost thay...toh mujhe lagta tha ki woh rishta sabse khoobsurat hai...lekin jab main ussey pyar karne laga tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki dosti se haseen bhi ek rishta hota hai...Pyar ka....pehle main pyar ko ek mazaak samajhta tha... Ek ladki ke saath raat guzarna meri nazar mein pyar tha.....lekin sacche pyar ka matlab toh Nakku ne mujhe sikhaya......Pyar woh hai jo tumhe doosron ke liye jeena sikhata hai....pyar woh hai jo tumhe doosron ki khushi mein khushi dilata hai.....Jab tumhara dil kisi aur ke liye dhadke toh woh pyar hai.....jab tumhari har saans mein sirf ek insaan ka naam hota hai toh woh pyar hai......jab tum uski har ankahee baat ko jaan lete ho woh pyar hai...Jab tum uss ke saare gham ko apni aankhon mein samet lete ho toh woh pyar hai....Jab tumhe iss duniya ki sabse badi khushi sirf uski ek muskurat mein milti ho woh pyar hai....

Iss pyar ka matlab mujhe Nakusha ne sikhaya hai.... Main jaanta hoon Baji ki tu Riya se bohat pyar karta hai....saccha pyar karta hai....hai na?

Baji: Haan bhao.....lekin aap yeh saari baatein kyun bata rahe ho?

Dutta: Dekh Baji...tu Riya se bohat pyar karta hai yeh main jaanta hoon....hum sab jaante hain.....lekin kabhi kabhi ek rishte mein aisa mode bhi aata hai jahan par hamey apne pyar ko dikhana padta hai..usey yeh ehsaas dilana padta hai ki zindagi ke har mode par hum uske saath hai....uska haath thaamkar har mushkil ka saamna kar sakte hain....kabhi kabhi apne career ko chodkar apni life ke baare mein sochna padta hai....

*he puts his hand on Baji's shoulder: Tu samajh raha hai na main kya bol raha hoon?

Baji: Haan bhao....Main samajh gaya ki main kya bhool raha tha....main Riya ko ehsaas dilaunga ki meri zindagi mein uski kya importance hai....woh mere liye kitni special hai main usey bataunga....*he moves his hand through his hair* Thanx Bhao....mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas dilane ke liye....

Dutta: Thanx tu mujhe nahi Nakku ko bol...usine mujhe tujhse baat karne ko kaha...

Baji: Main jaanta tha.....aapmein itni samajh kahan hosakti hai.....

Dutta: Bajiiiiiiii..*Baji starts running and Dutta runs behind him* EY Baji ruk...ruk bola na..

Baji: Abb yeh Baji express seedha Patil Niwas jaakar hi rukegi......

Ok So here's the next part...i know its not that good

I wrote it at 3.am in the morning...i wanted to sleep but cudn't 😆

No Precap but i will update soon...😳

Plz press the LIKE button only if u liked it and leave ur comments....😳

~ LOVE~

* Bushra *


Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi busy..oppssyyy i mean 😳bushy🤗

Nice part dear...i lyk d Convo😳..sum dialouges r really nice😳..great wrk..nice update👏
Keep it up!😳.lol u wrt update at 3 am..😲 ohh god ...tujhe ye sujha kaise..lol whtever...it ws a nice part😃...sowree not going in detail...have to leave soo jaldi jaldi me sab kar rahi hun😆
Take care..see u soon🤗
wow RESRVED dibbo ki line lag gayi😆
edit add : my like button its not wrking😡
Edited by --SONEE-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
My place ..... a nice one yaar...........
So Dutta and nakku spend th night 2geher in Nakkus room........ so sweet of them...... Riya teasing Nakku...gr888 ........ Naku feels Baaji is not showin the luv he has fr Riya..... wow!!! she wants Dutta to make Baaji understand...... remembered HSSH Mohnishbehl and salman...... what is Kala upto??? acting too sweet to duji....... sumthing is cooking in her mind......... damn sure......
Updt soooooooooooon........ Thanx fr PM........ sorry fr late comments......
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tumhari wajayse... Sirf tumhari wajayse main darr darr ke pad rahi hoon😭😆
~Edit Again~
I was thinking how come they are in the same room.. I had to go back and check! See, this is what happens when you take 2 months to update😆...
Ok so again they shared their room but as decent people😆.. Thank god hitler didnt see.. Oh he's not hitler anymore.. he's madonna😆
So cute how Nakku panics.. 😆 Bless her😳.. Ok his dialogue of him having her and etc. just scares the hell outta me..!! 😡 See, you made me paranoid... Im like a mental person, biting my nails while reading cause u never know when they whole thing takes a U-turn😡😆. Do i even make sense?😭
OHH.. I smell Hum Saath Saath Hai😆... Brother's convo was really good.. im glad he explained everything to baaji n thnk god gadha#2 understood😆..
Awwww Baaji express😳.. *pulls baaji's cheeks*😆 Sorry for the delay... I reserved my place in the morning and then went bak to bed😆.
Great update doe.. great dialogues😉.. NO Precap... *Sophie starts shivering* 😆 Ok im officially scared
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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