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meriyaar thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ALVEERAALI

fabulous, awesome update plez add me to ur pm list


thanks a ton dear 😊
have u changed ur name?
i'll add u right away
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey that's sooo romantic yaar...
tasha in festival was full of fun n romance...i loved it...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: blueopal

hey that's sooo romantic yaar...
tasha in festival was full of fun n romance...i loved it...
looking fwd...


thanks hun, next ch is on it's way
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
last chapter will be up in a few hours and then i will post the epilogue once i've finished writing it. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar

last chapter will be up in a few hours and then i will post the epilogue once i've finished writing it. :)



i will wait
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here's the last chapter followed by an epilogue. This is more of filler really, to tie up all the loose ends. When I first started this ff I really enjoyed it and all the love I got from you guys just topped it all off. So thank you for those wonderful comments, thank you for pressing the like button and thank you to my silent readers too 😊

I decided to end it as I lost that interest I had for it and it would take me so long to continue it. Thank you to everyone once again love you!!!😃

part 12 - last chapter

Dutta and Naku spent the last couple of days on honeymoon romancing; there wasn't a single moment where Dutta would spare Naku of his touch. They did some more shopping and decided to do a water sport activity before they left. Well it was more like Dutta decided to; he literally forced Naku to join as well. They went water rafting something that Naku would never forget; it was the worst experience of her life. Something that has mentally scarred her, the fear of falling off and drowning wouldn't stop haunting her.

Obviously Dutta felt immensely guilty now for making her do it but she would always deny it and avoid the topic. She may have been scared but she was still the same Naku, it was just now she had a fear of the sea.

The journey back home was just as entertaining as the journey to Greece. The same public affection shown by Dutta especially on the plane, boy was he one mischievous guy or what.

Naku's cheeks were permanently red throughout their flight. She could here giggling coming from girls sitting on the other aisles and loud coughs from the elderly, she was so embarrassed.

The minute they stepped through the door the patil niwas clan had crowded them with laughter, hugs, kisses and just question after question coming out all of their mouths at once. The couple could sense the happiness in the faces of their family, they're return was obviously much awaited. Taking some rest they decided to give everyone their presents, whilst they lay their suitcase out in the living room the whole family had gathered in a circle all getting amazed by the couples vast shopping. There were many thank yous going around the room as each member received their gift.

Baaji never left a chance to tease the happy couple, especially because he could now see how happy they were. He was thankful to Madhu for all the help she gave to get these two close. And over the course of the two weeks Baaji and Mahu had become very comfortable with each other, they both gave each other company whilst their only friends in the house had gone. They didn't realise that they had become so close, they knew each other inside out and gradually fell in love. Baaji tried his best to hide this from Dutta and Madhu from Naku. But neither of them are stupid to not notice the way the two look at each other and how their eyes do all the talking. Dutta and Naku had discussed this with each other and both came to the conclusion that these two love birds had something going on. And so TaSha had taken the matter into their own hands both managing to get the partners in crime to confess their love for each other in front of everyone.

Baaji was ever so thankful to his bhau for getting his wedding fixed and not blasting at him because of Madhu being his sister and all. And in a way Dutta's and Madhu's relation had improved, Dutta was definitely in a good mood after coming back from his honeymoon and slowly he had started to see things in a positive light and his first priority was to fix things with Madhu.

Baaji and Madhu's wedding had been fixed and there was still another 3 months left after the engagement. In those three months Kala's truth had been exposed mainly due to her own stupidity. None of her plans were working (not that they ever worked in the first place), she was getting restless and now with Baaji getting hitched with Madhu was making matters much worse for her as Baaji was a key pawn in her game. She did everything she could to stop the wedding from happening but there was no such luck. And finally one day Dutta had heard the bitter truth of his so called sister coming from her own mouth. It was all because Kala loves talking to herself going through each and every detail of her pathetic plans out loud in her room. Laughing to herself taking sips of her champagne and blurting out all her previous plans out loud with the door wide open was her biggest mistake. As because of this stupidity Dutta had heard and seen everything.

He heard everything Kala hadn't missed anything out, right from the minute she started to hate him to making his life hell with helping Sups run away blaming it on Naku trying her best to stop the marriage from working, killing his father and many more other events.

Dutta was in a state of shock but anger took over quickly and he let out a sudden roar scaring the hell out of Kala and startling the rest of the family. If it wasn't for Naku and Baaji he would've killed her right there, Kishore was deeply ashamed he owned up to the fact he knew of Kala's hatred and some of her plans but the only reason he kept mum was because he didn't want to lose Anay. Kishore had explained to Dutta that Kala was threating to harm Anay her own flesh and blood the very child she gave birth too. Dutta felt sick after that, he was disgusted; as Kishore felt guilty for not speaking up he decided to take Kala away and to leave the lives of Patil Niwas forever. After Kala's crimes were out in the open Roops and Leela decided to own up, they both asked for forgiveness and explained that they were only following the orders of their sister who had brainwashed them with negative thoughts.

They may have gone through a big blow with Kala's truth but it felt like a big weight had been lifted of Dutta's chest. He may still have enemies but the biggest one who had done everything under his own roof was now out of the way. He felt slightly peaceful now that he doesn't have to worry about losing Naku or his dear ones as much.

Soon after wedding preparations were going under full swing, with the mehndi and sangeet rasms livening up the atmosphere. Baaji and Madhu's wedding was massive, and Baaji couldn't have been any happier his face was plastered with a huge grin that was just growing as the wedding proceeded. One thing he was waiting for was his Suhaag Raat, obviously he wanted it to be special so he took the responsibility of decorating his room for the night ordering the finest flowers, and scented candles, rose petals and a beautiful gift for his beautiful bride. That was the one thing he was nervous about whether she would like the gift or not. It was a silver chain with a heart locket and inside it was a picture of the two of them, on the back B+M was engraved on it. He couldn't wait to put it on her and touch her smooth skin and kiss every inch of her body. They had only shared one kiss and that was only because the situation demanded it.

-Flashback-

(i kinda used the scene from Just My Luck starring Lindsay Lohan and Chris Pine😳)

Madhu had decided to take her laundry to the washroom and try to work the machine herself. Whilst pouring in the powder her eyes had caught a glimpse of Baaji who was changing his kurta and her eyes had lingered on his body longer than it should've resulting in excess amount of powder in the machine. To her surprise the machine went a bit overboard and foam was going everywhere and whilst trying to turn it off she made things worse by turning on the tap with water spraying everywhere. Thankfully Baaji had come to the rescue turning the water and machine off. Madhu was embarrassed especially because the reason this had happened was coz of Baaji's body, she blushed remembering his gorgeous physique. To hide her embarrassment she started a foam fight with him throwing it at him and covering him with it. Baaji had grabbed on to Madhu trying to soak her but her stirring in his arms caused him to slip falling on top of her. That was it! He got lost in those chocolaty eyes and her perfect pink lips looked so tempting. Without realising he lent in closer gaining access to her mouth and turning it into a heartfelt kiss. They cherished the moment as a start to their relationship, not wanting to ruin their perfect romantic kiss; they kept it as just that one so they could hold it in their memories forever.

Baaji came back to reality smiling to himself and put the sindoor on Madhu's forehead, they took the pheras and vowed to always keep each other happy and love each other for an eternity. And finally came the SR, where he made Madhu his, once and for all. That was the start to the newly wedded life of Baaji and Madhu.

On the same night Dutta decided to have a Suhaag Raat of his own. He got the room decorated just like it was done on their second marriage. He requested Naku to wear her wedding outfit again and she did as he asked. Dressing up just like she did on the day of their wedding. She sat on the bed nervously as if it was her first night. Dutta came in and locked their door; he sat on the edge of the bed and lifted her veil letting it drop back. He sat up on the bed and carefully took each piece of jewellery off placing a kiss on the spot after taking each piece off. He unpinned her Dupatta and let it fall off the bed. Naku lay on the bed with her back towards Dutta, he caressed her back and undid the dhori of her blouse placing kisses all over her back and shoulders. He got her to face him and traced her jawline before passionately kissing her lips. Their clothes were soon all over the room and they lay in each other's arms, their bare bodies pressed against each other. After love making Naku rested her head on Dutta's chest whilst he stroked her hair. They spent the night talking about their new life and their future.

Some months past and the topic of marriage had sprung up again this time about Roops. The family had agreed that now Baaji was settled it was time for Roops to find a groom. Whilst Dutta was set for groom hunting Roops was getting nervous. She was already in love with someone else, a guy named Aakash. Roops was too scared to tell Dutta anything and asked Naku if she could talk to Dutta for her. After a lot hesitance he had finally agreed but only to check the boy out. If he liked him then yes if he didn't then a definite no. to Roops luck he had approved of Aakash and another wedding date was fixed, taking place 2 months after the engagement.

Wedding preparations were being done again and it was just as big as Baaji's. Naku was working around the house making sure everything was perfect, decked up in a heavy saree and heavy jewellery to go with it she was only able to take a certain amount of stress. But Naku being the perfect girl she is wasn't stopping even though she felt slightly dizzy she didn't let it stop her, carrying around heavy taals of sweets and flowers.

The wedding was over and it was time for the bidaai, everyone was in tears and so was Dutta as his little sister had finally grown up. He wasn't a man to show much affection towards his family but he was truly upset with Roops leaving, she was the only sister who wasn't going to live with them after marriage (not including kala of course) he hugged her tightly and pushed her car away, waving a final goodbye. The Patil family were exhausted and had taken off to their respective rooms. Naku was on her way up the first couple of steps when she started feeling dizzy but before she could take another step her view went black and all she could remember was landing on a pair of strong arms. She had fainted in Dutta's arms luckily he had noticed her hesitation and before she could fall he was by her side.

He was shocked she'd just fainted. He picked her up and took her to their room, laying her on the bed and tapping her face trying to wake her. He got some water and splashed it on her face but still no luck.

Dutta: naku, nauku… get up please….

hope you enjoyed the last part, the epilogue will be up soon, it's still in the process of being written. please leave your valuable comments which i love to read. and do press the like button.

once again thank you all so much for all your love and for making this ff possible. love you all!!!!😊

tc

xoxo

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited:
Hum Tum last chapter :(

ending ...am sad yet all stories eventually need to finish somewhere right..

hmm so let me savour this last chapter...

Part 12 :
lol dutta not sparing chance to touch her...full on romance mood ...aww he forced her to water raft and poor girl was horrified of falling and drowning...oh and he felt guilty too...aww well you need to face ur fears to overcome them ...but i guess this didnt really work lol...

loved our mischievous sher hahaha on a plane too ...poor girl permanently red because of him...thats so embarassing ..god with all those people around.

aww they returned to the KMH filled house lol...aww Baaji and Madhu ...i am big fan ...and they fell in love and tasha made them confess ...good good...I kinda wish we could've seen how they did that :P and D working on his relationship with Madhu ...good yaar...I'm glad that needed some work...

lol kala's own stupidity exposed her..love that...LMAO that too because she loved talking to herself i love this...i'm glad her chapter is done! :)

aww B-M getting married...and Baaji all waiting for his SR LOL...aww i loved their kiss and that scene in Just My Luck was cute too...but i dont think they ended up kissing ...aww so they're officiallt hitched and SR too happened ;) LOL ...tasha too had SR ...everyday is that for them is it not hahaa

oh wow Roops too married to Akash ...wow marriage season or what LOL...awww Naku dizzy and fainted...she is pregnant isn't she :P

post epilogue soon plz ...waiting :)

great update :)
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update so baaji madhu fall in love and dutta nakku read their eyes and kala ka end mast tha and on the sr of baaji madhu ,dutta nakku also made their sr and roops also married and nakku fainted in dutta's arms waiting eagerly for epilogue
Edited by rrs1391 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

😊supreb update dear this dutta is so romantic so all settled madhu baji married and so does roops and now a good news waiting eagerly for the epilogue plz make it full of tasha.waiting eagerly for the next part.

Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it was superbbb update dear...
romance of all the couples r superb...looking fwd...

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