FF - HUM TUM upd pt 12 pg 26 (26/08/11))

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he guys, i previously did a OS on TaSha and thought of continuing in Naku's point of view as well as Dutta's. hope u all like it, if u do then i'll continue with duttas pov.
here's a link to the first OShttps://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1473907

Nakus PoV:

<font color="#000099">the sun was beaming on my face and could feel the bright light on my eyes. i woke up and saw saab sleeping away beside me, he looked so happy and peaceful sleeping. then i suddenly realised where we were and that i was pretty much nude! remebering last night, god last night was beautiful, i could have never dreamt something like that. It;s strange how our 'suhaag raat' happend on the terrace whilst it was raining, that to so many days after marriage. we had never actually done this, i mean we were married for a month or so now but we never got so intimate. I guess it was the timing, DP showing up then his death and then my FR. God was that stressful or what. he took his time to finally understand me and i have to thank Baaji and Madhu for that they really helped me and saab to get back together again. even though Saab accepted me i couldn't help but think he didnt love me anymore. i mean we got married but never had our SR, every night we'd get into bed, i'd be hoping that he'll make the first move but it never happend. although day time was so different, he'd hug me kiss me but we never made love. untill of course last night, i could see the love and passion in his eyes and last night was probably the right time. all these weeks we both i think felt quite awkward and uncomfortable to make the next move, we did just have a tough time and i guess it was just a matter of time till we both were completely ready for it. i looked back at saab and admired his beautiful face, i had to get out of there before he woke up, it's a good thing no one was home they probably planned it all out so we could spend more time together alone; which wedefinitely needed. i looked around for my clothes which were all over the place. mypetticoat under my feet, my saree over both of us half on us and half on the floor and my blouse, god knows where that was. i crept up slowly, wrapped the saree round myself and headed straight towards the bathroom. i got in to the shower without bothering to lock the door, it didnt really matter, no one was home and saab was fast asleep. the water was pouring down touching every inch of my body, it was like the rain on the terrace where saab and i danced, such a wonderful moment. i never knew he could be so romatic! acting like SRK was the best bit. i love SRK he's like the king of romance and saab proved himself to be better! the whole dacing to KKHH was just amazing. it was our first ever night together as one.</font>

<font color="#000099">thats it for naku's PoV.Apologies for any mistakes. i know it doesnt really fit in with my first OS, i tried to make it fit with the current track with Madhu and DP and fit it in with my first one. hope u enjoyed it.</font>

<font color="#000099">PRECAP: dutta's PoV, TaSha in shower together. </font>


pt 1 pg 1
pt 2 pg 1
pt 3 pg 3
note pg 4
pt 4 pg 5
pt5 pg 6
pt6 pg 8
pt7 pg 11
pt8 pg 13
pt9 pg16
pt10 pg 19
pt 1 of 11 pg 22
pt 2 of 11 pg 23
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haii😳 What an updateeee😉
Loving Nakku's POV... Loool I Love how she didnt lock the door, Now dutta can come in as well.. Well the precap tells everything ... Ahem Ahem... 😆
Awww how sweeet.. JiDhu helped TaSha get together.. I wish this happens in the show😳
Amazing...
Continue soon...
PM me if you can please!😳
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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awh lol luvd it lol it seemd lyk dutta woz quite experiencd 😉😆 hehe lol update soooon n plz pm me :) xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update
i went 2 read ur 1st one to see wer the story continued from
waiting for Dutta's POV n thn the shower scene..😍😳
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Haii What an awesome updateeee
Continue soon... PM me if u cn please.
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hey i read ur OS n naku's POV too both was superbbbbbbbbb n romantic too,i loved it n eagerly waiting for dutta's POV................update soon n add me i ur PM list yaar.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you all for your lovely comments, it really boosts me to keep on writing. It's Dutta's PoV coming up now, it get's quite beshamri so don't say i didn't warn you😛

so here it goes...
Dutta's PoV

I turned to put my arm around Naku but i couldn't feel her. I opened my eyes to find that she wasn't there, i got up and realised where i was. I smiled to myself as i Remembered last night, did she look beautiful or what. She was an angel made in heaven, put on this earth for me, no other man, no wait no other creature can have her; she belongs to me, always has done and always will! No one can take her away from me, we've already been through so much, i couldnt bear to lose her again. The way i neglected her, hurt her, there's nothing that i can do to make up for my gravest mistakes. i just hope she understands me now, i did everything i could to make last night special. I looked around and noticed Naku's blouse sticking out my pillow, obviously a temptation especially at the fact that she would be in the shower right now. She is so tempting but for the past moth i never got so close. I wanted to but i was scared, i didn't feel that we were ready to take it to the next level. Last night was the perfect time and that red saree was so figure hugging those curves of hers were for my eyes only! Oh God all this is just making me want her again. Hmmmm... she is in the shower now, maybe i should join her, it will save water.
when i got to our room, i saw that the bathroom door was open and yet the noise of the shower could be heard. it has to be Naku, did she really leave the door unlocked? Oh well, at least i can join her. I headed straight toward the bathroom. And my eyes widened, my jaw probably fell to the floor, i was gob smacked. She looke so, so delicious and sexy. Now sexy isn't a word i use, but come on one look at Naku then thats the only word that will come out. I crept up to her and crushed my whole body against her back, put my arm around her waist. I know she got scared as soon as she felt something touch her but then relaxed when my hands traced round her waist, she must've of realised it was me. I put her hair to one side and started to kiss/lick every droplet of water on her neck and back. I couldnt keep my self off of her, she did try to get away but i held her back, she was just so irresistible. Each kiss started to get deeper and more violent. My teeth grazed over her whole back and when i pulled back i realised that i made her whole back go red. I stopped there and turned her around to face me, she kept her head down without making any eye contact. I could tell she was shy but i wasn't gonna stop there. I needed to show her how much i love her, how much i want her. I leaned in and kissed her neck and shoulders whilst my hands traced her arms up and down then her waist moving up to her chest. All the the way through she let out a few moans but i couldn't stop. She stood there completely still while i was kissing away. I stopped suddenly because i felt i was doing too much, she wasn't responding so i let go of her and turned to leave but the suddenly felt her squeezing my hand. I looked back at her and her eyes were closed she pulled me closer to herself and opened her eyes and started to talk.

naku: saab, maat jaye... main apse bohot pyar karti.

those words just melted my heart, i cupped her face and spoke back.

me: arey naku, main bhi tujse pyar karti always and forever, mujhe laga ki to yeh sab ki liye tayar nahi hai. isliye, lekin tu fikar maat kar main tere ko chorkar kabhi nahi jaygi.

And then kissed her forhead, i felt her arms wrap round me and i embraced her in to a tight hug. I broke the hug and pushed her against the wall whilst the water was still running down us. I locked my hands in to hers and pushed it against the wall and kissed her passionately on the lips. She got her self out of my grip and responded back. Her beautiful soft lips on mine, her fragile hands tracing up my chest then round my neck. i was so glad to see her respond, there was no stopping me now. I turned the shower off and lifted her up in my arms and headed to the bed. We were still wet but so what! Don't really care if the bed gets wet too. I couldn't let this opportunity go. For once we were alone, this has really pushed me to go to honeymoon, hmmmm i'll get Baaji to arrange the tickets. Anway back to present time. I layed her on the bed and hovered over her, her arms were still round my neck and i went back to kissing evey part of her with my hands tracing her whole body. we were one again, but this time with more love, more passion and more lust.

so that was the shower scene in Dutta's pov. press the like button and leave your comments, long ones plz😃

PRECAP: PN wasis back, some Tasha teasing and honeymoon plans.
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Ermmm.... I can't really type anythingg... Damn Dutta's POV is HOT!
I mean HOT!! I can really imagine Dutta under the running water with Nakku😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
FANTASTICALLY AWESOME MAN!!!
Love It!!!!!
Thans for the PM!😳
Continue soon Pweasee!!!😳
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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I cant comment on this 😆
but nice update 😊
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😳I can't really type anythingg word ... Damn Dutta's POV is damn HOT! tanx 4 da pm 😳
Continue soon Pweasee!!!

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