FF - HUM TUM upd pt 12 pg 26 (26/08/11)) - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

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OMG that was a hot update LOL

love how it started with her all angry and giving him attitude 😆

and then the girl got drunk and surrendered herself to him😳😆

great update...now the only negative to this ...i would say is... the length ... it was short 😛

otherwise awesome👏 ...continue soon 😊


thanks alot dear
Naku learns from the best lol, she just needed to give him a taste of his own medicine in terms of the silent treatment and attitude lol
i'm sorry it was short tried to make it long, hopefully the next ch will be longer.
p.s when will you be updating ur ff been waiting for so long 😳
tc
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Edited by meriyaar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: blueopal

hey nicely written👏 dear ...
drunken state naku n dutta was sooo romantic n hot😳...
looking fwd...


thanks hun, gald u liked it and will try and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

^^sure wil help hun...

wich bit exactly do u need help in? do u hav a particular scne o suma u need help in...x


thanks dear
i was thinking naku may be remorseful about her whole anger thing but i don't know how to base the story around that and what else should they be doing on their honeymoon?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

A very hawt abd superb updt...


thanks, hopefully it will get hotter😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Dear meriyaar thanks for pm . Its a lovely romantic update . Enjoyed so much yaar .😳

Naku is angry with dutta . She is so irritated with him. ohhh she did dn't even prepare breakfast for dutta .and her way of talking to dutta and her adamant behaviour dutta is so surprised to see his wife like that .😊


For whatever u did dutta saab this is the correct reply . Oh my god naku saying kaminey and all that words . Oh is this all possible is this naku and she is saying such type of words to dutta . Oh my god what i was seeing ?😲 lol, u must be very shocked but i thought it would be nice to play around with the characters especially becoz we never gonna see it online😭

wow she is drunk that's y all this ok even though she drinks she never ever talk to dutta like this is think .😊

whatever dutta came to know the otherside of his wife . Its good for him for his health that her wife is not only submissive always she has this side also . Dutta be in control in furure . 😉 lol yup he needs to naku isnt as innocent as he thinks she is😉

Meriyaar i love the last scene yaar . Its so h*************t . It was dreamy scene of our tasha . Love to see them always like that enjoying their love life in full . 😳 we never got any proper romance onscreen so i wanna keep the their love alive emotionally aswel as physically😉

Naku making first moves generally dutta won't be able to see naku like this i think he got a golden chance to see naku like this so horny, so romantic . Surely i knew dutta fully enjoyed and loved to see naku like this . 😳😉 it was like dream com tru for him lol

Dutta was thinking that if this way naku apologises he will make her jealous quite often . Ohhh dutta don't even try it it won't be the same way all times my sweet dutta . 😉 yup its only a one off especially wen they go back naku will go back to being the same old self

I loved to see naku like this . As u always rocking in love scenes this is also hilarious . So romantic . I really enjoyed this ..😳 aww glad u enjoyed it hun 😊

Loved this romantic lovely ff . Hope u will give us lots and lots of romance and love of tasha through out the ff with out any sorrows , KBH .Love this ff mainly because its cool with tasha romance , love . I hate to see the sorrows in their life , and always wants to see them as a great romantic couple . 😍 yeh i hope to keep the ff full of tasha romance and im so glad u like it, reli appreciate ur love 😳

Waiting for the next update . will update asap

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

lovely update dear
nakku's angry and way she talk to him 😃
nakku saying dutta kutta kamina ah 😆
dutta thought if she gonna say sorry this way he will often do these types of mistake 🤣
thanks for pm


thanks hun, lol yeah but that doesn't means its gonna happen all the time lol.
no need for thanks im just glad u liked it😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Woah... Is it jus me or is it kinda hot? loool

Raaah..Nakku is a wild cat... haha.. how cute!
I Looove Jungli billiyan haha.. awww... She swore at him n den seduced him... awww lucky guy..
This was one hell of a hot update...
Amazin loll.. continue soon (:



lol
naku is just outa control😆
thanks dear will update soon glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: alveera_rckz

Wow just wow lol
Update sooon
4 ur Nxt update u cn write abut nakusha waking up n rembring wat she did da night n dutta teasing her abut it


thanks dear
yeah thats what i've been planning just dnt no how revolve the story around that and i need some ideas for their honeymoon what do u think they should the rest of the week doing (apart from making love lol)😆
will try and update soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar



thanks dear
yeah thats what i've been planning just dnt no how revolve the story around that and i need some ideas for their honeymoon what do u think they should the rest of the week doing (apart from making love lol)😆
will try and update soon
tc
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Well da cn go siteseeing,shopping, or can go do sme outdoor sport



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar


thanks alot dear
Naku learns from the best lol, she just needed to give him a taste of his own medicine in terms of the silent treatment and attitude lol
i'm sorry it was short tried to make it long, hopefully the next ch will be longer.
p.s when will you be updating ur ff been waiting for so long 😳
tc
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lol haha AKK was just updated :P and Benaam Ek Rishta I just finished writing it sent it to missy to edit so it will be posted asap :)

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