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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey all! So sorry for a long delay 😳 been so busy but now I'm hoping I can get updates up more quickly. Here is the next chapter but I am warning you all, that it gets extremely besharam the most besharam chapter I've ever written!☺️

Naku pov:

I woke up early in the morning with the scorching sun burning my skin. My head was throbbing and I really couldn't remember what happened last night. When I looked around the room, I saw that it had been turned upside down. What the hell happened, I looked under the covers and realised that I was naked. Beside me lay saab, sleeping so soundly. I quickly crept out of bed and headed straight to the shower, a heated shower was very much needed to clear my head. As the hot water hit my skin, last night's events replayed in mind, and slowly I realised what I had done. Great, I could feel my cheeks burning, not from the water but the embarrassment I put on myself from last night. What is saab gonna think of me now. How am I gonna face him. I decided that the best decision would be to avoid him till things cooled down a little. I quickly turned the shower off, got ready and literally ran out the room.

After preparing breakfast, I kept myself busy by cleaning and the place that really needed cleaning was our room. I can't believe I completely wrecked it. Gosh I am one nasty drunk! Saab came down the stairs with a smirk plastered on his face. I made sure my eyes didn't meet his, after serving him I legged it upstairs and cleared all the mess I made. I tucked my pallu round my waist and clipped my hair back. It took me hours to clean up just as I finished I noticed saab leaning against the door frame still smirking. I quickly focused my gaze on the floor and started fidgeting. From the corner of my eye I could see saab coming towards me. I was getting restless and my heart was beating faster and faster, my palms were starting to sweat and I was looking here and there making a complete fool of myself.

(Get your headphones ready ' roop tera mastana )http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogYkbfBsa2k&feature=related sorry i couldn't find a better version you might have to repeat it quite a bit for it to fit in with scene

Suddenly I felt an electrifying buzz travel up my body, it was saab he slowly traced his hand around my bare waist and gripped on to it tightly. Gosh his touch always does this to me and I know that electrical feeling will never go away. I took a deep breath in and let out an uncontrollable moan. His hot breath hit my neck making me inhale faster. He slowly perched his lips against the pulse of my neck trailing it with pricking bites whilst unclipping my hair and letting it flow down. As he nuzzled my neck his grip got tighter and I couldn't help but moan. His teeth grazed up my neck and he lightly bit my earlobe and ever so slowly spoke in his husky sexy voice.

Dutta: na ku sha' tujhe shaid bus wo waqt yaad hai jab tune kitna shor banaya lekin tujhe uske baad jo hua yaad nahi hai kya? Kya mein tere ko pir se yaad dilau? Hmmm?

At that moment I could feel my cheeks burning like fire, before I could do anything his lips crashed on to mine and I just couldn't resist those tasteful lips. We kissed each other with so much lust, so much passion and so much love. We broke apart and stared at each other intently, saab grabbed on to my hand and led me to the bathroom and I realised where this was leading but I was too much in love to care about anything even though I had so much work to do.

We stepped under the shower together and he turned it on, the steamy hot water hit us and it was like we were standing in the rain but in a 'hot' situation. 😉 he slowly slid my blouse down one side and kissed down my shoulder with one hand tracing down that arm and bought the other hand round my waist digging in to it. I felt his teeth graze my back as he undid the dhori of my blouse with his mouth. He pushed the blouse off and undid my saree leaving me only in my underwear. I turned to face him and slowly unbuttoned his kurta taking it off on one side and trailing kisses up from the right side of his chest to his neck. I couldn't resist any longer so I violently shoved his kurta and trousers off. We stood under the blazing water for a good two minutes taking in each and every detail of each other. Before I knew it saab attacked my lips again and groaned in my mouth. His hands touched every part of my wet body burning each part with his sizzling touch. After he broke the kiss he went for my neck biting all the way I couldn't help but moan and groan "saab". As soon as he heard me saab he abruptly stopped and gazed in to my eyes before speaking.

Dutta: naku, why saab? You called me by my name last night so why not today. Do you know how good it feels to hear my name from your mouth? Please from now on just Dutta no saab.

Tears were welling up and I wanted to sob and hold him tightly but I just nodded and he went back to attacking my neck. I gripped my hands on to his hair digging my nails in to his head. He grabbed on to my hips and lifted me up making me cross my legs round his waist. He pushed me back against the wall and all I could do was scream his name out in pleasure! And this time it was Dutta. Finally we were one two bodies together as one after a lot of screaming and teasing we became one.

So that was it an extremely besharam chapter which I hope you enjoyed. And I will only find that out if you like it and comment. Please please leave your comments negatives + positives all are welcome. Again I would like your input on honeymoon plans what else should this lovely couple be doinng (apart from love making). Please let me know. This chapter was just a fit in from the last one filled with love making lol. I would really love your input so pour in all your ideas.

tc

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Edited by meriyaar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited...

lol u are right total besharam update but loved it...

great part...i felt it was kind of short though...

do continue soon...update next asap 😛
Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
damn dis rely was a hot sizzling update!!
loved it man
loved naku all embarassd after her sudden hot outburst last night LOL
nd dutta...man hes never gona liv her dwn...use las night as an excuse nd use 2 best of his abilities ;-) great going D..keep it up lmao!! ;-) hehe
hot shower scne...AM SPEECHLESS!! *blush*
moony ur getin beter n betr each day bbe!! ;-)
thnx 4 pm
pls cont soon...
ps.can we hava hot scene outdoors now...lyk they go out sumwer romantic...or mayb sum party the town there in is having...wich inc couple dance etc...
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Posted: 14 years ago
good one .add me to your
pm list please😊😊keep up with the good work.
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haila what an update
besharam update hai toh hum bhi besharam hi hai
love it dear
superb
thanks for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

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Edited...

lol u are right total besharam update but loved it...

great part...i felt it was kind of short though...

do continue soon...update next asap 😛


lol yes, glad u liked it
thanks yeah i know i kinds struggle with making it longer but hopefully the next ch will be longer
will try and update as soon as i can.
tc
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meriyaar thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

damn dis rely was a hot sizzling update!!

loved it man
loved naku all embarassd after her sudden hot outburst last night LOL lol yeah just a little awkward for her
nd dutta...man hes never gona liv her dwn...use las night as an excuse nd use 2 best of his abilities ;-) great going D..keep it up lmao!! ;-) hehe
yep thats our dutta, will do anything to be intimate with her 😉
hot shower scne...AM SPEECHLESS!! *blush*
i was blushing soo much whilst writing this ☺️
moony ur getin beter n betr each day bbe!! ;-)
awww thanks so much dear thats so sweet 😳
thnx 4 pm
no probz

pls cont soon...
will do, hoping to start the next ch tomoro
ps.can we hava hot scene outdoors now...lyk they go out sumwer romantic...or mayb sum party the town there in is having...wich inc couple dance etc...
sure thing love the concept will try and put that all together for the next ch, dedicated to my dear missy😊
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krishaa

good one .add me to your

pm list please😊😊keep up with the good work.


thanks dear
will be sure to add u
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

haila what an update
besharam update hai toh hum bhi besharam hi hai
love it dear
superb
thanks for pm


lol yeah besharam updates for the besharam readers
glad u like it
thanks alot dear
no probz
tc
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
@meriyaar : I didnt knw u updated 😉
ok , so just read it and
WOW ,,SiZZlingin is all I can say ..the entire mahoul is HAWTNESs personified ,,hmmm☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ enjoyed reading it ,and waiting for next update 😳

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