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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

hey hey hey ...

i am here now 😆 good good

amazing FF ...you know i read the OS and the first chp and then i got busy and kept saying later later and then totally forgot about it 😕 😲oops sorry😳 apology accepted

so me here now to say ...itz wonderful...love it...all their cute romantic *ahem ahem moments lol I sit here blushing readin em 😳😆 lol yeh, glad u liked it, i sit there blushing whilst writing lol

very nice ff ..

and omg this part was so hot LOL she trying to seduce him and then him getting her back for it ☺️ yeh that's our sharmila naku 😆

and her angry bout the sales lady ...oye smelling a lot of jealousy over here LOL haha lol yeh, i actually got that dialogue from dmg the little tiff b/w armaan and ridz lol.

ahhh the precap ..she is drunk LMAO oh plz update soon will try my best to update asap most likely next week😳

would like to see where this lands her LOL well, there'll some more besharam scenes 😉 and some funny Naku scenes but you'll just have wait and find out soon.

great FF ...👍🏼👏

thank you very much dear xx

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Hey dear ,

Its really a sweet romantic update from u after long time . I love this ff much . 😳 im so sorry for taking so long 😳 awww thabks for the sweet comment im really glad u like it 😊

The dress Dutta picked up for her and the romance is simply superb .
😳 thank you soo much dear
Tasha love is so sweet and naku is jealous and angry with Dutta .
yup, it's now her turn to give him the anger and silent treatment lol.
Naku questioning him with doubt how he knows the size ?😊

she is our clever naku lol, it just got to her how on earth would her hubby no her size without ever asking her lol.

Oh naughty dutta taking the help of another woman in picking that outfit for his naku . Dutta you will pay for it definetely .😊 oh sure will lol, naku will get her own back 😆

I would like to see more more love and romantic scenes between tasha.
Want to see jealous Dutta also .😍 well this ff is full of tasha romance especially their honeymoon, dutta was jealous of SRK lol but i may add some more 😉
😍
Please update it soon . Its really a good ff of lovable romantic tasha with out kabab me haddies. Love it . 👏

aww thanks hun, i will update as soon as i can and don't worry there won't be kabab me haddis atleast not during their honeymoon maybe wen they get back 😆
xx


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Posted: 14 years ago
okay den wil b waitin 4 it...lets see hw long u tke dis time😛😆😆
hmm i cnt rmmba u telin me...bt am gona cal ya memz o moona...if u dnt mind...das was i cal 1 of my m8 who has sme nme lol😉😆
nd ur more dn welcum bbe😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey meriyaar,

This is swapna . I Don't want to miss this romantic sweet ff . Its difficult to check it out daily . So Please add me to ur pm list yaar . Thank u .
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Posted: 14 years ago
sure will do ziks
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update
i luv it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sana141994

very nice update

i luv it


thanks dear reli appreciate it 😊
xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

okay den wil b waitin 4 it...lets see hw long u tke dis time😛😆😆
hmm i cnt rmmba u telin me...bt am gona cal ya memz o moona...if u dnt mind...das was i cal 1 of my m8 who has sme nme lol😉😆
nd ur more dn welcum bbe😃


i promise i won't take that long😳
lol i dont mind, my friends call me all sorts from mina to mims😆
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys! Here is the next chapter although I really don't like it. I must warn you though it gets quite besharam.☺️ I hope you enjoy it and please do leave your comments. also i wasn't able to PM everyone so please forgive me

I turned to put my arm around Naku, but unfortunately she wasn't there. I opened my eyes slightly and it was already 10 am! That's weird if I don't wake up by 8.30 then Naku usually comes to wake me up. I wonder if she's still mad at me. She better not be coz it's not like I committed the biggest sin. Naku dear needs to take a chill pill!

I got ready and went downstairs, took a seat on the dining table waiting for my breakfast. It had been 5 minutes and there was no response from my constant calling. I got up and went to the kitchen but she wasn't there. I looked everywhere then finally found her in the living room watching TV. WTH! What is up with her today?

DUTTA: eh, Naku tu yaha kya karahire? Aur mera nashta kaha hai? I said sternly.

NAKU: can you not see im watching TV! And you can go make your own breakfast, for once do it yourself. She replied back calmly but with a hint of sarcasm.

Wow! I was shocked I mean the nerves of this girl; no one has ever dared to talk to me like that not even Ayi Saab. I had to say something I couldn't just let her destroy the pride I held.

DUTTA: excuse me my fair maiden, but what is it that I have done that made you talk like that. It's not because you want me to make my own breakfast, you don't even let me get myself a glass of water let alone make breakfast and especially after last time when I messed the whole kitchen up!

I knew I got her, she turned so red in embarrassment but I could also see anger in her eyes. Now she better tell me why she's so pissed with me.

NAKU: there's no need to say anything, you know the answer perfectly well hubby dearest!

God this woman has some guts like. Before I could say anything she stormed out the room. I have never seen her so mad. I mean she didn't even get angry when I treated her like dirt and accused her of lying but just because I asked some other women to pick out undies in her size she flips! Women these days! Huh! Too much jealousy, I bet it's those stupid saas bahu dramas they're filled with negativity.

Throughout the whole day she gave me the cold shoulder, completely ignoring me only answering by nodding her head. It was getting really frustrating but I didn't want to ruin our honeymoon any more than it already was. I decided for an early night, there was no point in staying awake with Naku blanking me completely.

My eyes were just about to close when I suddenly I heard the door slam shut. I turned to see Naku stumbling in with a Ribena bottle in her hand. She was wearing one of my shirts that only slightly covered her a** revealing her sexy legs along with her cleavage as the top couple of buttons were undone. Wait a minute was she drunk? How can Ribena make someone drunk? Oh Sh** that's not Ribena damn it Dutta how could you be so careless! It completely slipped out my mind that I mixed vodka with the Ribena; Naku must've thought it was just Ribena and started drinking.

Great! Just great my wife is drunk on our honeymoon. Can things get any worse!

Why did I say that! Coz things just got a whole lot worse. The woman went mental! She started dancing around laughing, singing and breaking almost everything that was breakable. One minute she'd cry the next minute she'd laugh like a maniac! Then suddenly she starts shouting at me calling me all sorts of names. She was uncontrollable!

NAKU: kutte, kaminey kya samijhti apne aap ko huh! Kuch to sharam kar! You rascal, bloody B******!

DUTTA: okay Naku calm down, you don't know what you're talking about just come and take some rest.

She came charging at me, god I thought I was about to die. But to my surprise she came and pressed her perfect lips against mine and kissed me like there was no tomorrow. Although her breathe smelt very alcoholic but who cares, THE sharmila Naku kissed me! I grabbed on to her waist with full force and her hands tugged my hair passionately. I knew the minute our lips touched her anger disappeared as she kissed so heatedly. Her smooth silky legs swiftly wrapped round my waist and I pressed her against the wall. We drew back to breathe giving me the chance to take her shirt off. I violently ripped the shirt and she did the same to mine. Before I could kiss her, her lips attacked my collarbone trailing up to my ear and then in the most seductive and slow voice she spoke.

NAKU: I'm so sorry, please forgive me... I - L-O-V-E - Y-O-U DUT ..TA

Oh my god she said my name! For the first time! That just drove me insane!

My lips quickly confronted hers and I entered her mouth so violently swelling her lips in the process. She was irresistible. I broke from the kiss and lay her on the bed. I unclipped her bra, while she unzipped my trousers before we knew it, we were both nude. My hands grazed up her arms touching every part of her body whilst trailing kisses round her neck and collarbone. I could hear her heavy breathing and constant moaning, which just drove me mad. She pushed me back with full force and came on top of me. I lay there still while she did the rest, but it was too hard to stay still for long, I was just itching to touch her again. But she stayed put and made sure she was on top. I guess it was her way of apologizing. If this is the kind of apologies I get from her than I should let this happen more often. Her jealousy takes over her and when she realises, this is the kind of reactions I get! Score!

Her body pressed tightly against mine and my arms were wrapped round her and with the glimmering moon watching over we fell asleep dreaming of each other.

So that was it. Hope you liked it. Naku being drunk was meant to be the main story but my mind was blank so I kinda side lined it. Really very sorry, I'm really not pleased with the outcome of this chapter.

I have no idea what to include in the next chapter and the couple still have a week left till they go back. So I would love it if you guys give in your suggestions. Your inputs will really help so please do pour out as many ideas as possible. Love you all!

Lastly thanks to everyone who has liked my FF and commented because it is really encouraging.

Edited by meriyaar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
okayyy 1ist i beter switch d radiators off!! im not evn joking..i sitin ryt nxt 2 d heater n jus turned it off
god it defo was getin hot in ere...
im stil in shok dat naku said..did all dos thngz!!
she told him 2 mke his own breky!! :O
she swore at him!! *most shoking*
lmaooo loved her diff mood swings...but her idea of apologizing is svery ahem diff i must say LOL
aww she calld hm dutta insted of saab <3
hmm i bet dutta wud love 2 make her jealous jus 2 get dis agressive yet sexy naku out of d sharmili naku lmao
i feel sory 4 her ... rely wonda hw shse gona behave d nxt mornin lmao
das only if shes gona remmba it all lol
thnx 4 d wondrful update moony
plsss cont soon.x
ps.pm me nxt time pweez..






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