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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyek

suvi, nice update, so are they going to find out about naku an dutta soon....................

Yes...next update..didnt I tell you?😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar

aww that was so cute and kala lol her fake tears didn't work bechari her plans always fail😆

Thanks....bechari? she is not a bechari at all!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lost Love Part 16
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"What..noo" Baji's curiousity got the better of him, and he was restless for the whole of the puja. As the puja eneded and Roops and Madhu gave prasad to everyone, Baji nudged Naku and both of them were trying to get the other to go and ask Dutta what the puja was for, but they didn't have to wait long as Dutta stood in the center and cleared his throat to get everyone's attention.
"Naku, come here" he called. Naku daintily stepped towards him, placing her hand in his.
"Today, me and AS have organized this puja for the wellbeing of my wife, Nakusha Dutta Patil"
Naku smiles at everyone, and gives Dutta a confused look.
"Actually I had to announce something very important to you..something that I had never expected to happen. Naku is god's blessing to me. She melted my heart of stone and made me a human, she loved me regardless of what I did to her, and I owe her my life." Dutta turns to Naku and holds both of her hand, "Naku, I love you, I love you a lot"
Naku blushes and replies, "I love you too"
Dutta turns back to face the guests and the PN wasis," Nakusha has always given me happiness, and now she has given me such a huge thing that I don't know what to say."
"Arre Bhao suspense mat rakho..just hurry up and tell what it is" Baji shouts
"Ruk ja", Dutta smiles, "Well, I wanted to tell you that...that Nakusha is pregnant! I am going to be a father!" Dutta takes a deep breath and notices everyone's stunned faces. Suddenly Baji comes up and hugs him and Naku, "Bhao!!! Dhinchak Dhinchak!! I am going to be a chachu!!!" Baji starts dancing, "Koi gana bajao..mithai lao...it's time to celebrate" All of the PN wasis celebrate and dance..even Kala...though she doesn't really want to. Dutta is sitting next to Naku on a sofa.
"I want to dance too" she whines, and is about to get up but Dutta holds her hand and pulls her down.
"No you aren't going to. You'll get tired..I don't want anything to happen to you or the kid."
"You are too protective"
"It's for you"
Naku realises that there is nothing she can do so heads towards the table where food is kept. Dutta follows her, finding something wrong with everything she attempts to eat, "This is too spicy...Don't eat with the silver knife and fork, use the plastic ones" Naku gets tired and makes a sarcastic remark, "Well I will eat with my hands...actually no I won't do that either, I will have to wash my hands and what if I burn myself"
Dutta thinks about it and replies, "Yes you are right how about you eat with your hands and we can use hand sanitizer and tissues"
"Saab, I was being sarcastic" Naku moans, "And now I am not feeling hungry any more, I am going up to sleep"
"Okay, that's good" Dutta goes to AS to tell her that he is taking Naku upstairs as she is tired.
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The party is over, its night time. Naku is sitting on the bed, looking at pictures of Dutta when he was young. (I edited it because she can't wear a nightie and then Dutta take her blouse off...thanks Missy for telling me)
"Aww..you look so cute"
"Oh my gawd Dutta Shreeram Patil was scared of a dog! Nanana" she teases, poking her tongue out at him while flicking through the photos.
Dutta snatches the album from her and puts it inside the cupboard.
"Heyy I was looking at that..Give it back!" Naku yells, scrambling up to get the album back.
Dutta grabs Naku by her shoulders and pulls her towards him. He slides his hand up her back and slowly unties the dori of her blouse, kissing her softly on the lips. She kisses him back, her hands on his arms for support. She breaks the kiss as Dutta tries to slide her blouse off her shoulders.
"Saab, mujhe Shimla jaana he" she whispers, suddenly.
Dutta, irritated that he is being interrupted, says "Abh yeh Shimla humare beech mein kyun aa tapka?"
Naku hits his chest with her hand playfully, "Sa-aab, mujhe sachi mein Shimla jaana he..I wanna see the snooow"
"But Naku, you shouldn't travel in this condition"
"And I shouldn't take stress in this condition, I tell you, if I don't get to go to Shimla, then I will become totally stressed out" She turns away and pouts.
Dutta turns her to face and kisses her forehead, "You've become so stubborn, okay fine, I will take you to Shimla, bas?"
Naku pecks him on the cheek and rushes to open the cupboard, excited.
"Humein shopping jaana padega um it will be cold over there so we will have to buy jackets and sweaters"
"OK baba, but let me book the tickets first" Dutta smiles at her childishness.
"Do it now!!"
"Now?"
"Yes now! The laptop is right there"
"Theek hai" Dutta knows that he can't change Naku's mind after she has taken a decision. He grabs the laptop and starts booking tickets.
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Flashback ending soon..I am taking one month leap in next update😊
Suvi

Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what why one month leap yar

very nice update love it every bit
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha_1

what why one month leap yar

very nice update love it every bit

Thanks
The leap is to move the story on and so I can get to the shed and end the flashback
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt................one month leap?????? .....FB ending ............... waiting eagerly............updt soooooooon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

nice updt................one month leap?????? .....FB ending ............... waiting eagerly............updt soooooooon...............

Thanks...the leap is to make the story move on....I will update soon!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update dear..............
am impressed by dutta's announcement, it was sooooooooooo nice n
naku wanna go shimla,interesting..................looking fwd..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lmao.. Dutta was beating around the bush during the annoucement.. Awww loved it doe.. Ahahaha Baaji got excited😆 Aree Yeh chachu ban gaya😳 He will be such a sexy chachu😆
OMG Nakku's moodswings😆 ... Will be funny .. She will annoy Dutta so much haha.. I feel sorry for Gadha now😆 ... Awww Now she wants to go shimla, to see the snow.. Ok i will throw some lol *Throws snowball at Nakku* 😆
Hailaaaaa😲 1 month Leap? Kyun? Oh i remember this is just a flasback Reality hurts😭... I really hope after the FB finishes.. Dutta finds her soon *Fingers Crossed*
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Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice update and it's getting more interesting

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