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Vika

@vikadesigirl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Suvi this was fab... i love how he was pestering naku on what to eat or nt to eat.. and what utensils to use.. 😆😆

SO now.. she wants to go shimla mhhh.. oh dutta dear pregnancy hormones.. 😃

Lovely update. thanx for PM
tc😊

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: pkyek
suvi great update, i found it very funny............
soo they are going for a honeymoon......................lol :)) jkes

thanks jess..yes they are going on honeymoon😉

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish
Suvi this was fab... i love how he was pestering naku on what to eat or nt to eat.. and what utensils to use.. 😆😆

SO now.. she wants to go shimla mhhh.. oh dutta dear pregnancy hormones.. 😃

Lovely update. thanx for PM
tc😊

Thank you

Yeah the shimla trip is sort of honeymoon...and the hormones are just starting to kick in😆

Ur welcome for the pm

take care😊

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Lost Love Part 17

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Dutta managed to book tickets, but only for a month later. Naku became terribly grumpy, but he manaoed her with ice cream and shopping trips (one of them was the flashback one where the guy flirts with her and Dutta kills him)

~ A month later~

TaShar are getting in the car, ready for the trip to Shimla. Naku's stomach has started to grow slightly bigger, and she is becoming hyper with excitement.

"Saab, will we make a snowman? What else will we do? Can we visit Jubbal Palace?"

"We will do whatever you want to a long as you promise to take care of yourself and the baby...promise?"

"Yes yes okay fine now drive the car, we will be late! You have already made me wait a whole month"

Dutta starts driving, amused by Naku's behaviour. Sometimes he finds her moodswings totally irritating but sometimes, she looks so adorable. As he drives, he quickly bends over and plants a kiss on her cheek. Naku suddenly stops talking and looks at him.

"Yeh kya tha?"

"Kiss tha"

"I know..but kyun?"

"I don't need a reason to kiss you"

"Pagal!"

Naku ruffles Dutta's hair and continues her chatter.

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TaSha arrive at Shimla airport and hire a car to take them to the hotel. It is night time, when the car stops near the forest.

"Why did you stop the car?" Naku is slightly worried

"I think something went wrong"

"Then hurry up and fix it"

Dutta tries to fix the car up and finally it starts working. Naku comes out of the car, looks at Dutta, and bursts out laughing.

"Kya hua?"

"I thought I was the one that puts black colour on but I guess now it is your turn" she giggles

Dutta looks at his face in the car's sideview mirror and finds out that his face has several black patches, he starts laughing as well.

"Chalo, lets go in the woods, there might be a lake or something" Naku says

"Isnt there water in the car?"

"I finished it, ab lets go!"

Dutta seems uncertain but decides to go.

They can't find a lake but find a small shed and enter it, in hope of finding water.

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*~End of Flashback~*

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Several weeks pass.....

Naku works as a servant in the guys factory, mopping, sweeping, making tea for everyone, that is her job. Food is scarce, but she has a mother-daughter sort of relationship with leela bai, and she always manages to get extra food for her. Naku's baby bump is getting larger, but she is managing to hide it with her baggy clothes.

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Yayy Flashback is finished🥳I am soo happy, now I will be able to leave suspense and cliffhangers for you all😈

Suvi

Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

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Awww she was so excited ... lol she finished the water😆... She's a little joker when she's pregnant... love her moodswings...

OMG are you telling me a few weeks passed by but Dutta didn't go find her? If Nakku is pregnant, Dutta would never let her stay there for so long😕 ... He would do anything to bring her back so she can be safe as well as the baby... Hailaa Suvi.. yeh kya ho raha hain😭 I don't like the present situation... If she stays for some more time then they will definitely realise she's pregnant .... Jaldi se usse Dutta se milao na pweeez😳 ... I will give u chocs and ice cream and lollipops😉...

On a serious note... Please don't kill the baby or do any harm to nakku.. I want Dutta to come n save her kwik...

Continue soon... ur other FF already making me pull out my hair and now this one.. Great😡... Watch how i will take revenge 😆

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

wow suvi nice update, sad ending though cant wait till next part.......... waiting ok...............

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557451

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

ohhhhhhhhh they r soo cute i just luv dutta the one in ur story not the one in ltl but the part was soo short write a bit more na plzzzzzzzzz

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Sophia21
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Awww she was so excited ... lol she finished the water😆... She's a little joker when she's pregnant... love her moodswings...

OMG are you telling me a few weeks passed by but Dutta didn't go find her? If Nakku is pregnant, Dutta would never let her stay there for so long😕 ..explanation for that will be given later. He would do anything to bring her back so she can be safe as well as the baby... Hailaa Suvi.. yeh kya ho raha hain😭 I don't like the present situation... If she stays for some more time then they will definitely realise she's pregnant ..she'll escape😉.. Jaldi se usse Dutta se milao na pweeez😳 ... I will give u chocs and ice cream and lollipops😉...Did you forget that I am trying to diet here? 😆

On a serious note... Please don't kill the baby or do any harm to nakku.. I want Dutta to come n save her kwik😭...of course I wont..I am evil but not that evil...Naku and her kid wont get harmed, at least not physically harmed

Continue soon... ur other FF already making me pull out my hair and now this one.. Great😡... Watch how i will take revenge 😆 What kind of revenge? Now I am scared...hey dont treat your younger umm sister like this..see I am a sweet si little girl (yeah I love taking advantage of my chotapan)😆 Dont worry I will make everything all right by the end..and the end is only 5-6 updates away..maybe even less

Thanks for the long comment, tc🤗

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

@Jess, Sani

Thank you so much

and Sani you know why I cant write a long one...but the short one today means another one tomorrow, ok?

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

hey nice update yaar..........
wat naku is working as servent??????????????????? where is dutta ??????????????????? why he didn't search for naku????????? update ASAP...........................

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