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Posted: 14 years ago

sorry for such a late post..kaan pakadofying...well i have tried to write down a funny conversation..so if u dont like it no chappal marofying...😆😆..but still am hoping ull will enjoy

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Madhu looked around'god was she bored'atharva had left to delhi for work and for whole two months..what was she going to do without him..naku too was always sitting with some book or other'it was as if all the knowledge she just wanted to grasp it'madhu could not stop the smile that came across her face when she thinks of her innocent vaheni..how can anyone be so sweet and innocent

She wondered what dutta was doing'it was so long back she had met him..she remembered that day..it was two days after her dad's pyre had lit..she met him and AS outside the temple..AS had recognised her as it seemed her father before dying already told AS about her and gave her pic to AS.

She could still remember the awe she felt when she finally came across her big brother..how much she wanted to speak with him..share her incidents with him..but he just looked at her and went from there citing he had work to do.

She knew it would be hard for her brother to accept her but yet she was not prepared for the hurt she got seeing him go..AS came front of her and said..dont worry about dutta..he will soon come to accept you and love you as he love his other sisters..madhu who was still feeling hurt about the loss of her father and her brother turning his back to her..cried in AS arms..AS soothed her till she was ok and then told her to come and stay with her in PN.

But madhu said..no..i don't want to hurt you but till dutta does not accept me and bring me home..i don't want to be a burden on him..i know a day will come when he will come and bring me to you to stay with you'll till then I will stay with one off my best friend..madhu wrote her address and gave to AS and said..when he is ready to meet me give him this paper it has my phone no and address where I am staying.

Madhu hugged AS and said thank you so much for accepting me..AS smiled and hugging her back said you are my dutta's little sister and like my daughter..whenever you change your mind my doors are always opened to you.

Now also she was waiting for the day..her brother would call her to meet him..maam one of the servants called her and she turned around to see what had happened.

Dutta was getting ready to go out somewhere..as he reached his car he ordered his BG that he is going alone don't come with him..he sat in his jeep..before he could start the jeep.. baji opened the passenger door and sat next too him'dutta looked at him and said..i told I am going alone and I don't want anyone to come with me..baji looked at dutta and said it is not safe for you to go out alone..whether you take me or not I will be there..wherever you are going'I am also going to come..dont worry I wont be in your way..and saying this baji looked out of the window.

Dutta could only look at baji..and turning his face to look ahead ..he couldn't help but smile..whether baji spoke with him or not he still cared about him..as he started his car he threw a glance towards baji and thought am sure soon everything between us will be alright and together we will find where nakusha is.

After half an hour silent drive..dutta stopped near the temple..and got out of the jeep..baji felt quiet shocked wondering why dutta came to this temple'last time dutta came here with AS after lighting his father's pyre..baji turned to dutta and saw him lost in thoughts..silently dutta removed his shoes and walked up the stairs..no one was there'dutta walked there and bowing towards the idol went and moved towards the corner of the temple..and stood there leaning against the pillar as if waiting for some one.

Baji who was still confused as to what was going on went towards dutta and said..are you meeting someone here ..dutta still looking towards the stair and said yes'someone who I turned my back too but realised it is time to get her back in my life..after all said and done she is my only blood relation'baji was shocked he didn't understand who dutta was speaking about..and on asking dutta said damodar patil's daughter.. my smallest sister..madhu

Baji was quiet shocked on hearing this because aside of AS and dutta no one knew about madhu'he could not believe dutta had a small sister..he wondered whether this sister would also be like the other three'baji could only pray that what is happening is for the good of the family..and this girl will not spoil anything'suddenly from the corner of his eye he saw a girl climbing up the stairs'she was wearing jeans and a blue top..when he turned to look at her..he could not move his eyes from her.😉

Madhu walked up the stairs and thought of how surprised she was when she heard her bhao's voice on the phone..he told her he wanted to meet..on agreeing she rushed to naku's room and hugged her tight..laughingly naku hugged her back and asked her what happened ..why is she so happy..madhu told her you remember how I told you I have a brother..well after 3 months he has finally called and wants to meet me..i am sure he is ready to accept me as a small sister.

Naku looked at madhu and said don't worry you are so lovable that anyone would be lucky to have you as a sister..i know you haven't told me anything about this brother of yours..but if everything is alright promise me you will bring him here after all even I want to see who is the one who turned his back to my adorable friend..madhu blushed..honestly naku..if everything works out..you will definitely meet him

Finally reaching the temple..she looked around and saw dutta leaning on the pillar and looking outwards..madhu could not even stop the warm glow that filled her when she saw him..standing there..how many years she had wanted a family..a brother'and today seeing him standing there she knew her wish was coming true.

Dutta turned and he finally saw his small sister..standing there..her lips stretched in a gentle smile..and her eyes so focused on him ..it was as if she was worried that if she would blink he would disappear from there..dutta walked slowly towards madhu..and stood in front of her'he cleared his throat not knowing what to say'I mean what do you tell a sister you never knew existed.

Dutta cleared his throat again..and began fidgeting nervously..not knowing the amusing sight he was providing baji and madhu..he was still trying to think what to say..when he blurted out..you are my sister.. to which madhu countered ..am i..on which dutta gave madhu an adorably confused look..and suddenly baji on the side snorted gaining madhu and dutta attention..on seeing both of them looking at him..baji made his face straight and said ignore me..You'll go on..

Madhu seeing the difficulty dutta was having'.she told him..i know it is hard for you to accept me..and I know it will take time..but taking small steps we will be able build a beautiful relation.

Dutta looked at madhu as she began listing out the ways they could build a relation..he was getting frustrated as madhu was not even allowing him to talk..he looked over madhu's shoulder at baji..who really seemed to be enjoying this one sided conversation he was having with his sister..he was brought out of his thoughts when madhu said offcourse I will come home with you'

Dutta: One minute..when did I say you are coming home with me

Madhu: are you saying I am not coming home with you

Dutta: wait a minute when did I say you are not coming home with me

Madhu: well you just said

Dutta : I Have not spoken anything yet..i will speak only if you let me

Madhu: what do you mean I have not allowed you to speak'well forgive me considering the way you were non stop clearing your throat..i thought it appropriate to fill the silence.

Dutta:well you could atleast give me some moment to collect my thoughts

Madhu: some moment..i gave you three months to collect your thoughts

Suddenly from the side baji snorted

Dutta and madhu both turned to look at him and in one voice shouted at him'will you stop snorting..then they continued

Madhu: who is he and what is he doing here..tell him that if one more time he snorts I will put a clip on his nose

Dutta: well he is baji I didn't tell him to come here..he just came

Madhu: so are you taking me home..or not

Dutta : will you let me speak

Madhu: all this time you are speaking..mmph

Dutta had just covered her mouth with his palm to silence her..and told my god how much do you talk..yes I came to bring you home with me..even I want to give our relation a chance..

Madhu: well why didn't you say so

Dutta glared at her ..dont you dare start again..madhu gave him a big smile and suddenly dutta became weary of the naughtiness that began dancing in her eyes..when without warning she leapt and gave him a big hug..after three months dutta felt some happiness meeting this small creature..and he hugged her back..and when he looked up he could not help smiling back at baji..who also after so long was smiling happily..madhu being in her brother's arms'she thought...well now is the time to make bhao and vaheni to meet.

Baji walked behind the brother sister pair..he could not help but feeling this girl is really different..the way she was holding dutta arm as if he would just disappear..and seeing her baji realised how alone she must have been.one thing he could say he had never come across any person who could make dutta tounge tied..if only he could find naku he was sure she would have loved her small nanand.

The three of them got down the stairs to get in the car'unknown to dutta and baji that soon they were going to come face to face with the past.😉

hope youll enjoyed this part because to tell you the fact..i enjoyed writing it..because i had always wondered what dutta will do if he ever came across a babbler😆😆 ..
do leave your comments..good or bad..am desperate for comments😉😆😆
Edited by jessica10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaaar you are awesome... such a beautiful bro and sis interaction... 😃
Haaiiii baaji couldnt take his eyes off her... 😉
So Madhu going back home with Dutta...
I Just hope she brings Nakku as well and surprise Dutta!!
I LOVE Baaji man.. true friend.. 😳
Awesome update...
I cant wait for TaSha to meet..
Thanks for the PM hun..
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Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what an update. can't wait for the next part. these days I am mor eagrly waiting for your update than the actual episode. I enjoy reading the updates more than watching the show.
really like the way you intorduced Dutta and Madhu to each other. can;t wait to see how the relationship between Dutt-Madhu, Tasha and Bajji-Madhu develops.
great work. i feel alomosat sad that now i have to wait a day or two to read the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jessica... Thanks for the update
Awesome update... Dutta and Madhu interaction was
Nice.... Hope she brings nakku also back to duttas house
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a genuinely warm interaction between dutta and bhao.. amazing.. i loved the way you have defined madhu's character.. i can so see how lovely she wil be paired with baaji! and baaji still cares for his dost na..though he cant forgive him for what he did to nakku..
i am so eager to read the part where dutta meets nakku.. uske pairon tale zameen cheen jayegi!! and pls i hope nakku gives him son attitude just like how baaji did!
thanks for the Pm Jess
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yaar jessica really nice update
cnt wait 4 da nxt update pm me asap wen u update lol
tanx 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what an update
love dutta-madhu convo..it was so cute..madhu doing al the talkin n dutta jus listening...loving their bond... n was gr8 seeing baji smiling after ages and also its sweet tht evn in such a scenario he was thinking abt naku..m sure he wil b very happy 2 c nakusha at madhu's place
pls bring atharva back soon..i love his cute interaction with madhu... esp the childish fight they had in ur previous update--pulling each other's hair... imagine tht happening in front of dutta and baji😆
yay!!! tasha wil finally meet..continue soon!😳
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read ur ff its awesome pls pm me after updating t.c
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update........really enjoyed reading all the parts.This is more interesting than the current track of LTL. Hope we had got to see something similar on LTL.
Loved baaji's treatment of Dutta, am sure he will forgive him once he sees nakku. Also you have nicely handled Madhu-Dutta relationship, how I wish it was the same on LTL.
Looking forward to the next part. Please Pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.😊 yeh this sister of his seems as if she will plan his life for him,😆 kiya khana kiya peena kiya pehenna, biwi ko kiya bolna, biwi ko kaha honey moon😉 pai leke jaana😆😆,, update quickly plz

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