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Posted: 14 years ago
@Suvi Yeh app iuntentionally nikla

cuz i read ur FF i know kitni bholi ho tum :P

and yeah stop is what we all need here and let Sophie update :D
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GOD... My FF thread became a CCC! loool...
Chal hat... all of you!! GO now!! lol
Im writing.. update will b up in a bit...
love you all doe :)
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Thats my girl Updating
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Part 20

She sat down on the beach, her head resting on knees. Karan's heart sank, he couldn't watch her like that. He wanted, needed to hold her. Slowly, he put his hand on her shoulder. Kritika shivered under his touch and looked at him with teary eyes.

"Everything will be ok, please stop crying!"

Kritika wiped her tears "You're right, why should I cry when he's the one who should be crying?" Karan looked at her confused "What do you mean?" he asked.

"I won't leave him, I won't let him get away with this, I will tell Bhau, I will tell bhaiya but I will not let him get away with this" she said determinedly.

"Calm down, You don't want your brother to get in trouble, do you?, think about it, If you tell Dutta, then he will kill that B******, you gonna have to wait till the match finish" he reasoned her "And Dutta needs to win this match" he added.

"You're right, Bhau needs to win this match, this is a big deal for him" she sighed.

"Hmm... Let's go, you need some sleep, It's already 2 o'clock" He stood and held out his hand to her. Kritika looked at his hand and then at him. She smiled faintly and got up holding it.

...............

Two bodies lay entangled in the sheets, sweaty and flushed from their recent lovemaking. One deep in slumber, the other deep in thought. Nakku stared at the ceiling of the tent, idly playing with the locks from the head pillowed on her chest. She couldn't sleep, but she didn't know what was bothering her. Physically, she was exhausted, and smiled slyly at how that had come about, but still she was wide awake. Shifting her gaze to fall lovingly on the sleeping man in her arms, Nakku smiled, feeling her heart swell as it did every time she held him. She found it amazing that so much could change in her life in such a short time. Her life now was more perfect than she could ever have hoped.

She closed her eyes as Dutta mumbled in his sleep and shifted closer, drawing a thigh up over both of Nakku's. She shivered slightly at the feel of bare skin against her own and ran a gentle hand over Dutta's shouler, marveling again at how soft he felt. Focusing on the closeness of the moment, Nakku smiled and relaxed, drawing him even closer to her, never wanting to let go. She smelled the sweet scent of his hair, felt each warm puff of breath against her chest, and could almost sense his heartbeat.

Dutta stirred under the gentle caress, waking slowly with a soft moan. He smiled sleepily, stretching his entire body and rubbing against Nakku. He finally opened his eyes blearily to look at his fiance's loving face and hummed. "Nakku" he whispered, his voice ragged from sleep. He tipped his head back silently, offering his lips to her. Nakku smiled softly and met Dutta halfway, kissing him with a gentle passion, nibbling on his bottom lip. The kiss deepened of its own accord, their tongues dancing from one mouth to the other, both moaning softly. She gasped as he bit her lips and chuckled.

"Ahh Nakku..." He gasped, opening his eyes to look at her, "I... love you..." His eyes fell closed again as the small tremors began in the pit of his stomach and he buried her face in Nakku's silky tresses.

........................

As the match began, the girls stood on the side cheering for their teams. Dutta turned and looked at Nakku as she whispered "Best of luck". He smiled and gave her a flying kiss. Karan glared at Sam angrily and turned his face away disgustedly. Sam smirked and looked at Dutta. He seemed calm and happy which meant he didn't know about it. Sam chuckled as he walked pass Dutta mumbling something under his breath, but Dutta's attention was on Nakku. Dutta ran with the ball towards the goal "Kick Dutta, Kick" Karan shouted from across. Dutta narrowed his eyes and focus on the goal. If he got this then no one can stop him from purchasing his dreams. He had to win and there was also football associations who came to watch the match. They needed the best football player to play for the country. This was the biggest chance for Dutta and his team. He had to win. He sighed and kicked off the goal, everyone stopped cheering and looked at the ball. The goalkeeper looked at it with opened mouth and jumped to catch it. Baaji stood up and opened his eyes wide "Come on" he hissed and the ball went pass the goalkeeper, throwing him on the floor and went directly in the goal. A pin of silence and everyone jumped shouting out of excitement. Dutta closed his eyes and ran both of his hands in his hair "YESSSS" he shouted as his friends picked him up. As the confetti fell, Nakku ran to Dutta and jumped into his arms and he picked her up.

"Ahhh we won, Dutta, we won" Nakku squealed.

He put her down and hugged her "And the credit goes to you"

"Me?" she looked at him.

"Yes, you, because without you by my side, I'm nothing" he smiled naughtily.

"Acha?" she hit him playfully as he lowered his lips to hers and kissed her passionately, forgetting that the whole world was around them celebrating.

Coach Basu sat down as tears streamed down his cheeks. This was his last match. He can now retired happily after winning this match. He stood up as Dutta ran to him and hugged him "I'm so proud of you" Coach whispered happily "So Proud".

Dutta looked at him "Coach, you're the best" he smiled.

"Oh I know that" he smiled back and patted his back "Now I can get retired" he added with a sigh.

"Do you have to go coach? Can't you stay?" Dutta asked sadly.

"I have a wife waiting for me at home, Dutta. I promised her I will come back the day I win a match. 25 years, after 25 years, I won a match and I need to share this happiness with her" he smiled dreamingly thinking about his lovely wife.

Dutta smiled and looked at Nakku who was jumping happily with Sana, Kiritka and Baaji "I know what you mean coach, and I won't stop you. She is waiting for you".

Coach nodded and signalled Dutta to go to Nakku. Dutta nodded and ran to Nakku. Baaji grinned and jumped on Dutta "Bhau, you won bhau, you won" baaji hugged him tightly. Dutta smiled and opened his arm as kritika also ran to him and hugged him "I knew you would win, my bhau never lose" she shouted.

.............

Dressed in black tuxedos, the boys made their way to the party hall. The after party was a treat from the football associations to the team who won. It was quite posh and grand. Coach Basu sat down and smiled to himself while holding his glass of champagne. "Tomorrow I will be with my wife" he thought and sipped his drink. The boys entered the hall with a big grin on their faces. Everyone congratulated them and started talking to them.

"Hi, I'm Rishi Singhania" a man introduced himself to Dutta and shook his hand.

"Hi, I'm..."

"You're Dutta Sriram Patil, I know" Rishi completed his sentence.

"Yeah, right" Dutta smiled.

"I'm from the football associations. You did a marvelous job. Great game" he said, as a matter of fact. He was very impressed with Dutta.

"Oh, You are THE Mr. Singhania?" Dutta asked shockingly.

"Yes, that's me" he smiled "here's my card, you will need it, see you soon, Mr. Patil" he handed him his business card and walked away with a smile.

Dutta stood still, shocked at what just happened. This was the man he wanted to meet ever since he heard his name. To get a career in football, he had to get into Mr. Singhania's good books and tonight he made it there. And the man himself gave him his card. Dutta looked at the card and beamed.

After getting ready, the girls made their way to the party. As soon as they entered the hall, Dutta looked up and looked at Nakku smilingly. He didn't need to hear her voice to know she was here. He felt her as soon as she came. Her scent hypnotized him and her looks stunned him. "Damn, how does she manage to look so angelic?" he asked himself, gazing at her from across the hall. He walked towards her slowly and offered his arms. Nakku smiled shyly and held him. They walked around together, glancing at each other occasionaly. He wanted to hold her, touch her, kiss her but with everyone around, he couldn't do that.

Baaji ran his fingers through his hair "Arre yaar, where is she?" he said aloud. "Kaun? Sana?" Karan asked with a grin. "Haan haan hasle.. When you love someone and don't see them you will know how it feels" baaji said irritatedly. The smile on Karan's face faded away. Only if he could tell baaji that he does love someone, someone close to baaji itself, his own sister. His grip tighten around his glass. Baaji looked up and saw her. "Aagayi" he squealed and ran to her. Karan looked up quickly and saw Kritika dressed in a beautiful black gown. Well everyone was dressed in black, but for him, Kritika was looking more than beautiful, everyone elses faded away as he looked at her. He could only see her. She looked up at him and smile faintly then looked back down when baaji approached Sana and kissed her forehead. Baaji hugged Kritika and escorted both of them in the hall. Karan joined them after a while and sat down next to Kritika who looked upset.

"Are you ok?" he whispered, so baaji doesn't hear.

"Hmm" she nodded positively but her eyes said something else.

He didn't want to upset her further. Reluctantly, he got up and walked away. He couldn't see her sad, her unshed tears spoke volumes and unfortunately he heard what she didn't say. Dutta stopped Karan halfway and hugged him happily.

"Arre vah, hug shug, kya hua?" Karan asked curiously.

"You will never guess who I met tonight" Dutta beamed at his friend.

"Who?"

"Mr. Rishi Singhania, THE Singhania!" Dutta said, still quite stunned about it.

"WHAT? Is he here? He met you? What did he say?" Karan asked excitedly.

"He gave me his card and said he will see me soon" Dutta confessed happily and showed him the card. Karan took it from his hand and looked at it with an opened mouth "Shut up! Is this real?" he asked, smelling the card.

"Aur nahin to kya? I can't believe it myself"

"This is great Dutta. It's amazing" Karan hugged him.

"Can you two stop hugging each other? It looks gay" Nakku said from behind.

Karan and Dutta both looked at her "Ha, you're just jealous" Karan chuckled. Nakku raised an eyebrow "Really? Me jealous?".

"Nahin nahin, I'm going. You two love birds have fun" Karan walked away after winking at Dutta.

"I'm tired" said Nakku and sat down on a chair. Dutta smiled and crouched infront of her.

"If you're tired, then we should go back to the hotel" Dutta said and stood up.

*Yeh Dhuan Dhuan Sa Rehne Do - Tumsa Nahin Dekha*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l2QorNvplN4

"Na, we will go in a bit" She stood up as a slow music started playing. Dutta looked towards the dance floor and then back at Nakku. "Would you like to dance with me ma'am?" he asked bowing his head infront of her. Nakku smiled and placed her hand into his and went to the dance floor. Holding her close by her waist, they swayed along to the music while gazing at each other lovingly. "You look beautiful" he confessed honestly. Nakku smiled and bit her bottom lips "You look handsome" she adjusted his tie and held him tighter.

Sana and Baaji also joined TaSha to dance. Sana rested her head on baaji's chest and slowly moved with the rhythm of the music. "Baaji" she called out to him "Hmmm" he replied lazily.

"When are you going to tell your family about us?" she asked and pulled back to look at him.

"When bhau and Nakku decide to tell then i will tell" he said "He's older, so he's meant to get married first"

"Alright, but I can't wait to meet your family" she smiled and hugged him dancing to the music.

...........

"I need to tell Bhau, I won't let him get away with this"

Kritika thought and looked at TaSha dancing. She looked around and saw Karan sitting at the bar drinking. She sat alone and thanked god that Sam wasn't in the party because his team lost, they were probably mourning.

"Ahhhhhhh, how could we lose? We lost against Dutta again! How could this happen? We practiced a lot" Sam shouted to his teammates who were lying down on the floor in his room. "Match gaya haath se aur ladki bhi" he said angrily.

"Ladki? Kaun ladki" one of his friends asked.

"Dutta ki behen" said Sam angrily.

"What did you do to her?" another friend asked.

"Well I hurt Dutta indirectly but He doesnt even know about it" he said.

"What the hell is wrong with you Sam? Are you crazy? What did she do to you?"

"Ayee chup kar, I didn't do it to your sister so shut the F*** up" Sam screamed.

"You're disgusting. How would you like it if someone did that to your sister?" his friend looked at him disgustingly.

"Lets go guys. You're sick Sam. Sort yourself out" they glared at him and left his room.

"Shut up" he banged the door close and fumed.

............

Dutta and Nakku went outside to walk. Kritika glanced around and didn't see them. She needed to tell her Bhau. There was no way she was going to hide this from him. She wanted to see Sam touch her feed and apologise to her. She wasn't a kind of girl who would let Sam get away with something like this. Karan looked at her and knew she was looking for Dutta. She got up and ran out of the hall. Baaji saw her and started getting worried. "Chal" he held Sana's hand and went behind her. Karan also ran out and followed them.

"Bhauuuu" Kritika shouted and ran to Dutta.

He turned and saw her "Choti? Kya hua?" Kritika hugged him and broke into tears.

"Ey Choti, why are you crying" Dutta broke the hug and cupped her face.

Baaji, Sana and Karan came there and looked at Kritika worriedly. "Choti, tu rau kyun rahi hain? Baat kya hain?" Baaji asked and turned Kritika to him.

"Woh..." Karan said and looked at kritika.

"Do you why she's crying?" Dutta asked angrily.

"Bhau.. Bhau woh" Kritika hugged him again and told him everything while Karan stood still looking down. Dutta clenched his fist and closed his eyes. Baaji was too shock to even react. Sana and Nakku held kritika and consoled her. Dutta and baaji looked at each other angrily.

.........

Nakku's Dress

Sana's Dress

Kritika's Dress

I know it's not a very good update, I am quite sleepy. I started writing yesterday but then dozed off.😆

Thanks everyone who liked and commented on my previous update.

Please Leave a comment and press 'Like'😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing update

hmmm new entry...rishi singhania...is he young like dutta..? if so thn dnt tel me he'll fall for naku
aww poor kritika...m sure dutta n baji wil teach sam a lsn... thnk god his m8s did support his act... such guys r reali sik...they shud think twice b4 doin such things with other ppls sis...hw wud they like it if it hapnd 2 der sis? 🤢
tasha romance was gd....awww dutta in deep sleep...lol..mus hav been so exhausted...it was jus 1 round yh? lol... i hpe she dunt b pregnant b4 marriage...it wil giv da kala lot a chance 2 talk bad abt her...
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
My place ....... read it yesterday only but was so sleepy so didnt comment.....
I read it again........ So Duttas team won the match........... yipeeeee............... he owe it all to Nakku........ Kritika and Karan really disturbed bcoz of Sam........ Sams frnds too left him to bhav badly to kritika....... Mr singhania approached Dutta............wow!!!! his most awaited opportunity........ Kritika tell all what Sam did to her to both the bros......... OMG!!! Dutta and Baaji will sure bash him up..............
Now I think this is what happens according to precap........ one good news...... he gets selected to play in the team by Mr singhania.......... and sad newz he hav to go sum other place .......... Leaving all of them, Right???? ........
Continue sooooooooooooon............... Thanx fr PM.....
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

amazing update Thank you😳

hmmm new entry...rishi singhania...is he young like dutta..? if so thn dnt tel me he'll fall for naku
Nahin re baba... Stop predicting lol... He's a middle aged man.. he's like the high profile man... he wnt fall for Nakku..
aww poor kritika...m sure dutta n baji wil teach sam a lsn... thnk god his m8s did support his act... such guys r reali sik...they shud think twice b4 doin such things with other ppls sis...hw wud they like it if it hapnd 2 der sis? 🤢 Exactly... before doing tht to anyone.. they should think about it.. they must hve sisters as well😡 Sik ppl.. yh his friends didnt like that
tasha romance was gd....awww dutta in deep sleep...lol..mus hav been so exhausted...it was jus 1 round yh? lol... i hpe she dunt b pregnant b4 marriage...it wil giv da kala lot a chance 2 talk bad abt her...
LOL.. Only 1 round? 😲 Hailaa i wrote recent lovemaking n u say only one round?😕 I would have said last night lovemaking na?😆 Na around 2-4 rounds 😆 But don't worry.. totally safe😉 No pregnancy.. they are clever😆

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ohh Sophie it is really good...poor Kritika...she started crying..and Karan can't help her..Sam is disgusting! Idiot kahin ka😡 He has no respect!😡😡..They won the match..yay!⭐️ Aw coach is retiring for his wife..how sweet!😳

The dresses were gorgeous!!😳
Naku and Dutta..'recent lovemaking'😆 haye hayeee! They can't get enough of each other!😳
Rishi something met Dutta..wow..so a big step in Dutta's career..exciting!!!⭐️
Kritika started crying in Dutta's arms..aage kya hoga? What will Dutta do to Sam?
Update soooooooon!!!👍🏼 And thanks for the PM❤️
Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sophia21

LOL.. Only 1 round? 😲 Hailaa i wrote recent lovemaking n u say only one round?😕oh i 4gt, shud hav knwn its sophies ff...she wil neva let tasha go with round 1..lol...no wonder he was exhausted n in deep sleep...bt she was wide..haha mayb up for a few mre rounds...lol I would have said last night lovemaking na?😆 Na around 2-4 rounds 😆 But don't worry.. totally safe😉 No pregnancy.. they are clever😆dnt tel me he was carrying tht thing with him... haha... or mayb she wntd it 2 happn al along so tuk her side of the protection b4 hand...stil cnt believe she made the moves---thts so nt naku... lol..kya bana diya tune naku ko sophie... u total besharam larki...hehehe

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