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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 21

Sam sat in his empty room and looked at the surroundings. Everything was a mess. As soon as his friends left he took out his frustrations on the vase, glasses and other decorations around.

"I don't need them" he convinced himself, again and again.

Just then, the door broke open and Dutta glared at him angrily. He barged in and shoved him up against the wall violently. "Dutta" Sam shouted, trying to push him away.

"How dare you touch my sister?" Dutta hissed, holding Sam's chin firmly.

"Let go of me" Sam said angrily and pushed Dutta back. Baaji ran into the room and looked at sam disgustingly.

"Get out my room" Sam said as Karan also came with the girls behind him. Dutta ignored him and stepped towards him and raised his right fist to his face. When Sam lifted both of his hands to defend his face from the blow, Dutta drove his left fist into the boy's belly. Pulling him up by his hair, Dutta punched him in the face and let him fall back down on the floor with a thud. It was harder than he expected. Sam bent forward, his face twisted in agony, both hands going to his midriff; whereupon Dutta hit him full in the face with his right fist, catching him high on the cheekbone. Baaji came forward as Sam's hands fell to his sides and he staggered, dazed, his face was covered in blood, his eyes closing then he bent backwards, lying down in pain. Baaji started kicking him. "Don't you dare fall unconscious. Say sorry to my sister" he yelled and pulled him by his hands and dropped him infront of kritika's feet. "Maafi maang" Karan ordered and placed his foot on Sam's back.

Sam looked up "S..So..Sorry" he said painfully.

Kritika crouched down infront of him "You thought I was those kind of girls who wouldn't dare tell anyone about what you've done to me? Well Kritika is different, Unique" she smirked.

"You see those permanent scars on your face?" she pressed her finger on his wounds "These will remind you how to treat a girl. Everytime you look at yourself, you will think twice before playing with a girl's dignity!"

"Isse to main..." Dutta moved forward to hit him but Baaji held him. "Leave it bhau" Kritika said and stood up.

"24 hours, Im giving you 24 hours to go away. Tomorrow, I don't want to see you here!" Dutta ordered and walked off angrily.Giving Sam a dirty look, everyone followed him.

Sam tried to get up and stumbled to the messy bed. He dropped down and winced in pain. "Ahhh" he held his stomach and let out a big groan.

"Dutta" Nakku called him and put a hand on his shoulder.

"Nakku, that son-of-a-b*tch...." he hissed angrily

"Bhau" Kritika ran and hugged him.

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry I wasn't there" Dutta caressed her head and consolled her.

"It's not your fault. Thank god Karan came on time" she looked back at Karan who stood there, looking at his feet.

"Karan..." Dutta let go of Kritika and walked to karan "Itna bhara ehsaan kardiya tumne mujhe par. I don't know how to thank you.."

"Eyy Dutta, Dosti mein no thank you ok?" Karan smiled and hugged him. Dutta smiled and hugged his friend tightly. Karan looked at kritika and gave her an assuring smile. She smiled back thankfully as Dutta and Karan broke apart.

.....

1 Week Later. The Last Night in Bangkok

Dutta sat on his bed sulking while Nakku was packing his bag. After several attempt, Dutta gave up and Nakku took over.

"So are we going directly from the airport?" Nakku asked, casually.

"Hmm"

"Who's picking us up?"

"My car is already at the airport" he answered.

"What? How did it get there?"

"Special VIP parking areas" he said "AS sent some drivers to the hostel to get our cars" he added.

"Hmm, alright I'm done with your packing" she closed his suitcase.

Dutta stood up "Thanks" he smiled and hugged her.

"Hmm.. tell me something, do you have it?" she broke apart and looked at him.

"What?" he looked at her, confused.

"The pills?" She asked, glaring at him.

"Oh yes, I put it in your handbag" He pointed towards her bag.

"Should I continue taking it?"

"Well I don't mind becoming a dad, but it's entirely up to you" he winked and smiled naughtily

"Chal hath" she punched him playfully and pulled him down for a kiss.

........

Baaji sat on the bed as Sana showed him different attires she bought for the wedding. Feeling bored, he quietly put his headphones in and listened to his music and looked at Sana as she went on and on about her shopping trip.

"Tum jaante ho I bought 3 sarees, I didn't know you could get nice sarees here" she started.

"Hmmm" he smiled and pretended he was deeply interested.

"Then I bought matching shoes" she beamed and put the shoe boxes in her suitcase.

"Hmmhmm" he kept his eyes on her.

"I even bought something for your sister" she said and took out a nicely wrapped gift "You want to know what it is?" she asked.

"Hmmm"

"Well I won't tell you, It's a surpise" she smiled cheekily and put it in her suitcase.

"Hmmm"

"Hmm? What Hmm?" she frowned "gunga ho gaye ho kya? Can't you talk properly?"

"Hmm" he smirked.

Her blood started to boil, she suddenly got up and walked over to him but then saw the headphone and his ipod. "Baaaji" she yelled and pulled it out of his ears.

He stood up quickly and looked down. "You were listening to music when I was talking to you?" she shouted, pointing a dangerous finger at him.

"Er.. Uh.. Jaan.. No.. I mean yes, I mean..."

"SHUT UP" she held his collar.

"I...hmm" his voice trailed off as she placed her lips on top of his. She chuckled as she kissed him violently. "I'm sorry but I need to punish you" she said against his lips.

"O.. kay" he managed to say as he turned her around and pinned her against the wall.

He pulled back and looked at her sadly "Bhau is so lucky" he pouted and sat on the bed.

"Why?" she asked, confused.

"Well, He's sharing his room with Nakku.. Oops I mean Vayhini" he complained.

"They are engaged, let them" she caressed his face.

"We can get engaged now if you want, I will make you wear my ring" he beamed and showed her his ring.

Sana laughed "You're crazy. Chal pack your bags, we're leaving quite early tomorrow morning"

..........

Kritika sat on the bed staring at the dress in her hand. She smiled and remembered she wore that dress the day they kissed. "Karan" A smiled placed on her lips while she admired it. A little knock on the door spoiled the little world she was in. She got up with a sigh and opened the door to see Karan standing there.

"Karan...?" She stared at him, shocked "You? Here? Come in.." she smiled and went in as he followed her and closed the door.

"Er.. Hi" He said, almost whispering.

"Hi.. Sit down" she picked up the clothes from the bed and shoved them into her suitcase.

He smiled and sat down "Erm... actually I wanted to tell you something" he started, looking nervous.

"Yeah go ahead" she sat down next to him.

"Er.. look.. I mean this... Well..."

"Just say it for gods sake" she said irritatedly

He closed his eyes "Forget that kiss, forget everything, We can't be together" He said quickly and stood up with his back turned to her.

"What? ... I mean.. Why? How can you tell me to just forget everything?" she stood up and turned him around.

Pushing her hand away, he turned his back to her again "Look, me, Dutta and Baaji are like brothers. If We don't work out then... Look, I can't risk loosing them. They mean a lot to me" without taking a glance at her, he walked out and banged the door close behind him.

Kritika stood there for a few minutes like a statue. She was supposed to be angry, atleast that's what she thought but another emotion took over her. She felt as if someone just stabbed her right in the heart. He stabbed her in the heart. As she let go of herself, her knees felt weak. She sunk onto the floor sobbing.

"He.... He.. can't do this to me... How...What?" she pulled her knees to her chest and cried her heart out.

Karan ran to his room and then to his attached bathroom. As he turned to the mirror, he hated to see himself. He knew what he did was not right but he didn't have any other choice. He opened the tap with a shaking hand and splashed the cold water on his face. However much water he splashed, the pain didn't ease. Actually it increased to such a level that he dropped down on his knees and pulled his hair.

"I'm sorry... I'm so sorry" He cried aloud. Wishing she could hear him, understand him "I love you, I really do" he confessed, as if she was there.

"I hate you, I really hate you karan" Kritika sobbed and turned to see the dress she was holding a few minutes ago, with a smile.

"I will burn all your memories" she got up and picked up the dress. Looking around the room, she found a box of matches which she used to light candles.

Throwing the dress on the floor, she fumbled with the match box and threw the fire on the dress. She sank down on the floor watching it burn. "Why should I cry? Am not meant to cry. Kritika Patil doesnt cry for anyone" she convinced herself and wiped her tears.

..........

Dutta admired his fiance lovingly while she slept. It was the last night they would be sharing one room. From the next day, they would be in Patil Niwas and there were rules in that house. His strict father, caring mum, loving sisters and the servants who looked after him since he was a kid. He smiled as he thought how Govind, his dad's loyal servant would buy chocolates for him everytime he went market. He missed home, missed his mother's paratha, his dad's scoldings and his sisters non stop talking but then he had the most precious thing in his arm. His Nakku. He beamed and looked at her swollen lips and placed a light feather kiss on them. He didn't want to wake her up cause she looked like an angel. His angel. Turning off the light with one hand, he pulled her closer with the other.

............

Precap

First Day at Patil Niwas.

Dutta Introduce Everyone to his family.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yipeeeeeeeee yeah me first🥳

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woahhhhhh sophia khan besharam ladki kab bangayee i mean tasha in same room dat was a 😲😈 hhehhehe love dis part to bits cant write much as i am in 😲 oh i get it being married to baji is showing its affect now nah dats it 😃

oh i was confused a bit as to did i left some part i luked back n saw i had reserved part 20 n didnt read n comment either sowie i forgot part 20 is awesome too u u u u soph it made me me of all the ppl me 😳 😆
Edited by Lifu18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

omg Sophie..'did you get the pills?" oye hoyye😉 of course, if you cant make her pregnant, you have to mention something about that😆 ek din aisa bhi aayega when she'll forget the pills aur fir..football team!!!😉😆

YaySam ko maardiya yyaayyy
Baaji..disrespectful bacha...listening to music..aur Sana going on about shopping😆..oh naughty..he wants to share a room with sana..and trying to get engaged on the spot..aise nahi chalega, it has to romantic and sweet😳
Poor Kritika..awww...bechare, dono..so sad😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 rulaaa diyaaa..so saaaddd
Ooh no more sharing room for TaSha😆
Me excited..what are D's parents going to say about Naku? Kalavati..?
Update soooon and thanks for the PM (RKN and PKD bhi update karoo ladki-didi😳)
Take care🤗
Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,patil niwas mein kya hoga
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update sophie
yay baji-dutta-karan taught sam a lsn..aww dutta was feelin bad tht he wasnt der for his sis... bt at least sam gt wt he deserved in da end
oh gosh poor kritika n karan...he reali loves her bt cnt b with her... wel m sure things wil work out...distances cn sumtyms mke ur love n bond stronger... thts wt they say ..lol
oh my days tasha at it agen? dey shud b careful--sophie u besharam kuri..lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sophia🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗Loved it like always😉...So finally Dutta and baaji showed sam his real place😡,,,,Good nxt time he will think twice before doing that to anyone.....
Awww dutta was sad that he wasn"t there for Kritz...But he thankful to karan😉
Wow Tasha romance is going u strong ....Waise we arent ready for football team either😆....What will happen in PN?😉
OMG karan loves Krtiz but can"t confess and here kritz is devasted ...Awww i hope they together soon 😉.....
Basa were really cute and sweet ......
Loved the update yaar ...Precap looks interesting.....
pls jaldi update karna.....u take care and see ya around....
Love and hugs
suhana🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Nice update, I wonder what's gonna happen with Kritika and Karan, Baji and Saana r cute wen they fight, thank god Dutta beat the crap out of Sam lol, maybe it wud b nice 2c a jealous Karan to make him realise he can't stay away from her, or maybe a cum bak from Sam 4 revenge lool, dat wud b g8 2c him get mashed up again😃, but dis tym by a possessive Karan instead.
And thanks for posting the link on my ff, really appreciate it.
tc hun
Tink😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Soph u gangsta!! *HUGS*

U reli did prove dat u totally deserve GOTW

Soo glad u beat the shytt outa sam!!

do they do IT soo often dat they need protectn soo..🤬 lmao

hehe D ko toh bohat jaldi hai baap bane ki

Haha baji how rude of u lol but tbbh i don't blame ya hehe

Wow sana has learnt alot na..she also punishes in a very tempting way lol

Omg did karan rely do dat...wel tbh i had a feeling he wud do dat cuz of dduji na...he know hw protective kritz broz r espesh dutta..

Feel dory 4 dem bth...ope they get bk 2gva soon..am sur they wil eventually

Thnx 4 pm bby..sory 4 l8 rply..alwaiz read my fav ffz last u c

<3 yuhh

Continue soooooooooooonn



mwahh
xoxox

ps.sory 4 such a long essay😳

pps.had 2 type dis up 3rd time now...😡




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Posted: 14 years ago
A nice one............. Dutta and Baaji showed Sam his place ......... Nakku taking pills ........... Dutta very naughty........... Karan asked Kritika to forget evrything........... poor kritika............ Nxt in PN........... updt sooooooooon............. Thanx 4 PM........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Sophia wonderful post.............................
Finally Dujji showed sam his right place............................
Awwwww Dutta guilty for not being there for Kritz & he thanked Karan for kritz's help..........
I love them .............................
OMG she asked him abt pills 😲 & they r living in same room 😲
thats lyk my Sophia style, not that sady sady wala 😆
Sana & Bajji r so cute....................... bajji bored with Sana's shopping talks
and switched to music 😆 .......................
oh GOD karan loves Kritz but dunno confess...........................
kritz is too much hurt ............. poor both 😭
hope they will be together soon........................................
Waiting for what gonna happen in PN ...........................
thanx for the pm dear................update soon
Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago

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