OS:'Waapis Aaogi Na' - Page 12

Originally posted by: swati2008

nice part DD.......probs between Dutta n Naku........sab jaldi se thik karde........Dutta needs her............update soon...........

Originally posted by: rama_2010

Oye Oye... bahut mazaa ayaa.... but suspense tho khol diya hotaa..... CD dikha diya hota na DD...

Continue entertaining with your lovely writing...

Originally posted by: prettywoman

Hey DD.. I can never write enough to praise you.. you were unnecessarily worried that you are deviating a bit from this part.. mere ko aisa nahin laga.. I still found the same good old solid flavour but there are a few things I did not expect, but loved it nevertheless as I can relate to it more.. aage aage padho pata chalega ;-)

[DD]Vandu...From Part 4, u will see the deviation but I will get them back to track.....promise! 😆

"Tum bahut achchi lag rahi ho." More than Naku, he blushes....

what I can say! This summarises Nakku's Dutta and how he feels for her. He may be a mighty don and the whole town fears him, but in front of nakku, he becomes a meow meow ;-)and so cute that he was trying to impress her wearing the new outfit.. waise poora black pehnaya DD.. u know that is enough for all of us to faint here ;-) and mast photos bhi post kiya tumne.. ek dum perfect!

[DD] Yaar, I really loved this black attire of his and hence had to use it...😆...and Dutta ki toh hawaa nikal jaati hai in romantic moments.....Abhi monday dekte hain, what he does! 😆😆

Lekin ek sawal.. why do u say nakku has worn saree for the first time.. so what is her normal attire?

[DD]I didnt change her salwar suit attire in 1 year because I wanted us to map with the koel nakku...well, its all an assumption...

Love the way roops-baaji congratulate them.. at least with roops turning positive, feel a bit better now for baaji too. And what can I say about the other PN wasis.. all doing naatak as usual. But now that nakku knows the truth, it must be so unbearable for her to put up with such fake people and fake feelings esp as they have evil intentions to her one and only dutta!

[DD] Seriously Vandu, I put myself in Naku's chappals and realized that for an innocent mind like hers, its so difficult for her to even spend those few hrs with the family without revealing what she knows...she doesnt act....the guilt is visible on her face in FR too...

"Yeh Khushi ke aansoon hai Dutta, Tu nahi samjhegaa aurtoan ki baatein. Naku, yede aa!" Naku makes herself go to AS with lot of effort. Dutta still looks concerned and unsure.

Ab yeh hui na baat.. this is the Dutta we know.. u know when Nakku cried after she got signal from bappa not to do FR (courtesy Baaji and his fan), she was crying in front of dutta and he was upset.. but when she said khushi ke aasoon hain, he sort of accepted it. And this point somehow I could not agree 100%.. I felt he should have probed more or at least been a bit more concerned.. phir laga teekh hain, she has also gone thru so much that he thought actually khushi ke hi asson the! But I am glad that you wrote dutta was concerned :-)

[DD] u do catch the subtlety of my thought ...dnt u? 😳😛...yes, I did think tht if there was a worried expression on Naku's face, Dutta cannot be shooed off like this...he wuld get it immediately....he loves her for heaven sake...it cannot always be Naku undersanding him, it has to be two way thru'...

And how dutta persists with her..to ensure she was indeed fine.. loved it.. and esp how he felt he should be ashamed if he has not been able to keep her happy! And bechari nakku kare bhi toh kya kare.. well this was my thought and how u changed that DD by the end of this part :-)!!!

Dutta looks at Naku with embarrasment, "Meine nahi..."...Naku smiles at him back, "Aapko lagtaa hai ki aapko bolne ki zaroorat hai, mere ko?". Dutta's embarrasment changes to a lovelorn look, "Har din mere ko aehsaas hota hai, naye naye tareekoan se, ki mein kitna naseeb waala hoon."...

Trust me, I promise you, my heat stopped for a min reading this.. I was totally picturing them together.. and MR would be awesome in this scene.. I still remember how he blushed with As caught him while he was carrying nakku after she fell off the ladder.. and I thought he had done a fab job.. this brought back the same memories for me :-)

[DD]😆😆😆.....good idea....I can imagine Dutta giving the best smile, staring at her for extra few seconds...😛😳

, "Toh Bhaiyoan aur unki behnoan, -- baaji kabhi nahi badlega.. thank god for small mercies.. and eyeing roops asking dutta for pyar.. beta tut oh bhao se bhi tez nikla.. sahi maine mein you are a raapchik person ;-)

[DD] I know...Baaji wuld be always be one step ahead na!! 😆😆

Bhao sings .. aaaw... and these beautiful lines.. how cutee..

"Duniyaa ne thookraaya hai, Bus tumne apnaaya hai,

Dil ko kitnaa chain milaa, sab ne itnaa sataaya hai,

Apna hai, ek sapnaa, ek tu hee ho apnaa"

"Both of them didnt care how many people were there in front of them, they two were immersed in love. Baaji starts crying seeing their love when Roops comes and gives his hand a hard squish."

Aree.. me too crying.. bus mera haath pakadne koi nahin hain.. ;-) but aisa lag raha tha ki toofan darwaaze par khada hain..:-(

[DD] Aao Vandu...I will catch ur hand!! 😆😆

Dutta holds his collar tight, "Mujhe majboor mat kar aisaa kuch karne ke liye, jisse humari peediyaan pachtaayein."

DP - "Jo karnaa hai kar le betaa, mein yahaan aaj apni baat bataake hi jaaongaa."

How stupid and blinded can dutta get in his anger, hai na.. well, we all love him for that also !! he is liked a blinkered horse here!!

[DD]We love him in all his form na...

And OMG, finally we see the sherni.. who is so MIA from the show.. she stands up to her hubby as she knows she is doing the right thing. It is a huge task as Dutta looks dangerous when he is angry.. there is this unbelievable enenergy radiating from him when he is upset and she still stands her ground!

[DD]when has Naku cared about anything but being right for Dutta!! she wuld stand against anyone, even Bappa, when it comes to a matter relating to Dutta....toh Dutta kya cheez hai!! 😆

So she finally tells the truth to him.. and he is enraged.. he is enraged as to how she can even think like that.. he is even more indebted to his sisters and AS as they suffered so much but still took him on.. in spite of nakku saying to at least think how sups ran away, he doesn't want to.. almost a self denial .. not wanting to know the truth.. maybe an inner fear that he will not like the truth.. kabhi kabhi we all go thru that where we have an intuition ki yeh galath ho sakta hain and we stay away.. I feel the same for dutta here..

[DD] yeah Vandu, sometime the truth is so bitter tht we just wanna let it go than hear it out...postpone is as much as possible... and when it comes to mother, its a different matter altogether...

But well done DD, that Dutta lets nakku speak at least so much before banishing her away.. 1 year together with her has at least changed him so much. Pehle hota toh, he would have just banished her even before she would have strung a sentence together.. so it was quite touching to see Dutta fight himself and let her speak..

"Humaare pyaar mein Hadein kahaan se aa gayi? Aur agar aapke liye mujhe hadeein paar karni padegi, toh mein woh bhi karegi!"

Well done nakku.. but feel sorry for both of them.. but still how could dutta say that.. I mean I can see why, but phir bhi my heart is crying .. as usual not for nkku but for dutta only ;-) DD.. make him grovel big time for this ok.. please.. how could he ask her to leave? It is like killing himself, isn't it? i.e.,asking his soul and heart to leave him.. phir usme bacha kya hai? Kuch bhi toh nahin.. ek zinda laash.. that will be her case too without him..sniff sniff.. no wonder he cant look her in the eyes when she asks him how he can let her go.. kyunki if he looks in her eyes and sees her love, there is no way he can let her go.. he knows she is the only one who loves him unconditionally..DD you have to make up big time girl, please..esp as that AS is doing her drama big time!!

[DD] Vandu, u wait and watch, I will make him grovel to the extent tht there would be cats and dogs pouring....soon...dnt worry!! 😆

Dutta looks at Naku, "Dekhaa! Aaj bhi meri Aayi mere baare mein soch rahi hai, meri khushi ke baare mein soch rahi hai, aur tu..." He turns his face, disgusted with Naku. "Meri Zindagi se chali jaa Naku. Meri Aayi mere liye sab se zyaada zaroori hai. Iske liye mein kuch bhi chod saktaa hai." Naku becomes stoned for a second. She couldnt believe what she was hearing.

Even I cant believe this DD.. I can agree 200% with this though as most men believe that their mums can never be wrong!!!!! And for dutta it is payback time too for all that his mum has supposedly done for him.. magar uske saamne nakku ke pyar ka koi mol nahi, hai na?! he feels the weight of her ehsaan more in his heart that her love, I suppose! Gadha kahin ka..

[DD]Vandu, even in LTL he tells AS very clearly tht she means the most to him...I was waiting for tht dialogue in LTL to authenticate my OS, and they springed it at the right time, so, even in LTL, AS means more to her than anyone...

, "Nahi jaayegi, Mein nahi jaayegi! Aur kyun jaaye? Yeh ghar meraa hai, Aap mere ho!" Mein aapko aisee akelaa chod ke nahi jaayegi."

Atta Girl.. way to go.. here is where you changed the fixed image of nakku in my mind and it was changed for better! Well done.. usually anyone would take offence and leave.. but no, not nakku.. she knows she loves him and that he dotes on her, so why should she leave.. this is the strength of nakku's character.. as dutta said, she is uneducated, does not know the worldy ways, but has a very clear mind and thinks from her heart.. bless her!

[DD] Vandu, Naku wuld shield Dutta even if she has to siffer for him....thts the character I seein Naku and I never want her to deviate from tht.....even in LTL....

And DP will stay there.. haila.. ab kya hoga.. kya tension mein dal diya tune DD.. ab jaldi post kar please.. so many questions swimming in my head, esp now how will Dutta deal with Nakku.. will he chuck her out of his room? I don't think so, as she has made it clear that it is her own home too.. he will deffo go to sleep on the sofa ;-).. magar dil toh dil hi hota hain na.. and ek baar sach mein pyar ho gaya kisi se, then mushkil hota hain usko dookhi dekh ken a.. so he will be going thru hell for putting her thru this.. he will be hurting more than her...

Well, DD, chal girl.. I cant wait for next part.. sorry for my rant.. kuch zyaada hi ho gayi ;-)

[DD]u might have got the answer to this in Part III...😆😆

Vandu

Originally posted by: shallymann

excellent ..... enjoyed it very much

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Bravo!Superb!DD, yet again you amaze awesomely!Very well written.

I sincerely hope D didn't mean Nakku to leave PN & I'm happy the girl put any ego issue aside & refused to budge from the house.Not only that she even made Papaji stay with that horrible family.

I hate Damodar Papaji for what he did to Baby Dutta & the horrible turn of events he brought upon him & Shakuntala's family.But Dutta is surrounded by unseen enemies in his own house & will never know peace & happiness unless somebody puts a permanent stop to these enemies.And no one is better for that job than Papaji.I love your idea of him living in PN where he can keep a watchful eye on my sweetheart & protect him from further harm. Who knows maybe D sweetheart will find it in him to finally forgive his dad.He needs closure too or this will be another open festering wound on his poor soul.

And what is this? You made my sweetie cutie sing in a roomful of people?😲😵☺️ Romantic gana? "Zuby faints" Haila! sab hasey honge shonu par 😔

But a fantastic OS. Better than what is dished out by professional people sometimes.Thank u for that nudge thru the PM.I'm eagerly awaiting the third installment.

I love the idea of posting pics from the episodes matching the moods in the OS scenes.Superb!👍🏼

Originally posted by: pbtghosh

👏👏👏

Very well written.

OMG.. Dutta singing. 😍

D&N hug in front of all 😲 👍🏼. hona chahiye.

who is playing Jhumri's character? you 😉 .... or any other forum member😆.

waiting for next.😊

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ritun

Originally posted by: taman07

really nice , how can u write so well. amazing.

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey DD thanx alot for the update and PM 🤗 wow really loved it yaar ...u are brillant ....tasha scene was superb😍...but why didn"t u open the suspense?...pls clear all the misunderstandings...i hope dutta forgives DP and naku soon...so can see more romance btw tasha....thanx alot once again for such a wonderful and awesome update...will wait for nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna ❤️

Originally posted by: Krrish87_sweet

@ DD: fabolous!! I have no words of how much i like it! I m thinking ur writing story of LTL.. even i think A.S. could be a negative character and i like ur plot. 😃

Awsome , Fantabolous DD! A lil acknoladgement gift from my side!