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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: vika1981
DD, such excitement! I am really loving naku's new determined stance to stay and fight for her husband and love:) Dutta has completely lost his bonkers.. but again he is guy with a heart of a gold. I am glad that DP is staying there naku will need all the help she can get otherwise the sisters and the mother will make life living hell.

amazing writing.. more soon

Vika, thanks gal....Naku has to stand her ground else if she too leaves, she knows dutta would be eaten alive by his "apne".... so, I made her not leave the house...+ she had promised...no matter what dutta says, she has to keep her promise...😉

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

😆OMG Mithai...This is called real postmortem...tune toh mere answer sheet ke cheethde nikaal diye...ab phir se exam likhnaa padegaa!! 😆😆

Mithai, tu kahin Dutta ko bare toh nahi dekhnaa chahti hai???....😆😆😆

dutta and sanki?? 😆😆😆😆 agar tu Naku hoti toh ab tak toh Dutta to mental asylum chod ke bhi aa jaati!! 😆😆

I am sure u wuld have made Naku punce on Dutta in ur FF....ab toh padhnaa padegaa hee!! 😆😆

Mithai, Naku, AS and Babi have a permanent tanki on their heads...sada bahar paani rehtaa hai....jab bolo, tanki khul jaayegi!! 😆😆

u crack me full time mithai....😆😆😆....competition in staring n mind reading...😆😆😆

Mithai, dnt confuse MR with Dutta....My OS is on Dutta, not on MR....Toh Dutta sings in cacophonic voice...toh bus keh diyaa na!! 😆😆

haan mithai, Baaji ko bhi mein tanki fit karaa de...ab usko bhi jab bolegi, woh royegaa!! 😆😆

oh god...u cracked me up big time with ur commetns....never ever be a critic, tu toh band bajaa degi!!😆😆

durga pujaa ho gayi?

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: isatb
HEY DD nice part. vry emotional.. I hav faith in u. U'll make evrythng fine. Sab ka sach samne aajyega aur Tasha ek ho jayenge.. But the part was awesome.👍🏼

time lageega, but i will give u a happy ending!!...promise!!😆

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: spandana11
DD I was like this😭😭 while reading very emotional ,can not see Tasha in pain ,not able to write more after reading will be waiting for next part ,please jaldi next part update karo

will update next part by tomorrow pakka....but tum sab mujhe bahut maarne waale ho...😆

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: sunshiine21
Yeh jhumri ki to 😡😡😡😡😡 Woah awesome updateee but can't see dutta like dis😭😭😭😭 Can't he just listen 2 nakku and DP for once... uska kya chalega? damn that man is stubborn lol... anyway update sooon!!!

😆😆

he has always listened to ppl, when he wants to...so, dnt worry, that time wuld also come....pehle toh gadhaagiri hi karegaa!! 😆

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: khushi0318

Firstly DD I am extremely SORRY for reading ur post sooooo late........................
I am supposed to read it earlier but everytime I start reading ur post, always interupteded by smbody..............
after reading all three post I am compeletly speechless
all three parts are awesome.................
dialogues b/w taSha are
superubbbbbbb......... U write lyk a
professional writer.................
i liked each & every single word of ur
OS.......
There are a lots of convo b/w TaSha, in which u did a fabulas job dear👏👏👏......................

"Tu toh mujhe chod ke nahi jaayegi na? Mere andar ka toofan mein sirf tere ko dikhaa saktaa hoon Naku. Tu mere se rooth jaayegi toh mein bilkool toot jaaongaa!".

I am feeling lyk crying when Dutta said this to nakku😭...........................

and when nakku said "Humaare pyaar mein Hadein kahaan se aa gayi? Aur agar aapke liye mujhe hadeein paar karni padegi, toh mein woh bhi karegi!"
and later she said ki agar aapki khushi ke liye mujhe aapke khilaf bhi jana pade to main jayegi
these dialouges were very heart touching...........................

There a lots of more such dialouges which actually very heart touching.........

Very good work DD...................................

A lots of appriciation to u........................

plz plz plz update soon dear............................

thanks Khushi...somehow, I always find dialogues the USP of a show and hence, i freak on tht.....I am glad u loved it...

watch out for more parts! 😆

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: prettywoman

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta
What's this?Ab yeh Jhumri kaun hai?😲🤢 Woh teen kya kam the ke ab yeh bhi aa gayi?Jhumri? I hope the CVs don't lift this idea now.I can't bear it.😭

But very well written.Superb!👍🏼 Eagerly awaiting the next installment.Jaldi jaldi bhanda phod kijiye na,DD, Kaala & Co ka!

I dread the day when he really comes to know of his family.Obviously Nakku will be the one to bring it all out.Poor Nakku.Kuch aisa hi haal hoga uska.😔

Zuby, thats why I said in my intro, that my previous OS was what I wanted to see in LTL but from this OS, I want only bits and pieces picked....this Jhumri this is a complete NO-NO!!!

I will defn make him see things Zuby but thodaa hatke....promise!!

wait for next part! 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: blackberry7100g
Good job DD 👍🏼...Tasha confrontation....mazaa aa gaya dialogues padke...nakku ke jawaab ekdum jhakaas....

"Aur ek galat ko doosre galat se theek nahi kiyaa jaata!" ;;

""Vishwaas, lekin andhaa vishwaas nahi. Na mera Vishwaas andha hai, na meraa pyaar, aur yehi pyaar, aapko chodke nahi jaayegaa!";

"Aap apni Naku se kaise door jaaoge...?"; Powerful lines ! 👏

When u introduced jhumri, i had a feeling that she was brought by kala to create a rift between tasha as she will seduce dutta or something like that .... its a common filmi cliche 😉 and you followed same !!
I loved it when nakku goes to baaji and asks for his help...definitely a good and sound move by her !👍🏼
And finally, " "Daaroo peelaa ke? Jhumri, jab tere ko sachchi pyaar hoga na, tab tu khud jaan jaayegi, pyaar mein Daroo zyaada zaroori hai ya dawaa! ⭐️

That's it from me....looking forward to next part !! 😊

P.S. I love the way you use pictures to put across the point more clearly !! 👏

yeah BB.....Jhumri part is very cliche' but I had to introduce her and u wuld know why in the next part...there is one Kala's scene that I have written which would clear it up that why did she use the cliche' way of getting Jhumri here....i hope u catch tht dialogue, nahi toh I will tell u explicitly...😉

but the end would be very LTLish and hatke...tht I promise u.....u wuld know why Jhumri was imp when u hear Kala's dialogue....

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

read both updates jus nw n i hav 2 say u did an amazing job esp with the sad convo between tasha... hate kala n as...

poor dutta...n feel bad for naku bt m glad she didnt leave the house...

Thanks Yuvi...lets see what u say fir next part...u wuld hate me from next part onwards!! 😆

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