OS:'Waapis Aaogi Na' - Page 13

Originally posted by: vika1981

DD, such excitement! I am really loving naku's new determined stance to stay and fight for her husband and love:) Dutta has completely lost his bonkers.. but again he is guy with a heart of a gold. I am glad that DP is staying there naku will need all the help she can get otherwise the sisters and the mother will make life living hell.

amazing writing.. more soon

😆OMG Mithai...This is called real postmortem...tune toh mere answer sheet ke cheethde nikaal diye...ab phir se exam likhnaa padegaa!! 😆😆

Originally posted by: isatb

HEY DD nice part. vry emotional.. I hav faith in u. U'll make evrythng fine. Sab ka sach samne aajyega aur Tasha ek ho jayenge.. But the part was awesome.👍🏼

Originally posted by: spandana11

DD I was like this😭😭 while reading very emotional ,can not see Tasha in pain ,not able to write more after reading will be waiting for next part ,please jaldi next part update karo

Originally posted by: sunshiine21

Yeh jhumri ki to 😡😡😡😡😡 Woah awesome updateee but can't see dutta like dis😭😭😭😭 Can't he just listen 2 nakku and DP for once... uska kya chalega? damn that man is stubborn lol... anyway update sooon!!!

Originally posted by: khushi0318

Firstly DD I am extremely SORRY for reading ur post sooooo late........................
I am supposed to read it earlier but everytime I start reading ur post, always interupteded by smbody..............
after reading all three post I am compeletly speechless
all three parts are awesome.................
dialogues b/w taSha are
superubbbbbbb......... U write lyk a
professional writer.................
i liked each & every single word of ur
OS.......
There are a lots of convo b/w TaSha, in which u did a fabulas job dear👏👏👏......................

"Tu toh mujhe chod ke nahi jaayegi na? Mere andar ka toofan mein sirf tere ko dikhaa saktaa hoon Naku. Tu mere se rooth jaayegi toh mein bilkool toot jaaongaa!".

I am feeling lyk crying when Dutta said this to nakku😭...........................

and when nakku said "Humaare pyaar mein Hadein kahaan se aa gayi? Aur agar aapke liye mujhe hadeein paar karni padegi, toh mein woh bhi karegi!"
and later she said ki agar aapki khushi ke liye mujhe aapke khilaf bhi jana pade to main jayegi
these dialouges were very heart touching...........................

There a lots of more such dialouges which actually very heart touching.........

Very good work DD...................................

A lots of appriciation to u........................

plz plz plz update soon dear............................

Originally posted by: prettywoman

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta

What's this?Ab yeh Jhumri kaun hai?😲🤢 Woh teen kya kam the ke ab yeh bhi aa gayi?Jhumri? I hope the CVs don't lift this idea now.I can't bear it.😭

But very well written.Superb!👍🏼 Eagerly awaiting the next installment.Jaldi jaldi bhanda phod kijiye na,DD, Kaala & Co ka!

I dread the day when he really comes to know of his family.Obviously Nakku will be the one to bring it all out.Poor Nakku.Kuch aisa hi haal hoga uska.😔

Originally posted by: blackberry7100g

Good job DD 👍🏼...Tasha confrontation....mazaa aa gaya dialogues padke...nakku ke jawaab ekdum jhakaas....

"Aur ek galat ko doosre galat se theek nahi kiyaa jaata!" ;;

""Vishwaas, lekin andhaa vishwaas nahi. Na mera Vishwaas andha hai, na meraa pyaar, aur yehi pyaar, aapko chodke nahi jaayegaa!";

"Aap apni Naku se kaise door jaaoge...?"; Powerful lines ! 👏

When u introduced jhumri, i had a feeling that she was brought by kala to create a rift between tasha as she will seduce dutta or something like that .... its a common filmi cliche 😉 and you followed same !!
I loved it when nakku goes to baaji and asks for his help...definitely a good and sound move by her !👍🏼
And finally, " "Daaroo peelaa ke? Jhumri, jab tere ko sachchi pyaar hoga na, tab tu khud jaan jaayegi, pyaar mein Daroo zyaada zaroori hai ya dawaa! ⭐️

That's it from me....looking forward to next part !! 😊

P.S. I love the way you use pictures to put across the point more clearly !! 👏

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

read both updates jus nw n i hav 2 say u did an amazing job esp with the sad convo between tasha... hate kala n as...

poor dutta...n feel bad for naku bt m glad she didnt leave the house...