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Posted: 14 years ago
Good job DD 👍🏼...Tasha confrontation....mazaa aa gaya dialogues padke...nakku ke jawaab ekdum jhakaas....

"Aur ek galat ko doosre galat se theek nahi kiyaa jaata!" ;;

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"Vishwaas, lekin andhaa vishwaas nahi. Na mera Vishwaas andha hai, na meraa pyaar, aur yehi pyaar, aapko chodke nahi jaayegaa!";

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Aap apni Naku se kaise door jaaoge...?"; Powerful lines ! 👏

When u introduced jhumri, i had a feeling that she was brought by kala to create a rift between tasha as she will seduce dutta or something like that .... its a common filmi cliche 😉 and you followed same !!
I loved it when nakku goes to baaji and asks for his help...definitely a good and sound move by her !👍🏼
And finally, "
"Daaroo peelaa ke? Jhumri, jab tere ko sachchi pyaar hoga na, tab tu khud jaan jaayegi, pyaar mein Daroo zyaada zaroori hai ya dawaa! ⭐️

That's it from me....looking forward to next part !! 😊

P.S. I love the way you use pictures to put across the point more clearly !! 👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

read both updates jus nw n i hav 2 say u did an amazing job esp with the sad convo between tasha... hate kala n as...

poor dutta...n feel bad for naku bt m glad she didnt leave the house...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Excellent! Very, very well written.

Though I have a hard time sometimes with the dialogues😆 , they are very realistic. As soon as I started to read the first part you had me. Love the fluent way you write- oh, and the little extras (the pics)😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
I knw ...i m very late ..so maafii saab ..😆

Part 1 :

The start is just awesum ...
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Naku FR has been done with ..... & DP showing up after that ..
& i loved the convo between DP & Naku .... Naku being all sherni & protective of Dutta ..
OMG ...... TaSha 2gether ..😍.. hayee loved it .☺️☺️. ye epi mein kyun nahi hota ..😔..

Wow ..DP has tapes of AS & the trio ..😲... & he even shows it to Naku ..
Cant w8 to read hw Naku deals with it nw ...



P.S : Will read & comment on Part 2 in a while ...😳


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Part 2


OMG ..... DD ..\wat awesum dialogues ..👏
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I could very well imagine the whole thing happening ..
Baaji was as usual so funny ..... loved his lines ..😆
Dutta was so cute ..... he was blushing ..😍😍
& AS being teh same dramebaaz with her magar mach k aansoo ..😡
Way to go Naku ..... I luved it the way she said main nahi jayeegi ..ye mera ghar hai ...aap mere ho ..

Very well written DD ....👏⭐️⭐️


P.S : Will read & commnet on Part 3 pakka by 2mrw ..😳


Edited by Dew-drop - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE.....EAGERLY W8ING 4 NXT.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg DD
babes im soory for late commenting
but dear what have u done
u have just changed the whole story \
a total upside down craziness it was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
im loving it
first par 2
awesome scenes , glancing of Tasha <3 adorable
but with te entry of DP u make the track superb
and AS was amazing , she was like a real culprit
she doesnt utter a word in her defense
superb charcterization of her
and DUtta shouting
n naku really becoming sherni
cant tell u i become superrrrrrrrrr xcited reading os

and then part 3
omg Tasha interaction mindblasting
awesome dialogues , gr8 choice of pics
everything just sinply fantastic
and that jhumri
babes she need to get out
i hate her

really looking forward for next update
gr8 job DD


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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome DD.........Well I seriously feel if LTL people are out of ideas they must see your OS...........What a remarkable imagination by you.............Its not easy to write and narrate the story as beautifully as u hav done.......also I loved the pics u inserted that goes with the situation so much...........dialogues.......our next LTL dialogue writer......DD.........love you..........keep writing we need to have creativity all over😉
I love that u don't do bloopers like CVS😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amitasaily

I know that I am going to like it so

"Welldone" Even before I read it.

Now off to reading.

Thanks in advance amita!! 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: newbe

aww so sweet such a conversation u put between sasur and bahoo....i started to feel sorry for uncle DP almost😆
but actually i feel like maybe ...this will happen ..i mean i really think nakku will somehow make dp stay there ...and speacially if she will et to know his cancer status ....
real nice post DD..👏
take care🤗

Madzy, u culd be right...u know....in his last fes days, DP has to interact with Dutta a lot and for tht its imp tht they both are under one roof
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: isatb

Nice part DD. vry emotional. For once i thought that Nakku might leave but nahi, woh itni easily nahi jayegi Dutta ko chodke. Hope that Dutta realizes the truth and forgive DP and Nakku and punish AS and unki gang.😆

No...Nakku can never leave Dutta when he is in a mess....she wuld be with him like his shield...watch out for next part....😆

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