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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update soon waiting for it ,loved ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome shilpita! i hope ki dutta will sort this matter soon please keep him with nakku during her labour and make him return back to nakku and their child,i want some fatherly and husbandly moments btw tasha,please unite them soon and also give some candid moments btw tasha and continue their romance,awesome work keep it up.😊👏 update soon do not let us wait like we do for your imperfect perfection.waiting for your update on both your FF.
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She screams for her Saab were heart wrenching and appalling. It was a long arduous labor with Nakkusha howling her lungs out as her little body contorted in pain. Doctors were at loss, the babe progress was too slow and nakkusha was already exhausted. She had refused the epidural as well which might have made it a bit easy for her. She was chanting his name like a talisman.

Madhu sat beside a broken Aaisaheb with Waqis standing a little away looking lost in sea. AS looked up at the Operation theatre from where another ardent cry for her son was coming. AS-Madhu, Dutta ko bula,pori.Dekh kaise tarap rahi hai. Madhu bit her lip uncertainly- AS, Bhaiya ne remand accept karke bahut badi galti ki hai. Abhi to court se order leke unhe yahan lana bhi namunkin hai. Harsh unhe nahi aane dega.

AS sighed- Dutta ne jo jurm kiya hai uske baad to hum bhi uska chehra nahi dekhna chahte par nakku ka kya kasoor? Aur us bacchey ka kya dosh? Isliye muh nahi pher pa rahe! Madhu- AS viswaas kariye bhaiyya aisa nahi kar saktey..wo leelatai se bahut pyar kartey hai. AS- par Dutta ka gussa nahi jaanti tu…usne gussey mein nakku se shaadi kithi….phir ussi gussey mein…wo apne gussey mein andha ho jata hai….supriya ke bhaagne ke baad usne baaji ke sar par gun laga di thi jab usne usse roka tha….Wo shayad us din gun chala bhi deta. Madhu- par wo tab ki baat thi. Aaj bhaiya alag insaan hai..bhabhi ke liye aapne bacchey ke liye.AS- agar dutta mujhe ek baar kehta ki sach kya hai madhu to main maan leti par usne aisa nahi kiya. Par ab ye baat jaruri nahi..us tak khabar pahuchani jaruri hai.

Madhu nodded and signaled Waqis. Madhu- Waqis, bhaiyya ko jail mein khabar pahucha do. Waqis looked at her confused and nervous. Madhu frowned thoughtfully as he fumbled in dialing the number. She was surprised at the young man. She had always seen him calm and composed till now as if he knew what will happen next and now he was sweating and fidgeting. Madhu- kya hua waqis? Itna pareshaan kyun ho? Mujhe laga ki tumhare paas koi plan hoga..kuch to tumne socha hoga…tum bhaiyya ko laa saktey ho, hai na?Harsh ko har jagah, har raid pe bhaiyya nazar aatey hai..matlab tum kissi tarah unhe jail se bahar la saktey ho. Waqis shook his head- aapko lagta hai ye sab mera plan hai? Meri wajah se ho raha hai?Madhu ji, aaj tak jo ho raha hai sab bhaijaan ka socha samjha plan hai. Har cheez bhaijaan ne sochi huyi hai..aur isliye main itne bharosey se aur pure josh se agey bard raha tha. Kyunki bhaijaan ne sab socha huya hai har paitra har tareeka har chaal..par ye to….ye to unke plan mein bhi nahi tha…mujhe issi baat ki ghabrahat hai….ab main kya karu? He looked at her pleadingly like a lost child. Madhu licked her lips- tum unhe jail mein khabar pahucha do. Agar ab tak sab kuch unhone socha hai to agey bhi wahi sochenge.

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Dutta kicked the bars of the prison with anger. Baaji held him back to prevent him doing some harm to himself. Dutta- Baaji chod mujhe! Mujhe uske paas hona chahiye.. Baaji- nahi bhau…rukko sab chopat ho jayega..hume hosh se kaam lena chahiye..waha AS madhu,kalatai babi mausi sab hai vahini ke paas. Socho bhau!

Dutta- baaji wo mera intezaar kar rahi hogi..main…Baaji- to hum jayenge bhau…par..Bhau sambhal ke bhau..jara socho! Dutta looked at baaji's intent face and nodded. As baaji let go off him he viciously kicked at the bars and looked at the camera that was recording his every moment. He swore to himself that he will see his child's face before the dawn.

Harsh watched the rage in wafting in waves to him from the screen of the monitor. He could feel the volcano waiting to erupt in Dutta from the CCTV cameras. He knew that Dutta would try to evade the shackles and go to his wife and child. Nothing could stop him when he made up his mind, that's dutta patil, yours truly dutta bhau. And that's what Harsh wanted. The trap was in place already.

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He let the world know in no uncertain terms that he was mortified by the indignity of being pushed out of his safe heaven and being landed on earth before he was ready. His loud lusty wails wrecked havoc amongst the hospital staff very much like the havoc his father would have created for him.

It was obvious to all that the youngest patil had inherited his father's strong pair of lungs and his temper. Well, the midwife and nurse swore they also saw the princely airs of his father in the little patil's indignant face, right down to the hint of small dimple on the minuscule chin. Whatever the truth maybe it was clear to all that Dutta Sriram Patil's 3hrs old son was definitely a chip of the old block.

Aaisaheb was delighted by her new grandson. AS- dekh nakku, kaise humein dekh raha hai humara lalla? Dekh dekh. Bahut payara hai. haina babi? Babi beamed back- hau Aaisaheb..gaudd baal ahey maajha!

They looked at the resolute face of his mother. Nakkusha looked faraway at the open window of her room refusing to see her son's face. AS- nakku! beta, kab tak muh pher kar rahegi? Tera beta hai ye,dekhegi nahi isko? Doodh nahi pilayegi?

Nakkusha- saab aajaye phir dekhegi…unke saath…unke saath godh mein legi isse.

AS- kaisi pagalo jaisi baat kar rahi hai..arey dutta jail mein hai..wo kab ayega uska kya bharosa nakku…tab tak ye nanhi se jaan kya unhi saaza bhugatta rahega?

Nakusha closed her eyes and refused to answer. Aaisaheb looked worriedly at Babi and madhu. Madhu shook her head in defeat.

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In the remote dark areas of Mumbai which were deeper and more sinister than the bowels of hell a man was caught in tussle with two hefty rogues. By sheer strength they clubbed the drunken man and loaded him in a car. A rough gunny bag was shoved on his face and his hands and feet were bound tight to cut off blood flow.

They stopped in front of a sea-side warehouse and dragged him out of the car. His face was made free of the bag and a jug of water was thrown mercilessly on his face to bring him to senses. As he opened his eyes the world started to waver like a sinking ship in front of his vision. He groaned at the headache.

"Welcome Inpector Morey." A voice called out jovially. Morey peered in the darkness fighting the headache to make out the man in the shadow. Morey- Kaun hai be? Samney aa,saale? He got punched for his trouble sending stars shooting before his eyes.

Chinna and yogi walked into the light. Chinna-inspector saab! Relax karne ka! Hum friend hai..aapka friend. Wo kya hai na..enemy ka enemy friend hone kaa…aapka enemy humara enemy..so we are friends!

Morey squinted- kaun enemy? Chinna smirked- Dutta sriram patil! Aapka fiancee se wo shaadi banaya naa?

Humara bhi loss kiya. Morey- aagar main tumhara dost hoon to mujhe aise kyun leke aaye?

Yogi sat on the edge of the table and smiled-kyunki agar aap khud aane se manna kar dete to wo risk humko nahi parwarta na?

Morey- kya chahiye aapko mujhse? Chinna- madat bas thoda sa help. Aapko malloom aaj subha subha…dutta papa bann gaya. Uska promotion ho gaya…Nahi malloom?

Morey was stunned to stillness then bitter hatred contorted his features. Yogi didn't miss the change, he smiled- Dutta bahut ziddi hai. jo cheez aapni samajh ke rakh leta bas rakh leta hai..wapas hi nahi karta..meri bhi ek cheez uske paas hai…7saal mein wapas nahi ki. Par aab usse wo sab cheen lene ka waqt aagaya hai..mujhe meri cheez mill jayegi aapko aapki nakkusha ji.

Morey- mujhe kya karna hoga? chinna- kuch jayada nahi..kissi tarah se Dutta ke son ko humare paas leke aane ka hai. bas!

Morey laughed- halwa hai kya? Tum bologey le aao bacchey ko aur wo mill jayega. Wo dutta patil ka beta hai..ab tak uskey charo aur pradhan mantra se jayada security lag gayi hogi.

Chinna- aur tumahra connection us security ke andar tak bina danger jaa sakta hai,kyun? Chala friendship undi?(Bahut yaarana hai?) uss ghar ke members se?

Morey- main kaiko? Tum log itne powerful ho..khud le aao bacchey ko! Hijaro ki fauj hai kya ye?

Chinna- gadava! Yogi stayed chinna with a calming hand- hum aapne jung aapni chnni huyi ranbhumi mein kartey hai. Is waqt dutta ko khulla challenge nahi dena chahtey….bas…ishara dena chahtey hai ki hum kya kar saktey hai. Chinna smiled nastily- just insure karna hai ki hum majak nahi kar rahey. Tum aapey friend ko use karke baccha chupchap hum tak pahucha do…that's all!

Morey- beadle mein mujhe kya millega? Chinna- nakkusha! Morey smiled- brand new bacchey ke liye second hand maa? Huh! Main alibag se aaya dikhta hoon kya? Chinna- dutta se badla! Morey- main aapna life wahan dav pe laga raha hai..badla ka kya acchar daalega main uppar jake? 50 lakh rupaye..cash?

Yogi smiled- main tujhe batata hoon tere ko kya millega? Yogi calmly took out his revolver and shot the chair morey was sitting right on the edge of the seat between his legs juncture. Morey wailed like a girl at the sudden assault. Yogi- ab bol! Sasta lag raha hai na sauda…faiyede ka? Morey nodded vehemently- ho jayega ..hojayega….mujhe chodd do!

Chinna and got into their car after giving their men instruction about letting morey go but keeping an eye on him. Chinna looked at the shaking disgrace of man and spited on the ground disgusted. Yogi- morey aapna kaam kar dega par ussey pahele…humko humara kaam karna hai. Chinna wo news police commissioner ko pahucha do….usko bhi dutta ka sauda sasta lagna chahiye…

Chinna nodded- tension nakku! aapke plan ke hisaab se maine wo tourists ka group kidnap kar liya hai..note bhi bhej diya hai home minister aur commissioner ko….iska international issue bannane se rokhne ke liye wo log quietly dutta ka bargain kar lengey. Silently sab ho jayega. Yogi nodded and closed his eyes to savior the feeling of controlling Dutta sriram Patil again after 7 yrs.

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Nakkusha had fallen into an exhausted sleep tired from childbirth and her weeping for her saab. The small sound woke her up. She wondered at the tiny whimper she had heard. She pulled herself up and turned towards her child's bassinet. In the darkness of the night it looked disturbingly quiet. Unnaturally quiet. Her heart froze like winter's ice. She reached for the bedside lamp and saw the evidence with her eyes. The baby…Her Baby…Was Gone!

"To tu shart jeet gayi! Mujhe hamesha galat sabit karke tujhe bahut aacha lagta hai?"

She turned towards the voice. He stood in the shadows with a small bundle of cloth snuggled in his arms. A small starfish shaped hand reached up to his chin but failed and punched the air instead. She pushed back the hair off her eyes and swiped at the silly tears.

He looked down at the little hand and balancing the precious bundle on a palm pushed the hand back under the cozy warmth of the blanket. He walked with slow steps towards her, his eyes not leaving the little face. She swallowed the lump in her throat,"Aapne wada kiya tha…aapne kaha tha, saab!"

Dutta reached up to her bed and looked at her tired tear-streaked face, his heart clenched in a fist. Why did he always made her struggle, leave her to fight her battles? Why couldn't he be the perfect knight in shining armor for her? She had fought to bring this precious life into the world alone today and he had been helpless to be with her. Dutta swallowed- nakku, main…mujhe maaf kar…

Nakkusha- nahi saab! Aaj nahi. Aaj koi gilley shikwe nahi. Aaj na aap sirf aap hain..na main sirf main..aaj koi autr hai jo humein ek dusre se jodey hai.

She reached out her hands to take her baby in her arms for the first time. Dutta handed over the sweet bundle carefully and sat down beside her. She pushed away the blanket from his face to gaze into his blue baby eyes which were round with wonder. A tear fell unbidden on her cheeks and were wiped by rough calloused hand of her saab. Nakku- mera beta….she looked up at dutta nad bit her lips, eyes sparking with joyous tears. "saab! Humara beta. Mere chottey saab!" Dutta chuckled and kissed her eyes,"mujhe meri gudiya nahi de naa tune? Par koi baat nahi..aagli baar sahi." Nakkusha frowned at him while preparing to feed her baby,"aagli baar? Kaunsa aagli baar?" Dutta smirked at her while holding the little hand and placing a kiss on it,"hmm..aagli baar jab main..aur tu…aur..wo yaad hai…hmm..mera office ka table…aur wo gaadi mein angrezi film wala…aur.." Nakkusha shushed him angrily,"Shh…!Chee saab! Bacchey ke samne to sharam kijiye..wo sunn lega." Dutta quirked his eyebrow at her and looked at his infant son having his late night snack. His downy head was snuggled on his mother's arm and his lips were working real fast to take his fill. His eyes were closed in concentration as if working out a math puzzle. Dutta saw that his small pudgy hand was wrapped around his long callused finger. He felt the strength of that fragile hold in his heart and felt wetness on in his eyes. He leaned down and kissed the downy head of his son on his wispy hair. "Mera beta!"

Nakkusha smiled,"Mera bhi!"

Dutta looked up at her and moved at the same time as she leaned towards him meeting him half way for the kiss. He kissed her like a drowning man holding their baby protectively. He kissed her eyelids and her cheeks and went back to her lips. An angry wail broke them apart. They both looked down together to see little prince indignant at being crushed between his parents. Dutta straightened as nakku directed the baby back to his snack. Dutta put his arms around her holding the baby with her. He felt like his whole world was right there in his arms, safe.

A dark voice of a pained woman coursed in his mind. He could see the old woman in black mourning her son's death at his hands cursing him on his wedding day.

"Tere ghar kabhi baccho ki awaaz nahi gunjegi…tere aangan mein kabhi palana nahi sazega..dutta sriram patil..ye ek maa ka abhishaap hai..Tu aulaad ko tarsega duttabhau…tu tarsega!"

"SAAB!" He turned to nakkusha and found her looking at him worriedly. Nakkusha-kya hua saab? Kya soch rahe hai? Dutta shook his head- kuch..kuch nahi nakku! bas kuch yaad aagaya. He looked at the creases between her eyes and kissed her forehead. Dutta lokked at his son who was now fast asleep in the safe warmth of his mother's arm. Dutta smiled, his son..his future…his dream.

Dutta caressed his son- iska koi naam socha hai tune? Nakkusha bit her lip- aa, ganesh? Dutta frowned at her- pagal hai kya..ganpath kum hai jo mere bte ka naam ganesh rakh rahi hai. bilkul nahi. Nakkusha- to shivaji?

Dutta glared at her- mere ghar mein pahele se do-do ji hai…tera wo deer foot ka bhai sethji aur mera bewakoof bhai baaji..aur koi ji nahi cahiye. Kuch aur soch. Nakkusha- Deepak? Dutta- nahi. Nakkusha- chaitanya? Dutta growled-nahi! She gnashed her teeth- krishana? Dutta- nai! Nakkusha- off hoo….to aap hi bolo kya naam rakhna hai? Dutta- main kyun bolo tu bol….maine to sirf ladkyon ke naam sochey the. Nakkusha made a face- maine jo naam sochey the aapko passand nahi. Main kya karoon?

The baby made a sound of protest and they both turned to soothe him together. Dutta whispered- iski aankhen dekhi teri jaisi hai. Nakkusha- naak aapki hai…iske bade hoti his yun lambi aur unchi ho jayengi. Aur iska pahad jaisa gussa hamesha iske baba ki tarah naak pe baitha hoga. Dutta smiled- accha mera gussa naak pe baita hota hai. Nakkusha turned her face to him and kissed the nose in question- hamesha! Dutta smiled and kissed her lips.

They sat there in silence for a few minutes. Dutta whispered- maine iska naam soch liya hai. Nakkusha looked up at him-kya? Dutta- ye sirf humara beta nahi hai naaku..ye is baat ki nishaani hai ki mujh jaise insaan ko bhi khushi mill sakti hai. bhagwan ka wardan mill sakta hai. ye humare har us tootey sapne ki nishaani hai jisse humne dekhna band kar diya tha.. ye Misaal hai nakku...Misaal hai is baat ka ki tera viswaas aur pyar kitna majboot hai. humare pyar ka Misaal hai ye…humara Misaal!

Nakkusha smiled and looked at her baby and called out softly- Misaal!

Misaal just moved a little accepting his identity and snuggled back to his baby dreams.

Dutta and nakkusha smiled at their sons simple priorities in life. If only the life of his elders could be that simple.

"Happy reunion Dutta patil! Jail wapas chale?" Harsh stood at the doorway pointing his gun at him."I knew that it was you. Har raid par mujhe tu hi dikhta tha….wo mera waham nahi tha…ab tu jail jake mujhe batayega ki kiss dalaal ko paise deke khareeda hai tune police station mein."

Harsh took a step towards a stunned Dutta and nakkusha when a he was clubbed from behind. Harsh fell in a heap on the floor as baaji nudged him with the broom stick in his hand. Nakkusha hushed loudly- Baaji, ye kya kiya? Harsha ko maara? Dutta glared at her- wo tere pati ko pakad leta wo theek hota…ya ye theek hai? baat karti hai? He grinned at baaji and showed him thumbs up. Baaji whistled into the room with the broom dusting the floor rakishly swiping the broom on unconscious harsh's face and walked towards the family on the bed.

Baaji looked down at the baby and whistled- bhau ye to bilkul hero hai..aapke jaisa..aye junior dekh tera chachu ayela hai..main tereko na aise khakhi chuho ko dhona sikhayega..bole to mast ek dum..hailuuu….chota bhau…he he he…bhau ye to bikul bole to mast hai. Dutta grinned- hai na! Baaji suddenly looked at dutta with tears in his eyes- bhau tu baba bann gaya re! sach much mein…aur main..main chacha…He hugged dutta awkwardly. Dutta tapped his shoulders. Baaji released dutta nad looked at the prone body of harsh- bhau! Abhi apan ko chalne ka hai. ye hosh mein aata hoga. Chal! Dutta nodded- aur baaki ke policewaale! Sabko aapne bodyguards ne thekane laga diya hai..chloroform aaram se millta hai bhau hospital mein…wahi istmal mein laya hai. Ghabra mat main abhi kale aur waqis se baat karke aaya hoon..Ishpecial order bhi diya hoon chutkey ka aur vahini ka sequrity ka…abhi ye chinna aur yogi jaise kamino ka kya bharoosa bole to? Hai na!

Dutta nodded. He looked at nakkusha who nodded telling him with her eyes that she will be fine and waiting for him to come back to them. Dutta kissed her lips and kissed his sleeping son and vanished into the night with his brother. Nakkusha looked at the opened window where he had waved back at her and looked at her son. She called out to him- mere saab ka Misaal. Mera beta Misaal.

Misaal smiled in his dreams.

………….To be continued

Precap- Morey strikes again….The meeting..the deal…and the traitor!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally an update!
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that was a wonderful update shilpi..
so emotional >>khushi ke aansun...
i stil feely rely sory 4 bechari naku...she rely wantd D 2 b wit her durin labour...dutta misd witnessin 1 of d biggest khushi in his life...it rely is a unique exp (i tink...wel it must be na...not dat ive been der lol)😆😆
woohooo so its nakus wish cum true...oh wel dutta ladki nxt time hi sahi...
i love love dat name..1st i actualy thought u wrote mishal!! but misaal wil stil do😆😆
have 2 say its very clever the way u hav..wel dutta interpretd d reson behnd this nme
loved hw they wer having lil reunion..bechare nani si jaan ko beech mein squash kar diya LOL
hmm dutta thinkin of anoda titantic wala scne ey hehe
haha nakus reaction was awsum..she cudn find a beter excuse insted of sayin baji ya AS ajayenge .. this time its misaal bein d KMH
awh baji toh chacha ban gaya...*dinchak dinchak*
haha i knew harsh wud b der some wer perving at our tashaal (tasha+misaAL) ... i can jus imagin him lukin at dis lil hapy family n goin green in jealousy!! *missy nazar utaring of tashaal*😳😳😳
ewww morey bak..ddn wantd 2 mention at strt n spoil my mood lol
i hope woh hamare junior saab ko kuch na kare...baji ur security beter be gud!! WARNAA...!!!!!!!!!!!
who is d traitor?!?!! omg pls dont let waqis b a baddie...
thnx u pm bbe
pls pls plsss continue soon..n pls update ur oda ff aswel..missin it loadz...😭 😳😳
btw...hwz ur lil nephew doin??? loved his name..its rely sweet..evn tho i fote u wer lookin 4 names startin wit D's n somethng els...
ps.sory 4 d essay lol😳😆



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Posted: 14 years ago
hiya just came across this read the first few lines could not stop,brought a multitude of emotions nostalgia.peircing pain,love, but most of all tears ..loads so had a good cry ,feel much better now!! what a fantastic piece of writing,it was like picking up a book , closing your eyes ,reopening the book and reading the first bit you see... to me every bit made sense,it just connected ,the words made me see pictures of what I wanted to see,but could not,and cannot ever... but still you made me see it ...now just before going to bed. Love your imagination so very much,for it brings delight to so many many broken hearts my shilpi... xxx much love hamlet
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's great...
so tasha's son name is misaal...lovely...
tasha scenes r chooo cute n lovely...
poor harsh😆...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi shilpitha,

Awesome and dreamy update . 😍

Poor naku she had to deliver her baby with out her saab near by . 😔

She delivered a baby boy . So sweet but dutta always was expecting a girl . So naku won and dutta lose here also .😉

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Naku not agreeing to see her baby's face and even she not agreeing to feed him she wants to see him only with her saab .
I was like completly teary eyed while thinking about nakusha's state and her love on saab .Its sooo pure and unconditional . I think there were no suitable words for her love on him and also for his love on her . ❤️❤️
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His anger , pain, restlessness , frustration in jail is so realistic . Poor Dutta he wants to be with his wife at delivery time but there is nothing in his hands . He feels ashamed of himself for not being with her at this state .Love Dutta . 🤗

Finally he came to meet his wife and his child . Very sweet reunion . 😍😍
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Really i imagined al the scenes in the hospital of tasha with their child . It was sooo emotional and heart touching .

"To tu shart jeet gayi! Mujhe hamesha galat sabit karke tujhe bahut aacha lagta hai?" I love dutta telling this to her wife 😊 .

" Why did he always made her struggle, leave her to fight her battles? Why couldn't he be the perfect knight in shining armor for her? She had fought to bring this precious life into the world alone today and he had been helpless to be with her" these lines toatally explains his inner struggle perfectly and also his immense love towards her and his helplessness for not being with her in difficulties .👏

"saab! Humara beta. Mere chottey saab!" i loved loved this naku saying to him. 😍
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"mujhe meri gudiya nahi de naa tune? Par koi baat nahi..aagli baar sahi." Dutta saying to naku so sweet.😳

I enjoyed tasha conversation each and every line. It was so lovely .

Dutta remembering that old woman's curse of course surely he will remember that incident had such an effect on him mentally.😔

And their argument on naming their son so cute . The name misaal oh my god very nice wonderful name aur tasha pyar ka misaal . Lovely name . 👏

Baazi interaction is so cute .

Really on the whole its a dreamy update making tasha's and my dreams come true. 🤗

Waiting for the next update .
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Posted: 14 years ago

V beautiful update shilpi and love it!!😳

Thank u sooo much n wow I loved how u explained the meaning of the name Misaal!!😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
great lovely fab update dear

love it
so morey is back

tasha scene love that .So he is there for her and his son misaal love the name 😳
baaji love him 👏
awesome convo between tasha,love each and every bit of convo.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Shilpi🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful updates and Pms🤗Iam very sorry for been so late to read and comment 😳...i also hv to catch with ur other FF ...will do that soon as well...😉...
Really Loved all the updates yaar ..very beautifully written...i have no words to thank u enough...it touches ones heart directly😳...Awww the last update was truly very superb...Loved the name and meaning of it❤️...Loved it to core yaara...keep it up...waiting for the nxt part eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna...u take care and see ya around
Love and hugs
suhana🤗❤️

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