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Hi IF vasio,
My salam namaste to all. i have followed this forum for long but have just joined it as member. I have read all ur FF ... must say they were absolutely fantastic 👏...they don't drag ,they are fun and best of all they follow a track that we want them to follow..
After reading the FFs like Yeh bheege pal,Raat ka nasha i was highly inpired to create my own ff though i am new to the club..😳 i hope u guyz don't mind.. and welcome the effort...
This is what i actually would like the CV to show in the Show in near future.. but if they don't i could atleast aboutt it.. So i am posting this unnamed ff of mine... i'll continue only if i get encouraging comments..
Index
prologue-pg1,
Its after Dutta comes to know abt his father..He hates his dad and himself kyuki uski raago me ek darinde ka khoon hai...he feels he deserves everything that has happened to him...He has had a huge confrontation with SP(tinnu anand) and has warned him to stay away from his family and him..'Ab aapki meri zindagi me koi jaga nahi..mera naam Dutta Shri Ram Patil hai. Meri parivar ki parchai se bhi dur rahiye warna ye Dutta bhool jayega ki aap mere pitah ke bhai hai. Main sirf meri AS ka beta hoon...Chale jayiye yaha se.. chale jayiye..'
SP- Teek hai bete..main janta hu tu mujhe bhi maaf nahi kar pa raha..Par tere na maan ne se sach nahi badliga tu mere beta hai..mere 1louta waris..tujhe mere pass aana hi hoga..jinhe tu apna samjhta hai wo tere nahi hai..unka sach tujhe mere pass le ayega..
SP walks out of PN while all PN waasis are watching wid different expressions on their faces..SP stops on his way out near Nakku...
Nakku in tears..
She looks up at SP..
SP- beti tune mere bete ki har musibat me sath diya hai..aagey uske liye bahut bada chunoti hai..tu uski zindagi me 1laoti khushi ki kiran hai..usey samjha..uska sath dete rahe..bhagwan tujhe hamesha khush rakhe..ye ek baap ka uski bahu ko diya ashirwad hai..
He is abt to place his hands on nakku's head for blessing..But...😡
Dutta- Ruk jayiye..apne gande manhoos hath meri patni ko mat lagayiye..(walks towards nakku and stands infront of her facing his dad) Agar aapki parchai bhi meri Nakku ko cho le to wo apavitra ho jayegi..aapke samne khade hona bhi uski masomiyath aur sachai ko chot pahuchate hai..Aap jaise darindo se hi usse hamesha door rakhne ki kasam khaye hai maine..baaji inhe bahar nikal.
DSP and SP share a arrogant macho father son loggerhead look..eye to eye😲 and SP walks out giving a last mellow look at TaSha standing togethr with nakku clutching dutta's arms tight.😳
After SP leaves and its late night all pn ppl went to bed...
(Dutta music in the bckgrnd...the'dinta dinta one'..😆 don know how to describe tht one)
We see dutta sitting at his bar and imbibing a lot of alcohol(don't judge me guyz..but i think dutta looks super hot drunk😉 remember the 12th may TaSha wedding epi were he comes to stop nakku with bottle in his hand ..i just went 😳😍☺️)
Anyway the confrontation wid SP..The AS telling him the truth and Kala accusing him for her and her sisters fatherless state all is haunting him..(Kala had come to tell him the truth and accuse him..just to make him feel sorrier.😡)--(360 deg camera scene with all the flashbacks and dutta drinking)
Nakku is looking at his pain silently from a corner but can't gather the gumption to go upto him and say anything..she remembers the scene with her aai for the 30thsept epi...and is terrified of losing dutta to such hatred again..
THats it for now...
if you guyz like it plz comment..Only then i'll continue..
For next installment i have thought of some explosive scenes between TaSha.
Very hot,steamy and ahem ahem..😉😳😆
My salam namaste to all. i have followed this forum for long but have just joined it as member. I have read all ur FF ... must say they were absolutely fantastic 👏...they don't drag ,they are fun and best of all they follow a track that we want them to follow..
After reading the FFs like Yeh bheege pal,Raat ka nasha i was highly inpired to create my own ff though i am new to the club..😳 i hope u guyz don't mind.. and welcome the effort...
This is what i actually would like the CV to show in the Show in near future.. but if they don't i could atleast aboutt it.. So i am posting this unnamed ff of mine... i'll continue only if i get encouraging comments..
Index
prologue-pg1,
ch1-pg2, ch2-pg4, ch3-pg5, ch4-pg7, ch5-pg9,
ch6-pg12, Ch7-pg14, Ch8-pg16, Ch9-Pg16, Ch10-Pg17,
Ch11-pg17, CH 12-pg 20, Ch13-pg22, ch14-pg23, ch15-pg25,
ch16-pg27, ch17-pg29, ch18-pg33, ch19-pg36, ch20-pg39,
Ch21-pg42, Ch22-pg46,Ch 23- pg 49,Ch 24- pg 51,Ch25-pg51,
Ch26-pg54,Ch27-pg56,Ch28-pg58,Ch29-pg61,Ch30-pg63,
Ch31-pg66,Ch32-pg69,Ch33-pg72,Ch34-pg74,Ch35-pg76,
Ch36-pg78,Ch37-pg80,ch38-pg84,ch39-pg87,ch40-pg89,ch41-pg92
Ch42-pg96,Ch43-pg99,Ch44-pg102,Ch45-pg105,Ch46-107,Ch47-Pg109
Ch48-Pg111,Ch49-114,Ch50-Pg116,Ch51-pg118,Ch52-pg121,Ch53-pg124
Ch54-pg126,Ch55-pg128,Ch56-pg130,Ch57-132,ch58-Pg135,Ch59-pg138,
Ch31-pg66,Ch32-pg69,Ch33-pg72,Ch34-pg74,Ch35-pg76,
Ch36-pg78,Ch37-pg80,ch38-pg84,ch39-pg87,ch40-pg89,ch41-pg92
Ch42-pg96,Ch43-pg99,Ch44-pg102,Ch45-pg105,Ch46-107,Ch47-Pg109
Ch48-Pg111,Ch49-114,Ch50-Pg116,Ch51-pg118,Ch52-pg121,Ch53-pg124
Ch54-pg126,Ch55-pg128,Ch56-pg130,Ch57-132,ch58-Pg135,Ch59-pg138,
Ch60-Pg140,Ch61-Pg143,Ch62-Pg145,Ch63-pg146, Epilogue- Pg 146
Prologue
Its after Dutta comes to know abt his father..He hates his dad and himself kyuki uski raago me ek darinde ka khoon hai...he feels he deserves everything that has happened to him...He has had a huge confrontation with SP(tinnu anand) and has warned him to stay away from his family and him..'Ab aapki meri zindagi me koi jaga nahi..mera naam Dutta Shri Ram Patil hai. Meri parivar ki parchai se bhi dur rahiye warna ye Dutta bhool jayega ki aap mere pitah ke bhai hai. Main sirf meri AS ka beta hoon...Chale jayiye yaha se.. chale jayiye..'
SP- Teek hai bete..main janta hu tu mujhe bhi maaf nahi kar pa raha..Par tere na maan ne se sach nahi badliga tu mere beta hai..mere 1louta waris..tujhe mere pass aana hi hoga..jinhe tu apna samjhta hai wo tere nahi hai..unka sach tujhe mere pass le ayega..
SP walks out of PN while all PN waasis are watching wid different expressions on their faces..SP stops on his way out near Nakku...
Nakku in tears..
She looks up at SP..
SP- beti tune mere bete ki har musibat me sath diya hai..aagey uske liye bahut bada chunoti hai..tu uski zindagi me 1laoti khushi ki kiran hai..usey samjha..uska sath dete rahe..bhagwan tujhe hamesha khush rakhe..ye ek baap ka uski bahu ko diya ashirwad hai..
He is abt to place his hands on nakku's head for blessing..But...😡
Dutta- Ruk jayiye..apne gande manhoos hath meri patni ko mat lagayiye..(walks towards nakku and stands infront of her facing his dad) Agar aapki parchai bhi meri Nakku ko cho le to wo apavitra ho jayegi..aapke samne khade hona bhi uski masomiyath aur sachai ko chot pahuchate hai..Aap jaise darindo se hi usse hamesha door rakhne ki kasam khaye hai maine..baaji inhe bahar nikal.
DSP and SP share a arrogant macho father son loggerhead look..eye to eye😲 and SP walks out giving a last mellow look at TaSha standing togethr with nakku clutching dutta's arms tight.😳
After SP leaves and its late night all pn ppl went to bed...
(Dutta music in the bckgrnd...the'dinta dinta one'..😆 don know how to describe tht one)
We see dutta sitting at his bar and imbibing a lot of alcohol(don't judge me guyz..but i think dutta looks super hot drunk😉 remember the 12th may TaSha wedding epi were he comes to stop nakku with bottle in his hand ..i just went 😳😍☺️)
Anyway the confrontation wid SP..The AS telling him the truth and Kala accusing him for her and her sisters fatherless state all is haunting him..(Kala had come to tell him the truth and accuse him..just to make him feel sorrier.😡)--(360 deg camera scene with all the flashbacks and dutta drinking)
Nakku is looking at his pain silently from a corner but can't gather the gumption to go upto him and say anything..she remembers the scene with her aai for the 30thsept epi...and is terrified of losing dutta to such hatred again..
THats it for now...
if you guyz like it plz comment..Only then i'll continue..
For next installment i have thought of some explosive scenes between TaSha.
Very hot,steamy and ahem ahem..😉😳😆
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