New FF..Lagi tujhse lagan..NOTE....Pg106.......... - Page 80

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

Its evening'''''.Dutta is in his office room when baaji comes in hurriedly and dutta can see baji was in some problem!............πŸ˜›

Yeda...hamesha koi na koi problem hi hoti hai isey.....πŸ˜†

Baaji says----Bhau who'.woh srivastav toh'purani rectory ke peechey jo railway phatak hai usskey paas maraa hua milaa!......Woh bhi ek dum buri halat mein!.............😲

OMG.......😲

Dutta gets up and says -----Yeh kaisey ho saktaa hai baaji?!...............humaarey dushman tak humsey pehley kaun pahonch saktaa hai?!..............Dekh baji!..............kal visarjan hai aur wahaan poora parivaar hogaa'''..tu jaa aur sab intezaam dekh'.main nahiin chahtaa kii koi bhi anhonii ho!............

Ghabra mat Dutta....hum tumhe kuch nahi hone denge.....😳

Baaji nods his head and walks out'''''..................

Jaa...naalaayak.....πŸ˜†

The next morning''''..Dutta is in his room'''.he is dressed in a green kurta and pyjama and he walks out of the room''''busy on the phone''''............😳

Oye hoye....green kurta and pyjama......😳

All of a sudden he finds himself face to face with nakku who had come there with a tray of tea for him'''.

Thank God takkar nahi mara Nakku ne...bechare ka dress kharab ho jata....πŸ˜†

Dutta stops midway to avoid a collision''''and u see the two stand face to face''''.

Yeah we see.....πŸ˜†....face to face haan....πŸ˜‰

Dutta glares hard at nakku and talks on the phone'''................πŸ˜›

😳

And embarrassed nakku lowers her eyes''''..............😳

Lo yeh sharmagayi.....πŸ˜‰

Dutta moves forward and nakku too'''..lekin on same side isliye stopping dutta's way again!.............

Dutta steps aside to other side and unintentionally nakku too moves to same side again!................πŸ˜‰

Dutta who had had enough of this khel''''..and he says to the caller----Tu ek second ruk main tere se baat kartaa hai'''................πŸ˜†

Khel khel raha hai aur usey maza bhi nahi aaraha hai....gadha kahin ka...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Outting a hand on his phone he says to nakku raiusing an eyebrow-----Kya?!................yeh kya kar rahii hai nakku?!..............Ek taraf khadi ho jaa'''...........πŸ˜†

Oye waise baat karte hain apni patni se.....😑

Dutta looks on as nakku steps aside and dutta walks past her preoccupied and worried for the day!..........

Nakku too realizes something was wrong with dutta''''''.................😳

Haan...tere bhashan ki zarurat hai bechare ko.....πŸ˜†

After the aarti the whole patil family leave for the visarjan'''..and there in an old factory u see someone saying-----Sab taiyaari ho gayi hai ''''.

The caller answers to the man who stands in the shadows----Haan'''.aaj Dutta ko KOI NAHIIN BACHAA SAKTAA HAI!............aap chintaa matt karo'Mainney srivastav kii tarah kachchi goliyaan nahiin kheli hain''''.Ajj meri banduk kii har goli par sirf aur sir fuss DUTTA BHAU KAA NAAM LIKHAA HAI!..................😑

Agar Dutta ko kuch bhi hua na...toh main tujhe chodungi nahi....😑😑

There AS had her own concern''''as she didn't want dutta to know the bitter truth of his life''''and dutta''he was worried for his family's safety!...........And nakku'''''when her saab is worried how could she be relaxed?!...........

AS toh hamesha ho worried rehti hain.....and yes jab sher pareshan ho toh sherni aaram se kaise rah sakti hai....πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

There in damodar's house u see him asking his men to take out the cars and after they leave he says to himself----Dutta aaj main khud''.Tujhey sab kuch bataaongaa beta!.............

Bata dijiya papaji....πŸ˜†

A voice says from behind----Baba main bhi aapke saath chaloongi!.............😲

Abb yeh kaun hai....papaji ko shock kar diya...πŸ˜•

A shocked damodar turns to find its his daughter madhu who stood in the doorway''''..with her bags''''.and as she walks upto him he says====Madhu tu?!..........tu toh agley haftey aaney waali thii na!..........

Madhu....yahan bhi....πŸ˜†

Madhu walks upto her father and says-----Baba''''phone par jab aapse baat kii toh lagaa'.kii app kuch pareshaan ho'''..Aur ABB YAHAAN AAKAR WAJAH BHI JAAN LII!..............Baba main bhi chaloongii aapke saath''''''..

Haan haan..aap bhi chaliye...Dutta toh mara jaa raha hai aapse milne ko...πŸ˜†

Damodar tries to reason out things with her but in vain and the two leave to the place where the visarjan was to happen''''''..................πŸ˜•

Aaj kal ke bacche...kisiki nahi sunte...aur yeh toh london ki chick hai...πŸ˜†

The two remain quiet all through the journey ''''.Madhu looks out of the window and thinks to herself-----Aaj tak aapkey baarey mein sirf sunaa tha bhau!...........Itney saalon se aapki kalaayi pe rakhi bandhney kii khwaish rahii hai meri'''..aaj aapko'..bas ek nazar dekhnaa chahti hoon''''Baba ne jo aapke saath kiya tha'''..usskey liye aap maaf karo..aisi ummed nahiin hai mujhey''''.πŸ˜•

Aisi ummed nahi rakha...accha kiya....πŸ˜‰

Madhu stares as darkness falls onto the sky''''.as the clouds cover the whole aakash''''.(see I used the word AAKASH!.............Mishu'a name in LS'''..)''''..😳

Aakash.....😳.yeah i saw..πŸ˜‰...lekin aakash mein andhera chaa gaya...

However madhu didn't know''''.fate was soon going to play a cruel game with her''''.and LIFE WOULD NEVER BE SAME FOR HER !................

Abb kya hone wala hai bechari ke saath....πŸ˜•

Precap----Damodar walking upto dutta'''..as he stands after coming out of the water doing the visarjan'''.Far off from a tree someone sets his target on Dutta '''..and as damodar steps closer to dutta'''..he sees a red dot on his kurta and realizes horrified''..Dutta was about TO BE SHOT!.................😲

Wat Dutta being shot.....papaji apne bete ki jaan bachao.......😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
πŸ‘wow nice update yaar now seriously i m eagerly waiting to watch what would happen next ??πŸ€” pls pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sheeba thanx for the update and PM πŸ€— awesome yaar very well written..omg precap looks scary I hope DP saves duttA pls jaldi update karna..take Care and see ya around πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part sheeba after soo long u r updating..update the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sheeba,

Girl where u been??? I loved this update especially the scene where naku bringing tea and them 2 playing musical chairs, but with their feet ha ha. I can't wait to see the this new twist introducing madhu.. looking forward to more hon:)

vika

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha_1

sheeba very nice and very well writtenπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› so DP is going to save datta............WAIT AND WATCH!πŸ˜› update soon i eagerly waitng for next update. i really like the way u bring madhu in ur ff.YAA I KNOW AND WISH THE CVs had shown something lke this!.................. i think if LTL followed it it won't look rushing up. but most of the viwer dosn't like the way they bring madhu in ltl. they think it so unnatural.Itwas sooooooooooooo unnatural aisey hii muh uthaa kar aa gayi!.....................😲

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonee

amazing part sheeba....in so much tension n worried..u add Tasha scene... so cute😳😳😳...lovely...hmmmm madhu's entry b4 DP's death intersting...ohhhh...so she is xcited to meet datta...hmmm hum bhi he😳ye precap ...i wonder u definitely show DP's death at d time of visarjan...Datta ko bachane ke chakkar me DP no more😭😭😭...pata nahin varna CV ki tarah twist la degiπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

nice update...shebba...lik itπŸ‘




Hey dear itna ro matt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............wait and watch and lets see if ur prediction is right?!...........................πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago



Thankx dear..................Hopeu enjoy coming track too...................😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shallymann

sheeba..... very nice update .....πŸ˜‰




Hey dear i really hope u keep on ejoying coming track too..........................😳
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Posted: 14 years ago




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