New FF..Lagi tujhse lagan..NOTE....Pg106..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone........last week I started a new FF Twilight.........Lekin I guess I won't be able to go on with it.........Sorry..........Lekin here's a new one.........which will start from esterday's first scene.........šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜
U will also see Dutta giving his life in nakku's hand..........HOPE U ALL LIKE IT..........Plzzz do send in ur valuable comments...........😳😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here's the first part..........😊

I will start from the scene wher on Wednesday Dutta had put the gun on nakku's forehead..........................

Dutta asks Nakku to come and stand next to him...........

He puts the gun on her forehead.............Nakku feels her heart sink..........

She remains silent as Dutta asks her---BOL NAKKU?............KYA SAZAA DOON ISS DHOKEYBAAZ KO?............

Nakku remains quiet and Dutta pushes the gun hard against her forehead............and says losing his temper----BOL?!............😔

Nakku closes her eyes and tears roll down her cheeks as she says matter of factly----MAIN KYA BOLEGII SAAHIB?............MAIN TOH KHUD DHOKEYBAAZ HAI..............(Aggar tum kisi ko ek hii baat baar baar bolo toh yeh hotaa hai..............poor Nakku............all thankx to Dutta saahib anyways.............)..............AUR EK DHOKEYBAAZ KO DOOSREY DHOKEBAAZ KO SAZAA DENEY KA KOI HAKK NAHIIN HAI!.............😭

Dutta glares at nakku taken aback a little by her reply as she goes on----AAPKO JO THEEK LAGEY...........WAHII KARO...........

Dutta stares at Nakku longingly...........

Just as Dutta turns away from nakku there r gunshots and u see the man who was hanging .....his ropes r broken and he falls to the ground..........and another bullet hits him and he dies...........

DUTTA LOOKED ON SHELL SHOCKED.............😲

Baaji was stunned too............😲

Nakku stood horrified..............

The next instant u see many men come out and start firing at Dutta and his men.............

Dutta comes in form and with baaji and rest of his men he fights on............HE QUICKLY REACHES UPTO NAKKU AND HOLDING HER HAND HE PUTS HER BEHIND HIM AND KEEPS ON FIRING AT THE GOONS............šŸ‘

There u see a ship come and someone on it..............(just like it happened in the show).............Its aanaa.............and he says his funny dialogue after saying the poetry about MACHLII JAL KII RAANI HAi!.............

There in the jungle u see Dutta is fighting with the men............throughout he stands in front of NAKKU LIKE A WALL.............(Jab zaroorat ho Dutta is by Naku's side..........what say?..........HAI KAASH SHOW MEIN AISAA KUCH HO JAAYE!..........(..............😳

Dutta was finding it a little hard to cope lekin DUTTA TOH DUTTA HAI HE FACES THE SUDDEN ATTACK WITH FULL POWER AND FORCE AS HE GOES ON KILLING THE GOONS ONE BY ONE ...SENT BY AANAA............😲

Dutta turns to Nakku and orders her----Jaa GAADI MEIN BAITH...........

Nakku was too stunned to even move...........SHE LOOKS INTO EMPTINESS...........the sounds of the gunshots seemed to have drained her energy.............

Dutta GLARES HARD AT HER WHEN SHE REMAINS MOTIONLESS AND HOLDING HER HAND HE TAKES HER TO THE CAR AND MAKES HER SIT INSIDE GOING ON FIRING .............šŸ˜‰šŸ„³

Kaisa laga?.........😊

Jaldii bataao……….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Terrific yaar! Wow............I cannot believe it, you are a genius!!! Please...........want to see more of them..... update other parts soonnn...!! Fabulous! (:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very interesting.I liked the part where datta stands in front of naku to protect her this shows even if he is angry and hurt becoz of her he still cares for her safety.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good one
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awsome work! please continue and as soon as you update please forward it to please. thanks. 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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too good yaar kash show main aisa hota par show main bhi accha hi ho raha hai ... šŸ˜† well i wud love to see dutta's reaction wen nakku accidentally shoots kala 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheeba tu kamal hai.....barah maza ata hai tere FF parne ka.....:D:D
upload soon
Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great part sheeba
loved it..hope u r planning to continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww..... me sadke jaawa...even wen hes angry hes protecting her...sooooo sweeet, i jus hope this happens in real life as well! šŸ˜

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