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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sonee

I know ur not here.........but b'fore u leaved......u gave us super treat sheeba dear...

what a nice update....... loved it.....DN r superbbbbbbbbb😍 ur awesome sweetyπŸ€— πŸ‘



Yaa treat achchi thi naa?!.......................Sahii kahaa they r EXTRATERRESTIAL!.....................πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zeekaytg

waow nice sheeba,nice update.

bt is bar bhi bahut short tha...........i know time nikalna mushkil hota hai bt its ok we r enjoyng this alot........


Yaa i am soooooooooooooooooooo glad u understand dear how sweet of u!..............Next part coming soon with madhu's entry so watch out dear......................😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zeekaytg

waow nice sheeba,nice update.

bt is bar bhi bahut short tha...........i know time nikalna mushkil hota hai bt its ok we r enjoyng this alot........

Hey how sweet of u dear!...............To understand me.....thankx.............
coming soon with madhu's entry so watch out dear......................😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey sheeba..great part yaar

really loved the tasha scene..and the hug was soo good
me lost in tasha world
hope you update next aprt real soon


yaa next part almost ready with madhu's entry soo watch out!....................Glad u could feel all the love....................😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

very well written sheeba...nakku attending his wound...then gazing out at night alone and last but not the least tasha hug....WOW ...SUPERB😍

waiting for the next part


Well glad u could get all the emotions right !..............awwwwwwwwww lekin ur tasha moments rockkkkkkkkk.....................πŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: isatb

Hey Sheebu...i read u r FF.....At one go.....😊Phew....πŸ˜›


Kya likhte hai yaar....awesome....πŸ‘

Wow it was gr8...⭐️

abb poore FF ke baare mein toh nahi likh sakti...πŸ˜†

But will write abt the last part....😳

Tasha hug was so romantic....❀️

Abb to itne acche pics dalegi toh hamara dhyan nahi hatega kya....πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

Sheebu mujhe apni PM list mein add karle.....and pm me the nxt part...πŸ˜ƒ

Aur agar nahi kiya na toh main tujhe nahi chodungi.........lol.πŸ˜†

Vry gud yaar sheeba...well done...πŸ‘πŸΌ

I am waiting for the nxt part........😍

and the much awaited Tasha wedding....


Hey dear glad u liked it that much!.................How sweet!......................Yaa i will surely pm u.watch out for madhu in next part................😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Its evening'''''.Dutta is in his office room when baaji comes in hurriedly and dutta can see baji was in some problem!............πŸ˜›

Baaji says----Bhau who'.woh srivastav toh'purani rectory ke peechey jo railway phatak hai usskey paas maraa hua milaa!......Woh bhi ek dum buri halat mein!.............😲

Dutta gets up and says -----Yeh kaisey ho saktaa hai baaji?!...............humaarey dushman tak humsey pehley kaun pahonch saktaa hai?!..............Dekh baji!..............kal visarjan hai aur wahaan poora parivaar hogaa'''..tu jaa aur sab intezaam dekh'.main nahiin chahtaa kii koi bhi anhonii ho!............

Baaji nods his head and walks out'''''..................

The next morning''''..Dutta is in his room'''.he is dressed in a green kurta and pyjama and he walks out of the room''''busy on the phone''''............😳

All of a sudden he finds himself face to face with nakku who had come there with a tray of tea for him'''.

Dutta stops midway to avoid a collision''''and u see the two stand face to face''''.

Dutta glares hard at nakku and talks on the phone'''................πŸ˜›

And embarrassed nakku lowers her eyes''''..............😳

Dutta moves forward and nakku too'''..lekin on same side isliye stopping dutta's way again!.............

Dutta steps aside to other side and unintentionally nakku too moves to same side again!................πŸ˜‰

Dutta who had had enough of this khel''''..and he says to the caller----Tu ek second ruk main tere se baat kartaa hai'''................πŸ˜†

Outting a hand on his phone he says to nakku raiusing an eyebrow-----Kya?!................yeh kya kar rahii hai nakku?!..............Ek taraf khadi ho jaa'''...........πŸ˜†

Dutta looks on as nakku steps aside and dutta walks past her preoccupied and worried for the day!..........

Nakku too realizes something was wrong with dutta''''''.................😳

After the aarti the whole patil family leave for the visarjan'''..and there in an old factory u see someone saying-----Sab taiyaari ho gayi hai ''''.

The caller answers to the man who stands in the shadows----Haan'''.aaj Dutta ko KOI NAHIIN BACHAA SAKTAA HAI!............aap chintaa matt karo'Mainney srivastav kii tarah kachchi goliyaan nahiin kheli hain''''.Ajj meri banduk kii har goli par sirf aur sir fuss DUTTA BHAU KAA NAAM LIKHAA HAI!..................😑

There AS had her own concern''''as she didn't want dutta to know the bitter truth of his life''''and dutta''he was worried for his family's safety!...........And nakku'''''when her saab is worried how could she be relaxed?!...........

There in damodar's house u see him asking his men to take out the cars and after they leave he says to himself----Dutta aaj main khud''.Tujhey sab kuch bataaongaa beta!.............

A voice says from behind----Baba main bhi aapke saath chaloongi!.............😲

A shocked damodar turns to find its his daughter madhu who stood in the doorway''''..with her bags''''.and as she walks upto him he says====Madhu tu?!..........tu toh agley haftey aaney waali thii na!..........

Madhu walks upto her father and says-----Baba''''phone par jab aapse baat kii toh lagaa'.kii app kuch pareshaan ho'''..Aur ABB YAHAAN AAKAR WAJAH BHI JAAN LII!..............Baba main bhi chaloongii aapke saath''''''..

Damodar tries to reason out things with her but in vain and the two leave to the place where the visarjan was to happen''''''..................πŸ˜•

The two remain quiet all through the journey ''''.Madhu looks out of the window and thinks to herself-----Aaj tak aapkey baarey mein sirf sunaa tha bhau!...........Itney saalon se aapki kalaayi pe rakhi bandhney kii khwaish rahii hai meri'''..aaj aapko'..bas ek nazar dekhnaa chahti hoon''''Baba ne jo aapke saath kiya tha'''..usskey liye aap maaf karo..aisi ummed nahiin hai mujhey''''.πŸ˜•

Madhu stares as darkness falls onto the sky''''.as the clouds cover the whole aakash''''.(see I used the word AAKASH!.............Mishu'a name in LS'''..)''''..😳

However madhu didn't know''''.fate was soon going to play a cruel game with her''''.and LIFE WOULD NEVER BE SAME FOR HER !................

Precap----Damodar walking upto dutta'''..as he stands after coming out of the water doing the visarjan'''.Far off from a tree someone sets his target on Dutta '''..and as damodar steps closer to dutta'''..he sees a red dot on his kurta and realizes horrified''..Dutta was about TO BE SHOT!.................😲

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sheeba very nice and very well written so DP is going to save datta update soon i eagerly waitng for next update. i really like the way u bring madhu in ur ff. i think if LTL followed it it won't look rushing up. but most of the viwer dosn't like the way they bring madhu in ltl. they think it so unnatural.
Edited by sasha_1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

amazing part sheeba....in so much tension n worried..u add Tasha scene... so cute😳😳😳...lovely...hmmmm madhu's entry b4 DP's death intersting...ohhhh...so she is xcited to meet datta...hmmm hum bhi he😳😳😳😳ye precap ...i wonder u definitely show DP's death at d time of visarjan...Datta ko bachane ke chakkar me DP no more😭😭😭...pata nahin varna CV ki tarah twist la degiπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

nice update...shebba...lik itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by sonee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

sheeba..... very nice update .....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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