I know ur not here.........but b'fore u leaved......u gave us super treat sheeba dear...
what a nice update....... loved it.....DN r superbbbbbbbbbπ ur awesome sweetyπ€ π
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I know ur not here.........but b'fore u leaved......u gave us super treat sheeba dear...
what a nice update....... loved it.....DN r superbbbbbbbbbπ ur awesome sweetyπ€ π
Originally posted by: zeekaytg
waow nice sheeba,nice update.
bt is bar bhi bahut short tha...........i know time nikalna mushkil hota hai bt its ok we r enjoyng this alot........
Originally posted by: zeekaytg
waow nice sheeba,nice update.
bt is bar bhi bahut short tha...........i know time nikalna mushkil hota hai bt its ok we r enjoyng this alot........
Originally posted by: mariescott14
hey sheeba..great part yaar
really loved the tasha scene..and the hug was soo goodme lost in tasha worldhope you update next aprt real soon
Originally posted by: stranger2rose
very well written sheeba...nakku attending his wound...then gazing out at night alone and last but not the least tasha hug....WOW ...SUPERBπ
waiting for the next part
Hey Sheebu...i read u r FF.....At one go.....πPhew....π
Kya likhte hai yaar....awesome....πWow it was gr8...βοΈabb poore FF ke baare mein toh nahi likh sakti...πBut will write abt the last part....π³Tasha hug was so romantic....β€οΈAbb to itne acche pics dalegi toh hamara dhyan nahi hatega kya....π³πSheebu mujhe apni PM list mein add karle.....and pm me the nxt part...πAur agar nahi kiya na toh main tujhe nahi chodungi.........lol.πVry gud yaar sheeba...well done...ππΌI am waiting for the nxt part........πand the much awaited Tasha wedding....
Its evening'''''.Dutta is in his office room when baaji comes in hurriedly and dutta can see baji was in some problem!............π
Baaji says----Bhau who'.woh srivastav toh'purani rectory ke peechey jo railway phatak hai usskey paas maraa hua milaa!......Woh bhi ek dum buri halat mein!.............π²
Dutta gets up and says -----Yeh kaisey ho saktaa hai baaji?!...............humaarey dushman tak humsey pehley kaun pahonch saktaa hai?!..............Dekh baji!..............kal visarjan hai aur wahaan poora parivaar hogaa'''..tu jaa aur sab intezaam dekh'.main nahiin chahtaa kii koi bhi anhonii ho!............
Baaji nods his head and walks out'''''..................
The next morning''''..Dutta is in his room'''.he is dressed in a green kurta and pyjama and he walks out of the room''''busy on the phone''''............π³
All of a sudden he finds himself face to face with nakku who had come there with a tray of tea for him'''.
Dutta stops midway to avoid a collision''''and u see the two stand face to face''''.
Dutta glares hard at nakku and talks on the phone'''................π
And embarrassed nakku lowers her eyes''''..............π³
Dutta moves forward and nakku too'''..lekin on same side isliye stopping dutta's way again!.............
Dutta steps aside to other side and unintentionally nakku too moves to same side again!................π
Dutta who had had enough of this khel''''..and he says to the caller----Tu ek second ruk main tere se baat kartaa hai'''................π
Outting a hand on his phone he says to nakku raiusing an eyebrow-----Kya?!................yeh kya kar rahii hai nakku?!..............Ek taraf khadi ho jaa'''...........π
Dutta looks on as nakku steps aside and dutta walks past her preoccupied and worried for the day!..........
Nakku too realizes something was wrong with dutta''''''.................π³
After the aarti the whole patil family leave for the visarjan'''..and there in an old factory u see someone saying-----Sab taiyaari ho gayi hai ''''.
The caller answers to the man who stands in the shadows----Haan'''.aaj Dutta ko KOI NAHIIN BACHAA SAKTAA HAI!............aap chintaa matt karo'Mainney srivastav kii tarah kachchi goliyaan nahiin kheli hain''''.Ajj meri banduk kii har goli par sirf aur sir fuss DUTTA BHAU KAA NAAM LIKHAA HAI!..................π‘
There AS had her own concern''''as she didn't want dutta to know the bitter truth of his life''''and dutta''he was worried for his family's safety!...........And nakku'''''when her saab is worried how could she be relaxed?!...........
There in damodar's house u see him asking his men to take out the cars and after they leave he says to himself----Dutta aaj main khud''.Tujhey sab kuch bataaongaa beta!.............
A voice says from behind----Baba main bhi aapke saath chaloongi!.............π²
A shocked damodar turns to find its his daughter madhu who stood in the doorway''''..with her bags''''.and as she walks upto him he says====Madhu tu?!..........tu toh agley haftey aaney waali thii na!..........
Madhu walks upto her father and says-----Baba''''phone par jab aapse baat kii toh lagaa'.kii app kuch pareshaan ho'''..Aur ABB YAHAAN AAKAR WAJAH BHI JAAN LII!..............Baba main bhi chaloongii aapke saath''''''..
Damodar tries to reason out things with her but in vain and the two leave to the place where the visarjan was to happen''''''..................π
The two remain quiet all through the journey ''''.Madhu looks out of the window and thinks to herself-----Aaj tak aapkey baarey mein sirf sunaa tha bhau!...........Itney saalon se aapki kalaayi pe rakhi bandhney kii khwaish rahii hai meri'''..aaj aapko'..bas ek nazar dekhnaa chahti hoon''''Baba ne jo aapke saath kiya tha'''..usskey liye aap maaf karo..aisi ummed nahiin hai mujhey''''.π
Madhu stares as darkness falls onto the sky''''.as the clouds cover the whole aakash''''.(see I used the word AAKASH!.............Mishu'a name in LS'''..)''''..π³
However madhu didn't know''''.fate was soon going to play a cruel game with her''''.and LIFE WOULD NEVER BE SAME FOR HER !................
Precap----Damodar walking upto dutta'''..as he stands after coming out of the water doing the visarjan'''.Far off from a tree someone sets his target on Dutta '''..and as damodar steps closer to dutta'''..he sees a red dot on his kurta and realizes horrified''..Dutta was about TO BE SHOT!.................π²
amazing part sheeba....in so much tension n worried..u add Tasha scene... so cuteπ³π³π³...lovely...hmmmm madhu's entry b4 DP's death intersting...ohhhh...so she is xcited to meet datta...hmmm hum bhi heπ³π³π³π³ye precap ...i wonder u definitely show DP's death at d time of visarjan...Datta ko bachane ke chakkar me DP no moreπππ...pata nahin varna CV ki tarah twist la degiππ
nice update...shebba...lik itππππsheeba..... very nice update .....ππππ