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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: raziya56
waiting for tasha scenes...update soon⭐️ - some how i have a feeling the money that kala gave to naku is gunna go missing.....and i fink kala has a hand in this! 😡

He he Raziya!!!U r 2 gud!! 😉 😉 N blive me raz....u r nt gonna b dissapointed about Tasha scenes!!i have compiled a gud stuff!! 😆 😆

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nazia.icycool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

hey u did a wonderful job!!

eagerly waitin for the next part..update soon plzz 😃

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: 92icycool
hey u did a wonderful job!!
eagerly waitin for the next part..update soon plzz 😃

Thankuuu!!!glad u liked it!!..will PM as soon as i update..😊

Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago

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@IrikaLovesKMH

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

nice update kritika...plzz uppdate soon..and pm me when u update

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Irika95
nice update kritika...plzz uppdate soon..and pm me when u update

Hey irika!!Thanx hun!!Will PM u whn updatin 😊 😊

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

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EPISODE 6
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SCENE 1
"Jaldi kar Roop'jaldi se tayyar ho warna deri ho jayegi..waise bhi sab hamara intezar kar rahe hai niche..",says Kala who is standing outide Roopwati's room and tapping the door."Bas abhi aaye taayi.."Roop opens the door..and says"Chale niche taayi??Leela taayi,sudarshan jeejs aur kishore jeejs kaha hai??"Kala lifts her eyebrows and says.."Ab kya sab tera swagat karne ke liye tere darwaze pe khade rehenge?waise hi tune itni der kar di..abb sawal jawaab band aur niche chal..aayi sahib kahi naraaz na ho jaye..".Both of them decend the stairs and join the other members of the family in their drawing room.Aayi sahib says"Aa gaye sab??"Then looks at a nearby servant cleaning a vase and says"Jakar zara rasoi se Babi ko bulade"..The servants bows down and leaves.Meanwhile,Babi and Naku are preparing the dinner.The servant enters and says"Babi tereko Aayi sahib bahar bulati hai..ja jaldi..".Babi nods her head and follows the servant outside with Naku close at her heels.They enter the drawing room and seeing everyone dressed well,Babi asks"Aayi sahib aap log kahi ja rahe ho kya??"Kala makes an indifferent face,lifts her eyebrows and addresses Babi"Haan Babi hum sab bahar ja rahe'tu toh janti hi hai na'ki kal roop ko ladke waale dekhne aa rahe hai'isliye hum sab shopping karne ja rahe hai'tujhe bhi hamare saath chalna hoga..woh kya hai na,Aayi sahib aajkal tere bina koi faisla nahi kar paate..aur chahti hai ki tu bhi hamari madad karne ke liye hamare saath chale'kyu aayi sahib??"Aayi sahib nods her head in approval.Babi looks at Naku and says"Par Naku yahan akeli'"Kala cuts her off and says,"Nahi akeli kaha..Bhau hai na ghar pe..apne kamre mein..abb woh toh hamare saath bahar jaane se raha'Baji bhi hamare saath kuch bodyguards lekar aa raha hai.Babi tu chinta matt kar.Naku ko puri duniya mein Bhau ke ghar se zyada surakhshit ghar nahi milega..abb hamara ghar koi basti thodi hi na hai.."Kala taunts.Naku says silently to babi"Aayi tu ja'main theek hai yahan..aur phir saab hai na ghar pe..main raat ke khane ki tayyari kar legi'"Babi looks at kala and says"Theek hai jaisa aap log theek samjhe.."Kala makes an irritated face and starts leaving,stops midway,turns back and says"Naku Bhau ki chai matt bhulna'usse shaam ki chai ki adaat hai de dena..hum ja rahe hai iska yeh matlab nahi hai kit u kaamchori karegi'"Naku nods her head and leaves for the kitchen.

SCENE 2
Naku enters the rasoi and looks around."Hey bappa!!.kya banau main..kaha se shuruaat karu..chalo abhi ke liye aata hi ghund lu.."Naku takes out the wheat flour and starts to pour water into it.Meanwhile,unaware of the fact that no-one is at home,Bhau who hasn't got his tea on time,gets irritated and comes down shouting the names of all the people one by one,when no one answers his call,he says to himself"kaha chale gaye sab,rasoi mein dekhta hu'he enters the kitchen to find Naku engrossed in atta work."Naku'kaha gaye sab??" he roars."Kab se awaaz laga raha hu'.meri chai kaha gayi??"Naku hides a smile and says.."Saab pehle aap rasoi mein apne jute uttar kar aayiye..lagta hai aap bhul gaye.."Bhau looks down at his sandals,goes out,takes them off and comes in..and says"Abb toh bata de kaha gaye sab ke sab??"Naku says "Sab bahar gaye hai..roop taayi ki kharidaari karne.."Bhau keeps his hand on his waist lost in a thought and says,"Aur meri chai'??Yeh meri chai ka waqt hai'.uska kya??"Naku slaps her forehead and says"Maaf kar do saab'dimaag se ekdum nikal gaya..Abb toh apko intezaar karna hoyenga..kyuki main iss atte mein fassi hu'ya toh aap khud se hi chai bana lo..kyuki itne logon ke liye atta karna..mamuli baat nahi hai.."Dutta frowns and says"Main'aur chai..???Tera dimaag theek hai Naku??tu soch jis admi ko apne ghar ke rasoi ke niyam nahi pata hai..woh chai banana janta hoga'"Naku lifts her hands smeared with wheat flour,smiles and says"Soch lo saab'bahut samay lagega'"Dutta shrugs and thinks for a moment,"Acha Naku,agar tu mujhe banana ki prakriya batati rahegi toh main banae ko tayyar hu.."Naku smiles and gives him a thumbs up.Bhau sheepishly lifts a tawa kept in corner..Naku laughs and says"Saab!!apko lagta hai ispe chai banegi??"Bhau says indignantly'"Haan banegi..kyun nahi banegi..akhir Dutta ki chai hai.."Naku continues laughing.for a moment,Dutta is lost in Naku's laugh and forgets everything.he smiles and keeps staring at Naku.As his hands go down on the kitchen slab for support,a knife pricks him and his spell is brokwn.Naku orders him"Saab,chai pateele mein banti hai..woh rakha hai uss kone mein..le aayiye.."Dutta obeys.Naku tells him the steps of making chai and he obediently follows them all.At the end of ten minues he says triumphantly"Le tayyar ho gayi..Dutta special chai..ek tere liye aur ek mere liye'chal isse lekar mere kamre mein chal.Yahan bahut garmi hai.."Naku smiles and lifts up the tray and follows Dutta upto his room.

SCENE 3
They enter his room.Naku keeps the tray on his table as Dutta settles down on his sofa.Naku sits on the carpet beside his sofa.Dutta lifts a cup and gives it to Naku and says"Sabse pehle tu chak ke bata kaisi bani hai..tab main piyunga'"Naku smiles and takes the cup from his hand.She puts the cup to her lips and takes the first sip.Thniks for a while and drinks off all the tea in her cup.All this while,Dutta looked at her in anticipation,with animated eyes to know the verdict.When Naku finishes the last sip,he asks"Kaisa laga tereko??"Naku smiles and says"Bahut hi accha saab.aap toh kuch dino mein acchi tarah ghar ki rasoi smabhalne lagoge.."Dutta laughs and says..'Dekha..maine kaha tha na'Dutta koi kaam galat kar hi nahi sakta.."saying so,he takes a sip from his cup.Suddenly he makes a face and spits out the contents of his mouth back into the cup and coughs.Naku starts laughing.Dutta wipes his mouth and says.."Naku!!Yeh kya tha!!Isse zyada accha swaad toh zeher ka hota hai..yeh kya banaya tha maine..aur tune pura bhi liya aur accha kaha.."Naku smiles again and replies"Saab'bhale hi isme shakkar ki mithaas kum ho..par pyaar ki mithaas itni zyaada hai ki yeh chai duniya ki sabe acchi chai bann gaye..saab isme aapne itna saara pyaar dala..kaise nahi accha lagta.."Dutta smiles and looks at Naku.Naku looks back into Dutta's eyes and they have a beautiful eyelock moment.(Romantic background music!!)Naku suddenly gets up.So does Dutta.they continue to look into each other eyes and Dutta starts coming closer to Naku.Naku gets conscious and breaks away from his gaze..She looks sideways and find a golf club standing.Naku changes the topic and says"Arre saab yeh kya hai.."and moves towards it.Dutta follows her and says.."Isse golf kehte hai..iss dande se iss ball ko maarte hai aur yeh ek gaddhe mein jata hai'"Naku's smile widens and she says'"Aap khelte ho ise'main khel sakti hu kya??"Dutta smiles and says'"Haan kyu nahi,..aaj tune mujeh chai banana sikhaya..ab main tujhe golf khelna sikhata hu.."saying so,he hands the golf club into Naku's hand and covers her from behind with his hands on Naku's hand."Iss tarah pakadte hai iss club ko.."Naku looks ahead towards the ball and hole.Dutta gets distracted and and looks at Naku.He comes closer to her and as his hands meets with Naku's,a wind starts blowing his hair'and romantic music comes on.He is adoring Naku and he is so close to her that he can actually feel the scent
and the warmth of her body.He wants this moment to standstill and never finish.Suddenly,there is a knock on door.."Bhauuuu main aa gaya.."Dutta and Naku separate.Dutta says "Aa gaya tu Baji..aur sab bhi aa gaye honge..kaisi rahi shoppin wagerah.."Baji says animatedly.."Ekdum rapchik bhau'.itna kuch kahrida taayi ne puch matt!!"Suddenly,Baji's gaze drops on the half consumed teacup of Bhau..he says"Arre waah bhau!!chai'main hi pi leeta hai..thanda ho jayega'"Naku controls her smile and says"Haan baaji tereko toh try karna chhaiye..bhau ne especially tere liye bannayi hai'"Baji grins and says"Bhau!!!I love you!!Kitna pyaar karta hai tu mujhse le apun peeta hai abb isse.."Dutta stands helpless,his protests in vain.Suddenly Baji coughs and spits it and Naku bursts out laughing again!Baji is rendered speechless as he stares at cup.he asks"yeh chai tha ya zeher..mujhe maarnr ka plan hai bhau??"Dutta's cheeks turn pink with embarrassment.Naku shrugs and says.."Aap log chai ka kissa suniye main niche jaati hai..kaam hai bahu saara.Aayi bhi aa gayi hogi..raat ka khana banana hai.."Saying so,Naku leaves an embarrassed Dutta and a disbelieving,still in shock Baji.

Link to the next episode----EPISODE 7----Page 16 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=16

Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago

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Naina :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

just loved it yahr.....soooo sweet how baaji say i love you bhao hahahhaha😆

seriusly great work....👍🏼.

Pls update soond loved it....😊

xoxo Naina

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Aamirlover
just loved it yahr.....soooo sweet how baaji say i love you bhao hahahhaha😆
seriusly great work....👍🏼.

Pls update soond loved it....😊

xoxo Naina

LOL!! secret--*I got this i lve u wala idea whn u said i love u* 😛 😛

Thanx naina!!! 😉 😉