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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: jess_dutta

i know at the rate the show is going on it will take them 2 weeks 2 atleast meet..since it tok her 1 week to enter his room😆😆

Kiss....will take a year to happen... 🤣

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

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EPISODE 5

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SCENE 1
There is a big buzz around the Patil household.As Babi and Naku ener the house in the morning for their work,they run their eyes in all directions to see a big hubdub going in the house,every servant is busy cleaning every nook and corner of the house,others busy in making preparations for decorations.The atmosphere in the house is festive.Naku and Babi enter the kitchen confused and star preparing th breakfast.Suddenly,one of the servant comes and addresses Naku,"Naku,jaldi ja,kala taayi ne tujhe bulaya hai apne kamre mein,kuch zaruri kaam hai'"naku nods her head in consent,gives an assuring look to babi and climbs the stairs for Kala's room.Kala,as usual,dressed in a beautiful saree and discussing jewellery with her 2 sisters.As Naku enters the room,she lifts her eyes and says"Aa Naku aa'tu soch rahi hogi ki aaja ghar mein aisa mahol kyu hai'dar asal kal Roop ko ladke waale dekhne aa rahe'aur kyuki to hiss ghar ki sabse pyaari naukrani hai,main chahti hu kit u kuch zaruri cheezon ki kahridari kar le'yeh le kuch paise aur yeh list..jo jo likha hai..woh sab aaj shaam tak chahiye mujhe..samjjh gayi???"Naku stares at the money and says"Par taayi'itni badi zimedaari'main kaise..aap kisi aur ko bol de'main yeh nahi sambhal paayegi'"Kala lifts her eyebrows and looks at naku,"Tu hi kar paayegi yeh kaam'.tujhse zyaada bharosemand aur kaun hai yahan'yeh le..pure 1 lakh hai..na kum na zyaada..dekhna theek se kharch ho'aur hisaab chahiye mujhe'"Naku,still unsure what to do,takes the envelope of money from Kala's hands and leaves the room.Roopwati is utterly astonished and says"Taayi'yeh kya kiya..uss nakusha ko yeh paise de diye'abb who saare ke saare paise ya toh kho degi ya toh aise cheezein kahridegi ki sab bekkar hoga.."Kala smiles and says.."Roop apne dimaag par zyaada zor matt de'jakar apna roop sawar'tujhe mere plan ka pata aaj nahi..kal chalega.."Roop and leelwati nod their heads and leave the room.kala smiles to herself and starts looking at the jewellery again.

SCENE 2
Meanwhile,lost in her thoughts,naku enters kitchen where babi is preparing a meal for all.Seeing naku's lost expression,she asks.."Kaye zala naku..Taayi ne data kya??kyu muh latka rakha hai??"Naku lifts her face and says.."Aayi,yeh sab tayaarian isliye ho rahi hai kyuki kal roopwati taayi ko ladke wale dekhne aa rahe hai..aur kala taayi ne mujhe kuch paise diye hai..kuch samaan kharidne ko'aayi main kaise inn sabko samabhalegi'kahi kuch idhar udhar ho gaya toh..kina vishwaas karti hai taayi mujhpe.."Babi smiles and comforts naku saying"Vishhwaas unpe kiya jaata hai jo dil ke kareeb ho'tu unka bharosa matt tutne dena aur khud pe ungli uthane ka mauka matt dena'aur haan inn paise ko kamre mein jakar kahi chupa ke rakh de..kahi tere baap ne dekh liaya na..toh ho gaya satyanaash."Naku nods her head and says,"Ji aayi..".

SCENE 3
After safely stacking the money envelope in her suitcase,Naku enters house once again..little did she know that kala taayi was watching her from distance.She entered the kitchen.While cooking,a question came up in her mind,she says to babi"Aayi,janti hai main pehli baar saab se sagar kutir mein mili thi'doobta suraj dekhte huye'par main janti nahi thi ki who itne bade saab hai'jo bhi hai aayi..main jaan na chahti hai ki saab ki zindagi mein aisa kya hua ki saab ko yeh raasta chunn na pada'aakhir kya hai unke ateet ka raaz.."Outside the kitchen,aayi sahib had heard the conversation and of the doubts in naku's mind.She enters the kitchen and says'"Naku,mere jodon mein bada dard zara tel garam karke malish kar de'.main kamre mein hi hogi.."Naku nods her head and heats a bowl of oil on stove.She enters aayi sahib's room'Aayi sahib says"Aja naku baith ja.."Naku sits down and applies tel on aayi sahib legs and starts massaging them.Aayi sahib says"Maine teri baat suni'rasoi mein'tu jana na chahti hai na bhau ka ateet??main batati hu tujhe"Naku listens attentively as Aayi sahib starts'

Bahut pehle ki baat hai..hum sab iss tarah amir nahi the..main aur mera parivaar wadala ke uss jhuggion mein rehte the sagar kutir..jahan se tu aayi hai.Hamara chota sa parivaar tha..hasta khelta'Main,kala ke pita,kala,bhau,leela aur roop.Hum sab apni duniya mein khush the'kala ke pita factory mein kaam karte the'ghar mein aamdani kum thi par khushiyan zyada.Ek din taang akar kala ke pita ko Juye ki aadat lag gayi..woh paisa lagate rahe aur haarte rahe'unhe kya pata tha ki jisse who udhari le rahe hai,who Mumbai ka sabse bada don hoga'Unki aadatein bigati rahi..woh raat mein der se aate..woh sharabi halat mein..ghar akar sab par gussa uttarte..mere samjhane par bhi woh nahi sunte the..ek din,hamare ghar uss don ke kuch aadmi aaye..kala ke pita ko dhundte huye..woh ghar pe nahi the..maine unse jaane ko kaha..par woh mere saath batamizi karne laga..Dutta usi kamre mein maujood tha..gusse mein usne unme se ek aadmi ko churi se maar dala..baki sab darr kar bhaag toh gaye par humein kaha pata tha ki uss din se hamari zindagi badal jaayegi.Kala ke pita raat mein wapass nahi aaye..subah jab darwaaza pe dastak huyi toh hum sab ki chain mein chain aayi'Par darwaza kholte hi humein Kala ki pita ki laash mili'who bhi tukdo mein..Main jaise zinda laash si bann gaye aur mere bacche..*Aayi sahib starts crying at this point,naku consoles her and aayi sahib continues*uss din maine dutta ki ankhon mein ek gussa,ek aakroch dekha..main darrti thi kahi kuch galat na ho jaaye..par tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi'mera Dutta badal chukka tha..woh ek hasta kehlta baccha nahi tha'usske seene mein bas ek badle ki aag dhadhakne lagi aur usne pran liya ki who tab tak chain se nahi baithega jab tak who apni Aayi ki bezzati aur apne pita ke maut ka badla nahi le leta'aur who dutta se bhau bann gaya..uska badla abhi tak chukka nahi hai kyuki who aadmi abhi gumshuda hai..log kehte hai woh kahi dubai mein chupa baitha hai..par dutta usse kisi bhi kone se dhund nikalega aur tab jakar uska gussa shant hoga,

SCENE 4
Aayi sahib wipes off her tears and says bravely.."Mujhe bhau pe pura bharosa hai ki who apne maksad mein kamyaab hoga..aayi jagdambe uski rakhsha karengi.."Naku is shaken by the story and slowly moves out of aayi sahib's room,her eyes filled with tears and sudden realisation that saab has gone through so much at such a young age..he must be shattered so much that the wounds must be fresh till now.She wiped off her tears as Babi called her and said.."Chal naku khana kha le'subah se bas kaam kar rahi hai.."Naku nods her head and embraces babi.Babi smiles and embrace her daughter back.

Link for the next episode---EPISODE 6----Page 10 http://india-forums.com//forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1402390/new-ff-tu-hi-re-mahaupdt-nakus-rishta-epi-15-pg-51

Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

PRECAP:Will Kala succeed in her plan??And a very sweet episode full of TaSha romance lies ahead..all this is next post!! 😉 😉

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Shabnam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Just read the last 2 parts ..
It waz just great ....
Cant w8 4 Tasha romance ..
update soon ..!

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
<font color="#003366">Just read the last 2 parts ..
It waz just great ....
Cant w8 4 Tasha romance ..
update soon ..!
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Thanku!!! thanku!!will update soon..bdw shabz jus love the sigs ur using.. 😊 😊

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spandana11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

good part kala as usual doing some thing,waiting for next part

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: spandana11
good part kala as usual doing some thing,waiting for next part

thanx spandana...yep..kala's up2 no gud.. 🤢

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jess_dutta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

hey kritika

great part yaar...liked to know abot dutta ateet

cant wait for tasha romace to kick start..hope u update soon

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marie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

hey kri😃

just read the fifth epi and really love it..like the different concept of dutta past..atleast he will not be afraid to fall in love...hope more tasha scenes to come..and really cant wait for the 6th epi

great story⭐️⭐️

love marie😳

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: jess_dutta
hey kritika
great part yaar...liked to know abot dutta ateet

cant wait for tasha romace to kick start..hope u update soon

Hey jess..thanx yaar!!😊!!will update soon 😃

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