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marie

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey kritika..the character sketch is real brilliant..loved sudharshan characterisation..i dont know who m i and why m i in this world is the perfect saying for his expression

great epi kritika...as usual...so babi is going to work in dutta house..cant wait for more tasha interaction..do pm me when you update the new part...cant wait

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marie

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: kritika4eva
PRECAP:Their second meeting is going to be even more interesting i promise!!! 😉

cant wait😛

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey kritika..the character sketch is real brilliant..loved sudharshan characterisation..i dont know who m i and why m i in this world is the perfect saying for his expression

great epi kritika...as usual...so babi is going to work in dutta house..cant wait for more tasha interaction..do pm me when you update the new part...cant wait

Thanx marie!will PM u whn postin...😊I always thought these two lines why and who are best to describe Sud.. 😆 😆

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

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EPISODE 4
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SCENE 1
Dutta,who is busy pouring over a deal file is facing his window.Unaware that its Naku who has opened the door,he yells:"Aa gaya Baji..din bhar tujhe toh agar chuth de do toh bas'chal aa ab kaam kar chup chap'dekh yeh file ek baar check kar le'"Saying so,Dutta turns around.Naku is is shocked and stands still seeing her "dost" from the previous day.She gains her composure and then says,elated "Arre tu toh wahi hai..mera dost jo kal mujhe mila tha..tu bhi yahan kaam karta hai kya'??"Dutta smiles and says,"Haan sahi kaha tune'main bhi yahin kaam karta hu..Nakchadi..!!"Naku frowns and says.."Aye tu mereko nakchadi matt kehna..sirf mera sethji mujhe nakchadi taayi bula sakta hai'"Dutta bursts out laughing.Naku is pissed off and saying "Sunn.."she steps towards him and trips.Before she could fall down,Dutta acts immediately and catches Naku midway.His hands around her delicate waist,Bhau asks"Tu theek toh hai na.."Naku lifts her head to look at Bhau,her hair all over her face.Nakku and Dutta lock their eyes and continue to stare at each other.One strand gets into Naku's eyes and she flinches it.Dutta ,without letting his eyes slip off her face,sides the stray strand of hair on Naku's face.Naku lifts her eyes again and they look into each other's eyes .(PS:Imagine a romantic and beautiful song in the background!!!!!)

The spell around Naku and Dutta gets broken when Baji comes ino the room shouting."Bhau'.tune mujhe bulaya'".Naku quickly removes her eyes from Dutta's face.Dutta slowly removes his hands from Naku's waist and they part.Baji says."Aree waah bhau tu mere milane se pehle hi mil gaya iss ghar ke naye naukaro se..."Naku looks disbelievingly at Baji and then at Dutta questioningly.Dutta smiles at Naku as it dawns at Naku that the person with whom she is standing is the owner of the house..her"Saab".She immediately puts back her dupatta.Baji leaves the room with the file in his hand.Naku is about to leave when Dutta stops her midway and says,"Tu chahe toh abb bhi meri dosti ko sweekar kar sakti'".Naku replies shyly,"Jaisa aap kahe saab.."Dutta smiles as Naku leaves the room.As she and sethji prepares to leave for their room,Naku is lost in her thoughts and smiling by herself.

In Naku's room:
"Aa gaye tum log ghar bhar ghum kar...chalo dono ab kuch kha lo..kal khub sara kaam karna hai Naku..",says Babi.Naku nods submissively and the family gets into their deep slumber.Next day is a beautiful one.As the first sunrays fall on Naku's face,she gets up immediately and gets ready for a long day at work in Dutta's house.
SCENE 2
She and Babi ready the breakfast.Babi says,"Aaj humein acha khana banana hoga Naku,aaj ka din bahut hi keemti hai hamare liye.Agar aaj acha kaam kiya toh hamari naukri pakki."Naku smiles and puts her arms around her aayi and says comfortingly,"Sab ache se hoga aayi..tu chinta kayeko karti itna!!"Babi smiles and hugs her daughter.Suddenly she says"Chal chal Naku bahut deri ho gayi log nashte ka intezar karte hoyenge'"They take the food to the dining table.Everyone is on the table except Dutta.Babi serves everyone.Aayi sahib and kala take the first bite.Aayi sahib smiles at them and says"Acha hai.."Kala is equally impressed.."hmm'acha hi hai..maine socha nahi that um log itna acha khana bana paoge.."babi breathes a sigh of relief.Aayi sahib suddenly says'"Sun Naku..Dutta apne kamre mein hi khana khayega'tu lekar chali ja uske room mein.."

SCENE 3
Naku takes the filled plate and climbs the stairs to reach Bhau's room.Dutta is busy in work.Naku enters the room and keeps the plate of food in front of him.Dutta is still immersed in his work when Naku interrupts,"Saab khana kha lo'"Dutta looks up and says"Arre Naku tune kyu takleef ki'Main khud hi le leta'"Naku smiles and says"Ab le aayi hut oh kha lo'aage se nahi laungi."Dutta smiles at her and says"Haan abb tu le hi aayi hai toh kha leta hu.."Naku turns and leaves.Dutta pinches himself for actually smiling these days a lot.
He then starts having his food.

As the days pass by,Aayi Sahib becomes more and more fond of Babi and Naku.She takes their opinions in every little day to day decisions about the household.Also,Naku and Dutta's friendship bond becomes stronger day by day.Aayi sahib's mind is at peace with a new and smiling Dutta.Days have become cheerful for the Patil household.Just one person is unhappy with athe turn of events-Kalawati.She has many plans waging through her mind.ideas to destroy dutta's happiness.but at present she is helpless in hands of the situation.Nakusha is unaware of what turns and twists await her in the future'

Link to the next episode----EPISODE 5----Page 7 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=7

Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

PRECAP---A very important twist in the tale...guys watch out for it!!! 😉 😉

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marie

@mariescott14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

hey kri..me first😛

great update yaar..loved tasha interaction and their first eyelock session😳..u r doing real great...kala head is always full of plans...like how dutta friendship is not on any dhoka...hope kala doesnt come btw them

what the twist...real excited

hope u update soon and thanks for the pm

Edited by mariescott14 - 15 years ago

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raziya56

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

does naku have white or dark skin colour in this ff?

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Kritika Prasad

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey kri..me first😛

great update yaar..loved tasha interaction and their first eyelock session😳..u r doing real great...kala head is always full of plans...like how dutta friendship is not on any dhoka...hope kala doesnt come btw them

what the twist...real excited

hope u update soon and thanks for the pm

Marieeee!!first of all..a big kiss on ur hand..Mwaahhh!! 😳 😳
Have been racking brains since last two days...and now...*bulb lights up* i try my best!! 😃 😃