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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanku sooo much sonya for encouraging me to write further....Ur encouragement means ot 2 me!! 😊
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EPISODE 2
SCENE 1
Naku and Sethji are roaming around the locality exploring the area where every turn welcomes them with a new surprise."Dekh taayi…dekh kitna sundar hai hamara yeh wala bast..pichu se kitna bada samundar dikhta hai taayi…bata accha kiya na jo tujhe uss garam garam rasoi se utha kar iss khuli hawa mein le aaya…"Nakusha closes her eyes and lets the vastness of the sea penetrate her heart and mind.She slowly opens her eyes and says:"Sethji…sach mein…bahut sundar hai yeh jagah..mereko itna sukun kabhi mehsoos nahi hua hai jitna aaj lag raha hai…sach mein tera bahut bahut shukriya.."She ruffles his hair and smiles at him.

SCENE 2
Meanwhile,Dutta Shriram patil's car stops in front of the basti….people gather around the car with chants of "Bhau zindabad…Bhau salamat rahe..Bhau ki jai ho..!!"Bhau gets off the car and folds his hands in front of the people…Baji comes out of the car next…People are ecstatic at the sight of their demigod and go beserk.Bhau stops them and Baji says:"Ho gaya..ho gaya…abb bas bhi karo…Bhau ko batao tum logon ka kya kya samasya hai..Bhau use suljhnae ki puri koshish karega."One man:"Nahi nahi!!humein kisi tarah ki takleef nahi ha..Bhau toh hamare bhagwan hai…sab unki kripa hai..hamare ghar mein chulhe unki dua se chal rahe hai…".Baji smiles and pats the man and says:"Toh abb sab apne apne ghar jao…Bhau basti ka thoda chakkar kat ke wapis jayega..aur bheed matt jamana samjh gaye??"Everyone nod their heads and leave place.Dutta:"Ja baji…abb tub hi ja…."Baji is shocked and says:"Kaha jau Bhau….jahan tu wahan main.."Dutta smiles and says…"Mujhe kuch pal akele guzaarna hai…"baji.."Pann Bhau…..".Dutta stops him midway and says:"Ja Baji…".baji leaves.

Dutta starts walking through the bygone and dirty lanes of the slum lost deep in his thoughts …He walks straight towards his favourite spot at the end of the basti where there is a beautiful view of the sun slowly setting into the sea.Unaware of the approaching Dutta,Naku and sethji keep on chatting away and admiring the sea's beauty.Dutta comes up and stands beside Naku.He is so lost in the sunset that he doesn't see that he is standing near some people.Naku suddenly turns her head towards Dutta.She is puzzled by the sudden presence of a stranger.She and Sethji exchange glances and sethji points Naku to ask who the stranger is.Naku looks back at Dutta…trying to make her mind up about asking him or not.Dutta suddenly perks up.."Kitna sundar hai yeh jagah..sab se alag sab se anokhi hai yaha ki hawa…"Nakusha smiles and is intantly relieved to know that this person is from her locality.She says:"Sach keh raha hai tu…pann tu hai kaun??yahi par rehta hai??tereko dekh ke toh nhai lagta…"Sethji jumps in:"haan haan!!shakal to apko badi acchi hai..batao na apna naam…main sethji hu aur iss nakchadi Nakusha ka chota bhaiya.".Dutta smiles and turns his head away from the sunset..facing Nakusha for the first time.He looks at her and smiles:"Tujhe kya lagta hai..main yaha ka hu??"Nakusha drops down her gaze from Dutta's face and says:"ab aap yahan aaye ho toh yahi ke hoge…"Dutta smiles naughtily and says…"Haan main yahin ka hu…."Sethji gets excited and says:"fir toh apun logon ko dosti karna maangta na…chalo aaj main aapko nahi chorunga..batao mujhe iss basti ke bare mein sab kuch….aye taayi…chal aaj toh rapchik timepass mil gaya .."Dutta says:"Haan haan kyun nahi…aaj se hum dost….aur main tujhe bateyaga na sab kuch idhar ke bare mien chal baith ja niche."He looks at Naku and says"Yeh dost waali baat maine tere liye bhi kahi hai….tu bhi baith sakti hai!!" Naku sits down beside sethji shyly.Dutta sethji start talking and laughing.Naku is hesistant at first and then opens up and joins the conversation.What follows is a cheerful banter between the three new friends.Suddenly,there is a voice in the background:"Chana jor garam le lo….chana jor garam..".Sethji's face lights up and he says:"Aye dost…mereko chana jor garam bada pasand hai!! Kahrid do na…"Naku glares at Sethji and says:"Pagal ho gaya hai tu…aise kyun paise kharch karwa raha hai inke…Aayi se paise lekar aayenge tab khayenge…samjha??"Sethji gets irritated and says:"Chal chal taayi kuch bi matt bol…pata hai dost taayi ko bhi yeh sab chatpate cheezien pasand hai…."Before Naku could scold sethji again,Dutta interrupts in between and says:"Abb ladna band karo…Aye bhaisaab..teen chana garam banaba…"The three then seetle with their plates and continue their conversation. Naku talks and talks a lot.Dutta is astonished and says:"Arre..tu toh badi badboli nikli shuru mein kitni chup-chap si sehmi si baithi thi.Jaise ki kisi bhoot ko dekh liya ho…"Nakusha smiles and says sofly:"Abb tum anjaan nahi mere dost ho na..isi maafil main bol paa rahi hu.."Dutta and Naku's eyes lock for some seconds..There is a soft romantic background music playing.Naku breaks away from Dutta's gaze and Dutta shifts his gaze towards Sethji.Naku suddenly stands up and says…:"Dekha sethji..kitna samay ho gaya…Aayi ghar pahuchti hi hogi…tereko aur mereko ghar pen a pakar kitna chillayegi..chal chal abb chalne ka samay aa gaya hai…"Sethji gets up,faces Dutta and says:"Aapse milkar aacha laga…kal phir milne aana mujhse aur taayi se…abb chalna maangta hai mereko.."Dutta gets up ans says:"Theek hai..ja abb..apna aut apni taayi aur sabka khayal rakhna theek hai…phir milta hu…".Naku and sethji go off in the opposite direction.Dutta is still standing at the sunset point looking in their direction and smiling.On a hunch,Naku turns back and to take a look once more at Dutta.She looks at him and when she finds him staring in their direction,she quickly turns her face away and smiles to herself.

SCENE 3
While Dutta is still looking in their direction,Baji turns up from behind and seeing Bhau smile,he is surprised and scratching his head,he says:"Kya baat hai bhau…bada muskura rahe ho…aaj tak itni khushi nahi dekhi tere chehre par…who bhi iss basti mein aakar…"Dutta's spell is broken by Baji's words and he turns his head towards him…smiling at him,he says:"kabhi kabhi jeevan mein kuch paalon ke liye hi sahi par aise log mil jaate hai,jo aap par jeevan bhar ki chaap chodd jaate hai…samjh le aaj kuch aisa hi huya mere saath…"Baji looks confused .Dutta pats his back and says:"Chal Baji…abb apne nanhe se dimag par itna jor matt de…ghar chalet hai.Waise bhi bahut der ho gaye.Aayi sahib chinta kar rahi hogi."
Saying so,the move to their car and leave the basti,with Dutta still staring out of the window towards the dirty basti.


SCENE 4
Back at Naku's home,after Naku and sethji reach home,a few minutes later,Babi shows up looking tired and dejected.She yells Naku's name.."Nakuuuuu…aye nakuu…"Naku comes rushing out from the kitchen.She takes one look at her aayi and knows how upset she is.Babi says:"Sabki khana khila diya na Naku??"Naku cleans her dirty hands with her dupatta and says:"Haan Aaayi sab ne kha liya….bas tere hi intezaar kar rahi thi main..."Babi replies"Aaj mera mann nahi khane ka…seedhe sone ja rahi hai main.."Naku nods her head.At night,Naku cant sleep because her conscience wont allow her to sleep because she hid something from her aayi.She goes out in the kitchen to allow silence soak her.Aayi comes after her.Naku aware of her aayi's presence,falls into her arms and sheds a few tears.The mother-daughter duo embrace each other,none of them saying anything and they standstill for a moment.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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PRECAP:Nakusha and her family get ready to move into the Dutta mansion... 😉 😉
EPISODE 3----Page 3 http://india-forums.com//forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1402390/new-ff-tu-hi-re-mahaupdt-nakus-rishta-epi-15-pg-51
Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey kritika...beautiful episode
really enjoyed it...loved how dutta and naku became friends...even liked how dutta was teasing baji...Tasha is so cute yaar...hai..
the precap sounds real interesting...cant wait...hope you update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankuuuu marie!!...yep...m working on the epi...holidays have started so m totally free!!Will post the next epi tommorow itself 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesum start Kritika ..
luved it ...continue soon ...!
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

<font color="#000066">Awesum start Kritika ..
luved it ...continue soon ...!
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Thanku thanku so so much for appreciating dis!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys!! I coudnt stop myself from updating the latest episode...so here it comes...


Before moving on to the next episode,I would like to make some formal introductions of the characters present in Dutta's home with their character sketches of few lines.Dutta mansion is a beautiful mansion located in the suburbs of Wadala.

Aayi sahib----Dutta Shriram Patil's caring mother and a big believer of Aayi Jagdamba(Maa Durga).She became a widow when Dutta was a little boy and has brought up her four kids solely by herself.She is always worried about Dutta's future.

Kalawati----She is Dutta's elder sister.Fondly known as Kala taayi by one and all.She is a scheming and highly obnoxious woman who wants to befall her brother at all costs.She is the villain of the Dutta household.A Raavan fot Patil house in disguise of a well-wisher.

Leelawati----She is the sister who comes next after Bhau.Another scheming woman of the family,she and her elder taayi are the partners in crime for ruining their Bhau's life.

Roopwati----The youngest sibling,she is a dumbhead who follows her taaies blindly without thinking anything."So cute naa!!" is her fav dialogue and she never forgets to sprinkle her conversation with this.

Kishore----Kalawati's husband and ghar jamayi.He is a cheerful character who is a good person at heart and doesn't approve of his wife's wicked ways.

Sudarshan----Leelawati's husband.With a "I don't know who I am and why I am in this world!"expression pasted on his face,he tries to match his wits with everyone in the house but fails miserably.A wicked person at heart,he and Leela make a pefect couple.

Tanay----Kalawati and Kishore's little son.
Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago
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EPISODE 3
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The same night at Dutta's mansion:

"Jagdamba Jagdamba..Aayi Jagdamba..pta nahi kaha chale gaye hai yeh dono'itna samay lagta hai kya'abb tak bhuke pyaase'"says Aayi sahib,clad in a simple silk sari with a rosary of beads in her hands,eyes clasped praying for her son Dutta and his son "like"Baji to return."Kaye zala Aayi?Itni chinta kyun karti hai??Dutta koi baccha thodi hi na hai.Aa jayega.Aur phir baji bhi toh hai na uske saath."Aayi sahib opens her eyes and loks towards the source of the sound.The woman who spoke this is the beautiful and calculative Kalawati aka Kalataayi.Dressed in a beautiful net and heavy work sari,Kala is a sight to behold."Aayi!!"shouts Baji.." hum aa gaye'"comes a cheerful voice.Aayi sahib and Kala look at the doorway and find baji and Dutta standing on the doorway.Baji is smiling and Dutta has a subtle expression on his face."Aa gaye tum log'aayi sahib kitni chinta kar rahi thi tum dono ki.Bhau..tujhe tera kaam pyaara hai yeh janti hu main par aayi ka bhi socha kar'Aur tu Baji..tu toh Bhau ko samay se ghar la sakta hai na'"rattles off Kalawati in mock anger.Baji instantly replies.." Arre taayi ab agar Bhau ko Wadla ke Sagar Kutir mein kuch waqt beetane ka that oh isme main kya karta'"Kala looks at them in a questioning way.Dutta moves away from them and climbs tha stairs to his room.After a few minutes,Aayi sahib comes into his room and seeing Dutta standing beside his open window in a thoughtful mood,she goes upto him and says'"Kitni baar kaha hai tujhe..saare jhuggian ghuma kar par wadala mein sagar kutir nahi'par tu phir bhi waha chala gaya'."Dutta continues to stare out of the window.."Aayi..aaj main wahan se dukhi hokar nahi aaya hu'balki aaj maine itne haseen pal beetaye kuch aise logon ke saath jinke andar na chal hai..na kapat na hi ahenkaar'mujhe accha laga jaankar ki aajkal duniya mein aise log bhi zinda hai'"aayi sahib smiles and says'"Chal phir toh tu bahut thak gaya hoga..raat bahut ho chuki hai abb so ja.."Dutta smiles at his aayi as she leaves his room.

The next morning at Dutta mansion:
"Sunn'agar tujhe dhang se kaam karne nahi aata toh nikal ja yahan se'aur dubara yahan aane ki himmat bhi matt karna samjhi???",shouts leela at a poor maid for spoling her sari by accidently spilling chutney on it."Dekh taayi iss ghar ki naukaro ki aukaad kitni bhad gayi hai..ankhen dikha rahe hai mujhe'chal nikal yaha se" Kalawati smiles and says:"Aaram se leela..sabko nikal degi toh kahi yeh na ho ki ghar ka saara kaam tujhe hi karna pade..hir inn sundar sundar haathon mein kahi chale na pad jaaye.."Leela scowls and says"Aayi sahib..aaj se inn sab kaam choro ki chuthi'main nhai janti..koi nayi naukrani dhundiye iss ghar ke liye..inn logon net oh jeena haram kar rakha hai'"Aayi sahib is perplexed and says.."Aayi jagdambs..ab tu hi satbuddhi de isko'Bajiiiiii aye bajiii'"Baji comes running down from Bhau's room,almost slips and says.."Kaye zala aayi??Kya baat hai.."Aayi sahib says'"Teri leela taayi ki iccha hai ki iss ghar ke liye naaye naukar dhunde jaaye'ja kisi achi si,saaf si bai dhund ke la.."Baji scratches his head and says"Abhi laya na aayi..abhi jata hai main'"Saying so he rushes out of the house with car and heads out for the hunt.

SCENE 2
At Sagar Kutir:
As baji reaches the sagir kutir,he immediately starts hunting for the perfect maid for the Dutta mansion.He asks a lady.."aye sunn..yahan koi aurat kaam ki khoj mein hai kya??"The woman replies.."Haan saab ek hai..Babi naam hai uska..yahi durse ghar mein rehti woh'"Baji goes upto Naku's home and taps on the old wooden door.Babi opens the door and looks astonished to see a stranger at door..she hesitates and she asks baji to come in.Baji steps in and says"Tujeh kaam ki zarurat hai na??Toh chal aaj se tu Dutta ke ghar mein kaam karegi..janti hai na Dutta ko..nahi bhi jani hai toh sunn le ki who iss basti ke liye bhagwan saman hai..uski sewa karne ka mauka mila hai.aaj se tu usi ke ghar rahegi..samjhi?" Babi replies"Saab apka hokum saar ankhon par'par app yeh bhi dekho na ki mera bhi aona parivaar rehta hai yahan'inko chodd ke kaha jayegi main..aap hi batao.."after much thinking,Baji decides and says:"Theek hai toh tu aur tera pura parivaar aaj se Dutta Bhau ke ghar rahega..samjhi?/chal utha apna boriya-bistara.Mian le jaane aaya hut um logon ko."Ganpat smiles viciously and says immediately :"Haan haan chalo chalo..aye Naku,sethji jaldi jaldi samaan rakh..chalte hai saab chalo chalo.."Saying so,the whole family gathers their belongings and moves out of the house alongwith Baji and sit in his jeep.They finally rach the Dutta mansion.Ganpat is ecstatic,Babi is happy that she has got work and Naku and Sethji think what new adventures await them at the huge mansion.Naku and family enter the huge mansion timidly afraid to touch anything lest they break it.aayi sahib,Kala and sisters are in the main room waiting for them.Baji introduces them to the members.Aayi sahb takes an instant liking for the family,but the sinster sisters are still wary.Kala orders them.."Jao aur pura ghar dekhlo ek baar.Ghar ka kona-kona yaad rehna chahiye tum logon ko taki koi galti na ho."Babi nods her head and says.."Main seedhe rasoi jaati'Naku aur sethji..tum dono jao aur pura ghar acche se dekh lo..samjh gaye..aur tu ganpat jakar hamara karma dekh le aur samaan rakh de.Everyone sets to work.Naku and Sethji wander off on their own inn the house.Naku stops in front of Dutta's room trying to mak her mind whether to enter or not.On an impulse,she opens the door and comes face to face again with Dutta'.


Link to the next episode----EPISODE 4----Page 5 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1402390&TPN=5


Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago
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PRECAP:Their second meeting is going to be even more interesting i promise!!! 😉
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