Saiyaan short ff Part 4- Pg 6- the end-

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Hello everybody!!!

Well this is a future Tasha fanfic please let me know how it was:

Dutta Bhao the famous don stared at the dry sky as tears of pain trickled down his eyes, the girl he loved the most had left him because of his rudeness and he had finally realized that she wasn't guilty.

"Bhao nakku ka pata chal gaya hai" Baji said from behind "voh apne parivar ke saath Mumbai ke ek basti mein hai…… taplu bola ki uss basti ka naam sagar kutir hai"

"baji tu bas mujhe yeh bata ki main kab nakku se mil sakta hoon" dutta asked

bhao ek baar taplu saari baatien bata de phir hum chalte hai na baji stammered

baji yeh 3 mahino mein 4 baar hai jab tujhe nakku naam ki koi ladki mili hai, per unn sab main se koi bhi meri nakku nahi hai dutta roared in anger and baji's phone rang haan taplu bol…….. accha tu sure hai na……….theek hai tu nazar rakh hum aate hain baji spoke to dutta bhao voh humari nakku hi hai dutta closed his eyes in happiness and thought "main aa raha hoon nakku apni saari galtiyon ki maafi mangne

At sagar Kutir and girl woke up from her nightmare screaming maa her white face had become pale due to fear her mother who was sleeping beside her consoled her kya hua nakku phir se vohi sapna…..meri bacchi bhool ja usko voh ek janwar tha nakusha sobbed in her mother's arms mere saath aisa kyun hua maa nakusha sobbed

"bhool ja nakku hum uss dutta bhao ki paunch se bahut door aa chuke hain apni vohi purani basti main aur waise bhi dutta bhao tujhe kabhi bhi nahi pechaan sakta… bhool ja meri bacchi bhool ja aur in dono halkat ki tarah soo jaa" she pointed towards her husband and son nakusha laid down her head on her mother's lap and went to sleep.

Dutta and Baji immediately started towards Mumbai they drove for the whole night to reach Mumbai before the sun would rise so that first thing in the morning he would see the face of the girl he was madly in love with, once he would meet her he would ask for her forgiveness and then things would be the way she always wanted.

Nakusha woke up early in the morning she cleaned her house and helped babi in making tiffins and left for the friends place who was getting married in a week's time "deepa aaj hum saman kharedne chalte hain kya kehti hai" nakusha asked her friend

"nakku main abhi maa ko bol ker aati hai" deepa said enthusiastically, "main bhi" nakku walked out of deepa's house, she reached her house and found babi and ganpat had already left for delivering the tiffins and sethji was busy playing with his friends.

Dutta's car stopped in front of nakku's basti "baho chalo" baji said, Taplu was already waiting for dutta to arrive so that he could guide him to nakusha's house, dutta and baji approached towards nakku's house and saw nakku locking the doors

"suniyeh.." baji called and nakusha turned towards facing dutta, baji and taplu she was scared that very minute she immediately held the door for her support "suniyeh aap nakusha ko jaante ho" baji asked politely, nakusha in fear stared directly into dutta's eyes and dutta stared back as if he had already identified those eyes. Just then deepa came by "nakku" deepa called "chal aaye ne haan ker di hai" deepa said and passed baji and dutta and stood beside her "yeh log kaun hai" she looked at baji and dutta

"pata nahi" nakku stammered in fear

"nakku" dutta looked at nakusha in confusion

"haan nakku.." deepa said "yeh nakku hai mera matlab nakusha" deepa said "accha nakku main abhi aati hai haan" deepa left the place immediately

"aapka naam nakusha hai …. Mujhe maaf ker dijiyeh main yahan apni patni nakusha ko dhoondte hue aaya tha and voh aap nahi hain" dutta was once again disheartened

Nakusha breathed relief her mother was right dutta would never recognise her in her true form, but her luck wasn't that good even before dutta and baji could leave sethji her younger brother came charging "tai… tu deepa tai ke saath ja main uss jadiya ke saath chowk tak jarela hai" sethji said

Baji and dutta recognised sethji and looked at nakku in utter confusion "tai tujhe kya hua… voh dutta ka bhoot dekh liya kya phir se" sethji continued to speak "tu daar mat tai bhao net era asli roop kabhi nahi dekha voh toh yeh sapne mai bhi nahi soch sakta ki tu aise dikhti hai…. Accha tai main jaat hai haan voh jadiya bula raha hai" sethji left and nakusha looked at dutta once again his eyes showed clear anger, the anger which she had faced for six long months.


this is my first attempt in this forum please let me know how it was

love
apra:-)
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skavitha08 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW it is real good yaar i loved it pls update soon ur point of start is so different n fresh ............. 👏 👏
well i myself joined recently to this forum but never saw u b4 welcome to LTL forum 😃
Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 really gud-just luved it! continue fast i want to see duttas reaction!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice apra...btw one point here...in the starting when baji tells dutta they have found naku its not like dutta to stand and wait. dutta wud simply start off to go off to mumbai.
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very good..........waiting for the update
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Really nice 👏,, BUT, it would take dutta only 1 attempt to find her,, four times,😕 means dutta is losing his Bhao giri touch,😆, pls cont,,,

Edited by yoyo2 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoyo2

Really nice 👏,, BUT, it would take dutta only 1 attempt to find her,, four times,😕 means dutta is losing his Bhao giri touch,😆, pls cont,,,



and bhau ASKING baji when he can meet Naku? He wud have prolly gone charging to Mumabi immediately 😆
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hey apra welcome to the forum
really love your story...ur start so differeent..love it
hope you continue soon
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keep it up its really good
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome. Loved it. Dutta angry again.

Edited by sinak - 15 years ago

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