Saiyaan short ff Part 4- Pg 6- the end- - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Welcum 2 the forum Apra ..
awesum start u hav made here ..
continue sooon ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Apra,

Loved it. Can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello apra...welcum!!!..
well ur first FF is really fantastic..!!!bilkul hatke tha.. :D..loved it..plz update soon... 😃 😃
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FF was great waiting for next update continue fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiiiiii apra..............very gud start yar...........waiting for ur next update😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 2

Deepa suddenly barged into the scene again "nakku chal na dekh aaye ne mujhe chudiyon ke liye bhi paise diye hai" she looked at a scared nakusha and shook her "nakku kya hua tujhe" nakusha began to sweat "kuch nahi deepa" and then deepa looked at dutta and baji "arre aap log abhi gaye nahi humne kaha na yahan aapki nakusha nahi rehti…chal nakku"deepa grabbed nakku's hand and walked past dutta, nakusha kept walking while looking back at dutta she could see the pain in his eyes but she could not understand why were those eyes which were always filled with anger were in pain now and that too when he had crossed very limit in his anger.

*** Flashback***

"Nakusha" dutta screamed on top of his lungs, nakku flinched in fear "ji saab" she said slowly "meri sharaab kahan hai" dutta screamed and nakku silently set his bear bottles in front of him "ab glass mein kya tera baap dalega" dutta roared nakku silently served him, dutta gobbled the glass of neat whiskey shots after shots. Then he went towards his bed and looked at nakusha, nakku silently opened the bedroom back door and called neetu the so called mistress of dutta inside, and she herself went out in the balcony to sleep.

Even though nakku was extremely hurt by dutta's attitude which was hell bent on treating nakku like a servent but yet she had never given up on dutta and dutta was himself surprised by this nature of nakku.

Days became months and six months passed like hell for nakusha, were she had seen the dirty side of dutta life and profession and one day nakusha finally gave up and that was the day when dutta finally tried to physically abuse her and force himself on her, that was the day nakusha ran away from dutta's clutches. Later dutta discovered that the whole supriya ran away fiasco was not done by nakusha but was planned by his own step mother that was when dutta disabandoned his whole step family and quit his business, he decided to settle in shridi along with his best friend baji and he set up a small glass works factory there and earned a decent living with it.

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Nakusha walked with deepa when some chawl people teased them "hai mera chamakchallo kahan ja rahi ho" nakusha and deepa ignored their taunts and continued walking

"aaye hai janeman kabhi humare saath bhi ghoomne chala karo" even before the boy could pass another comment "bang" came a hand and punched his face the chawl people got tensed and stood up, nakku and deepa stopped and looked behind to find and angry dutta beating the shit out of the man who passed comments on them.

Nakku looked at dutta and baji terrified and immediately approached them to stop them from creating a scene "baji saab ko rok" she looked at baji who was also witnessing the scene

"nakku tu yedi hai kya yeh tujhe jo mann mein aaye voh bolega aur hum kuch nahi karege" baji said "bhao jo ker raha hai theek ker raha hai"

"dekh baji mujhe yahan koi tamasha nahi chaiyeh" nakku pleaded, but baji seemed to have ignored her pleadings.

love

apra
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG
cant believe dutta..but still you are going great...hope you update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh my my...it was fab!!!... 😃....greart part!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very goooooood ................keep it up ........adn waiting for the next part

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