New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely part Swati ...
so Dutta finally realizing .....!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey dibs...great part
finally dutta knows heis in love...we will see how he will be able to stay far from naku
update soon hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks shabz n marie........... @marie......dutta will try to be away from naku.......i hav already decided how to make them together...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it swati...waiting 4 ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one yaar
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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swati ur FF is very gud 👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part dibya! sorry i missed commenting earlier...needed some time to catch up in the last 2 parts.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshreya2002

nice part dibya! sorry i missed commenting earlier...needed some time to catch up in the last 2 parts.

thanks shreya.........glad u liked it.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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guys......i know u all r missing LTL......so i thought of u giving a weekend update.... {guys....this may not be so good as other one.....as i can thousand's of page on tasha scenes......but not so good as potraying other character.......plz excuse if this is not good as other one}

Here's the next part..........

PART-6

Dutta: Tayi.....woh tumhari vaini nahi hai...woh ek dhokebaaj hai.....

Everybody looks at dutta with shocked expression.....
Aai sahib: (worried)
yeh kya kah raha hai beta.....
Dutta: han....aayi......mein sahi kah raha hoon........
Dutta tells everyone what happened last night and also about how he was keeping a watch on her.......kala was tensed to know dutta always knew about sups.....she is afraid if dutta knows about her too.....roops n leela are sweating n giving each other worried glance.....then kala slowly speaks......

Kala: bhau, to tujhe kaise pata chala ki who dhokebaaj hai....... Dutta: tayi...woh maine unhe chat par dekha tha......

Then he says how he had caught them hugging each other in roof on sangeet day......
Dutta: unka plan to mandir se bhagnne ka tha.....par......
Kala: (looking tensed)...par kya bhau.....
Dutta: pata nahin.....kyun nahi bhage....lagta hai naku ko dekhliya tha isliye.....
Kala is relieved to here dutta dnt know about her....aai with teary eyes speaks.......
Aai sahib: jagdamba jagdamba.......hamare bete ke saath aisa kyun hota hai......
(looking at dutta) dutta....mujhe maaf karde...hamari hi galti hai.....hum hi bina jane supriya ko laaye.....
Dutta: nahi aai....teri galti nahi hai.....galat to woh supriya thi......jo tere aur sabki bhavnao ka majak banaya.....
Kala speaks with a concerned voice......
Kala: bhau....tu phikar na kar....tere liye hum supriya se achhi layenge....teri behnein hai na......
Dutta: nahin tai.....ab aur nahin.....
Then naku brings food from kitchen.....she serves all n when she is going to serve dutta.......dutta speaks....
Dutta: mujhe bhuk nahin hai....
(then looks at aai and speaks)....aai......me aato.......
Aai nods head with agreement......then dutta stands up n looks at baaji.......goes out n baaji follows.....here naku is confused of dutta's behavior......she doesn't understand why he's behaving like this......last night he was fine.....n now suddenly....he is indifferent to her......she picks up the tray n goes to kitchen to help babi.....
Here baaji tries to talk to dutta but dutta dnt allow him to speak.....baaji is also worried whats wrong with dutta...he seems lost.....n he's behaving oddly with naku........
Here in patil mansion..the three sis are in kala's room.......celebrating their success........
Leela: kamal hogaya na tayi....jo hum chahte the aisa hi hua.......
Kala: kalavati kuchh soche......waisa ho na yeh kabhi ho sakta hai...
Roops: par tayi......mein to dar gayi thi....kahin bhau sups ke saath hum tino ka sach to nahi jaanta.....
Kala: janega kaise.....bhau ke aankhon par to apne behnon ke pyaar ka pati padi hai.....
Roops: so cute na tayi.........
Leela: jo bhi kaho tai......plan to achha tha.....
Kala: hoga kaise nahin kalavati ka jo tha.......tum dekhna ab.....bhau ke jindagi koi ladki nahin aayegi.....usse ab kisise pyaar nahin hoga {sorry kala dutta ko pyaar already ho gaya hai} ......bas tum aisa hi karna jaisa mein kahoon.....
Leela: hamein karna kya hoga tayi........
Kala: kuchh nahin.....bas itna karna hai.......bhau ko yeh dhoka hamesha yaad dilana hai......taki who phirse kabhi kisi ladki ko mouka na de......bichara bhau......na bura samajhta hi na bhala......ab apni behnon ko kaise samjhega.....
And they laugh out loud......
Dutta n baaji remain away from house for work whole day.....here in patil mansion naku spent her day doing kitchen chores.....but her thoughts are still stuck in dutta's behaviour.....
Precap
- baaji tries to confront dutta.......

Baaji: tu aisa kyun kar raha hai bhau.......

Dutta: tu nahin samjhega baaji......

Baaji: me kyun nahin samjhega bhau.....bhau tu....ekbaar batake to dekh.....

kaisa laga?
Guys.....i need ur ideas......i want to reveal naku's beauty before more's entry.......plz suggest something........

Edited by swati2008 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmm....reallly good sweetie keep it up...
i have a idea maybe its not too good....
nakku can bring dutta chai and he's angrey caz she enters the room...he push her and the chai fells on her hand....dutta is shocked whta he did and take nakkus hand and take it under the cold water then the color goes away an dutta see this....
hope i can help u....
but loved it keep it up

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