New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
hey will comment once m done with all parts



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Wow that was too good yaar dutta loves nakku nakku loves dutta but dutta thinks hez not good
for her 😲 despite her looks he shud think he will b givin her a very good n safe life really swati apna dutta gadha hai par kya haesha gadha rahega uff thank god baji is on his side ......hey i have a very good plot for reveletion of nakku's beauty shall i pm it to u

n this is for u ⭐️ 👏

Update next part soon i want dutta to now go to nakku wen she in garden all teary eyed wen dutta tries to talk to her n starts getting close to her even without realising wat hez doing coz he saw nakku crying n want to go n consol her nakku shud break down in his arms n dutta comforting her .........oh me go wat am i doing sorry swati me not realising like dutta that this not my ff 😆

yaar swati tere ff se tho feeling aagayi yaar aage kitne acche acche TaSha scene hosakthe hain WOW 😍 good goin ................ 👍🏼
Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
good part dibya...but no idea abt the color...maybe naku can reveal herself.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Aamirlover

hmmm....reallly good sweetie keep it up...

i have a idea maybe its not too good....
nakku can bring dutta chai and he's angrey caz she enters the room...he push her and the chai fells on her hand....dutta is shocked whta he did and take nakkus hand and take it under the cold water then the color goes away an dutta see this....
hope i can help u....
but loved it keep it up

thanks naina..........nice idea........but dutta is in love with naku.......he pretends to be angry not really angry..........so he'll never hurt naku..........neways thanks u thought about it............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: skavitha08

hey will comment once m done with all parts

*reserved*

its ok dear...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

good part dibya...but no idea abt the color...maybe naku can reveal herself.

thanks shreya......glad u liked this part too.......neways naku can't reveal herself.........dutta needs a bahana to avoid naku n her color will be a bahana...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
very very nice plzzzzzzzzzz
update jaldi update karo.
plz pm me whn u update..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sweetie pls update karo na....
iam waiting for so long PLS!!!😛
xo xo Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: skavitha08

hey will comment once m done with all parts



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Wow that was too good yaar dutta loves nakku nakku loves dutta but dutta thinks hez not good
for her 😲 despite her looks he shud think he will b givin her a very good n safe life really swati apna dutta gadha hai par kya haesha gadha rahega uff thank god baji is on his side ......hey i have a very good plot for reveletion of nakku's beauty shall i pm it to u

n this is for u ⭐️ 👏

Update next part soon i want dutta to now go to nakku wen she in garden all teary eyed wen dutta tries to talk to her n starts getting close to her even without realising wat hez doing coz he saw nakku crying n want to go n consol her nakku shud break down in his arms n dutta comforting her .........oh me go wat am i doing sorry swati me not realising like dutta that this not my ff 😆

yaar swati tere ff se tho feeling aagayi yaar aage kitne acche acche TaSha scene hosakthe hain WOW 😍 good goin ................ 👍🏼

wow kavi......kya scene hai.......i'll definately use this in my next part...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dibs...read all the parts and really enjoyed it
hope u are planning to update real soon..cant wait to see how dutta try to avoid nakusha lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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First of all........sorry guys.......i kept u all waiting for so long.........actually my download limit had been crossed........so net got disconnected..........but now i m back.........the first thing i m doing updating the ff..........hope u all like this part too............

So here it goes.............

Part 7

Dutta spends whole day out for work.......usually Baaji used to look on all those stuffs.......but Dutta doing it himself as he needs something to divert his thoughts from Naku.......Baaji is confused n worried as he could not understand Dutta's behavior.......he tries to speak but Dutta doesn't give him any chance.......

Here in Patil Mansion.....Naku still confused over Dutta's behavior.....she spends whole day helping Babi.......but her thoughts are still on Dutta........

This happens for quite some days........Dutta keeps ignoring Naku n Naku confused at Dutta's behavior......then one day........

Dutta n Baaji comes back late at night.....all have gone to sleep......but Naku still awake......waiting for them........

Naku: aap dono aagaye......me khana lagati hai........

Dutta doesn't reply n moves straight to his room......ignoring Naku........Baaji n Naku exchanges gaze.....n Baaji goes to Naku......

Naku: Baaji........sahib ko kya hua hai.....unhone kayin dinon se mujhse baat nahi ki........

Baaji: pata nahi Naku......mereko bhi kuchh samajh mein nahi aaraha hai.......par tu phikar mat kar.....me bhau se baat karega.......

Naku: me tere liye khana lagadu.........

Baaji: haan........

Baaji assures Naku that he'll speak to Dutta.......but he himself is worried of his behavior.....Naku serves for Baaji........Baaji takes his food n goes to his room......Naku finishes rest of her chores n goes to her rooms......Naku could not sleep.......she feels very sad that Dutta is ignoring her.....she feels Dutta thinks her guilty as she pushed him towards Sups.....she feels very sad n tries to sleep......here in Dutta's room his condition is no different......he feels very guilty for behaving like this with Naku......from deep in heart he wanted to hug Naku tightly n say he loves him......he assures himself.......he's doing this for Naku's good as he doesn't deserve him........in Baaji's room.......Baaji still thinking about Dutta's behavior......he could not understand why Dutta is behaving so strangely.......he decides to speak to Dutta next morning at any cost.......

Next morning Naku wakes up at her usual time n attends her daily chores......she makes tea......after what is happening from last some days.......she is confused whether to go to Dutta's room or not......then she decides to go n picks up the tray......here in Dutta's room......he wakes up n finishes his daily chores n attends to a file......Naku enters with the tray n puts the tray on the table.....tries to go outside the room......Dutta notices Naku n asks.....

Dutta: maine tereko kaha tha na.....mere liye chai nahi laana.......phir kyun layi.........

Naku: (indifferent to his behavior) par aapne kal se kuchh bhi nahi khaya......me naasta laga rahi hai...... (he tries to go but Dutta stops him and says)

Dutta: mujhe bhuk nahi hai.......

Naku: sahib.......aap aagar mujhse naraaj hai.......me aapko kuchh nahi bolegi.......par aap apne aap ko takleef mat do.......

Naku walks out of the room.......Dutta feels very sad as he watches her going.....at the meantime Baaji enters the room n hears tasha convo....he feels very bad for Naku??Naku n Baaji exchanges looks.......n Naku goes out while Baaji goes to Dutta n speaks........

Baaji: bhau......tujhe kya hogaya hai.......

Dutta: Kyun.....ab kya kardiya maine........

Baaji: bhau.......tu Naku ke saath yeh sab.......par kyun........Naku se koi galti hogayi......to mere ko batao......pata hai thodi edi hai......usne aisa kiya hai bhau.....aap usse itna naraaj ho.........

Dutta: me usese naraaj nahi hai.........

Baaji: to tu uske saath aisa kyun kar raha hai bhau........tu usse baat nahi karta........

Dutta: tu nahi samjhega Baaji........

Baaji: kyun nahi samjhega bhau......ekbaar batake to dekh......aisa kaunsa dard hai.......jo tujhe itna pareshan kar raha.......bachpan se tune apni har baat mujhe bataya.....phir yeh kyun nahi.........

Dutta: nahi Baaji.....isbaar nahi bata sakta........chal hamara meeting hai aaj........

Then he moves out n Baaji looks........

Baaji: (to himself) jo bhi ho bhau......pata to me laga ke rahega maazra kya hai......tu bataye ya na bataye......

Dutta n Baaji enter the dinning hall.....and greet everyone.......Aai sahib asks dutta for breakfast......but Dutta dismisses noticing Naku......n goes out.......Baaji n Naku sadly watches Dutta going.......then Baaji too follows him.......

Kala is noticing this from quite somedays.......she has realized Dutta is ignoring Naku.....she feels amused as she thinks her plan succeeded.......n speaks to herself........

Kala: bichari Nakusha.......na bhala samajhti hai na bura......ab kalavati ko kaise samjhegi........dekha mera kamaal.......ab bhau kabhi kisi aurat par bharosa nahi karega........bhale woh uski sabse badi subh chintak Nakusha kyun nahi..........

Unless Kalavati knows........Dutta not only trusts Naku but also loves her.......n she will be soon getting biggest shock of her life..........

Pre-Naku's true beauty revealed to Dutta.......

kaisa laga???
Edited by swati2008 - 15 years ago

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