New FF: The Reality of Dreams Ch8 pg31 Jan 9

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

awesome part jaz........naku started her bhasans.......liked how he touched dutta's heart.......lagta hai ab dutta ko akal aajayegi......n that payal falling scene was so scene......remembered cinderella leaving her silver shoes.......is dutta going to find her cinderella with the help of the payal.......update soon.......so excited.........

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441240

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

oh my good god .......your here toooo????

Will come back and read this next week....

right now got tons of revision to do....

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@IrikaLovesKMH

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

OMG!!!THat was awesome jazz...plzz jaldi se update karoo...yaar

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jani-yeh

@jani-yeh

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Whoa-K Jaz....got2 say that was wivout a doubt worth the w8...😉

2 gud...👏👏👏...

the whole Naku changing & dancing in the garden n then Dutta c'in her was awesum...😳...Dutta holdin on2 Naku's payal...nice touch n soooooooooo cute...😳...Baji n Dutta are also 2 funny in ur FF...the way they talk 2 each other is jus lyk u wud c em doin in LTL...😆😆...

hope Dutta starts being nicer 2 Aayi...she seems 2 care 4 him......

cnt w8 4 the next part...i knw ur lyk doin tons of stuff...

lyk LTL xpress,CR other FF's n plenty of other things 2...but plz plz do upd8 soon...or i will b lyk the curious cat that died...😆🤣...

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flowergirl_O

@flowergirl_O

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

hi fuppi...loved the update but ill give a good comment later because mom said computer only 2 hours so i spent most of it catching up other shows...tommmorow i promise i'll comment

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sana

@sana786a

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

😲😲😲😲omg jaz u knw wat i cant begin 2 describe how gud dat was 👏👏👏👏ur 2 gud awesum honestly i was waiting 4 ages and ages 4 u 2 update dis ff and finally u did knw i want 2 read more please please can u update asap😃and knw u mite be thinking im odd i luv dis story it reminds me of a lnger version of cinderella and i loved da part where u wrote about da payal instead of da glass slipper kinda like desi style luved it god ur 2 gud🤗and also im tempted 2 print all dis ff and staple it up 2 make it into a book since im a bookaholic 🤣

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nsb416

@nsb416

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

"Maa toh maa hoti hai". Sigh, I miss my mom.

Very nicely written Jnawaz! I enjoyed how Dutta caught Naku dancing and he has her payal 😛 Wonder when she will get it back and how.

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Hi Jaz…

OMG… I been busy so couldn't read all the FF =( .. and finally got round to reading your FF's last night =) and wah.. I loveeeeeeeed it Jaz..
Its so just amazing..

Mee picking out bits now (Hope you don't mind).. TaSha in the study and Naku describing her relationship with her father as though she talking about someone else was so touching and the way you wrote the emotions was just laajjawab.

Surpiya doreh darling on Dutta but then running away from him cos of his lie about action movies and documentaries.. Lol.. Really amazing.. =)

TaSha convo over material things and Naku's likes.. Sweeeet scene.. Again really loved the way you described her innocence and simplicity.

Naku dancing and Dutta comes.. =) One of my fave parts.. I like how she changed to her normal roop as she has in the drama many times and how the outfit her father gave held so much importance..
Dutta coming and getting a glimpse.. Was like OMG moment thinking will he know its her..

The scene with BaiTaSha in the study.. Firstly the teddy bear and ji-ji.. I was laughing so much where you put Baiji telling Naku not to call him Jiji and again when Supriya calls Dutta "Duttaji" and Baiji laughing..

Last but not least BaiTaSha and the food scene in the study.. =) the bashaan Naku gave Dutta was really moving and had mee in tears with your maa dialogue..

Really love your FF's Jaz..

Do Update Soon as I really can't wait to read more.. Its like a novel you can't put down and want to carry on reading.. Just really brilliant.. =)

-Sanju-