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iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

aarrreeee i saidd shabzieee- kiii wo khuuddd kii taraaff meiinn expertt haii

;D:D

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sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Okkiie ..hav a blast wid sudharshan ..!😆😆

u mean dutta 😆 see ya n stop saying sudharshan please he creeps me out

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

yeshhh meriiii sanaa njyyy widdd sudd jhiijjhhss

:P:P

sanan

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: shabaza786
u mean dutta 😆 see ya n stop saying sudharshan please he creeps me out

No i mean wat i wrote ...!😆

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Faz

@maybe-just

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

So who's writing the rain scene then?? 😕

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: maybe-just
So who's writing the rain scene then?? 😕

U do it ...!😉

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Payal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Okkiee ..here is my part ..!
Payal luk i updated it ....kya karein got scared of u cuming in my dreamz to scare me ..!
Hope u all like my little koshish ..!

& one more thing ..i m continuing it 4rm where Payal left on pg 1 ..!

Naku & Dutta share a little eyelock ..
Naku is breathing heavily ..little drops of sweat can b seen on her forehead ..
a strand of hair cums across her face ...
Dutta justs get a sudden urge to touch it ...
But b4 he tries just then Baaji cums..
& they sort of cum in their senses ..
Dutta leaves 4rm there to his room...& then Naku notices sum blood on Dutta clothes ..she gets worried ..
She asks Baaji bout it ..Baaji sayz nothing to worry ...He asks her to take first aid to him & apply it ..
he has sum urgent work to attend so he leaves ..!

Naku takes the first aid box to dutta rrom ..
Dutta is standing in frnt of the mirror ....he has taken off his shirt 😍😍..& is luking at the cut on his arm ..
Naku knocks at the door ..She lowers her eyes ...embarrassed to see him in Vest ..😳
Dutta sits on the edge of the bed .. luks at her & asks her wat is it ..!
She shows him the aid box & goes inside ...
he sayz dat he is all rite & doesn't need it ...
but she doesn't pay heed to him & starts cleaning the wound ..
Dutta staring at her face ..the hair strand again troubling her ...
Dutta slowly removes it places it bhind her ear ..
Naku gets startled ...her fingers shaking a little bit while doin his bandage...
She hurriedly does it & gets up to go ...just then Dutta pulls her hand & she falls on him ..!
They stare at each other ...& can only hear the their heartbeats ..!☺️☺️

I knw its not good ....but still i tried ..😳!

OMG, you said your not good!! your such a liar, im soo glad i thamkified you, we got to see your awesome writing!! i loved that part Shabzz...you need to write more often! ^_^

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

OMG, you said your not good!! your such a liar, im soo glad i thamkified you, we got to see your awesome writing!! i loved that part Shabzz...you need to write more often! ^_^

Thanx ...but i don think its dat gr8 ..!

& maine ye aapke nightmare se bachchne k liye likha ..!😆😆