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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
so sweet part👏
lakshya is very sweet😳😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
it was awsome yaar....i hope her show will succed and hope to see some more romantic scenes soon.....loved the Thode Badmaash Scene from the part.....well done as always.....i don't need to say much as you already know i love whatever you come up with.....Cont. soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
awwww.. he is soooo sweet and caring.. he gave her a massage and courage.. and loved the short yet cute convo with mom dadi and sis.. too cute.. it was an adorable update.. thanks so much for the pm.. i hope you update again soon.. cant wait to read more.. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 18

{{RECAP:Kt and Manthan are busy with their preparations for the fashion show...Kt comes home tired..Laksh gives Kt a head massage to cure her head ache..Kt comes to Laksh's room at night before going to bed because she is nervous about the fashion show on the next day..Laksh consoles her...}}

It was 7 a.m in the morning...Laksh was lying fast asleep on his bed in his room..He was dreaming...In the dream he saw a familiar temple...The holy deity of Lord Krishna was adorned with beautiful flower garlands..And a girl stood in front of the idol and was praying..But he couldn't see her face since she was facing the idol and it was as if he was watching her from behind..She was wearing a salwar kameez...He noticed her long beautiful hair which was glazing in the sunlight..As he kept looking at her instead of the Lord, she finished her prayer and turned back...It was Kt...She was looking really different with the long hair...He liked her very much...Then somebody called her..."KRISHNAA..."

Laksh opened his eyes, startled at the disturbance and found himself on the bed...He sat up and stretched himself...Then he went into the washroom..He stood in front of the mirror at the wash basin and stared into his sleepy face..He opened the tap and splashed the water on his face and washed it well..Again he stared into the mirror..Then he remembered the dream which he saw only moments ago...He thought "Kt with a long hair!!"( smiles) "Anyways she looks more beautiful with long hair"

After brushing his teeth and freshening up, when he walked out of the washroom, he saw Kt sitting on his bed..He was surprised to see her dressed up and all ready to go to office..

L:Arre Kt..!

K:(smiles)Goodmorning Laksh...

L:(smiles)Goodmorning..Par tum abhi office jaa rahi ho..?(comes and sits on the bed near her)

K:Haan..Aaj humara show hain na..Uski tayaariyan karni hain..After having breakfast, I will go..

L:Ok..(suddenly remembers the dream)Pata hain Kt..Maine aaj subah utne se pehle tumhara sapna dekha..

K:(excited)Acha..?Kya dekha tumne..?Subah subah dekha sapna humesha sach ho jaata hain..

L:Sapne mein na...Tum ek mandir mein pray kar rahi thi..Aur pata hain..Mumbai ke ek Thakhur ji ki mandir thi woh..ShantiNiketan ke paas hi hain woh mandir..Hum log humesha jaate hain wahan..

K:Acha..?

L:Haan..Aur sabse ajeeb baat yeh thi ki tumhari baal bahut lambi thi...(smiles)Par tum lambe baalon mein bahut achi lag rahi thi..

K:What?!!No way..Toh yeh sapna kabhi sach nahin ho sakta..

L:(frowns)Kyun Kt..?I like girls with long hair..And you were looking very beautiful with that long hair..

K:Laksh..Tumhe kya ho gaya hain..?(gets up)Dekho..Breakfast karna hain na tumhe..Jaldi aajaao..Its already 7.25...

L:Teek hain baba..

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Silhouettes Fashion House,Fashion Show Ramp:

The Fashion Show was going on..The audience included correspondants from the various Garment companies, well known Designers and also the correspondants from the Press and other Media..

Kt and Manthan were busy in the dressing room..Their show was going to be the next one and it was the final show..All the other designers had finished with their shows..Now it was Manthan's turn to showcase his collection..

One by one his models went out to the stage and walked along the ramp..

M:Kt, since we have finished dressing up theses models we can be at the back stage and watch the show from there..

K:Ok..

And so Kt and Manthan moved to the backstage and peeped to the ramp..They were so happy to see the reactions of the audience when the models appeared on the stage wearing their costumes one by one..

K:(smiling)Manthan, see their faces..I think our collection is going to be a great success!!

M:(smiling)Yeah!!I hope so..

After the last model walked away from the stage, all the models walked the stage in a line and came back as a part of the final round..

Announcement : And now the Designer of this collection, Mr.Manthan Mishra...

Manthan walked into the stage holding the hand of a model (who was wearing the best dress in his collection)...The audience welcomed him with a huge round of applause and Manthan was happy beyond limits...He walked to the front of the ramp and thanked them all by bowing and he walked back towards the back stage..When he saw Kt who was smiling very happily, he went and hugged her..

M:Kt, We did it..!!

K:Yeah!!

M:(pulling off from the hug)Now, let's go and sit among the audience...The closing ceremony will begin now..

K:Ok..

Manthan and Kt went and sat among the audience..Many people told Manthan that his show was really good..

Mr.Peter Harris, the Managing Director of their Fashion House came to the stage..

P:Good Afternoon everyone..First of all I would like to thank all the Designers and their Juniors for working hard in making our Fashion show a huge success..The Seasonal Collections presented by our Designers have been approved by the correspondants from the various Garment Companies who are present here..

*Applause*

P:(smiles)Our Fashion House has received a lot of orders for the mass production of most of our costumes which were showcased in the show..The designer, whose designs have got the maximum number of orders will be presented with the "BEST DESIGNER OF THE SEASON" award..

*Applause*

P:And this season's "Best Designer" award goes to...

Manthan and Kt waited anxiously...

P:..Mr.Manthan Mishra...(smiles)

Manthan and Kt were so happy..It was the first time that Manthan got a Best Designer award..As Manthan stood up, he was greeted by a huge round of applause...His eyes were filled with tears of happiness..He walked on to the stage and recieved the prestigious Award from Mr.Peter Harris..Manthan thanked him and he walked to the microphone(MIC)

M:(in the mic)I would like to invite Miss.Krishna Tulsi to the stage..

Kt's eyes were also full of tears of happiness for Manthan...She was surprised and she walked to the stage surrounded by the huge applause..Manthan walked to her, took her hand and walked back to the Mic...

M:(in the mic)Without her help, I would never be able to achieve this award..Thank you Kt..(smiles and hugs her)

K:(smiles)Thank you Manthan...(then in the mic)We have worked really hard to create our collection, and I think God have given us the reward..

The audience stood up and clapped their hands...Manthan and Kt were in seventh heaven as they faced the flashing cameras and the applauding crowd...

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In the evening, Kt asked Laksh to take her to the nearby Vinayaka temple...They reached the temple, in his bike..Both of them got down and walked up the steps..As they reached up, they went and stood in front of the idol of Lord Ganesha and prayed to him with their eyes closed..

K:(in mind)Thank you bhagwan...Aap ne aaj ke show ke liye humaari madat ki...Aap ke wajah se Manthan ko woh award bhi mila..

L:Kt aur Manthan ki madat karne ke liye laakh laakh shukar hain bhagwaan..Thank you..

K:(in mind)Aap humesha Laksh aur uski pariwaar ki raksha karna..Laksh ko humesha khush rakhna..Mere Maa,Papa aur

Sneha di ko bhi humesha aap protect karna..

L:(in mind)Aap Kt aur uske gharwaalon ki raksha karna...Mere Baa,Maa,Papa,Dadu,Dadi aur baaki sab ki raksha karna..

And soon they finished their prayers and got their prasad...

L:Thodi der ke liye yahin par baith-the hain..

K:Haan...

And they went and sat in a corner of the temple..

L:Kt..Tumne kya maanga..?

K:Laksh, hum bhagwaan se jo bhi maangthe hain na, woh kisi se kehna nahin chahiye..

L:Acha, toh woh sirf humare aur bhagwaanji ke secret hain..?

K:Haan..(smiles)

L:Teek hain..Main nahin poonchoonga..

Kt smiled and looked away..Laksh looked at her hair and remembered his dream...Then he shook his head smiling and thought "Kt jaisi bhi ho, bahut sundar hain..!Lambe baal ho ya chote baal...Kt toh Kt hi hain na..."..Kt looked at him and saw him smiling without any reason...

K:Tum kyun hans rahe ho..?

L:(shrugs)Kuch bhi toh nahin..Bas aise hi...

K:(raises her eyes brows)Acha..?

L:Haan baba..(and puts his arms around her and squeezes her cutely)

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When Laksh and Kt reached the villa after sometime, they saw Manthan's car parked there..

L:Arre Kt..Yeh toh Manthan ki gaadi hain na..?

K:Haan..Wohi toh hain..Iska matlab woh andar hain..

Laksh stopped the bike and both of them got down..They walked inside the house and saw Manthan sitting and talking with Shivani in the hall..

Sh:Woh dono aagaye Manthan..

M:(turns and sees them)Hii Kt..Hii Laksh..Main tum donon ka hi intezaar kar raha tha..

L:(claps on Manthan's shoulder)Hey man..Congrats for your award..(sits beside Manthan)

M:Thanks Laksh..(smiles)

K:(sits near Shivani)Manthan..Kya baat hain..?Tumhe humse kuch kaam tha..?

M:Haan..Kal maine ek party rakhi hain ghar mein..Tum sab ko invite karne aaya hoon...

L:Wow!We will surely come..

K:Haan Manthan..(smiles)

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END OF PART 18.....HOPE YOU LIKED IT.....PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS.....THEY TRULY ENCOURAGE ME.....

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS........😊

LOVE YOU ALL,

NAINA........😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
AWWWWW.. this was soooooo cute.. ofcourse manthan won.. that was great.. the mandir scene with lkt was adorable.. both asking and thanking for the same thing.. too cute.. i cant wait to read more.. to see how the story moves fwd.. more romance.. and ofcourse introducing kt to his family and laksh to hers.. that would be soo much fun to read about..
thanks so much for the pm.. will be eagerly waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
amazing part👏
love lakshya kt's scenes👏
can't wait for the party😳😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part please update soon
thanx
xoxo
plus thanx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

PART 19

{{RECAP:Laksh dreams Kt with long hair and he tells Kt about it...Manthan's show becomes a great success and he gets the Best Designer Award..Kt and Laksh goes to the nearby temple to thank God...Manthan invites them to his home for a party...}}

Next day(Sunday) morning, after having breakfast, Laksh was sitting in his room doing some work in his laptop...He was wearing these:

After completing his work, he decided to go and spend some time with Kt...He went up the stairs and knocked on her door..She was in the bathroom at that time and didn't hear him knocking..He tried the door knob and the door opened..He could hear the sound of water from the bathroom as he walked inside, and so he understood that she was bathing..He decided to wait there itself until she came out....He closed the door, went and sat on her bed..

Kt finished her bath...But then Kt understood that she had forgotten to take her bathrobe and so she decided to go out wearing her blue colour towel..She wore the towel around her and opened the door..She walked out of the wash room and she didn't notice Laksh sitting there..

L:(mouth open)..(wanted to call her but no sound came out of his mouth)

She went and stood in front of the mirror as Laksh stared at her from behind..Water was dripping down from her wet hair...He stared at her shoulders and her well-carved legs which were full of tiny water droplets..Suddenly she saw Laksh's reflection in the mirror..She was shocked and she turned back and saw him sitting there with his mouth open...

K:Laksh!!

L:(comes into his senses)Kt..woh main...

K:Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..?Oh no!!(clutches her towel tightly and ran into the bathroom)

L:(stands up, nervously)Kt..Main tumse milne aaya tha..

Kt went inside the bathroom, closed the door half and put her hand out..

K:Ab tum zara mera wardrobe kholo..

L:Err...Ok..

He went and opened the wardrobe..

L:Khola..

K:Ok, ab tum mera bathrobe nikalo

He took out her bath robe

L:Ab..?

K:Idhar laao..Aur mujhe do..

L:Teek hain..(smiles naughtily)

Laksh walked towards the door and held out his empty hand..

L:Lo..

Kt searched for his hand and caught it, but it was empty..

K:Laksh..yeh kya..?Masti mat karo..

L:(smiles)Ok baba..Yeh lo..

And he held out the robe towards her..She caught it..Suddenly he pulled her hand, and she fell over him through the door which flew open...He caught hold of her waist with both hands and both of them fell down to the floor..She was embarrassed when she found herself on top of him in such a condition..She tried to get up but her wet feet slipped and again she landed upon him..When she looked into his eyes, she saw him looking at her with a passionate gaze...She blushed and lowered her eyes..He raised his hand, slipped his palm behind her ear and he rubbed his thumb slowly along her cheek..She cringed at his touch...He slowly moved his hand to her cheek and feathered his thumb across her lips..She shivered and looked into his eyes...He moved his lips towards hers and kissed them slowly....Kt closed her eyes unable to resist the magic in his kiss..

After some time, he took off his lips and looked at her..She had her eyes still closed..

L:Kt..

K:Hmm...(opens her eyes)

L:(suddenly)Kt..Kya kar rahi ho tum..?Utho..Mujhe dard ho raha hain..Dekhne mein tum patli(lean) ho..Par bahut bhaari (high weight) ho..(tries to get up)Uff...

K:(gets annoyed)Kya..?!Yeh tum keh rahe ho..?!(gets up)Besharam..Badmaash kahinka!!(turns away folding her arms across her chest)

L:(gets up laughing)

K:(frowning)Pehle mujhe apne upar giraate ho aur baad mein khud complain karte ho..Jaao..Mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karna..

L:Kt..(holds her both shoulders from behind)

Kt got irritated and pushed her elbow backwards and hit his stomach nicely and moved away..

L:Ouch!!(clutches his stomach with both hands)

Then she bent and took the bathrobe and put it on...After that, she went and took her clothes from the wardrobe and went into the bathroom without even looking at him and then closed the door..

L:(looking at the bathroom door, still clutching his stomach)Uff !!Yeh ladki bhi na...Mazaak bhi nahin samajhti..!(shakes his head)

When his pain subsided he went and sat on her bed..After sometime she opened the bathroom door and walked towards her room door without looking at Laksh..

She was wearing these:

Laksh chuckled seeing her behaviour..But then she opened the room door and went out..

L:Oh no!!Kt kuch zyaada hi naaraaz hain mujhse..Ab toh usse manaana padega..(sighs and raises his eyebrows)

After reaching outside she wanted to giggle but she suppressed the urge..She knew that he would come after her and if he saw her giggling, her game would be up...Laksh came running after her as she climbed down the stairs quickly..

L:Kt...

K:(acted as if she didn't hear)

L:Kt..Suno toh..

K:(without turning back)Mujhe kuch nahin sun na.......

As she reached the hall, Laksh caught up with her and he grabbed her hand..

L:Kt...

K:(stopped, but didn't turn)Kya hain..?(smiled without showing him)Chodo mera haath....(and turned to him with an angry face and looked into his eyes)

L:Main toh sirf mazaak kar raha tha..

K:Acha..?(raises her eyebrows)

L:Haan..(with a helpless face)

This time Kt couldn't hide her amusement and she started to giggle......

K:(giggling)Toh main bhi mazaak kar rahi thi......And it is really funny to see your expression now...(laughs)

L:(irritated)Acha..?Tumhe toh main..!!(and raises his hand as if to hit her)

Kt giggled and tried to run away...But he caught hold of her hand, pulled her towards him and hugged her....She blushed and rested her head on his chest and hugged him back.....Then he pulled off from the hug, took her hand and began to walk towrads his room...

L:Kt...Main tumhe kuch dikhana chahtha hoon...

K:Kya..?

L:Aao toh sahi..(continued walking)

When they reached his room, he closed the door and bolted it.....Kt was wondering what the matter was...After bolting the door he turned and looked at her with a mischievous grin...

L:Tumne kya socha Kt..?Main tumhe itne aasaani se jaane doonga...Mujhe bewakoof banaake...(walks towards her)

K:(nervous)Err...Kya kar rahe ho tum...?(moves backwards)

Laksh continued to walk towards her with a determined look and she backed away from him.....Suddely she hit the wall and stopped.....Laksh caught hold of her hands, raised them and pinned her to the wall.....

K:Laksh....Mujhe jaane do...please..(looked at him helplessly)

L:(smiled naughtily)Acha..?

K:Hmm..(nods her head)

Laksh lowered his face and kissed her throat.....Kt gulped and closed her eyes..He moved his face towards her side neck and gave a soft bite and then kissed there softly....Kt shuddered.....He took off his hands from her hands and moved them down to her waist...Laksh raised his face and looked at her face...

L:Kt......

K:Hmm.....(eyes still closed)

L:Tum humesha aise time par apni aankhein kyun bandh kar leti ho..?

K:(opens her eyes and looks at him wide eyed)

L:(smiles wickedly)

K:(blushes)

Kt was too flustered to speak anything and so she pushed him off and ran away towards the door....Laksh shook his head and grinned as he watched her open the door and go out....

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It was evening and Kt,Laksh and Shivani were all ready to go to Manthan's party.......

Kt was wearing this top with a jeans :

Laksh was wearing this with a jeans:

Shivani was wearing this:

All three of them went to Manthan's home in a taxi.....As soon as they reached his home, they saw him standing outside and receiving his guests...They went to him..

L:Hii Manthan...

M:Hello yaar...(claps on Laksh's shoulder)Hii Kt....

K:Hii...(hugs him)

M:Shivani.....(puts his arm around her shoulder,pulled her closer and kissed her forehead)

Sh:(blushes)Ok Manthan..Hum andar chalte hain..

M:Teek hain..Main kuch hi der mein andar aaoonga..

Coming Up Next: Manthan's party...Get ready to rock!!

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END OF PART 19.....HOPE YOU LIKED THE ROMANCE IN THIS PART.....PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS.....THEY TRULY ENCOURAGE ME.....

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS........😊

LOVE YOU ALL,

NAINA........😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
love this part😳😳😳
😳😳😳can't wait for the next part👏
👏Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved it
it was awesome
loved every bit of laksh n kt scene
cant w8 to read bout manthans party
update soon plz

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