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Posted: 16 years ago
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it is awesome plz continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww... such a cute part.. loved the lkt scenes.. romance yet adorable.. laksh is funny.. but its adorable to see that even with all his passion.. he doesnt ever cross his limits.. its nice to see that for a change.. but i have to say.. kt is always running from him.. hehe.. come on woman.. he is ur man! lol.. but srsly a very cute part.. cant wait to read more about manthan's party.. hope you update soon..
thanks a bunch for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
awesome part loved it thanx for pm
love kt's top for manathans party
xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I didn't like the romance but i LOOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEDDDDDD It Naina......u r just superbly awsome.....i can not write those romantic parts.....they always turn out to be cute......but i must say u are a pro at it........gr8 job.....Keep it up.....i loved reading this ff.......waiting for the party.....hhehe....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you Radhakrishna123,**esha**,bradford3, princess4120, muscleprotein,12kaler and Angelic_Pari

Andmuscleprotein, Laksh is played by Pulkit Samrat 😊

PART 20

{{RECAP:Its Sunday..When Laksh goes to Kt's room she is bathing..Kt comes out wearing only a towel and she runs back to the bath room seeing him..Laksh pulls her out and she lands on top of him..He kisses her lips..

Kt gets annoyed since Laksh makes fun of her..She goes out after changing her dress...Again Laksh follows her and tries to pacify her..Kt tells him that she was making fun of him..He takes her to his room and again tries to get romantic with her..Kt blushes and runs away..In the evening Kt, Laksh and Shivani come to Manthan's home for his party...}}

Laksh, Kt and Shivani walked inside while Manthan was still outside, welcoming the guests..

K:Look, there is Payal Aunty, Manthan's Mom ..

Sh:Kahan..?

Kt showed them Manthan's Mom..

K:Mere saath aao..Main tum logon ko milwaati hoon unse...

L:Teek hain..

Kt took them towards his Mom..Payal saw Kt...

P:Arre Kt....(smiles)

K:Namaste Aunty..

P:(hugs her)Namaste beta..Kaisi ho..?

K:(pulls off from the hug)Teek hoon..Aur Aap..?

P:Main bilkul teek hoon..Manthan keh raha tha ki tumhari wajah se hi usko yeh award mila..

K:(smiles)Waise Aunty..Yeh hain mere friends Laksh aur Shivani..

L& Sh:Namaste Aunty..(smiles)

P:(smiles)Namaste...Manthan bahut baatein karta hain tum donon ke baare mein..

Just then Manthan came to them..

M:Arre Mom...Aap yahan hain..!Aapko Dad bula rahe hain..Aap jaldi jaayiye...

P:Acha..?Teek hain...Tum log baatein karo..

Payal walked away...

M:Arre Kt..Tumne yeh kya kar di..?I had thought of introducing Shivani to my Mom in a special way..Tum bhi na..!

K:(smiles)Acha..?Toh phir pehle bataana tha na..(nudges Shivani)

Sh:(blushes)Kya Manthan..Tum bhi na..Uski koi zaroorat nahin hain..Tumhari mom kya sochengi..?

M:Khair..Jaane do..(smiles)Anyways..Main toh Mom se zaroor bataaooga...

L:Waise Manthan..Tumhare baaki friends kahan hain..?Sabse milwaao na..

M:Teek hain..Aao na..

Manthan introduced them to his friends and soon they were all chatting with each other..Shivani's friend Priya and her boyfriend Gaurav(Manthan's friend) were also there..Shivani was happy to see them and she introduced them to Kt and Laksh...Suddenly the lights went dim....

DJ:Ok friends....Let's disco.....

And he started playing the remix of an English pop song....Everyone started to dance hearing the tremendous music..Laksh, Kt, Shivani and Manthan were all dancing together with his other friends...Remix of popular Bollywood tracks were also played..All of them enjoyed greatly..

After some time it was time for dinner...Manthan, Kt, Shivani, Laksh, Priya and Gaurav were all having their dinner together..

M:Kt, Main tum logon ko drop kar doonga..Teek hain..?

Sh:Zaroorat nahin hain Manthan..Hum sab hain na..Hum chale jaayenge..

L:Haan..Main hoon na in logon ke saath..

M:Par..

K:(clears her throat)Ahem..Ahem..Manthan humein chodna chahta hain toh kya problem hain..Hain na Manthan..?(smiles at him naughtily and then winks at Shivani)

M:(nudges Kt)Kt..!!

Sh:(blushes)Toh phir teek hain..

P:Kya baat hain Shivani..?Tum itni sharmaa kyun rahi ho..?Kahin tum aur Manthan..Ek doosre se..Hmm..?

G:Chakkar kya hain dosth...(raising his eyebrows at Manthan)

M:Woh yaar..Kya hain ki...

Sh:(smiling)Haan Priya..We love each other..

M:Yeah..That's right..(smiles)

P:Arre Shivani..Tumne mujhse kabhi nahin bataayi..

G:Par yeh sab..Kab se..?

Manthan and Shivani began to narrate their love story to them...

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Kt, Laksh and Shivani were in Manthan's car and they were on the way to their home..Shivani was sitting in the front seat near Manthan..Laksh was sitting with Kt at the back..Manthan kept looking at Shivani every now and then...Kt noticed this and decied to pull his leg..

K:Manthan, agar tum saamne dekh ke gaadi nahin chalayega toh accident ho jaayega...

Laksh hit Kt playfully and she laughed...

M:(shakes his head and smiles)

Sh:(smiles looking at Manthan)

After some time they reached their home..Laksh and Kt opened the doors and got down...But Shivani was not getting down..Manthan had secretly caught her hand and she decided to be with him for sometime..

K:Kya baat hain Shivani..?

Sh:Tum log chalo..Main aati hoon..

K:(smiles naughtily)Hmm..Teek hain..Teek hain..

M:Err...Goodnight guys..

K&L:Goodnight...

Laksh and Kt walked away and Shivani looked at Manthan..She looked into his love filled eyes and smiled...

Sh:Kya hua Manthan..?

M:Woh.....Shivani.....

Sh:(looking intently into his eyes and asked softly)Kya baat hain...?

Manthan didn't say anything else..He just cupped her face with his hands and slowly pulled her face closer to his...Shivani knew what was going to happen and she closed her eyes...She could feel his breath tickling her lips..Manthan kissed her lips slowly...Shivani slipped her hands around his neck...He kissed her left cheek...then right cheek...and then again kissed her lips with increasing passion..Shivani simply melted under his irresistible charm..After some time he pulled back from the kiss..Shivani opened her eyes and saw him looking at her with a blazing look..She lowered her eyes and blushed..Manthan held her chin with his hand and raised her face...

M:Goodnight sweetheart...(and kissed her forehead)

Sh:(smiles)Goodnight...(and she gave a sweet kiss on his cheek)

She opened the door and got down from the car and watched Manthan drive away..

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Meanwhile as Laksh and Kt walked into the house leaving Shivani and Manthan alone in the car...

L:(smiling)Kya zaroorat thi tumhe uski mazaak udaane ki..?Bechara Manthan..!

K:(giggling)Dekha nahin tumne ki uska chehraa kaise laal ho gaya tha..

L:Kt..Tum bhi na..!!(laughs)

Kt slipped her arm around his arm and leaned onto his shoulder as they neared the threshold of the villa..They walked inside and reached at the bottom of the staircase..Kt left his arm and looked at him..

K:Goodnight Laksh..

L:(naughtily)Bas itna sa..?Ek Goodnight ki...

Kt didn't allow him to complete the sentence..She leaned to him and gave a lingering kiss on his lips..Laksh was surprised by her kiss...She drew back, smiled and started climbing the stairs...Laksh came back to his senses and found her climbing the stairs..

L:Wow..! Kt..Tum..?!(sighs and smiles)

K:(stops and turns giggling)Kaisa raha mera surprise kiss...?

L:(shakes his head)Mindblowing..!!Upar aaoonga toh aur milega kya..?(smiles naughtily)

K:(laughs shyly)Goodnight Laksh...(and climbs up the stairs)

L:(laughs)Goodnight...

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Friends..I have started a new fanfic based on the show 'Dil Mil Gaye' ..Those who love DMG, Plzzzzzzz read it and comment...I want to know how it is...Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........😊

Here is the link...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1039991/mauja-hi-mauja-dmg-ff-part-11-pg-17

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END OF PART 20.....HOPE YOU LIKED THIS PART.....PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS.....THEY TRULY ENCOURAGE ME.....

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS........😊

LOVE YOU ALL,

NAINA........😊

Edited by hp_2006 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
it is really awesome
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWWWWWWWW i loved this part.. as always.. extremely well written.. loved the manthan shivani scene.. and so cute how kt was teasing them.. lol.. and kt's surprise was soo sweet.. laksh was lost.. heheh.. cant wait to read how the story progresses.. thanks for the pm.. please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing part😳
😳loved how kt was teasing manthan😛
😳can't wait for the next part👏
👏Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part of cousre i will read your new ff your ff are awesome
xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago

loved it

kt teasing them
too cute n sweet
cant w8 to read more
u[date soon

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