pyaar kar l-kt FF ImPoRtAnT mSg PG 48!PLZ READ!! - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

it is so cute!!!! (laksh and kt obviously)
cool i made an entry i see....
I loved the update!!! wow Manthan is a loser!!!
You know wat would be cool if i was a undercover cop tryin to find this attacker, cause once i found him i would seriously cut ahem ahem you know what upšŸ˜†!!!! I hate guys like them!!!! I would seriously kill them in the most violent way!!! šŸ˜†
Loved it babe, keep up the great work!!! The length was hmm okay, not too long but i guess since we had cute kt and laksh scenes i'll let you go for now!!!

continue soon my beautiful gorgeous littel pyari sis!!!!!

love ya!!! 😳

hhaa!!i love ur comments!!ill c wat i can do with ur character...lol ;)im glad u liked it

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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it
only one word to say AWESOME
cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
GREAT PART!! also a great cliff hanger.. left me so curious.. please update again soon!
Riyaa147 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
very very good part😳
can't wait to know who the girl is hope it is not kt😳
I hate Manthan😔
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonšŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey awesome writer how r u today lol amazing update totally loved the scene with LKT soooooo cute update soon

Tuba
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Posted: 17 years ago

warning:this update has some bad words and some content tht may or may not be suitable for 12 and younger....just a warning,dont wanna get in trouble

part 8

recap:the person sees a beautiful young women/teenager beat on the head

person-omg!is she dead?

he checks her pulse and shes just knocked out!

he calls the police and the police identify her as...................

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police was everywhere,so was the ambulence..the police examined the uncoscious girl and determined she was hit on the head about 2-3 times and one more hit couldve killed her.

police man(PM)-ambulance!take this yound lady on the stretcher and take her to the hospital.

guy-yes officer,but we need an id to admit her,do we got a name?

officer-im not sure..u go u might find a wallet on her..then something caches his eye ,in some blood he finds a wallet and in that wallet he saw this pic:

with the description:

name:noor wehbe

height-5"6

race-arab

etc

officer tot he ambulance guy-wait a minutE! i found her wallet!heres her belongings and her name..give this to whoever comes to be her relative..now go

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while the police was doingt here investigation everyone gathered around to see what happened,some people said there was a mruder,some people said she was stabbed.

both sivani and kt were trying to tippy toe and see what happened

kt-ey shiv!tujhe pata kya hua hai?

shiv-nahi yaar,log keh rahe hai ke murder tha!aur vo bhi same murder!

kt-whos the girl?

shiv-pata nahi

kt-ill go ask the professor,amybe he knows comehting

shiv-be sure to tell me,k?

kt-k

kt walked to the other side the crowd and heard some officers talking

PM1-report this to the others that this girl was attacked like the other girls but before he could stab them he stopped

officer2-how come he stopped?

officer1-because someone almost caught him in the act and ran away

officer2-but did they idnetify her?

of1-yea her name is noor,noor wehbe,shes in the tuman hospital

as soon as kt heard that kt got shocked



kt thought-omg!noor!!shes the one who i met a few days ago!!omg!i have to go visit her!

kt ran to looks for shivani as she ran she tripped because of her heels and fell

kt-ayyee!!oouuchh

kt fell at a person's feet and then felt ther self being pulled up

she looked up into the person's face and it was manthan with a smug grin on his face.

kt-manthan?!tum?chodo mujhe!

manthan-mujhe se raha nahi gaya kt,tum mere peron pe gir gira rahi thi,i just had to pull ur up

kt-mujhe tumhare falthoo bakwaas ke sunne keliye waqt nahi hai,chodo mujhe!

manthan-i really want to no..wat do u think of urself!?u think ur better than me?u think u can humiliate me,get me yelled at by my sister,get me hit and ull get away with it?

kt-i really dont have time for this manthan!and starts screaming as loud as she can RAPERRR!!HES TRYING TO RAPE ME!!PLZZ HELP ME!!AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!AHHHH!!HES TRYING TO GET ME!!!she sees a gang of hard looking guys and tell them,PLZ HELP ME HES BOTHERING ME!

the guys advance torward manthan,while manthan looks for his friends tostand by with,but he realized they left him!

manthan-bloody bas***ds!!

the guys hit manthan around while kt limped to find shivani.

kt-oh god my leg!!these heels,migod!!she trys to stand up and she falls in someones arms and looks up into gorgeous eyes,which are of course laksh's.

laksh-kya hua kt?tum aise kyun bhag rahi thi?aur tumahi taang ko kya hua?

kt-vo..kuch nahi mai shivani ko dhoon rahi thi,usne mere saath hospital jaane keliye kehna tha

laksh-hospital?kyun?

kt told him the story about noor geeting hurt,possbily murdered,and how she was a friend she had to visit her!

laksh-kt tumhe chot lagi hui hai pehle ghar chalo aur phir hospital jao

kt-nahi laksh!i have to see agar vo teek hai ya nahi!

laksh-to tum aise nahi maano gi?

kt-nahi!

so he picks her up in his arms and takes her tot he car

kt-laksh!laksh ye tum kya kar rahe ho?laksh!

when they reached the car laksh opened the passenger door(somehow)and put her in the seat,closed it and went to his seat.

laksh-ab chup chap ghar chalo ,apne chot par kuch lagao aur phir hospital chalo.

kt-magar laksh-

laksh-agar,magar kuch nahi!

and her drove to the house and when kt was about to get out of the care when laksh rushed to her side and picked her up again.

kt-laksh!its ok,main chal sakti hoon.

laksh-kt tumne seedian (stairs)chadni hai aur tumse 2 qadam nahi chale ja rahe ,tume seedian kya chalogi?

and by that time laksh was in kt's room and put her on the bed.tum yahi ruku main first aid lata hoon

laksh came abk with the frist aid kit,and kt held out her hand expecting laksh to give it to her in her hand,but to her surprise laksh bent down with the box.

kt-laksh,itni karni ki kya zaroorat hai,vaise bhi mera nahi khyaal chot itni bhi serious hai.

laksh-tumhe dard ho raha hai?

kt-haan..par-

laksh-kt..jab tumhe dard hota hai mujhe use kahin zyaada dukh hota hai,main tumhe kabhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta

kt looked at him with more love for him with tears in her eyes.

laksh wiped the tears in her eyes and wiped them and they both hugged..

laksh-now let me look at your chot...

as laksh put his hand on her leg,he saw her wince,so usne vahi se andaza laga diya that her wound was under her pajama.

laksh-kt?can i?

kt didnt understand what he was saying until she saw him on the floor by her leg,kt got that in order to put medicine on it,he would have to lift it.

kt-umm..ok..

laksh-r u sure?

kt-hmm..

laksh lifted it up a little which made kt yelp in pain because she was wearing a churidar pajama which r skin tight(the pants).

laksh lifted them more which made it scrape the wound while it went up adn made kt's skin fell like it was on fire.kt held on laksh's shirt tight and closed her eyes.

laksh cleaned the wound with alchohol which stinged and felt like a hundred pins were poking through her skin ,which made kt tear.laksh quickly cleaned it and bandaged it.when lakshw as done he realized kt was still closing her eyes and holding on this shoulder.

laksh softly called out kt's name-kt?

kt-hmm?

laksh-ho gaya..

kt opened her eyes and realized she was holding on to him,o sorry

laksh smiled and kissed her on the forehead

laksh-ab chale?

kt-kahan?

lak-tumne hospital nahin jaana?main chod doonga vahan

kt-umm ok..par laksh?

lak-hmm?

kt-lemme change first and ill come ok?

lak-ok..ill be waiting for u in the living room..

kt changed into a more comfratable salwar kameez:

and went to visit noor with laksh

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in the car in the hospital parking lot

laksh-call me when to pick you up,ok?

kt-ok bye

laksh-bye

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in the hospital:

kt to nurse can you tell me where patient noor wehbe is?

nurse-room 201

kt-thnk u

she went down the hall to room number 201 and saw shivani arrving at the same time

kt-hey shivani,did u hear bout noor?

shiv-yea i did but i heard tht shes gonna be alright.

kt-thts good,i came to visit her,kt looked throguht the glass window and saw noor lying on the bed with her head bandaged,her eyes sleepy ,talkin with two men who looked like detectives questioning her they thanked her and left

after kt went in the room after they left and saw noor with a little blood spot showing form her bandages.

kt-hey man how r ya?

noor-im doing ok,it doesnt hurt as bad any more..

kt-so dude do u no what happened?

noor-no ,i was walking with my bike ,cuz it had a flat tire,next thing i no something really hard hits my head and i felt the pain,it was horrid!then i heard more blows to my head,i saw stars,kt,i was surrounded by balckness,.......

noor started crying and kt went out and reached for her hand and squeezed it sympathetically

noor wnt on-i thought i was going to die and then it stopped,i heard a faint noise,i heard him run away adn then i dont remeber any thing else.

kt-ur so strong noor,your the only survivor of these attacks.

noor-yea i no man,its a frightening thought..

then all of a sudden a women came in crying and reaching out for noor and started huging her and started talkin in arabic.

kt could make some of it out and she heard noor telling her mom she was alrite...

kt-well stay strong noor,i gotta go!bye!

noor-bye man!

hey guys!!wat did u think?i really really realllyyy hope u guys like it,dont forget to comment!!


Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing partšŸ‘
can't wait for the next partšŸ˜›šŸ˜³
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz contine soonšŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it babe!!!! thank god i came on, i saw that you updated!!!! U really are an excellent writer!!! Love u!!! Please continue, yaar this is gettin sorta scary now!!!! I wonder who the killer will be!!!! Well update soon!!!! šŸ‘

Well i see you have found out how i am with guys when u were talkin to Mitu1228 i see?? lolz....yea i scare them away before they say anything!! šŸ˜†

Mindblowing!!! i really had the chills when i was reading this update. I loved the cute LKT scenes, they were awesome and made me blush while readin them!!! Can't wait till the next part. 😳

Love Ya!!! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
3-4 comments more,and ill continue, i mean i work hard on this ff and olnly a few comments-few but awesome-coments!?!
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz continue it i just luv ur fanfic

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