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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 28

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It was a bright sunny day the next morning. Krishna woke up as the sun's glare hit her eyes through the curtains on her window. She got up from her bed with a huge smile on her face. She was in a really good mood as everything was well between her and Laksh. She looked on the bed to find Pari sleeping peacefully on th bed. She gave her a smile as pari looked really sweet, just like a a little, cute girl. She slowly opened the curtains so that there isn't much glare over Pari's face. She then goes to her closet to get her clothes. She takes out a salwar kameez and towel and goes straight to take a warm shower. She comes out of the bathroom wearing her beautiful salwar kameez.This is what she wore and she had almost the same hair style.

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By this time, Pari had woken up and was stretching and yawning. Her eyes quickly fall on Krishna who was looking at her and smiling. She stood up straight and smiled back at her. She didn't know what Krishna had been thinking of her. With some strenght she got out some words.

P: Goo...good morning..aap itni jaldi uth gayi....mai...

K: Arre itna mat daro mujse....I don't bite....aur aggar tumhe yeh lagta hai ke mai tumhe and Laksh ko maaf kardungi...toh tum bilcul theek samaj rahi ho....waise bhi tum jaise pyari ladki se koi bhi naraz nahi ho sakta...

P: Really...mujhe pata tha ke Laksh bhaiya aap ko manaa leenge....aap bahot aachi hai....

K: Aacha jaldi se naaha(bath) lo aur niche breakfast ke liye chalo....

P: Ok....

Pari quickly runs into the bathroom while Krishna heads downstairs in he kitchen to make the breakfast. When she reaches the kitchen, she finds all the ladies discussing over something. Daksha chachi calls Krishna to be in the discussion.

D: Arra raa....ab tu hi bata Krishna...kya humhe ek picnic par nahi jaana chahiye....tum bache log agle hafte vapas college jaoge....phir tumlogo ke sundar chehere nahi dikhenge....

T: Haa chachi, humme zaroor jaana chahiye par kab jaaye....

N: Maa....Sahil aur Karan ko agglehafte ek meeting me jaana hai......

D: Haan aur Papa aur Gautam ko char(4) din baad ek deal finalize karni hai....

G: Toh kya hum aaj sham ko nahi jaa sakte kya?....

M: Haa...aur phir hum saab theen(3) din ke liye humaare farmhouse chalte hai.....mai toh apni saare western kapde pehene wali hu.....hey bhagwan mujhe abhi se packing shuru karni hogi verna mai kuch naa kuch bhol jaogi....

D: Hey Jalaram Bapa....iss Mohini ko thodi si aakal de....saraa din phate kapde pehen kar rehti hai aur Halloween ka make-up kar ke rehti hai.....(she whispers to everyone else while Mohini leaves in a hurry to pack her stuff)....Kabhi kabhi toh bhootni jaisi lagti hai....

Everyone laughs at the comment and they get busy in packing thier clothes and informing their husbands and children about the picnic plan.Nandini and Ganga tell Krishna to go and tell Laksh as he was the only one who had still been sleeping. Krishna goes to his room and silenty goes up to his bed gently sits. Laksh had been sleeping sweetly( sleeping on his stomach). He had a huge smile on his face. Krishna tapped on his shoulder to wake him up.

L; Soone do naa...raat ko itna bada mu phula kar behthi thi...tumhe sach toh keh diya....aab soone do mujhe...

He had been saying all this with his eyes closed and still half asleep....

K; Laksh utho....saath baj gaye hai....

L: Toh mai kya karu....cricket khelu.....

Krishna got irritated by his annoying behavior. She decides to just leave him alone.

K; Theek hai....tum soo...mai jaarahi ho....aur haan, mai do(2)-theen(3) ghaante me Simla jaa rahi hu sab logo ke saath...Tum soote rehna....

Krishna quickly got up to leave but Laksh got a hold of her hand. He woke up quickly after hearing her say tha she was leaving.

L; Tum ladkiyaa...ugggghh.....naa raat ko soone deeti ho aur nahi din me...aab tum kahan jaane ki baat kar rahi thi...

K;Woh sab ne decide kiya hai ke hum sab picnic ke liye jaayenge....

L; Par kahan?

K; Simla wale farmhouse me....aab sawal poochna bhand karo aur jaldi se tayaar ho ke apni packing kar do...mai Baa ki madat karti hu....now go!

Krishna pushed his hand away from he hand and quickly left the room.

L; Kya musibat hai...pyar karo toh pachtao aur na karo toh bhi pachtao...

He gets up and takes a warm shower. When he came out of the bathroom, his face was cleanly shaved and his hair shining as it was still a little wet. He had been wearing this.

He quickly packed his clothes and put his bag aside. He went downstair to get a glass of juice from the kitchen. He got into the kitchen and quickly grabbed the glass of juice that Nandini had already kept ready for him to drink(Laksh and Nandini are very close to each other;like mother and son). He saw Pari sitting on the counter eating a red juicy apple. She was wearing this.

They both went out to the family room where everyone had gathered around. Sahil had given the driving job to Nakul, Manthan, Nihaal, and Laksh. The people being divided into each car. In Nakul's car, there will be Damini, Ganga, Mohini,Tulsi, and Baa. In Manthan's car, there will be Gautam, Sahil, Karan, Mihir, and Eklavya. In Nihaal's car, there would be Bhoomi, Pari, Archita, Sandeep and Joydeep. At last, Sahil told Laksh to come with Krishna in his car and they were the only two that were left. Krishna came with Baa and Tulsi told her to go came in Laksh's car.

(By the way, Krishna had changed into proper clothing for the picnic. This is what she wore.)

She was wearing the same earrings with the same hairstyle. Looking simple, beautiful, and graceful. Laksh was amazed at her true beauty and couldn't wait to spend his time alone with her. One by one everyone started to put their luggage in the car trunks and started to sit in the car. Laksh quickly went upstairs to bring his bag. On his way down The phone rang. Krishna picked up the phone while Laksh came down the stairs.

K( talking on the phone); Abhi aana hoga...

K(still talking);Theek hai hum abhi atte hai...

T(from outside); JALDI KAR KRISHNA! LAKSH! JALDI KARO BETA!

Krishna didn't know what to do. Laksh saw her concerned face and went up to ask her what the problem was.

L; Aab kya hua?...

K; Baa ke doctor ka phone tha...unki dawai(medicine) ke refills ready hai....abhi leene jaana hoga....

L; Isme itna soochne wali kya baat hai...mai papa se keh ta hu ke hum Tulsidadi ki dawai lekar aayenge....

K(smiles to him on his kindness); Theek hai...chalo...

Laksh informs Sahil and then they both head off to go to the hospital. After taking the refills, they head onto their way to Simla. They were already about 1-2 hours behind the rest because now as they were heading on their way, there was a huge increase in the amount of traffic.

SORRY TO LEAVE YOU GUYS HANGING BUT IF I WRITE MORE, THEN I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO STOP FROM WRITING ON AND ON....I AM EXTREMELY SORRY FOR DELAYING ON THE UPDATE BUT BLAME IT ALL ON MY TEACHERS BECAUSE THEY HAVE ALL PLANNED ON GIVING ME PROJECTS TO WORK ON PLUS THE FINAL COMING UP IN A WEEK...I DIDN'T EDIT SO SORRY FOR ALL THE MISTAKES AND BLOOPERS....LOVE YOU ALL AND PLEASE LEAVE YOU COMMENTS AND REPLIES ON HOW THIS PART WAS....WILL HAVE A LOT OF ROMANCE IN THE ON COMING PARTS SO JUST WAIT PATIENTLY AND READ MY FANFIC.....LOVE TO ALL....

PALCHIN




Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THE NEXT PART....SORRY FOR MAKING THIS ONE VERY BORING...I WILL SURELY WRITE A REALLY GOOD PART FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...

PALCHIN


Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was good
it wasnt boring at all
loved it
i was hooked to this part throughout
but i h8 u for leaving us at the suspense bit lol
cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
i tho.. it was awesome!! 👏
i didnt think it was boring at all
cant wait to see wat you have stored for the next part...

looking forward to reading a lot about laksh and Kt's romance. cont...soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow, it seems like i havent read your ff forever....its been so long that i even forgotten what happened last....anyways, now for the harsh criticism....this part was really very very very well written...the descriptions were great and the pics were absoutely awesome....(i blame u for me wanting kt's picnic dress and pari's blue kurta)....this part was so interesting to me, i decide to give the characters awards.

Best hottie of the part: laksh while sleeping...i can just imagaine how hot he probably have looked. 😍

Most stylist of all: Krishna with her morning and picnic outfit. 👏 👏

Best clothing: Pari with that beautiful kurta 😃

Most caring of all: Nandani for keeping juice ready for laksh in the morning. 😊

Most stupid of all: Mohini..(now folks...i dont need to explain this one do i?)

Most sensible of the bunch: Daksha chachi...(for parying to jalaram bapa for some brains for mohini)...good choice daksha chachi...well done. 👍🏼

Best dialouge: Daksha chachi for her famous "arre ra"..lols. 😆

And now for the grand finale for the best quote of the part ever......and...(drum roll please)....the award goes to...........................our very own, hot and sexy LAKSH!!!!....when he said....."To mein kya karu....cricket khelu"...(when KT said its already 7)...that was halarious to me. 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia054u

wow, it seems like i havent read your ff forever....its been so long that i even forgotten what happened last....anyways, now for the harsh criticism....this part was really very very very well written...the descriptions were great and the pics were absoutely awesome....(i blame u for me wanting kt's picnic dress and pari's blue kurta)....this part was so interesting to me, i decide to give the characters awards.

Best hottie of the part: laksh while sleeping...i can just imagaine how hot he probably have looked. 😍

Most stylist of all: Krishna with her morning and picnic outfit. 👏 👏

Best clothing: Pari with that beautiful kurta 😃

Most caring of all: Nandani for keeping juice ready for laksh in the morning. 😊

Most stupid of all: Mohini..(now folks...i dont need to explain this one do i?)

Most sensible of the bunch: Daksha chachi...(for parying to jalaram bapa for some brains for mohini)...good choice daksha chachi...well done. 👍🏼

Best dialouge: Daksha chachi for her famous "arre ra"..lols. 😆

And now for the grand finale for the best quote of the part ever......and...(drum roll please)....the award goes to...........................our very own, hot and sexy LAKSH!!!!....when he said....."To mein kya karu....cricket khelu"...(when KT said its already 7)...that was halarious to me. 🤣 🤣

YOUR AWARDS WERE FANTABULOUS....YOUR COMMENTS REALLY ENCOURAGE ME SONU......A HUGE KISS TO MY LIL' SIS.....LOVE YOU.....

PALCHIN


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey palchin
yar u are reallly a fab writer
and i dont think that it was boring at all in fact it was very good
looking forward 2 laksh kt's romance
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
waiting impatiently
eesha 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
i agree with sonia054u.. it was really well written and descrpitive.. cant wait to see how much fun the picnic will be.. i will have to refresh my memory about this..

does the WHOLE family know that laksh loves KT? or the pairing of them for car was coincidence..??
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

i agree with sonia054u.. it was really well written and descrpitive.. cant wait to see how much fun the picnic will be.. i will have to refresh my memory about this..

does the WHOLE family know that laksh loves KT? or the pairing of them for car was coincidence..??

The whole family already got to know about Laksh and Kt's love but the pairing in the car was just a coincidence.....Hope this information helped explain everything.....Thanks for your wonderful comments....will try to continue soon.....

Palchin

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Posted: 17 years ago
loved it!!!!! I fianlly got to come and read the part....it was simply great and cute. I love the dialougs in the part...they were cute and funny. Loved all of the dresses that Kt wore and loved the shirt that pari wore after the shower. Its great to see no family drama....and everyone being so happy and great with each other. Mohini still a ding dong....but yet so funny as well as daksha chachi with her ara raa, thanks for an awesome update....continue soon!!! Will be waiting. 😳

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