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Posted: 17 years ago
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS..... THE NEXT PART WILL BE UP IN A FEW MINUTES....PLEASE DO RESPOND AND COMMENT ON HOW IT TURNS OUT TO BE....LOVE YOU ALL...

PALCHIN
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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 29

It was getting darker and darker every second. Laksh and Krishna were still stuck in the traffic. Krishna was getting really bored and tired because of the traffic but she was still happy to be with Laksh, ALL ALONE!

Laksh noticed her sad face and was thinking of something to say. Krishna kept looking out the window and the day grew darker and darker. She noticed that there were police standing with a sign ahead and making the cars head onto another road that lead to a motel/huge cottage. Their car reached where the police were standing. One of the policemen came to guide Lakshu's car. He walk up to the car while Laksh opened the window of his car.

Police: Dekhiye agge(ahead) ek landslide hui hai...Jaana bahot muskhil aur khatarnak hai...aap aaj raat ke liye iss cottage me guzar sakte hai...sab log wahi jaa rahe hai...par hum aapko agge jaane nahi de sakte...

Laksh gave the officer a smile.

L: Koi baat nahi...par yeh rastaa kab khulega?

Police: Shayad kal subhe...sab logo ko jaane ki infomation mil jayegi...

L: Thank you...

P: Your Welcome...

As Laksh drived into the parking for the motel, he saw a spark of disappointment on Krishna's face. He parked the car and quietly sat there for a second.

L: Kya hua?....

Krishna looked at him.

K: Kuch nahi...

Laksh knew what she might have been thinking but didn't want to bring it up now.

L: Toh chalo...waise baaris honi shuru hogayi hai...

Krishna looked out of her window. Water was rapidly sprinkling from the sky.

L: Chalo...

They both got out of their car and walked into the BIG cottage that was made specially for landslide incidents because in Simla there were a lot of landslides that took place. They both reached inside the cottage. It was a simple but beautiful cottage. There were little kids playing everywhere and a LOT of rooms that started from the end of the tiny hall. There a reciptionist at the table. She was old lady who assisted everyone into a room. Laksh and Krishna both walked up to the reciptionist table. The lady politely informed them.

Rec. Lady: Aap dono room # 39 me reh sakte hai...

While she handed them their keys, she complimented them.

Rec. Lady: What a sweet couple...you both seem to be made in heaven just for each other...kissi ki nazar naa lage....

Laksh and Krishna gave a lady the sweetest smile ever. They then headed to their room. Laksh had been noticing Krishna face which was now really nervous and scared. He perfectly knew what she had been thinking. They both reached their room. Laksh opened the door to the room and then handed her the keys into her hands. Krishna looked startled as she didn't why he did that. Laksh gave her a nice smile.

L: Tum yaha soo jao, mai car me soo lunga...

He came closer to her while she just looked at his twinkling eyes.

L: Mai jaanta hu ke tumhe awakward lagega aggar hum dono ek hi kamre me rahege...tum chinta mat karna...

He smiled at her. Krishna was truly shocked by what he had said. How did he know what she had been thinking about? Laksh turned to leave.

K(in a whisper voice):Rukho....

Laksh stopped and turned around to look at her. Krishna grabbed his hand and lead him inside the room. She closed the door while he just stood there looking at her beautiful face glowing. The room was truly beautiful. The walls very of a rose color. The marvelous bed was a rose color. The carpet was also rose colored. On the middle wall(or in the back end of the room) there was a huge glass window(like the ones people have at the entrance to their backyard but much bigger)that was covered by the curtains that were also rose colored. There was also a soft sofa on right side of the room. Next to the sofa was a phone for room service.

Krishna turned around to face him and walked up close to him.

K: Yeh sach hai ke mai isske baare me sooch rahi thi...par mai tumse dor nahi reh sakti...aur woh bhi akele iss camre mai....

Laksh laughed at how cute she was.

L: Par ek akele ladke ke saath ek kamre me rehna...Mujse dar nahi lagta...

Laksh grinned at her while she just made a "whatever" face.

K(in s soft voice):Aggar koi aur hota toh mai usse car me soone ke liye kheti...par tum un ladko me se ho jisse mai bhad aakho se bhi vishwas kar sakti hu....

Laksh looked at her in suprise. He though to himself:She trusts me so much...I hope that I always keep her happy and I never lose her trust in me.

Laksh had just been staring at her while thinking about all this. Krishna looked at him.

K: Laksh...

Laksh got out of his daydream.

L: Haa....

K: Kya hua....

L: Kuch nahi...

Krishna got her glance outside the huge window/glass door that led to a little play ground in the back of the motel-cottage. There were adults and children playing soccer and many other fun and games outside. Krishna walked closer to the window to get a clear view of the beautiful scene outside. It was quiet cloudy and moderately raining. Laksh also walked up next to her and looked outside the window. They were both looking a two little kids that were splashin water at each other in the rain. They both smiled at how cute they were looking. Laksh noticed the smile on Krishna's face while she was looking at the little kids. He softly asked her.

L: Tumhe bacche pasand hai?....

K: Bahot...Kitne pyare hote hai....

Laksh justwanted to mess with her for a while as he wanted to kill the time and make her feel better.

L: Par mujhe bacche zara bhi pasand nahi hai....Kitne gande hote hai....Roo roo ke dimak kharab kar deete hai...

Krishna looked at him in a disappointed type of manner. Laksh was just looking at her with an expression full of attitude. Although deep inside, he loved children. He believed them to be the precious of all humans. Krishna ignored whatever he said and went back to looking at the kids playing outside. While playing, one of the kids( it was a tiny boy) fell while chasing the other(it was a little girl). He really scrapes his knee badly and it starts to bleed really badly. He starts to cry really loudly due to the emmance pain. Krishna couldn't tolorate is crying so he pushes open the window door and runs out to help the little. Laksh also had a tensed expression o his face. He followed Krishna outside. Krishna went straight to help the little boy that had been crying and Lakshu went to help the little girl that had been crying because her friend(the little boy) got hurt. Krishna picked up the little boy and held him closed to her chest and calmed him down. After she stopped screaming, she gently took her dupatta, lifted his tiny knee, wrapped it around his scrap so the bleeding would stop. After his wound was covered, Krishna wrapped him up in her dupatta and took him to a dry bench where there was no rain as it as covered by the shade. She calmed him down and the little boy quickly fell asleep. Laksh came up to Krihna with the tiny little girl hugging Lakshu tight to keep herself warm.

SORRY GUYS BUT THATS ALL THAT I CAN UPDATE FOR TODAY....PLEASE TO LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS AND COMMENTS....LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU ALL...AND SORRY ONCE AGAIN BUT I DIDN'T EDIT....

PALCHIN

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Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago
eshagirl thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
hey palchinn
u'r goin on really gud
plz update d next part soon
can't w8
bye
eesha
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was awesome
too cute
loved the way laksh and kt comforted the two kids
also loved the cute scene between laksh and kt
loved it
cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was an awesome part
i loved the way laksh and kt helped the kids
i hope there is more romance in the next part
anyways cont...soon cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!
It was jus too great and sweet!!! Rain, the start of all romance....those two kids were just so cutely added into the story!!!!! i loved it...and Kt's concern for that boy shows that she will be a great mother....awwww poor little girl hugged laksh so cutely to stay warm was described superbly!!!! I jus keep gettin impressed and impressed by ur story!!! its jus simply wonderful...please update soon!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww that was soooo sweet.. laksh loves teasing her but he takes care of that lil girl..
and soo cute how she completely trusts him.. but cant imagine that there would be no romance when the two are alone.. hahah..

well you write beautifully.. please update soon..
sanasara thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
LOVEDDDDDDDDD ITTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbb!!!!!!!! plz continue soonnnnn!!!
shifi
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Posted: 17 years ago
you just keep us hooked in. As always, great updates.
KTL already seem like they're parents. I liked how you advanced your story

but a little confused ... wasn't ba with laksya and KT or were LKT just picking up ba's medicines w/o her being there??
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz continueee soonnn i m waitinnnnn!!!

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