Laksh KT FF MUST READ!!! Part 31 Updated

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Dr.Smart

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Posted: 17 years ago

IF THIS FAN FICTION IS NOT SUPPOSE TO BE HERE, PLEASE TELL ME WHERE I COULD PLACE THIS FF. SORRY IF I PLACED THIS ISTHE WRONG SPOT.PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU LIKE IT. THANKS...

Hi Guys! This is my first time writing a Fan Fiction. I hope that you guys like it. I will try my best to make it clear, romantic, and very lovable. First I will start by introducing the characters. Here they are:

Krishna Tulsi Shortly known as Krishna. She is 18-years-old. She is extremely intelligent. She attends Rutgers College with her best friend, her cousin Panchi. She loves Panchi like her own sister. She is a simple girl with high thinking. She truly belives in Love. Although she hasn't met her prince charming yet. She is extremely traditional and full of values. She the kind of girl ANYONE can fall in love with. Beatiful, well-mannered, and very traditional.

Panchi She is 18-years-old. She is Krishna's bestest friend and her cousin. She truly loves Krishna as her own sister. She goes to the same college as Krishna. She is very modern as well as traditional. She is also very intelligent and smart like Krishna. She hates this guy named Nihaal who never takes her seriously on any matter. Although she does have a soft corner for him.

Nihaal A 19-year-old cool and serious guy. She takes his work very seriously. He is nice to everyone except Panchi who he Loves To Annoy. This clearly shows that he has a soft corner for her. He lives with his best friend and the only friend he consider as his own brother. He is Laksh, his own cousin. Nihaal also attends Rutgers College.

Laksh His nickname is Kisna. He is a 19-year-old cool and handsome hunk of the school. He is a big flirt but extremely respectful to everyone. He lives with his cousin,his best friend,Nihaal. He does not believe in love at all. He is extremely serious when it comes to his college work. He is a brillant and intelligent student who is very hardworking and helpful to everyone in the college. He is a guy who every girl would like to marry.

Sandeep He is Krishna's 17-year old brother. Krishna calls him Sandy. He is Krishna's only brother. He is everything for her. He is very protective towards his sister even though she is older by an year. She loves her the most in the entire world. He only has one problem. He is very forgetful and doesn't remember many things. This is not true because he only does this to tease his one and only sister Krishna.

THESE ARE THE MAIN CHARACTERS AND I WILL START THE STORY OF KRISHNA-KISNA AND PANCHI-NIHAAL.OTHER CHARACTER WILL BE INTRODUCED LATER. HOPE YOU LIKE IT.PLEASE REPLY IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE!!!THANKS... PLEASE DO REPLY...

Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey girl ...i love it already....keep going .......can't wait ...sounds great!!!!

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Dr.Smart

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry I wasn't able to post any pictures because i am new here. But I will continue soon.Thanks for appreciating my FF.

Love D:

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Dr.Smart

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks for liking it my FF so much. I will surely continue to write it. Here the Backgrond about the college.

Rutger College

This college is in Chicago.It contains mostly Gujarati,Punjabi,Muslim, and Bengali students with American students. Everyone in the College knows how to speak Hindi. The staff and faculty also are Indians and speak hindi. Its an exact copy of a college in India. It celebrates ALL holiday(including India's Holidays). It the perfect college for the most intelligent and brillant students.

The First Day

A beautiful Day in September has come. Krishna and Panchi were wide awake in their bed, staring at the clock tick. College had started and it was their first day.

(K-Krishna,P:Panchi, N-Nihaal,T-Mrs.Bajaj the teacher)

K: Jaldi kar Panchi, mujhe bhi taiyaar hona hai. Tum bahar a kar upna make-up laga loo. Waise tumhe make-up lagaane ki zarurat nahi hai. Tu to aise bhi achi lagti hai.

P: Ake minute rook naa. Mai make-up khuboosurat lagne keliye karti hoon. Sub log tumhari tarah naturally khoboosurat to nahi hoo sakti naa.

K: Acha ab jaldi kar. Mai breakfast ready rakti hoon.

P: Theek hai. mai abhi aye.

Krishna, wearing a siple red but beautiful salwar-kameez with tight leenga and silky, soft dupatta, walk to the kitched. Panchi shortly arrives wearing a pink salwar-kameez thats exactly like Krishna's.

P: Oh God. Yeh salwar to kitne loose hai. Agar college me aaj cultural day nahi hota na to mai aaj yeh kabhi nahi phenti. Uff...

K:Itna toh comfortable hai.

P: Yeah sure!

They both eat their grilled cheese sandwich, dink their coffee, and rush to their College.When they enter the college, they are able to reconize everyone. All of their High School friends. Everyone is wearing their own traditional clothing.They all roam around the college together.Then after a while Krishna gets thirsty.

K: Mujhe pyas lagi hai. Mai pani pee kar atti hu.

P: Ruko, mai bhi saath atti hu.

They go to the cafetaria to get something to drink. There was a huge crowd in there. Krishna gets pushed by the crowd. To escape from the crowd, they walk separately. Krishna accidentely walks into a wet spot and slips.

P: Krishna!!!

A strong person with a hard grip catches her. Krishna in a shocked reaction stares at the sparkling eyes of the handsome guy. He slowly and gently picks her up from almost falling. Though the eye contact was still constant between them. His hair was silky and dark. His skin was fair and shinning. He had no beard or moustache. A glooming, cute face. Krishna keeps staring at him while he keeps staring at he.

P: Krishna, are you okay.

K(returning from her dream world): Yeah, I am fine.

P: Dekh kar nahi chal sakti kya.Pagal.

She then looks at the guy.

P: Hi, I am Panchi aur yeh Krishna hai.

The Guy: Hi, mera naam Laksh hai. You can call me Kisna, that's what my everyone who knows me calls me.

L: Apki dost ne mera naam copy kiya hai(laughing).

Krishna blushed and gives a sweet smile. Laksh just stares at her innocent and delicate face. He was totally into her. He wasn't able to undrstand how one can look beyond beauty itself.

THANKS FOR READING.WILL POST NEXT PART VERY SOON.rEPLY SOON IF YOU LIKE IT. THANKS ONCE AGAIN.

LOVE D:😃

Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago

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Dr.Smart

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks for your reply. I will suely continue tonight. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Be read for my next part soon. Thank once again. 😃

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nikky

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Posted: 17 years ago

Wow!I loved it.
great job, continue soon.

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Dr.Smart

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks a lot for all your wonderful replies and comments. Here is the the next part of the FF. Please give your comments on how it turns out to be. Thanks!

PART 2

L: Apki dost ne mera naam copy kiya hai(laughing).

Krishna blushed and gives a sweet smile. Laksh just stares at her innocent and delicate face. He was totally into her. He wasn't able to undrstand how one can look beyond beauty itself. He then came out of his dream world.

L: Theek hai, to abb mai jata hu.(He really didn't want to but had to because his cousin was waiting for him)

P: Okay. Krishna tum inhe thanks to bolo. Isne tuhe girne se bachaya or tum yuh hi khadi ho. KRISHA!!!

Krishna came out of her dream world. She had been starin at Laksh's soft and sweet face the entire time.

K: Thanks.(In a very shy voice)

L: Your Welcome.(He winked at her in a way that only Krishna could see and understand).

He then leaves .

P: Nice guy.

K: haa.

P: Chalo abb class mai jate hai.

K: Okay.

They walk together to their class after drinking their water. They both had a two books and a pen in their hands. They entered their class together. As they were about to enter, they both bumped into two guys who were coming out of the class. All four of them fall to the ground due to the force from colliding.

K & P:Ouch....

The boys: SORRY!

Krishna and Panchi recognized that one of the boys was Laksh, who saved Krishna from falling.

L: Tum dono, sorry who hum bahar principal se milne jaa rahe the. Hum jaldi mai the issi liye..

K: Its okay(In a very patient and kind way).

Laksh stared into her innocent eyes that would make everyone like her.

Laksh thought to himself: She(Krishna) is so beautiful. The moment I have seen you is still fresh in my mind. She seems so innocent and naive. Why do I feel restless the moment she comes in front of me.

L: tum theek hona(To Krishna).

K: Haa mai bilcul theek hu.(She gave another smile and stared into his sparkling eyes.)

L: Oh yeah hai mera cousin, Nihaal. Nihaal, yeh Panchi hai or yeh Krishna hai.

N: Hi, I sorry(to Panchi). Tum theek hona.

Panchi just stared at him with all her love.

K: Panchi(She elbowed her).

P: Huh.. oh its okay. Mai theek hu.

They all got up.

L: Tum dno bhi hamare class mai ho.

K: Haa.

N: Laksh, chale.

L: Oh haa, hum abhi atte hai. Humhe principal ko kuch papers dene hai.

P: That's okay. Baad me milte hai.

N: hum do(2) minute me atte hai.Bye.

K & P: Bye.

As Laksh leaves, Krishna stares at him walk to the office while Panchi stares at Nihaal go there also. When they both turn around to go to their class, Laksh turns to see his Krishna while Nihaal turns to see Panchi.

AT K&P ROOM IN COLLEGE

Krishna and Panchi both lay on their bed after they change into their nightdress. They both have the same choices for everything so they are both wearing a silky night gown. Panchi's night gown is greenish-gray in color and has tiny bears all over. Krishna's night gown is deep blue in color and has tiny pink heart all over it. They are both laying down on their beds and staring at the ceiling.

K: Tum soo gayi kya?

P: Nahi.Tum kyu nahi soye abhi tak.

K: I don't know. Mujhe neend nahi a rahi.

P: Really, mujhe bhi neend nahi a rahi.

They both sit up in their bed and face each other. Panchi walks over and sits in Krishna's bed.

P: Mai jab bhi apni akkh(Eye) bhand karti hu, to us Nihaal ka chera saam ne a jata hai.

K: Mai jab bhi apni Akkh bhand karti hu, to us Laksh ha chera saam ne a jata hai.

They both stare at each other and then look the opposite side.They both say something to eachother at the same time.

K&P: I think I am in LOVE!

SORRY I DIDN'T EDIT. HOPE YOU LIKED READING IT AND ENJOYED IT. THANKS A LOT FOR THE COMMEMTS AND PLEASE DO COMMENT ME ON HOW I WROTE THIS PART. THANKS AND REPLY SOON.

NEXT PART COMING SOON!!!

LOVE D:😃

Edited by Dr.Smart - 17 years ago