manthan neha ff part 4 and info

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI, i have just sent a pm to mrs.eishu.srk and i think soon, all the parts up till now will be in the ff index

also i will be posting the rest f the parts in this post only

thanks for the great comments all of you gave

PART 4-------------------------

Neha bids Nakul good bye and walks out, she sees Manthan and smiles sarcastically. He holds her hand and asks her...

Manthan: why were you talking to nakul?

Neha: i can talk to whoever i want, whats your problem?

Manthan: i ....

Neha: don't think too much, it will hurt your head! anyway, all problems aside, come downstairsat 5. sharp!

Manthan mimics Neha after she went

M: come downstair at 5... sharp!

Pari and Archita see this and crack up laughing. Its 5 o'clock and everybody is downstairs

Trupti: i was told there would be fun and games here, where is the fun?

Neha: acctually, there's a slight problem

Trupti: there are always problems in this house!

Neha: acctually the antakshri is postponed to next week

Tanya: kyu? is there any occasion next week?

Neha: yes, you're absolutly rigt, next week, on wednesday is my birthday and i want all of us to have fun that day. So sorry everyone for wasting your time, but there is a plan, we all could go to the theatre and watch a film!

Tulsi: no, no, no, all you kids go, us adults have work to do

Trupti: huh, always comming in way of others

Tulsi: if you want Trupti, you can go

Trupti: rehene digiye baa. i'll stay at home

Neha: ok, so me, nakul, Manthan, Laksh, Eklavya bhaiya, Bhoomi de, pari archita and joydeep will go to the cinema

They all leave

this is how they are all seated:

joydeep, pari, archita, bhoomi, eklavya, Manthan, Neha,Nakul, Laksh, kt

they are watching a horror film. Neha gets a bit scared at a scene and clutches nakul's hand. nakul is touched, he thinks Neha has feelings for him. Manthan sees this and is angry, so he puts his hand on the rest bar so its ready for neha to grasp. Neha sees this and laughs.

Neha: manthan, why iis your hand out?

Manthan: i'll do what ever i want you dont ask me

neha gets scared again and touches Manthan's hand then takes it away when manthan looks at her

Neha: manthan, picture waha hai, mere moo par nahin! stop looking at me

Manthan: i can't

neha: huh?.....

Neha gets up and leaves, manthan: kya hua kaha jaa raheho?

Neha: mujhe yeh film passand nahin hai.

neha leaves. she is walking on the road and cursing manthan: woh kyu nahin aaya mere saath? usse soch naa tha, ki akeli ladki hai, usse mera saath dena chahiye, lakin, nahin. uska ego beach mai aagaya! huh pagal kaheka

just then some thugs see neha, (neha only wears western clothes) she was dressed in jean capris and a black tank top.her hair let down. the thugs whisled at her and tried to touch her

neha: kya kar rahe ko, chodo mujhe, chodo

just then manthan comes and punches one of the boys, there is a short fight sequence and the thugs run away

mantha: tum paagal ho kya, are you mad! how can you go alone out like this, especially at 9 o'clock night?

neha: i told you i was leaving

manthan: you said you were leaving but you did not ask me to come with you! so don't blame anything on me.

neha: if i had asked you? would you have come?

manthan: ammm.........no........yes...no

neha: your so confused, she laughs.

manthan: any way, thants not the point, if anything would have happened to you then?

neha: if....anything...happened to me.... then.?

Manthan: shut up and walk!

neha: thanks manthan i......amm.....

manthan: its ok,, acctually i'm sorry i shouted at you a bit too much

manthan and neha move closer to each other and walk. It suddenly starts raining and neha loves the rain!

manthan runs away under a tree but neha starts turning in the rain. she drags manthan in too. she turns and manthan just looks at her. she stops when she bumps against manthan. she is now evry close to manthan, manthan and neha just look at each other. manthan tries to put back neha's hair, but she turns around. her bracelet is caught in manthan's watch,

neha: manthan.......chodo.....woh....ghar aagaya

she turns to see its caught in manthan's watch. she comes closer again and tries to remove her bracelet from his watch. she then looks up and looks at manthan, he gazes down and tries to undoo it, but neha keeps looking at him.

manthan: hogaya

neha: ha.....hogaya, she says in a soft slow voice

manthan: kya?

neha: kuch nahin, ummm, hogaya, chalo

both are inside SN and tulsi comes

tulsi: manthan, neha, baaki sab kaha hai?

manthan: woh, neha ko horror film passand nahin aaya toh woh beech me se chalee aaye, i accompanied her home

tulsi: aacha kiya tu ne. you did right, a girl of her age should not walk alone at this time.

tulsi: Both of you sit down for dinner, its quite late so all the gharwaale have gone to sleep, i'll serve you.

neha: nahin da, i'll serve myself and manthan, you go up and sleep

tulsi agrees and goes up.

neah and manthan sit down at the table. neha serves food to manthan and notices his hand is bleeding

neha: oh no, your hand is bleeding, she brings a first aid box and puts bandage on manthan's hand, manthan just looks at her and music is in the background.

neha: aab tum khana kaise khaoge? i'll feed you. she takes a spoonfull and feeds manthan

tulsi is upstairs and sees all this, she laughs silently and goes away-------------------------------------------------------- -----------------------------------

i will update you all soon in this same section😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww its really good plz continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok who's neha, just asking as ive only recently started watchin kyunki..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnks that vry nice 👏 👏 keep it up 👏 👏 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww.. how romantic... 😳
Keep on going 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neha is a imaginary character we created for manthan: she is to be played my Kripa of KYPH aka neha bamb 😃 😳
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👏 👏 really good
Edited by amrita93 - 18 years ago
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thanks, that was very good. Please continue
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hey..great job!!!!!!! plz cont soon....and where can i find the first few parts of ur ff??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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there in the ff index labled manthan neha 😆

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