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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for great comments guys.. i m sooo sooo sorry... i knoe i hvnt updated in a very loong tyme...but i'll try n continue sooon!!!
hope u can understand....
luv ya..
rani
p.s.. is anyone interested in continuing this story.. cuz i m kinda geting occupied w/ other things...and i think my writting has gotten preety boring therfore thinking abt stopping it....or giving it to sumone that wud b willing 2 continue....
do pm me if ur interested!.
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Posted: 18 years ago
if u don't mind i would count. ur ff....if u want 😃 😃 😃

❤️love Ya❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEY GUYS... I HV GOT SUM GOOOOD NEWZ FOR U!!!!!....I M NOT WRITING THIS FF ANYMORE.... due to personal problems.. but rather... this FF IS GOIN TO B CONTINUED BY ONE OF OUR FAV FF WRITERS....PARi!!!... i m sure she'll do a way better then me!! 😃 😃

but i'll still continue my kisna kt love destruction....

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
YaY..That'll be good..But we'll also miss your updates Rani 👏
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

YaY..That'll be good..But we'll also miss your updates Rani 👏

i agree zinu...i'll miss her soo much too.....u were like my fav ff writer rani...but i'm glad i will get to read the other ff of urs....😃

❤️Love Ya❤️

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 31

Recap:
kt falls into his strong arms, relaxes herself n hugs him bak......
they stay like this for sometime.....until...lets say...an innteruption!!!lol

Guys I just wanted to change the last line….there was no interruption there….sooo here we go…..i know I won't be writing a good as hers but still….

After a while they pull out…
L: [holding her hands…] to batao mai kya lau[bring] apni hone wali biwi ke liye…?
Kt: [smiles] muje kuch nahi chahiye…..bas tum sahi salamat wapas ajao…wahi bahot hai mere liye….
L: u know what…? Tum itni acchi kyu ho…? Hamesha dusro ke bare mai khud se pehle sochti ho….
Kt: kyuki yehi mere sanskar hai aur yehi to mai chahti hu….
L: [holds her face in his hands and kisse her on her forehead…] Love You…
Kt: Love you too…
L: [looks at his watch] arre bapre…jane ka waqt hogaya…..chalo chalo…chalo….. [and start walking insidebut kt stops him….he turns around and sees tears in her eyes….]
L: kya hua…?
Kt: jus hungs him…tightly…and started crying more….
L: hhhheeeeyyyyy jaan kya hua…?
Kt: [in a crying voice] mat jao…..
L: jana to padegana….
Kt: [still hugging him and crying so much..]
L: Kt…..Kt…..[and he pulls out…][holds her face in his hands] dekho…ye rona bandh karo….
Kt: she sarted crying more…..
L: kt…plzzz…baba ye rona bandh karo warna mai jaa nahi paunga…plz…
Kt:[controls herself and laksh wipes her tears away] soorrryy…..
L: aab ye sorry kaha se agaya beech mai….? Hhhuummm?
Kt: [holds his hands in hers] laksh plzzz tum apna khayal rakhna….khana time par kha lena….rat ko jaldi sooo jana…subhe jaldi wapas uth jana aur ….she gasps……aur…aur muje miss mat karna…[saying that she turns the other way and puts her hand on her heart and her eyes closed…..]
L: sab karlunga…lekin ye miss mat karna….ye nahi hoga mujse..tum janti hona….phir bhi….? Kt……[turns her around]
L: mai jau….?
Kt: puts her finger on his lips….and looks up at him..
Kt: aise nahi bolte….
L: confused..
Kt: mai ja ke ata hu aise bolte hai…..
L:smiles….achha baba [holds her face in his hands] mai ja ke ata hu…khush….?
Kt: [gives him a cute smile…and gives him a warm kiss on his forehead….]
L: jaldi wapas aau…?
Kt: nods…
L: smiles…./ to chale…..?
Kt: hummm….
They both goes downstairs……

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Everybody was waiting for him….he goes and take blessing from everyone and at the end he sses kt…and goes towards her….he holds her hands in front of everyone and kisses her on her forehead….and says I LOVE YOU…. Only with his lips moving….. and she smiles….she was trying to hide her tears but she couldn't and it started streaming out of her eyes…..laksh sees that and kt didn't wanted him to soo she runs upstairs to her room….everyone sees that…laksh felt bad……and ganga sees that….she walks up to laksh…..

G: laksh….tu chinta mat kar…mai teri amanat ko kuch nahi hone dungi….hummm…?
L: thx mom…..and he hugs her…
G: jaaa beta…jaldi jaa ke aaa..?

And he leaves……kt from her room window sees laksh sitting in the car…..laksh sees her in the car's window and looks back up at her…..she waves bye at him..and he does the same……

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❤️Love Ya❤️

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 32

Recap:
G: laksh….tu chinta mat kar…mai teri amanat ko kuch nahi hone dungi….hummm…?
L: thx mom…..and he hugs her…
G: jaaa beta…jaldi jaa ke aaa..?

And he leaves……kt from her room window sees laksh sitting in the car…..laksh sees her in the car's window and looks back up at her…..she waves bye at him..and he does the same……

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Next Day…..

Kt was in her room…. She couldn't go to sleep at night so she got up early and she was dressed up….she went downstairs to the kitchen to make breakfast…ganag was there…..

G: kt…..beta tum archita aur pari ke saath kahi bahar gumne kyu nahi jati….?tumhara mood bhi theek ho jayega….
Kt: nahi maa mai theek hu….
G: achha tum jana nahi chahti to force to nahi karungi… tu upar jaa aur aram kar mai huna…mai nashta bana dungi…..
Kt: par….
G: meri baat nahi manegi…?
Kt: theek hai….[so she goes back upstairs and stands at her window….she was sooo sad…….just then her phone rings…..she picks up…]


Kt: hello…?
Kt: hello……..? koi bolta kyu nahi….?
Kt: hello….?
It was laksh…
L: hi….kaise ho…?
Kt: tum…..kuch bol kyu nahi rahe the….?
L: tumne bolne ka moka hi kab diya…..kabse hello hello kiye jaa rahi ho…..
Kt: accha ek to pehle bolte nahi aur upar se muje…..jao mai tumse bat nahi karti…and she hugs up….
Laksh calls her back…she looks at her phone it showed cute pick of laksh and said chilgosa calling……[hahahaha] she didn't pick up…..he called back again…but she didn't pick up……
Pari was passing by her room and sees what was going on…she walked in and sked her why isn't she picking up the phone…..?
P: kt… kt….kabse phone baj raha hai uthao to sahi…..akhir hai kon….
Kt: muje nahi baat karni usse…..
P: par kisse…?[she picks her phone up and checked who was calling her….and she sees it was chilgosa…and she started laughing……
Kt: kya…khee khee kar rahi ho….?
P: tum bhaiyaaa ka phone kyu nahi utha rahi…?
Kt: muje usse bat nahi kaarni…..
P: acchaa theek hai nahi karni hai to mat karo mai to karungi…so she picked up the phone…
L: hello…kt dekho sorry baba…..mai to mazak kar raha tha pllzzzz phone mat rakhana…..
P: heellloooo..?
L: kon..?
P: apni bahen ki awaz bhi nahi pehchante kya….?
L: pari tu….
P: haa mai….
L: kt kaha hai…..?
P: yehi pe hai….
L: usse phone do….
P: theek hai,,,,[she gives the phone to kt…but she doesn't take it…..
P: wo to bahot naraz hai bhaiya…
L: usse kahona ke I'm sorry…
P: kt bhaiyaa sorry keh rahe hai…plzz unhe maff kardo….?
Kt just walks into the washroom…..
P: bhaiyaa maine keh to diya hai abb agar maff kiya to wapas phone zarur karengi……ok…aap apna khyaal rahna…bye….
L: byee….

They both hangs up and pari puts kt's phone on her bed and leaves……after a while kt comes out of the washroom and sits on her bed……she looks at her phone…and she was thinking should she call or noo….but she picks up the phone and calls laksh…..
L: sees it was kt and picks up the phone and started saying soorryyy soorrryyyy sooorryyy……plzzzz muje maf kardo….?
Kt: amiles and sooorrry….ye sorry kaha se agaya beech mai…
L: tumne to meri jaan hi nikaal di thi….
Kt: ye to ho hi nahi sakta…..
L: kyu…?
Kt: tumhi ne kaha than a ki meri jaan tumhare paas hai waise hi tumhari jaan mere paas hai…..
L: par phir bhi dara diya tha tumne muje…..
Kt: sorry….
L + Kt: ye sorry kaha se agaya beech mai….and they both started laughing…….

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Will count….soon…..
❤️Love Ya❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago

WOW pari... its incredible...much much much much much much better then mines.... 😛 i knew u wud do a fab job!! 😉 😉 thats y i chose u to continue!!! 😃 😃
**MUUUAAHH**
luv ya loads..
rani

p.s by da way whr did u get this really kute pic of pulkit from??!?!{{REF: 2 ur sigg}}can u make me a sigg like dat... but with a diff...(UNIQUE) pic..plz

Edited by rani712 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rani712

WOW pari... its incredible...much much much much much much better then mines.... 😛 i knew u wud do a fab job!! 😉 😉 thats y i chose u to continue!!! 😃 😃
**MUUUAAHH**
luv ya loads..
rani

p.s by da way whr did u get this really kute pic of pulkit from??!?!{{REF: 2 ur sigg}}can u make me a sigg like dat... but with a diff...(UNIQUE) pic..plz

thx rani....i don't think it's better than ur's but still i tried.....

ohhh that was from pulkit's site ummm y ai would surely make u one but today is sunday nd school tommorrow..but still i would try my best....

❤️love Ya❤️

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Posted: 18 years ago
awe so cute. continue soon 😆 😉

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