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Posted: 18 years ago
That part was absolutelt phoenominal!!!!! Do contineu soooonnnn..... What will happen next rani??? I feel sorry for laksh and kt at this moment. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 rani plz continue....really nice one....

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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 28
K: thankz lakshya...
L: theek hai.. mein jaao...
M: sure....but be ready for tomm... tumhari flight kal sham 9pm ki hai...ok...
lakshya nods with a smirk...n leaves....
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lakshya walks downstairs with a sad n confused look on his face.... everyone waz buzy doing sumthing... no one notices the dejected expression on lakshya's face...
he wanted some time alone.. in peace n quiet... he proceeds towards the main door.... he passes tulsi... ganga.... n other ppl... no one seemed to hv recognized him!
while he waz walking.... kt from far sees teh disappointed look... she stops wat she waz doing n follows behind him outside.....
lakshya gets outside... looks up at the bright sun.. n sits on the doorsteps in the front yard pensively... kt cums from behind.. n sits beside him...
KT: kya huwa.... ??
lakshya pretends to ignore her....
KT: lakshyaaaaa... batao nah kya huwa??? tumhara chahara itna udas kyun hai.???
she tries elbowing him in the stomach.....
but lakshya jus shruggs.
L: kt please....( n continues to contemplate at the sky)
KT: (confused) lekin tell me wats wrong....kisse neh kuch tumseh kaha...
Lakshya shakes his head
KT: toh phir problem kya hai.... ( suddenly she gets this inchy feeling dat it cud b sumthing related to mihir calling him upstairs)...oh yaa.. mihir dadu neh tumhe upar kyun bulaya tha....???
Lakshya had no chooice but to tell her now... he cudnt lie to her abt wats buggin him..
L: (still contemplating)...yehi toh baat hai.. woh muhje koi meeting aur bussiness ki training keh liya banglore bhej nah chahateh hai...
kt interrupts
KT:(excitement) WOW... that's amazing...!! kabh jah rahe ho??
L:kal sham koh 9pm ki flight hai....
kt looks at him in disappointment... she waz sad abt it as well.. she had things planed for them before she left for haridwar.... but now everything was ruined....
she hides her sorrow...n tries cheering lakshya up
KT: toh usse mein kya baadi baat hai...???
L: lekin kt... tum next week jah rahi ho...mein chahata tha keh hum hamare kuch pal saath mein spend kare aur...
kt interrupts him again...
kt: lakshya.. tum bilkul pagal ho... tum toh aisa bol rahe ho jaise mein next week marjane wali hona...
lakshya covers her mouth....kt's eyues widen...
L: shhh... aisa kabhi maat bolnah... mere hotai huwai tumhe kuch hojaye.. i wud never want that....
kt eyes get watery as lakshya praises her....n sees the love lakshya had for her....
kt takes his hand off her mouth..
KT: okk.. fine... waise bhi hamari shaadi toh honeh hi wali hanah... tum banglore jao apna kaam khatam.. aur training complete kare kar aao... uskai baad puri zindagi paadi hai mere saath time beeta neh mein.... ok... now smiles...
she tries to make lakshya smile by pulling his cheeks in random direction.....
L: OOOUCCH....( he grab his right cheek in pain)
KT: ( panics) oMG... kya huwa.. i m sorry.. dard huwa....
lakshya slowly smiles flirtishly...n gives her a kute wink...
kt makes an angry face....
kt: (sarchastically) VERY SMART!!! (n starts puching lakshya playfully....)
lakshya holds onto her hands... grins... n hugs her tightly....kt relaxed her self in the warmth of his chest....n hugs him bak.....
N they continue too hug.....
"*AHEEM AHEEM*" a voice calls from behind...
ANY GUESSES....WHO IT CUD BE....
....
,....
,..
as usually archita...
kt lets go off lakshya n they turn...
Archita waz standing behind them with sum other girls...
lakshay touches his forehead in annoyance...while kt slides her bangs behind her ear...
L: tu? phirse???!! (he gets an ARRGHHH feeling..Lol)
archita pretends to ignore him
A: lakshya... muhjse toh tum blame bhi maat kar nah... it snot my fault... public place mein aisa karoge toh ofcourse interrupt kare nah chaye muhje... imagine agar dadi ya chachi hoti toh... u knoe how embarrased u wud hv been... consider ur self lucky... !!
lakshya holds his palms together....
L: OK SORRY MERI MAA.. galti hogayi.. kya baat hai...
A:(looks away..n pretends to b irritate) mein shopping jah rahi huan.. mami pooche toh kahe denah keh dere seh aaoongi.. ok..
lakshya nods...
archita waves goodbyee
A: ok byee lakshya n kt..
she'z abt to leave.. but she stop..
A: by the way... y dunt u 2 get a room... jeez for god's sake....
the girls with archita beging to giggle
kt looks away embarassedly n shyly... lakshya grins...
L: archita Ur sick!!!
archit aleaves laughing.....

END OF PART 28
hope u liked it ... do comment!!
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
AAAWWWSSSOOOMMMEE!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great fanfic rani. plz keep it up 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 Archita, laksh and kt's part was really funny. Bravo girl!!! 👏 👏 👏

😆 😆 😆 You write funny thing in your ff! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
really amazing part.....plz continue soon....

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome 👏
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 29
NEXT DAY EVeNING
it waz almost time for lakshya to go ... lakshya in his room doing his last minute packing.... but surprisingly... kt wasnt there...he waz really confused... "aaj mein jaah raha huan aur kt keh paas mere liya zara bhi waqt nahi.... nah usneh mere saath baat kiya aur nah muhje packing mein help kare neh aayi...yeh chakar kya hai"he wondered to himself...
lakshya then thinks of sumthing.... he sees archita passing by his room.. he calls her over...
L: archita, ek kaam karogi...
A: kya hai lakshya...(gives him a bored look)
L: kt koh kaho mere liya paani lekar aaye plzz..
A: (make a WTH face) kya??? tum nahi kaha sakte...
L: tumhe joh kaha woh karogi
A: tumhe kya daar lagta hai....
L:(grins shyly) daar vaar kuch nahi lagta...abhi bohot sari packing baki hai... toh muhje tyme nahi hai neechai jaane kah....
Archita gives him a slight smile...
A: yaa lakshya (does the quotation thing with her fingers)"time" nahi hai nah....
Lakshya was really getting annoyed .. he gave archita weird look which was a gave her a sign to leave.
A: theek hai .. jaah rahi huan...
archita leaves

DOWNSTAIR iN THE KITCHEN...
damini, tulsi, ganga n kt were all in the kitchen...ganga n tulsi were buzy preparing n packing food for lakshya to carry with him in the plane { LOL 😆 ...SOO BROWN}
tu: ganga tumneh woh achar bharah kya...
KT gives tulsi an akward "WAT THE HELL R U DOING???" look...tulsi sees her weird face....
Tu: kya huwa krishna tulsi, aisa kyun dekh rahi hai
kt:baa..yeh app kya kar rahi hai.. lakshya waha training keh liya jah raha hai ... aur aap usko yeh achar aur sabh pack kar rahi hai... waha toh woh restaurant mein khana khaiye gah nah.. tophir yeh achar ki bottles kya woh dabbai mein lakar ghoomanga..????
tulsi touches her forehead.. ganga burst into laughters
tu:hai bhagwan....dekho ganga kya karo tumhari bahu kah...
kt looks at tulsi confusingly...
Tu: krishna tulsi... yeh achar mein lakshya keh liya nahi... meri saheli joh banglore mein rahati hai uske liya pack kare rahi huan...
kt makes an "OPPS" face...n they all laugh
jus then archita cums into the kitchen....
A: hi chaichi... kaise hai dadi..??... KT (she yells)...
kt turns...
A: lakshya koh panni chaiyai...
kt looks down shyly....
A:lakshya koh paani chaiyee ... woh neechai nahi aa h sakta.... gosh...
archita raises her eyeborws... n makes an ishara of y lakshya wants water from kt....
ganga tells kt to get the water from teh sink n give it to him....
when kt is abt to leave the kt tulsi stops her....
Tu: krishna tulsi... mein paani deeekar aati huan...
kt nods n gives the glass to tulsi...
ganga touches her forehead...
G:( to herself) loh hogaya kaam!!
tulsi leaves....
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upstairs in lakshya's rooom
lakshya waz waiting for kt...
he hears footsteps cuming towards him.. thinking dat it kt... he turns with wide smile....
upon seeing tulsi.. his smile disappears n turns into a frown....
L: dadi aap????(mumbles) archita seh ek kaam theek seh nahi hota
Tu: kya kaha??
L; kuch nahi... apneh kyun takleef kiya.???
Tu: baas yunhi....yeh leh tumneh paani mangayatha...
lakshay takes the glass from her hand n drinks the water....
he gives her the glass again...n tulsi leaves...
he makes a "DAMN IT!!" face... n continues packing...
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continue sooon...
n thnkx for great comment...
do comment on this part!
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 29 (CONTINUE)
AFTER SOME TIME....
it waz almost time for lakshya to go... he waz getting ready to leave for the airport...jus then.. kt, ganga, damini, n archita cum in ..(WITH SACKS OF FOOD)
lakshya turns...1st sees kt.. thinking she waz alone.. he looks down shyly n grins at her....
then other ganga , damini, n archita cum in...
L: (in surprise) MOM??..(.he looks at all containers of food in a shock...) yeh sabh kya hai....???
G: khana tumhare liya,???
L: mom aap pagal hogayi hai.. itna khana... banglore mein restaurants hai... aur plane mein bhi khana milta hai...
G: haan haan muhje paata....( n slaps him playfully)
she pulls his hand towards the bed n makes him n sits besides him...she gives him container by container, n gives him the details to wat waz in it n who he shud give it to n other stuff....lakshya meanwhile...tries n listens to her attentively n puts everything one by one in his suitcase....
L: theek hai mom.. aur kuch....
D: ganga tum yeh toh bhul gayi...(n hands ganga two more nicely decorated containers)
G: oh ya... ( ganga takes the container) yeh leh...isse mein tumhare favorite pakoras n halwa hai....
Lakshya gives ganga a kute smile...
L: thnkz mom...
ganga looks away...
G: meinai nahi banaye....
lakshya looks at damini
L: chachi aapne....
damini shakes her head....n slides to the left...
lakshya sees kt who waz behind damini.... she was looking down shyly....


rani

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