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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh wauw, you guys, don't embarress me. I am the worst to take compliments, sorry, but I really don't know how to handle them. I'm just glad that you enjoyed it. Just had some spare time, and didn't know what to do and also it was a nice way to stress off after my exams.
Thanks, guys. You're incredible at supporting and encouraging *heart* 😃
Oh, and Shasha, hun, the crown will always belong to you, truly 👏 Nothing can beat what you can write!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a mutual appreciation society perfect-now we know where to come when we're on a downer😃

get used to the compliments cause your writing is so in tune to the characters even the comedy thats its amazing. personally i think the time spent on watching kdmh is better spent writing our scenarios as least we try to please each other-not like ekta!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I agree Shasha i love reading what u guys write way more than what Ekta gives us to watch
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Touch, Shasha. Your writing is way way way way way better than the episodes lately 🤢
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luv to read...shasha's , rakuns and elysia's scenarios...they are better then the epis recently..mayb this weekend...ekta mite feel sorry for us!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Expecting Ekta to feel sorry for us would be like expecting world-peace tomorrow.
No wait. It would be like expecting the Devil to end all evil deeds, join good and worship God.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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insomnia has struck so thought id write part 3- happy reading!
ps its long!
Morning after Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Aman and Kakun bedroom
Kakun in bed looking ill-speaking on phone
KK: Tanu good morning.
Tanu: Bhabhi? Good morning,-hesitant-how are you feeling?
KK-with false cheer: Besides at though ive 10 workmen hammering in my head fine!
Tanu-again hesitant: Bhabhi are you sure? You seemed upset and....
KK cuts in: No no Sweetie, it was just not having eaten anything i was just giddy and light headed, thats all.
Tanu protest: But Bhabhi i saw.....
KK-forcefully: YOU DIDNT SEE ANYTHING!
SILENCE
KK: Tanu not everything we see is what we think it is. Sweetheart you are now married and are going to be a mother,you must learn that the relationship between husband and wife is not like any other and so you cant put the same expectations on it as other relationships.
Tanu: But...
KK-with false laughter: But nothing-im fine your Aman Bhai is fine and in fact if i dont get his breakfast hes going to kill me!
Tanu-cheerfully: I know hes so particular about his breakfast! It was nice speaking to you Bhabhi and im so glad i was wrong, i was really worried....
KK: You are not to worry about anyone else but you and the baby-got it
Tanu: Whatever you say Bhabhi, speak you later.
KK: Take care- ends call-
Kakun head falls in to hands,eyes closed, shoulders slumped, tears seeping from eyes.
KK to herself: Oh Tanu how could i spoil your happiness-you have married the man you love and who loves you. You have moved into a pariwa that have welcomed you with open arms and you are having a baby that has brought so much happiness-how selfish would i be if for 1minute i caused you to worry.
KK runs from bed to bathroom and violently sick.
Knock on bedroom door
Rahul: Kakun? Bha...? Kakun?
Rahul opens doors and sees room is empty, he hears KK being sick. He walks in has tray in hand, puts it down on table and goes into bathroom.
KK is sitting on floor by basin eyes closed looking weary, Rahul washes face cloth with cool water and wipes KK face
Rahul-gently: I told you. Come on back to bed.
Rahul helps KK up and back to bed
Rahul: i bet you head hurts so much you want to rip it off! this will help,
He picks up tray
KK-angerily: HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY BEDROOM. GET OUT GET OUT NOW.
Rahul: Kakun......
KK: GET OUT! I DIDNT ASK YOU TO BRING ME ANYTHING!
Aman-by bedroom door: Sorry love that was my fault-smiles and enters room-i knew you would be feeling unwell so i had they tray made up with coffee and toast. i was going to bring it myself but a call came, Rahul was coming up so i asked him to bring it.
Takes tray from Rahul
Aman: Sorry didnt expect you to get you head bitten off-but hey im glad it was yours and not mine!- sits on bed next to KK-
Rahul-shrugs: No problem Bhai, glad I could take it for you. Well im late for the office, hope you feel better
-walks out of room-
Aman: here drink this-puts cup in KK hands-KK flinches-
Aman: Kakun last night....im so sorry...i dont know what got into me.
KK has flasheback to scene of Aman on top of her, hurting her. She draws as far back from him as she can
KK-frightenly: stay away from me your a monster!
Aman: i didnt mean it -tries to touch her face-
KK: NO! -drops coffee over him
Aman: Why you.......
Bebe: Kakun puta how you feeling now?
Bebe enters room and walks over to bed
Bebe: Aman puta DP is calling you
Aman: Ji Bebe im just going-walks away but turns to KK and mouths-this is not over.
Rahul is in his office, hes sitting back and thinking of last night-flashback to KK singing, but then this morning of her shouting at him.
Rahul to himself: Bloody hell what a mess ive made out of mine and Kakun lives! i never thought that going to kolkatta would be the cause of so much anguish for so many people! -rubs face- if only i could turn the clock back and told NainaB no -another flashback to KK memories- but then i wouldve never of learnt what true love was.
Hits hand on table. Phone rings.
Rahul-grumpily: Hello?
NainaO: Oh someone woke from the wrong side of the bed? or didnt you have enough coffee this morning-should i send FatimB with a flask?
Rahul-laughs: Please no! Knowing her the coffee will come with a 10 course breakfast and i can just about fit the clothes i have!
NainaO-laughs: OK, hey hows Kakun?
Rahul-short: Fine-changes topic quickly-so what can i do for you madam lawyer?
SILENCE
Rahul: Naina you there?
NainaO: yes sorry, mind wondered for a sec, just wanted to see if we were playing basketball today?
Rahul: im not sure...
NainaO: Come on this is possibly my last free afternoon.
Rahul: How comes?
NainaO: Court coming back in session, in fact ive a meeting to go so yes or no and if its no im sending FatimaB!
Rahul-laughs: In that case yes-see you there -closes phone-
NainaO holds phone against cheek and murmurs: Yeah see you there -has soppy smile on face-
FatimaB-clears throat: Madam breakfast -nothing from NainaO- Breakfast -again nothing from NainaO. goes close to her and shouts in ear- NAINA BREAKFAST!
NainaO: Ow! FatimaB you didnt have to shout at me
FatimaB: No of course not, thats why breakfast has been sitting on the table for the last 15minutes-you like you coffee cold, you like your toast cold you like your eggs hard, you like.....
NainaO laughs and hugs FatimaB: OK Baba im sorry, come lets eat ive got to leave soon.
NainaO at breakfast table, FatimaB buttering her toast
FatimaB: So...?
NainaO: Kya so...?
FatimaB: Phone mein kaun tah?
NainaO-blushes: Phone? oh no one just Rahul
FatimaB-raises 1 eyebrow: Just Rahul?
NainaO-starts fidgeting: Yes just Rahul, i called to confirm if we're playing basketball today-we are. Wasnt the party lovely yesterday and Tanu looked so happy. His, Rahul family are so nice and welcoming!
NainaO peeps at FatimaB who is looking at her sternly
FatimaB: Very nice family, the perfect susral for someone and only the 1 son left to marry off.
NainaO: Well i cant spend all day chatting one of us has to pay the bills.
FatimaB: So i do nothing all day? Just sit and watch ekta kapoor dramas? Ive got better things to do then watch that rubbish!
NainaO-kisses FatimaB on cheek: I didnt say that, but remember to tell me what happens kahe na kahe when i get home.
winks and leaves
FatimaB: That girl! Well ihad better sort it out, left to her we wont get pass the basketball court!
FatimaB picks up phone and dials
Kakun sitting in her bedroom staring outside window-looking very tired, phone rings
KK: Hello?
FatimaB: Kakun Beti, mein hu FatimaB app kasai hu?
KK: FatimaB? Im fine thank you for asking-im sorry i didnt get to spend anytime with you yesterday....
FatimaB: Nay nay you had more important things to do.
KK: Thank you, was there anything else?
FatimaB: Well... Beti Naina wont say this but she really likes Rahul and your pariwa. She would be perfect for him, in fact their playing basketball this afternoon.
KK: Are they?
FatimaB: Yes they speak everyday and i think Rahul likes Naina too. Kakun Beti i know i asked this but would you talk to Bebe and gayo about Rahul and Naina ki rishta?
KK-small pause-quietly: Ji FatimaB. What could be more appropiate then me speaking about Rahul rishta to Naina. I'll speak to them anything else.
FatimaB-happy: Lakh lakh shukar Kakun beti thats it. Take care of yourself -closes phone-
KK laughs bitterly
KK to herself: once again mere zindigi aik mor mein aye! Chello yeah bhi mein Rahul kiliay kurti hu-woh toh khush toh mein bhi khush?
Sign reads Aman Punj Attorney at Law
Knock on door
PA: Sir your next appointment is here
Aman: Send them in
NainaO walks in
Aman stands
Aman: What a pleasant surprise, but.....ah i see youve taken over the Sinha case
NainaO: Hi Aman, yes i was asked to take over, thought id tell you yesterday but with everything.....how is Kakun?
Aman: A little bit worse for wear but she'll be fine and im glad you didnt tell me i hate mixing business with pleasure thats more Dad and Rahul style-looks intently at NainaO
NainaO: Well until recently is was always business for me so not sure which camp i fall into. Shall we get down to it?
A few hours later
NainaO: Rahul was right you never lose, ive learnt a lot-thank you
Aman-laughs: And he was right about you; you love to win and i return the compliment back. How about some luch? tea? coffee? juice?
NainaO: Just juice ive got a basketball match and my opponent is very tricky-smiles-
Aman-lifts phone: 2 fresh juices
Aman: So did you have agood time last night?
NainaO: Yes great. i was telling rahul how much fun it must of been growing up in such a large loving family.
Aman: It was even the fights were fun too
NainaO: Thats what exactly what Rahul said.
Aman: You 2 seemed to have become very good friends, surprising consdiering..?
NainaO: Considering?
Aman: That you tried to put him away for murder?
NainaO-cooly: That was the job i was hired to do and i am a professional.
Aman: hmmm true but i thought i wouldve had a harder battle against you?
NainaO: What can i say the better lawyer won -has flashback to tape-
Knock on door juice is brought in
PA: Sir the gifts? -shows gift boxes-
Aman: They've come give me-turns to Naina- what you think?
Opens boxes-1 has a diamond set, the other a sari
NainaO: Georgous for Kakun?
Aman-laughs: No for my mistress! Of couse for Kakun thought it would cheer her up -turns to PA- send them and a bouquet of flowers to my wife.
NainaO: Did you choose them yourself?
Aman: Yes-when you love someone there is great pleasure in choosing things for them, in wanting to make them happy especially if youve made them unhappy or they feel unwell.
NainaO: I suppose your right, anyway if thats it?
Aman: Yes but 1 thing id like you to consider...
NainaO: Yes?
Aman: My practise is growing in leaps in fact way to fast for me to handle alone would consider coming into partnership with me?
NainaO-surprised: Hadnt ever thought of partnership before? Im very independent and i like not having to take orders from anyone.
Aman: I understand but i said partnership, you would still be independent to take on whatever cases you wanted but we would share the work load. To be honest i want to be able to spend more time at home.
NainaO: How come?
Aman: Would you believe it Kakun and I have yet to go on honeymoon! Ever since we've married i havent been ablt to spend anytime with her its been 1 case after another. she doesnt complain but its not fair on her also i dont want to get into the workaholic habit like Dad and Rahul.
Naina O: Rahul?
Aman: Yeah Rahul-hes like Dad work is paramont oh they love their family and Rahul will put his family 1st but he wants someone who doesnt hang onto him. He wants someone who is independent and has her own life but combines it with the family. I suppose he knows that he wouldnt be able to spend great amounts of time with her and doesnt want her to mope around the house getting bored!
NainaO: You think so?
Aman: Well ive known some of girls hes liked and they all had careers, but im different ive always loved watching Bebe and Mum at work, making the house a home. I suppose thats 1 of the reasons i love Kakun so much; she loves the home, take pleasure in doing things for the family, we both want kids, in fact shes a replica of Mum. Work has never been my top pirority and i want to be able to spend time with my family, so im sorting it out from now-thats why the offer.
NainaO: Why me?
Aman: I like fighters and your excellant at what you do also if im honest i cant see you wasting your talants sitting at home watching ekta kapoor dramas!
NainaO-laughs: Ektas dramas seem to be following me around but your right however i need time to think. Your sure it has nothing to do with keeping 'your friends close but your competitors closer?'
Aman-laughs:You could be right! But no hurry, take care.
NainaO: Bye -leaves room-
Aman walks to cupboard and opens it takes out bottle and pours drink into glass and drinks in 1 go, pours another glass. Relaxs in chair
Aman to himself: No Naina not about keeping the competition close but about destroying it! Having you in Rahul orbit makes it check and that means the queen is defenseless so checkmate! -salutes with drink-
I know this is boring compared to the 1st but i wanted to tie in all the lose ends that Ekta enjoys leaving hanging! However spoiler alert part 4 will be the last and it will end on a cliff hanger! also hopefully will have a great RaKun scene!
Edited by shasha74 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was brilliant shasha lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Talk about a shocker- Rahul marries NainaO; bloody hell can Ekta heep any of her promises?! Anyway I hope this cheers you guys up keep smiling guys😊 for at least we have each other
-virtual hug🤗
Kakun in bedroom, rolling up her long sleaves looks down at arms and sees bruises on wrist and arms.
KK to self: So this is what my life has come too? Ive become everything that i detested in other women-weak, stupid, letting a man dictate terms to me! Hell i deserve everything that Aman does, for i allow him to do it!
Knock at door Kammu enters with bouquet of flowers and gift boxes
Kammu: App kilay Aman Bhai say
KK: just put it down anywhere
Kammu puts everything on bed and hands note to KK
KK reads note
Aman voice: My dear they say all is fair in love and war-well im in love with you and at war with you. You will surrender to me one way or the other, the choice is yours to whether it is a sweet surrender of a painful one! Always remember i made you and i can destroy you-Rahul is beginning to hate you and by the time i am finished he wont even be able to bare the sight of you! Give in Kakun it'll save you from more pain in the long run for I WILL WIN!
KK: NEVER! -throws all gifts onto floor storms out of room-
KK goes to sitting room to where Bebe and Gayo are having tea
Gayo: Perfect timing kakun, tea?
KK: No thanks Mum, but i wanted to speak to you and Bebe
Bebe: Kya hai puta?
KK: What do you think of NainaO for Rahul?
Gayo & Bebe-surprise: NainaO?
KK: Ji they are spending a lot of time together and seem to enjoy each others company. In fact they're playing basketball today. She comes from a good background and everyone likes her.
Gayo: Yes but isnt she rather career minded?
KK-laughs: If thats what Rahul likes?
Bebe: Gayo not a bad idea-she is a sweet girl and Rahul seems fond of her, i have no objections.
Gayo: Then i dont have a problem either, Kakun speak to Rahul....
KK: No Mum, better coming from you. Last time he said he'll tell YOU his decision.
Gayo: Fine i'll speak to him when he comes home
KK: I need to check something, i'll see you later
KK goes into garden and sits on joola
KK to herself: Part 1 finished-at least Aman can stop using Rahul to blackmail me. If hes married to NainaO then Aman will back off and leave him alone.-looks at outhouse-
KK gets up and walks to outhouse and enters walks around room slowly, comes to sofa and drops on floor, head rest on her arm on sofa-flashback to previous evening-we see more of what occured between them-
Rahul enters in sports gear
Gayo: Rahul come here i havent seen you all day.
Rahul-kisses Gayo: Hi Mum you know what its like work,work and more work!
Gayo: so you go to work wearing sweaty sports clothes!
Rahul-laughs: No Mum ive just come from playing basketball
Gayo: Who with? NainaO?
Rahul: How did you know?
Gayo-ignores question: Beta, look Tanu is now married, your brothers are settled, its time you were too.
Rahul-protest: Mum....
Gayo-sternly: No! Enough youve had your single time and i want to see you married now not when im too old to play with your childern. Your Father and I want you ALL settled so we can relax and that means you are to marry. We all like NainaO; she's pretty, smart and you 2 seem to like each other-so whats wrong?
Rahul-angry: Im not ready and who the he...sorry Mum who put the idea of me and NainaO in your head? Shes JUST A FRIEND nothing more!
Gayo: Rahul everyone agrees that you 2 seem to have a connection, Kakun just thought......
Rahul-furious: HOW DARE SHE! IVE TOLD HER NOT TO INTERFER IN MY LIFE. WHAT I DO OR DONT DO IS NO ONES BUSINESS BUT MINE WHO THE HELL DOES SHE THINK SHE IS?1
Gayo-angerily: RAHUL, thats no way to talk. Kakun is your Bhabhi and she has every right to be concerned about you..
Rahul-not listening: Had enough of her interfering in my life! Where is she?
Rahul storms off
Gayo: Rahul? Rahul come back
Rahul goes upstairs and forcefully open Aman bedroom door
Rahul-shouts: KAKUN!
Sees Kammu outside room
Rahul-angry: Kammu where is Kakun?
Kammu-hesitant: She was in the garden-Kammu walks away quickly
Rahul is about to leave room when something catches eyes, he looks closer and sees Aman gifts on floor. Flashback-
Aman in Rahul office: Hey Bro, busy
Rahul-goans: Like a bee in summer! What can i do for you?
Aman: Just wanted to apologise for Kakun, she didnt mean to shout at you just want feeling well.
Rahul-fake smile: No worries i understood. -thinks it still hurt-
Aman: Anyway look i got her these so hopefully she'll be in a better mood-shows the diamond set and sari-
Rahul-questioningly: Nice but didnt take her for a materialistic person?
Aman-laughs: You have a lot to learn-no matter how simple they are show them some sparkle and a designer dress they just cant resist-Kakun included. Anyway got to run, see you at home.
Back to room
Rahul-angerily: So thats how you treat a gift from your husband-i had you all wrong Kakun and im not going to let you get away with treating my brother like this when all hes done is love you!
Storms out of room and goes into garden cannot find KK. about to head back but glances over to outhouse and is drawn to it. Looks as though no one is there about to turn away but turns back and opens door.
It is dark inside the only light comes from the flickering of the flames in fireplace -goes in and by sofa sees an outline knows its KK
Rahul has totally lost control! Grabs KK by upper arm and lifts her against him:
Rahul: You selfish money grabbing witch! i regret from the bottom of my heart that i ever met you or fell in love with you! All you've ever done is cause pain to those that love you-well ive had enough and im not going to let you hurt my brother!
KK: Rahul your hurting me!
Rahul: Not how much id like too! I wish i could break your bloody neck-why NainaB had to die i dont know but as far as im concerned the wrong sister died that day!
KK wrenches herself out of Rahul grip
KK loses control
KK: You bas***d! How dare you! How dare you speak about love-you have no idea of what it means! You made me fall in love with you just so that you could get my land! You lied and put out me in prison so that i would get out of you life. You treated me like dirt and deframed me in front of everyone me all because you couldnt bare to lose your golden boy image!
You call me selfish? You call me greedy? No Rahul your talking about yourself! Your nothing but a spoilt brat whos never heard the word NO! If anyone is the cause of my sister death its you for like me we had the misfortune to fall in love with you-the one person on this entire earth who is UNWORTHY OF ANYONES LOVE.
You say you regret having met me-not more then i do! I LOST EVERYTHING FOR YOU INCLUDING MY SISTER!
You regret loving me? You dont even know the meaning of the word, asked me who has scarificed just about everything for you; her home, her pariwa, her sister and now even her izaart and for what-looks up and down at Rahul- you?!
Dadu was right about love it doesnt exist, its false made up to fool people like me! And you know what the biggest irony of all this is...
KK pulls Rahul by his shirt so their face to face
KK: I STILL LOVE YOU! -laughs but full of pain- isnt that funny after EVERYTHING you are stil in my heart, in every heartbeat, in every breath that i take! -KK lets go off Rahul turns around and walks a few steps back-
Hears clapping-KK turns around
Rahul: You shouldve become an actress, bravo! Love me? What a joke thats why your pushing me to marry NainaO! That really shows your love for me; what do you want the name and money of Aman Punj and from me, Rahul Punj your lover?
KK slaps him hard
KK-disgusted: So i married Aman for his name and money? who gave you that idea i wonder- your beloved brother Aman by any chance?! You think you know him, but im the only one who does! The saintly son and brother in everyones eyes is nothing but a SHITAN!
Rahul-grabs KK by hair: You bitch! Hes done nothing but love you and defend you to everyone and this is how you treat him?!
KK-head back looking at Rahul: Love me? Defend me? What would Aman know about love or izzart? In his mind the world revolves around the wants and needs of Aman Punj and if he cant get what he wants he'll use what ever means at his disposal to get it no matter what the cost is to anyone else!
Rahul: And you would know wouldnt you? After all thats what you did to me-you wanted me and you got me-flashback to Nainab and Rahul wedding but its KK under the gunghat-
KK: I learnd everything i know from the master -Aman Punj!
Rahul-grabs KK by the arms and shakes her: painfully You have no shame!
KK cries out in pain
Rahul: Kakun...?
KK-mocking: My pain means something to you? Are you sure im not just acting!
KK turns away quickly, smooths shaking hands gently over arms making sure her arms are covered, wipes away tears.
KK-turning back to Rahul: So where were we? -jumps back as Rahul is right behind her-
Rahul-sternly: Let me see!
KK-puts arms behind her back: See what? Im an actress remember? Im not worthy of your concern! I think enough has been said and ive got better things to do with my time then waste it over a little boy crying over split milk! Did you know my darling husband sent me a diamond set? Well he must get his just rewards for such an expensive gift!
Rahul-threateningly: LET-ME-SEE!
KK-walking backwards: See what?
Rahul grabs KK into a hold with 1 arm with the other he lifts her arms up. Her sleaves fall to her elbow and in the flickering light Rahul sees deep purple bruises on KK arms.
Flashback to night before Tanu is leaving Punj home, she is by herself looking upset, Rahul finds her-
Rahul: Hey Brat why so sad? We're not a million miles away and you know this will always be your home.
Tanu-quick smile: I know, Aman Bhai said the same thing when i went to give the food to Kakun Bhabhi.
Rahul-looks intently-softly: Hey kiddo whats wrong? You know you can always come to me?
Tanu-nods: I know but what if i couldnt? What if i knew something about someone but no one would believe me? What if i knew someone i loved was hurting, physically, someone i loved?
Rahul-urgently: Tanu-tell me the truth everything is ok with you and Rohit? If hes hurting you then i dont care your not going anywhere!
Tanu-vehmently: No Bhai its not me!
Rahul: Then who?
Tanu: I...-Rohit comes-
Rohit: Tanu we've got to go now Mum and Dad are expeting us.
Tanu-turns to Rahul and hugs him-whisper beggingly: PLEASE look after Kakun Bhabhi!
Rahul steps back and looks at Tanu. Tanu looks beseachingly at him Rahul nods
Back to outhouse room
KK-panic in voice: Let me go! Let me go right now Rahul Punj! Remember its me the selfish lying witch. Let me go!
Rahul lets go from hold and brings KK arms down but he holds one wrist in each of his hands and kisses the bruises.
KK-shocked: Ra...Rahul no
Rahul draws KK closer to him and holds her tightly-remember 1st time Anurag held KK like that
KK: Rahul please no
Rahul lifts KK head from his shoulder and starts to gently drop kisses on KK face
KK shocked whisper: Rahul!
Rahul lips inch away from KK
Rahul with gentle force: Your mine Kakun and will always be mine as I will be yours. Nothing on earth can change that, we have tried to, everyone around us has tried too-but we've all have failed and thats because our love is true. This is what was meant to be, this is what is suppose to be, this is right. Nothing else matters
Rahul head moves down that final inch and he completes the kiss.
Well guys hoped you enjoyed, im doing an ekta and not keeping my word so looks like its going to go on for a bit longer-say another 100 parts or so😉
Edited by shasha74 - 16 years ago
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Guys- Part 5 of aik kamre mein bandho, talk about making my brain work you guys owe my chocolate by the truck load😊
-Posting here as i dont know which thread members are reading on.
That night, but very late.
Aman and Kakun Bedroom-Aman comes in, only a lamp is on. He walks over to the dressing table takes off jacket and pulls tie drops both onto the floor. Takes out hip flask and is about to drink
Kakun voice: Aman please dont drink.
Aman-laughs: What do you care? Its one way to get rid of me and that is what you want? Me gone from your life isnt it?! -turns around and searches for KK-
KK walks towards Aman from the dark corner into the light of the lamp-stops.
Aman has flask raised to mouth but stops-drops flask to floor-
Aman-shocked whisper: Kakun?-stares stunned. His hand searches for th light switch-lights go on-
Kakun stands before him dressed in the sari he sent wearing the diamond set, she looks stunning. Behind her on the bedside table are the flowers that Aman had sent with the gifts.
Aman: Kakun?
KK Yes Aman?
Aman: I..you..a
KK: Is this the time to come home? Ive been waiting for you all evening Aman i thought we could go out for dinner but oh no its work work and more work for you. Do you even remember that you have a wife?
KK bends and picks up jacket and tie from floor
KK: Really i cant believe that you ever lived alone-you are so messy-looks up at Aman smiles, then frowns-Aman?
Aman: Kakun? I dont understand?
KK: Been drinking as usual! You know i hate it when you drink-walks over to Aman lifts hand and puts it on his cheek-softly,imploring-please Aman please stop drinking
Aman-slowly nods: As long as you never leave me, promise me Kakun,-desperate voice-promise me, promise you will never leave me!
KK: I promise you i will be with you till the end. Happy? Now since its too late to go out for dinner let me go get us something to eat.
Kakun leads Aman to the chair and seats him
KK: I'll be right back ok
She leaves Aman grabs her by the wrist-flashback to Rahul doing it in outhouse-
KK-flinches: Ow!
Aman: What? Kakun you ok?
KK-nods rubs wrist: Im fine
Aman: Let me see-takes KK wrist and lifts sleave sees bruises- How? I did didnt i? Im so sorry, so very sorry. I promise i'll never hurt you again, never.
KK: Forget it Aman, i want to forget about it, everything. Now are you going to keep me talking all night as well as keeping me hungry, huh?
KK doesnt wait for answer walks out of room
Aman to himself: Am i dreaming? is this real? My Kakun? My Kakun is back? I cant believe it, i cant believe it. -leans head back has smile on face-
Next Morning
Gayo is setting breakfast table with KK
Gayo to KK: Aman has already left? That boy all he does is work! What time did he come home? Not in time to take you out to dinner-you looked so lovely!
Aman voice: Who looked lovely?-comes down the stairs with big smile, goes over to Gayo and kisses her on cheek
Gayo-suprised: You here? -annoyed- And what time did you come home last night? Kakun waited for you all evening for you to come and she didnt eat anything. What do you have to say for yourself?
Aman: I know Mum, im sorry
Gayo: Dont say sorry to me say it to Kakun!
Rahul comes in and takes his seat at table
Rahul-quietly: Morning Mum, -nods to Aman-
Bebe comes and sits down at table
Everyone to Bebe: Morning Bebe
Bebe-sternly to Aman: And you-what type of husband are you? Send your wife gifts and there she is dressed up waiting for you and you not only dont turn up you cant even be bothered to spend 10 rupees on a call!
Aman: Bebe...
Bebe: Dont Bebe me! Itni kubsoorat Kakun lagri thi, Rahul say poochlo- Bebe looks at Rahul, Rahul looks down at plate
Aman looking at Rahul: I dont need to ask Rahul- i saw myself she was a vision, i thought i was dreaming-has smile on face- until she started telling me off! -smiles at Kakun
Bebe looks at KK: Kakun puta tumnay bord dant dayni thi
Gayo: Rahul...
Rahul is looking at KK, she is standing close to Aman and pouring him juice.
Gayo: Rahul?
Rahul-startled: Mum? -Rahul mobile rings- Hi Naina, no its fine, yeah 4pm should be fine BB court-great see you there. -ends call- mum you were saying something?
Gayo and Bebe looking at each other
Bebe to Rahul: Bus Rahul puta hum ko NainaO pasan hai. Or hum app duno ki rishta karni hai
Rahul-protest: Bebe...
Bebe: Bus!
DP: Morning. Kaun Bebe ko parashaani kara hai?
Bebe: Sub ki shaadi hogaya sif Rahul ki pir or kaun muhje parashaani day sakt ta?
DP: Bebe he'll marry just find him the girl?
Bebe: DP hum nay ladki dunlia-NainaO
DP looks at Gayo,she nods: Not bad, i like the girl -looks at Rahul-so?
Rahul-looks cornered: Dad i...
KK-pouring juice for Bebe: Dad i think shes perfect for Rahul and she'll fit in with the family really nicely.
Rahul-annoyed: Kakun stay out of it!
Pretti false sweetness: Kakun Bhabhi Rahul or Bhabhi. And i agree with Kakun NainaO would be perfect for you. And we've all noticed how much time the two of you spend together.
Rahul-frustrated: Ive told you all she is JUST A FRIEND!
Sid: yeah id like a friend like that -winks at Rahul-
DP: Enough! Fine Bebe Gayo you sort it out. Sid you coming with me to the office? What about you Rahul?
Sid-getting up and quickly drinking juice: I'll come with you, bye.
Rahul: I'll come in a little while, ive got to take care of something important 1st -looks at KK-
Aman: Well im off, Kakun see me to the car.
KK smiles: Of course -helps Aman into jacket. both go off-
Bebe to Gayo: Lakh, lakh shukar ab woh duno ki rishta teek hai.
Gayo: Ji Bebe
Rahul gets up and leaves the table
Gayo: Rahul you havent eaten anything -talking to his back-
Gayo looks at Bebe both shrug
KK is goes into study with a vase full of flowers she puts them on desk, hears door close and lock turning-whirls around
Rahul-leaning against door: Alone at last
KK-annoyed: Rahul what do you think your doing? Open the door at once.
Rahul-mocking: Giving me orders? No Kakun you DONT give me orders not anymore! -walks over to her, takes her shoulders and shakes her- angry- what do you think your playing at? Hes DANGEROUS! Im going to see Devi Aunty and tell her the truth and your coming with me and will stay there until this is all sorted out!
KK-sternly: NO! And your not going to tell anything to Ma, shes gone through enough pain as it is! And as for Aman he's my problem not yours-im his wife and hes my husband what happens between us is none of your business!
Rahul: He hurt you! He physically hurt you -takes arms and show bruises-
KK: He didnt mean too and he was very sorry, it was the drinking, i understood it wasnt him. He promised he wouldnt do it again and i believe him
Rahul: Hes lying to you! The drinking is no excuse and you know that im right.., Kakun yesterday...
KK-shouts: Dont mention yesterday, it was nothing, i was upset with Aman and thats it!
Rahul: YOUR LYING! YOU STILL LOVE ME NOT AMAN.
KK: Listen to me Rahul, i am Mrs Kakun Aman Punj and nothing will change that. Aman and i sorted out our differences last night.
Rahul: What do you mean?
KK: You can guess what im saying Rahul. And thats all i have to say on the matter now leave me be, you've been the cause of all the problems between me and Aman!
Rahul-stunned: You...he..you and he? i dont believe you?
KK: Believe what you want Rahul, i dont care as long as you leave me alone.You told me to move on in my life and i have with Aman. Im giving the same advise back to you, move on Rahul, NainaO lovely and i know she likes you, she'll make you really happy.
Rahul-disbelieving: You...I had you all wrong. I thought yesterday in the outhouse meant something to you but it didnt did it?
KK: I was upset and you were a shoulder for me to lean on-im sorry you thought it meant more.
Rahul-in disgust: NaianO is worth a hundred of you! At least shes honest! Everyones right she is perfect for me, id take her over you any day!
Leaves KK and walks out of study, slams door.
KK lets out deep breath falls against desk as though that is the only thing supporting her, closes eyes -flashback to yesterday-
Rahul head desending to KK-he kisses her.
Rahul-gently: Kakun you cant stay with Aman-hes an alcoholic and hes hurting you -shows bruises-. Please my love you have to leave him
KK looks at Rahul bemused, not understanding what hes saying.
Rahul-shakes her gently: Listen i'll sort a place out but its too dangerous for you to be anywhere near him, you dont know what he may do. Do you understand hes dangerous he could seriously hurt you at anytime! -furious- When i get my hands on him, im going to make him pay for what hes done to you!
KK head is clearing-frightened: NO RAHUL! Your not to go anywhere near him. Do you understand me? Stay away from Aman!
Rahul: Im not frightened of him but im going to make damn sure that'll hes going to be frightened of me from now on!
KK: Please Rahul No! I cant take anymore -tears fall- please Rahul dont do anything.
Rahul-takes tear on finger: Hes not worth these precious drops, dont waste them on him.
KK: Not for him, but for what he may do to you, please Rahul, mere kasum kuch bhi nay karo?
Rahul-frustrated: Kakun -she looks at him beseachingly- resignly-ok but only for you and im giving you till tomorrow then im taking you away and thats final!
KK: But..
Rahul-stern: Damn it Kakun hes dangerous, do you see these bruises they're nothing compared to what he could do to you and im not taking that chance, not with you.
KK: Ive got to go.
Rahul: Are you listening to me? You have to be careful, stay as far away from him as you can. Stay with Mum or Bebe, makes excuses not to be with him, do you understand?!
KK: Yes, yes but ive got to go-if anyone sees us together and he finds out he'll make it worse -looks far away- he can make it alot worse for you.
Rahul: I dont care about me, in fact let him bring it on and i'll show him what worse looks like.
KK: You promised! Ive got to go.
Look at each other. KK turns to go, Rahul takes hold of wrist in usual fashion, chooriyan breaks
Rahul: Kakun dont you ever lie to me again! I dont need you protecting me ok?
KK nods and leaves outhouse
KK walking back to house
KK to herself: Oh lord what happened? I almost told him everything. Rahul, you dont understand how dangerous he is. You've just no idea, i couldnt believe it and i had the proof in my very own hands, how would you? You may not care about yourself but i do my love and he has the tape that could send you to death-how can i let that happen? how can i take that chance with your life?. Aman has hurt me more then you can imagine, -laughs sadly looks at bruises- that these bruises are nothing, NOTHING, to what hes done; hes the murderer of my sister, of our love, my mothers peace, of friendship, i cant add you that list my love i just cant. Forgive me my love, forgive me for what im going to do but i have to protect you. For all of us i have to do this there is no choice left, no choice left. -tears running down KK face, runs the rest of the way back to house-
Back to study
KK looking at door-her arm reaches out: My love forgive me for lying to you, for hurting you but this is the only way, believe me the only way... -arm drops, KK head drops to chest, slumps against desk.

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