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hey guys,
ive got so FED UP with kdmh that late last night i started writing a scene in which i hope shows even if for just a moment everything which we want from kdmh. that everything is forgotton but the love of rahul and kk.
for those already read it ive tweaked it here and there
so have a read......
Raining outside.
Inside the Punj house celebration of Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Rahul has come with NainaO as his guest.
Aman to KK mockingly: seems my brother has a thing for girls with the name Naina.
KK turns to Aman- eyes full of pain,softly: there was a time when my pain meant something to you-i wish i had never found the truth about you. i wish i could just forget for 1 moment what you did-i would've of happily of lived with you as your wife if you'd not killed Naina, my sister. i.......
KK just looks at Aman sighs and turns away and walks to Tanu
Aman watching KK: so you want to forget for a moment? then my dear your wish is my command and in that moment you will be forever mine.
Tanu to KK: Bhabhi thank you so much for everything, if it wasnt for you and Rahul Bhai i wouldn't be.....
KK to Tanu: quiet-you silly child. i've done nothing.
Tanu: Bhabhi i'll make it up to you and Rahul Bhai
Both look at Rahul who is on the otherside of the room with NainaO
Sid: drinks for the 2 most lovely ladies in the room!
KK: Sid Bhai thank you but y u know i don't drink and Tanu can't either.
Sid: Bhabhi these are just special juices don't worry- i don't want you and Tanu falling around drunk what would people think!- Sid winks at them
KK and Tanu both laugh and take a glass and drink.
KK walks away and giggles out aloud.
KK: was that me? and giggles again
Waiter to KK with note-we have some unfinished business meet me in the out house. no name. KK looks around her eyes catch Rahul who lifts his glass slightly to her.
KK: what does he want now? how much more can i take?
KK looks again and sees Rahul watching her
KK: the air will be good for me and it may have something to do with Tanu and Rohit.
KK goes to the out house and gets wet, she still feels slightly off balance, in out house the light flickers and goes out. moon light streams in through the open window. door opens and shuts
KK's back is to the person entering
KK: what do you want Rahul?
Rahul: what do i want shouldnt the question be but what do YOU want KK? it is OVER between us, i've told you. you are Aman Punj biwi not mine!
KK: fine then why did you call me out here?
Rahul: i didn't! you called me!
KK: no i didnt-giggles
Both are shocked
Rahul: fine lets leave before someone wonders where we are
KK: i suppose you mean Naina- giggles again
Rahul: my personal life is none of your business KAKOON BHABHI!
KK: dont Rahul...-giggles again and as she walks to him is unsteady and trips. Rahul catches her
Rahul: KK if your playing a game....
KK: what big eyes you have Rahul. they always made me feel special-KK gives sloppy smile
Rahul: what the heck! have u been drinking? answer me!
KK: nope just special juice Sid Bhai gave me and Tanu-another silly smile and puts arms around Rahul neck
KK: your sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo handsome-giggles
Rahul swears under breath
Rahul: lets get out. wait till i get a hold of Sid Bhai.
Rahul carries KK to door and tries to open but it wont open. he drops KK on sofa and twist and turns door handle but still wont open. he bangs and shout dawaza collo but only thunder can be heard.
behind him he hears singing:
KK singing and dancing around the room-
KK: hum aik kamre mein band ho....- (sings the song from Bobby?)
Rahul just looks on with annoyance
Rahul: KK please, your not yourself. please sit down
KK is dancing and singing out of Rahul reach. Rahul tries to grab her but misses.
Rahul: KK please mere baat soono....
KK is in a world of her own. Rahul tries to be angry but cant help smiling for KK looks so cute.
Rahul: KK your not yourself and your going to hate yourself tomorrow please we need to get out everyone will be looking for us
KK turns, smiles, curtsey and blows Rahul a kiss
KK: come and get me-giggles
Rahul rolls his eyes and as she comes pass grabs her but loses balance and falls on the sofa with KK underneath him.
KK: my my arent you strong and handsome!- fluttering of eyes and giggles
Rahul looks annoyed but slowly his eyes change and their is a look of tenderness. he brushes KK hair away from her face
Rahul softly to KK: your going to have a heck of a headache tomorrow KK
KK looking at Rahul and singing softly hum aik kamre meer bandho
Rahul in anguish: you'll not remember any of this but i wont forget a moment. give me strength, please my lord, for i know its wrong but even now i love you KK with every part that i am. when i am angry with you i hate myself. i hate telling you to be Aman biwi, its like a knife in my heart. but what can i do....?
KK: kiss me
Rahul: what?!
KK- giggles: in my dreams you've been always so loving but never kissed me, why don't you find me pretty? my dream Rahul kiss me, love me....
Rahul softly to himself: is this all a dream to you? then let it be mine too..
Rahul heads moves slowly down. shot to open window and full moon.
in Punj house:
Aman to Sid: Bhai have you seen KK?
Sid: not since i gave her and Tanu the drinks
Aman: you did give KK the drink i had specially made for her?
Sid: Aman you worry too much of course i did-but i dont get why it was so special and why you didnt give it?
Aman: you know Bhai one of those husband-wife things
Sid laughs and walks off. Aman goes to his bedroom-the room is set as a romantic scene with flowers and candlelight.
Aman to himeself: damn whats happened? i had the drink made specially so KK would forget and lose control over her emotions! she wouldve remembered i was her best friend, support, guide and fallen into my arms. this wouldve been a new beginning for us and she wouldve never of been able leave me after tonight! damn it where is she!?
FatimaB to NainaO: what you doing here?
NainaO: its a party and i was invited...
FatimaB: but you were suppose....
FatimaB walks quickly away and grabs waiter
NainaO: kya hoga app ko? turns to talk to another guest
FatimaB to waiter in angry whisper: app nay daydia woh notes?
Waiter: ji mamsaab
FatimaB: kis ko?
Waiter: Rahul saab...
FatimaB: aur..?
Waiter: woh mamsaab jist app nay point out kia
FatimaB points to NainaO: woh?
Waiter: nahi woh nahi thi
FatimaB mutters under her breath and walks away
out house. its late the rain has stopped.
Rahul is buttoning his shirt. his back to KK. KK is looking at him lovingly hair messed up. Rahul turns KK shuts eyes pretends to be asleep. Rahul comes to KK- kneels and brushes her hair softly off face
Rahul: for you this will be a dream but for me this is my reality. forgive me KK but im not as strong as you. having you in my arms after all this time, so loving i couldnt say no. this memory is what i'll live on; you and me together, a moment out of time -(touches her face gently)
Rahul very softly: my love....
Rahul leans down and gently kisses KK on the forehead, a final stroke of her face and after one last long loving look quickly turns away and climbs out the window-running away from his love and his pain.
KK watches him leave and touches her forehead and lips with her fingers slowly gently. tears gather in her eyes
KK: Rahul do you really think i would remember this as a dream? this moment is my life-you do love me as i love you, how can this become just a memory? but how can i tell you the truth about Aman? without proof no one would believe me least of all you.
KK turns into the sofa pillow and weeps as her heart is breaking again.on the floor are her broken chooriyan and dupatta.
hope u guys enjoyed it- what i would like this to become is kdmh alternative story- id like you guys to follow on from here with your own scene. it can be a conversation, a scene even just a line but the basis of it will be revolution! to bring back kdmh to the original format- the joining of Rahul and KK and now justice for NainaB-so Aman in prison.
