On your behalf RishTika (Rishab Swastika)Manit Tejasswi TS

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Posted: 5 years ago
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On your behalf RishTika TS Part 1

Thank you so much Reena for your wonderful edits which gave life to this story.

Thank you very much ashpat3 for the lovely banner.


I dedicate this story to fsahlah who wants me to write a story on Manit Tejeswi.

A middle aged man was walking on the road.

He was focusing on his shopping bags,so he did not see the vehicle coming from behind.

Suddenly a young man pulled him to a side.The middle aged man noticed the vehicle going away.

The middle aged man:Thank you very much.

The young man was surprised to see his face:Ritesh Sir!

Ritesh was also surprised:Rishab!

Rishab:You still remember me?

Ritesh:How can I forget my most brightest student?

Rishab smiled.

Rishab took the bags from him:I will carry them.

Ritesh:No need.

Rishab:Sir..you are so tired of carrying them that you are not even able to see the vehicles on your way.So I will carry them.

Ritesh:So what’s going on in your life now?

Rishab:Actually I got a job here.So I am here.I was staying in a rented house.But they have asked me to vacate as the 11 months contract is over.So I am searching for a new house to stay on rent.

Ritesh:When I am here why should you search for a new house?You stay in my house.

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:But Sir…how can I?Will your family members be ok with it?

Ritesh:My wife and daughter are very supportive.They won’t say no.

Rishab smiled:Thank you Sir.

Ritesh:What is the need of saying thanks for this?

He smiled.

The next day….

Ritesh came home with Rishab.Ritesh’s wife Anushree came.

Ritesh:Anu..I told you about my student Rishab who will stay here.This is Rishab.

Anushree smiled.

Ritesh:This is my wife Anushree.

Rishab:Hi aunty.

Rishab touched her feet.

Anushree smiled keeping her palm on his head:God bless you beta.

Consider this as your home.

Rishab smiled:Thank you very much.

A beautiful girl came downstairs.

Rishab was mesmerized by her beauty.

Ritesh:Swastika beta..this is papa’s student Rishab who will stay with us.

Swastika smiled at Rishab.

Rishab smiled at her.

Ritesh:Rishab..this is my only daughter Swastika.

Rishab smiled.

Rishab:Hi.

Swastika folded her hands.

Seeing that Rishab said:Namaste!

She smiled.

Swastika was skipping on the ground.After skipping she went to the dining room and drank some water.She tried to tie her hair.Then she realized that her earring is missing from the left ear.

Rishab came near her with a earring:Is this your earring?I got it from the ground.

She smiled with a nod.

He gave her the earring.While taking the earring from him her finger touched his.He blushed.

Swastika looked at him blush without understanding anything.

After a few days....

Swastika's kitten Ruby ran out.Swastika ran after the kitten.A car came that way.

Swastika almost cried being scared of the kitten getting hit by the car.But suddenly Rishab came and took Ruby and ran towards her.

Rishab:Take your Ruby.She is fine.

Swastika took Ruby from Rishab and looked at him with gratitude.

Rishab:Ruby is safe.Then why there are tears in your eyes?

She was silent.

He wiped her tears with his fingers.She was lost in him.Coming back to senses she started pampering Ruby.

Rishab was admiring her cuteness.

Rishab walked away smiling.Swastika raised her eye brows and looked at him go with a smile.

Ritesh,Anushree,Rishab and Swastika went to a mall.

Swastika was looking at the dresses.She was confused which one to pick up.

Rishab who was watching it went near her and said:This pink one will look the best on you.

Swastika smiled and gave it for packing.Rishab and Swastika smiled at each other.

Rishab's colleague Rakesh and Anuj came there.They were surprised to see Rishab and went near them.

"Hi Rishab".

Rishab:Hi guys.

Anuj:Is this your fiancee Rishab?

Rishab and Swastika blushed.

Slowly the smile faded away from her face.Ritesh -Anushree who heard it from the corner looked at each other painfully.

After a few days Rishab's mother Rakhi also joined him in their house.

Rakhi:Rishab,you said they have a lovely daughter.Where is she?

Rishab blushed:Maa,she has gone to her relative's house.In the evening there is Swastika's birthday celebration.You can see her that time.

Rakhi:I can't wait to see the girl who captured my son's heart.

Rishab was shy:Maa...

He turned back not facing her due to shyness.

Rakhi:I know that you love her.That's why on the phone you are always talking about her.

He blushed.

In the evening....

Swastika came wearing the pink Indian attire which Rishab chose for her.

Rishab was surprised to see her in that dress.

Rakhi went near her:I am Rishab's mother.Like Rishab said you are gorgeous.

Swastika touched her feet happily.

Rakhi went to talk to Ritesh and Anushree.

Rishab went near Swastika.

Rishab:You look like a Princess now.

She blushed.

He was not ale to take his eyes off her.

Swastika cut the cake and fed Ritesh and Anushree.

Rakhi to Ritesh-Anushree:I just came here today.So I know that it's too early to talk about this.But I can't wait anymore as good things should not be delayed.My son Rishab loves Swastika.

Ritesh,Anushree and Swastika were surprised.

Rakhi:Can you hand over Swastika for my Rishab?Will you please get her married to my Rishab?

Ritesh-Anushree were very happy.

Ritesh:To get a nice boy like Rishab for Swastika is a blessing.We are very happy.

Rishab and Rakhi smiled.

Ritesh-Anushree looked at Swastika.

Ritesh:Swastika...are you fine with marrying Rishab?

Rishab looked at her eagerly.

Swastika was just blushing.

Rakhi:My son Rishab is my birthday gift for you.

Swastika ran away blushing.

They all smiled.

Anushree:Swastika is happy to marry Rishab.She is shy.

Rakhi:Yes..I understood that.

Rishab was very happy.

Swastika was standing in the garden.Rishab went near her.

She was shy.

Rishab:I never opened my heart before you as I was nervous whether you will reject me.But now I want to tell you that I love you a lot.

Swastika blushed.

Rishab:Swastika,do you love me?

Swastika nodded blushing.

Rishab smiled:I understood your feelings for me.But please say it Swastika.I am longing to hear it from your mouth.

Swastika's face became dull.She looked at him painfully.

Rishab:Say Swastika....I have not heard your sweet voice till now.I am longing to hear it.Talk something if you are shy to say openly that you love me.

She ran inside crying.Rishab was stunned.

He turned back.

He saw Ritesh and Anushree in tears.

Rishab:Sir,why did Swastika cry?I can't understand anything.I just asked her to say if she loves me.But without saying anything she ran away crying.

Anushree wept:Our daughter Swastika cannot speak.That's why she became upset when you asked her to talk.

Rishab was shocked.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#2

Congrats on the TS!

Part 1

superb update

sad that Sawastika cannot speak.

will Rishabh still want to marry her?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 1


Fantastic and so Refreshingly Awesome Start

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Posted: 5 years ago
#4

Thanks a lot friends


Thank you so much Reena for your edits.Without your edits this story would not have been possible.

On your behalf RishTika TS Part 2

Swastika was standing in the garden.Rishab went near her.

She was shy.

Rishab:I never opened my heart before you as I was nervous whether you will reject me.But now I want to tell you that I love you a lot.

Swastika blushed.

Rishab:Swastika,do you love me?

Swastika nodded blushing.

Rishab smiled:I understood your feelings for me.But please say it Swastika.I am longing to hear it from your mouth.

Swastika's face became dull.She looked at him painfully.

Rishab:Say Swastika....I have not heard your sweet voice till now.I am longing to hear it.Talk something if you are shy to say openly that you love me.

She ran inside crying.Rishab was stunned.

He turned back.

He saw Ritesh and Anushree in tears.

Rishab:Sir,why did Swastika cry?I can't understand anything.I just asked her to say if she loves me.But without saying anything she ran away crying.

Anushree wept:Our daughter Swastika cannot speak.That's why she became upset when you asked her to talk.

Rishab was shocked.

Ritesh:We thought that after staying with us for a few days you understood it without us telling you that.We were happy thinking that after knowing her defect you were willing to marry her.But now we realized that you fell in love with her without knowing her truth.

Anushree burst into tears:Since you know her defect now will you reject her?

Rishab looked at them painfully.

In the room...

Rakhi:What is this Rishab?You loved a girl without even knowing that she is mute?How could you love her without knowing anything about her?No Rishab,I can't get my only son to a girl who is unable to speak.

Rishab:Maa,but Swastika is perfect in all other ways.Then why don't you forget this small defect?

Rakhi:Is it a small defect Rishab?She cannot speak at all.How will she converse with me and others?

Rishab:Through me Maa.On her behalf I will speak to you and others.

Rakhi:Rishab..be practical.It's not that easy as you think.

Rishab:I know Maa.But I love her a lot.For my love's sake I am willing to face this difficulty also.

Rakhi also looked at him emotionally:Rishab..how will I make you understand?After some years you yourself will get fed up of her.

Rishab:No Maa.I have full faith in my love and I am sure that she will never be a burden for me due to this defect.

Rakhi:But Rishab...

Rishab:Maa..please...if you want me to be happy please agree.

Rakhi looked at him painfully.

Rishab and Rakhi went near Ritesh and Anushree.

Rishab:You both have a doubt whether I will refuse to marry Swastika after knowing that she cannot speak.Now I want to answer your question.My answer is ..I can marry Swastika in every birth even if she can never speak.

Ritesh Anushree were overwhelmed.

Rakhi:Nothing is more important than my son's happiness for me.So I promise that Swastika will be my daughter from now onwards.

Ritesh-Anushree smiled emotionally.Ritesh hugged Rishab.

Rishab:I want to talk to Swastika.

Rishab went to her room.He saw her crying.

He went near her and wiped her tears.

Rishab:Tears do not suit your eyes.And why are you crying unnecessarily?You thought that my love for you will drain as I came to know that you can't speak?

She looked at him painfully.

Rishab:I don't care whether you speak or not.Without speaking also I can hear you saying that you also love me.That's more than enough for me.And I a there with you to speak to others on your behalf.

She looked at him in disbelief.

Rishab:I love you and on your behalf I will answer the question I asked you.I also love you Rishab.Right?

She nodded emotionally and embraced him.He caressed her smiling.

All the pre-wedding rituals happened fast.

Rishab-Swastika got engaged exchanging rings with each other.

Mehendi function was done.

Rishab-Swastika danced passionately on their Sangeet.

Rishab made the haldi function romantic by applying haldi on her cheeks with his cheeks.

Rishab-Swastika became a heavenly couple by getting into the beautiful bond of marriage.

Reception party...

Somebody asked Swastika:Mrs.Rishab Luthra,what is your name?

Immediately Rishab said:Swastika.

She smiled as he replied on her behalf.

Years passed....

Rishab was holding a phone and Swastika was sitting close to him.

They can see their daughter Revathi on the screen.Revathi is doing higher studies in London and is on video call with her parents now.

Revathi:Hi dad...hi mom...

Rishab:How are you?

Revathi:I am fine dad.

Rishab:Did you have your food?

Revathi:Dad...I know that you are asking this question on behalf of mom.Only mom asks about eating food on time.

Rishab-Swastika smiled.

Rishab:If you don't eat food on time you will become weak.

Revathi:Again's mom's advise conveyed by you dad.

They smiled.

Revathi:Ok mom.I promise you that I will eat healthy food on time.

Swastika showed the action indicating that she is hugging Revathi.Revathi too did hugging action.

Rishab:By the way did you find your life partner there?

Revathi:Dad...no way.I will fall in love only if I find a man who understands what's going in my mind without hearing me speak.Even though I can speak I want my man to speak my mind just like dad has been speaking on mom's behalf since many years.

Rishab-Swastika smiled.

Revathi:Ok..bye dad mom...will call you later.

Rishab-Swastika bid her good-bye.

Rishab-Swastika smiled at each other.

Years passed..still Rishab did not get fed up of Swastika nor he considered her as a burden as she is unable to speak.He loves her truly and made her understand that her inability to speak to speak is not a defect as he is there to speak on her behalf.Till now and till the end he will speak her mind as he knows her mind and heart very well..That's his love.

The End


Thank u so much 4 supporting this TS even though RishTika are an imaginary couple.

Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why u liked that character.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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I really loved their jodi. They both are looking good.

I think even kb should consider this pair.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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All the edits are very natural

Glad that Rishab made his mom understand

Good that he accepted her

Nice to see Rishab conveying Swastika's message

I love Avneet Kaur after I watched Aladdin

You didn't show her partner

Will miss this story

My favorite character is Rishab because he is so loving

My favorite scene was when RishTika had a talk with their daughter, I loved their scene because not only Rishab but their daughter too understand her mom very well

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Posted: 5 years ago
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thanks for the TS

fab update...

Rishabh accepted Swastika.

he made his mom understand

they get married and live happily

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2


Fabulous Update

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