PreeRan TS! Something Something- PART 3 updated on Page 5. - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Angrita !!!! Awesomeee😉
Waiting for the Rest!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wohooo, totally enjoyed reading. Such a PreeRan situation - soo excited for the update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thankyouu so much everybody for your lovely comments..🤗
M writing the second part..will update it soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krina_Patel

Omg!!! It's awesome

I Can't wait for next part pls update soon..pls...
I know it's sound crazy but can you pls post it today

Hahaha i wish i could have uploaded it by today itself so that i can share with you all..but alas..no time.. anyway i'll upload it soon..have a read..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys i wanna ask you all something..
Actually the idea i have in my mind it includes kritika too..i mean because she is a PreeRan shipper so i've included her too in the 2nd part..quite a lot of her..i hope you guys won't mind..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angrita

Guys i wanna ask you all something..

Actually the idea i have in my mind it includes kritika too..i mean because she is a PreeRan shipper so i've included her too in the 2nd part..quite a lot of her..i hope you guys won't mind..


Looking forward to it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone..my next part of the TS is ready..
Hope you guys like it..😊

Karan went to Kritika n brought her aside from the crowd..
"What happened bhai? I was doing an important work there"
"Kritika i need to talk to u"
"Yes bhai? Kya hua?"
"Wo.. preeta is calling youu"
"Preeta is calling me?? Where?"
She turned around her head.
"No no not here.. upstairs..in my room.."
"In your room? But why? I can't go there right now. I have a lot of things to do. Tell her i'll meet her afterwards ok? Bye."
Kritika was about to go.
"Ek min. Ek min. Arre tu jaa na ek baar. She is in problem."
"Problem?? Kya hua usse? She is fine right?"
"Naahii..wo..matlab..uskaa..wo.."
Karan felt little embarrassed to talk about that..he himself didn't know the reason behind this..
"Kyaa bhai? Bolo na kya hua?"
"Wo actually preeta's back side of the dress is torn..she can't come out like this naa..u go there..what she'll do otherwise?"
Kritika smiled.
"Arre mera bhai sharmaa raha hai kyaa??" She teased him.
"Ohh hello..kya sharma raha hai? Why will i be shy? Wo toh maii.."
"Ha thik hai thik hai..Listen..i will give u a dress of mine u go n give it to her n ask her to wear it..I can't go now.."

Kritika gave the dress to karan.. though karan first refused to go n give it to preeta but later he had to agree. Karan went to Preeta.
"Preeta..open the door..main hu." Karan whispered near the door.
Preeta quickly opened the door.
"You came? Thank god. Where is kritika?"
"She cannot come she is busy somewhere..so she asked me to co...One min. One min. Oh my god..Preeta..somebody is coming"
"Whaat?? Who?"
"I don't know but somebody is surely coming"
" Atchaa you come inside..fast.."
Preeta held karan's hand n pulled him inside closing the door.
"Whose there" Preeta asked karan in a very low voice.
"What do i know"
"U should know naa"
"Hare how will i know"
"U only said somebody is there"
"Toh i haven't seen whose coming naa"
"Aare toh.."
"Ek min..we will come to know whose coming..what is the point of arguing over that.."
"Ha ha thik hai thik hai"
"Huhh..mental"
"Tum mental"
"Tum mental"
"Nahi Tum"
"Tum.."

"Karannn" There was a knock in the door.
"Rishab/Rishab Ji" both of them echoed.
"Ye yaha kya kar raha hai?" Karan said.
"Karan.. Tu yaha hai naa?"
"Haa bhaii..aap yaha?"
"Arre..come downstairs naa..We all were searching for youu..What r u doing here?"
" Ha ha..wo main..m here to..to take the gift..for u n sherlin..ss..surprise gift.. Tu jaa na main aa raha hu..". Karan looked at Preeta with a irritated look.
"Giftt?? Atchaa jo bhi ho.. come fast"
Rishab went.
"I think Gayaa"
"Ufff..Thank god." Preeta was relieved now.
"Thank god?? Thank me ok? Tabse because of you main kya kya kar rahaa hu pata haii...bhai ko bhi jhooth bol dia maine..tumhare liye.. i don't know why m i doing this all..that too for youu.."
"Atchaa fine..thankyou..thankyou mere help karne ke liye..ok..? Ab laao..this is kritika's dress naa?"
" Haa..wear this..n go out of my room as soon as possible" Karan gave the dress to her.
Preeta was waiting for karan to go outside the room but he was still there thinking something.
"Aap jara bahar jayenge please..mujhe change karnaa hai actually.." Preeta fake smiled at karan irritated with the thought that he was still there in the room.
Karan smiled back at her with a flirty look.
"Kyaa hua ye stupid si smile kyun?" Preeta asked still irritated.
"M thinking something Preeta..kyuu naa hum.." karan went towards preeta.. Preeta went back untill she hit the wall.
"K..k..kyaa huaa.."
He put his hands around her arms.
"Hum tummm ek kamre mein bandh hoo aur chaabi kho jaayein..." Karan leaned very close to her n gave a teasing smile.
"Ek thappar khaoge..cheee...itnii gandi baatein karte ho tum..hatoo.."
Preeta pushed him back hard.
"Arre ismein ganda kyaa hai..its a song..n its very famous.." Karan said still smiling.."N its matching with our present situation..hainaa?"
"Ha ha kyu nahii..bakwaas bandh karo aur jao yaha se"
"Arre lekin.."
"Jaaaoo..." Preeta pushed karan out of the room n closed the door.

"Huhh..mental..i don't call her psycho without any reason..she is actually a psycho..iski naa dimag ki halat thik nahi haii"
Karan was just about to go when he thought " No No i can't go now.. Pata nahi phirse kauni musibat leke aa jayegi ye psycho. Until she finishes her work i'll be here.
Karan sat down taking a chair waiting for her to come outside.
*AFTER A FEW MINUTES*

Karan was just going through his phone when Preeta came out from the room.
"Oh you done? Ok lets go now" He stood up to go.
"Ek min Karan. I m not ready yet"
"Not ready?? Why? What you need to do now??"
"Actually i have a problem"
"Problem?? Offo What happened now? See..i knew it..i knew it..Yaar..bohot ajeeb larki ho tum..Kya hua ab?" Karan got almost irritated.
"Wo i m not able to tie the back chain n there are few fittings also which i can't reach at the back.. So.."
"Ohh..ho.. Atcha let me call somebody ok? Umm.. Srishti..she can help you or kritika if she is free..u wait.."
Karan was just about to go.
"Umm Karan..You said kritika is busy n srishti..i don't think so she can come too.. You will go, search for someone,call her..it will be too late.. m already very late..mumma must be searching for me.."
"Soo..thenn?? I mean will you go downstairs like this??? Karan asked quite confused.
"No No ofcourse not. I mean if..u..u can help..I'll guide you with the fittings.." Preeta said.
"Mee..?? You sure?"
"Yeahh.. That's the only thing we can do now.."
"Okay" Karan agreed.


So that's the end of Part 2..Share your views please..
Last part i.e. 3rd part will be updated soon..
Thankyouu for reading..
Edited by Angrita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its just amazing plz do update soon👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for next part...as this part was interesting 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely piece...
I am so excited to read the next one..

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