FF-pyar pg149 *Romance..SIZZLING HOT..!!* - Page 4

Originally posted by: SEEMA GANDHI

hi nice part.ya plz make kk get well soon. and kkep it up. write soon. 😉

m i not faster than all?😆

Originally posted by: HuTiJu

hi nice part.I always feel that i'm watching kk. Keep it up

dont say that buddy..sharm aati hai😳

Sonali........can i call u sonu? 😊

it was mindblowingggggggggggg 👏

I know I know am late........par gussa kar lo aur kya kahun........main hun hi aisi late lateef.....but I read all your parts....they are superb bachcha 😃 😃 😃

Carry on soon..... 😊

hi.....must say sonali u r a fab writer 👏 👏 right now the creatives need ur help...go there girl 😉 and make everything alrite bwn my sukk..fill sum romance ya... 😉 😳 i would luv 2 read it 😳 bt nice creativity... i like ur work 😉

well written part sonu..just keep on going 😃

well written sonuali 👏 👏
paar chota sa part hii 😆 😆

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

dont say that buddy..sharm aati hai😳

really???

Oh God!!..itna appreciation..i dont think i deserve it guys..first let me prevent myself from fainting...erm.. 😆

@my cute verni "baccha" di 😳 -ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai?...u can call me anything u like..thankyou soooooo very much..

@Jasmine-kabse intezaar mein baithi hoon..noone calls me dear...kuch source laga do na.. 😆

@Reshu di-aapne mujhe inspire kiya..but u shud be inspired by my speed.. 😳

@Preethi-kal badaaaaa wala likhoongi..

@Rokaiya, meri pyaari dost-sachhi..aise mat bola kariye.. 😆

part-5


Next morning, kumkum opens her tired eyes and finds herself being nursed by Sumit.He has been keeping wet cloth on her head, the entire night.Kumkum holds his hand.

Kumkum-(weakly)..sumit?..

Sumit-kumkum?..my baby?..kaise ho ab?..bukhar toh hai ab bhi 102..

She hugs him tightly...

Kumkum-subah ho gayi?..

Sumit-haan..munna subah ho gayi...kal aapke liye jab tak khana lekkar aaya..aape pehle hi so gaye they...maine uthaya nahin phir aapko..par i gave you Crocin...pata nahin fever kam kyun nahin hua...raat bhar soye bhi nahin aap..

Kumkum(worried)-sumit?..aaj toh 13th hai na?..

sumit(stroking her hair)-haan..kyun?.

Kumkum gets up holding his shirt..

Sumit-leto baba..tap rahi ho bukhar mein aur...

Kumkum(crying)-sumit...aaj Home Minister ki surgery hai..

sumit-kya?..

Kumkum-haan..aaj DR. Advani ka knee cap replacement tha..mujhe jaana padega..

Sumit(upset)-kumkum..are you crazy?..tum iss waqt itne bukhar mein khadi bhi nahin ho paogi...surgery is impossible..

Kumkum(hugs him in tears)-main kya karoon?..mujhe jaana padega...

Sumit understands her situation and hugs her back...

Sumit-pareshaan hone se toh kuch nahin hoga na?..main abhi dr. Shashank ko call kar ke dekhta hoon..theek hai?..par tab tak lie down..aao..

He makes her lie down and calls Dr Shashank..

Dr.Shashank is Dr.Riddhima's father and a senior senior cardiologist by profession.He is the dean and head of Sanjeevani hospital, where kumkum and riddhima serve.

Dr.Riddhima attends the call.

Sumit-riddhi?..Sumit here..

Ridhhima-sumit.?..oye!!..tera phone..?.itni subah subah?..Goodmorning...

Sumit-riddhi..uncle kahaan hain?..kuch zaruri baat thi..

riddhima-sumit..papa toh Pune gaye hain..koi seminar tha..par hua kya?..

sumit-riddhi...kumkum ki tabiyat kharab hai..kal raat se fever hai..ab tak bana hua hai..aur 100 se neeche toh jaa hi nahin raha hai temperature...

Riddhima-oh!...toh isko bol na ki aaj rest kare..

Sumit-arrey riddhi..wo baat hoti toh main tujhe call kyun karta?..woh keh rahi hai..aaj woh..Dr.Advani ki surgery hai..

Riddhima-arrey haan..aj toh itni high profile surgery hai..Oh God!!...ab kya karoge ?..

Sumit-Riddhi..ek toh raat bhar bukhaar se so bhi nahin payi hai...

Riddhi-weakness bhi toh hogi...Sumit..iski kal ki reports bhi theek nahin aayi hain...mujhe toh typhoid lag raha hai..

Sumit is tensed hearing his.

Riddhi-sumit..main ghar aati hoon..davai bhi de doongi..aur phir hum sab saath nikal jayenge hospital ke liye.. aur sumit..use aaram karne ke liye bolna aur kuch khila dena pehle..

Sumit-ok..thanks riddhi..

Riddhima-SHUT UP!!!...

Sumit giggles keeping the reciever down..He goes to kumkum, and finds her drowsily, lying..

Kumkum-kya hua?..

Sumit-Riddhima aa rahi hai davai le ke..abhi rest karo aap..ok?..

kumkum-sumit..naha loon?.

sumit-bilkul nahin..i'll give you a sponge bath..aap lete raho bas..

He gives her a sponge bath and helps her in getting ready.Then, he makes her have her breakfast and she has to eat reluctantly.Soon, Riddhima joins them...She finds her ill and gives some medecines..

Kumkum-riddhima..injection mat dena please..

Riddhima-kyun kk?...tujhe fever bahut tez hai abhi...tablet time lagayegi..

Kumkum-riddhi..surgery mein drowsy lagega toh kya karoongi...pls ?..

riddhima-theek hai...nahin inject karoongi..khush?..

Kumkum gives a faint smile..Riddhima is extremely tensed about her and hugs her tightly.

Riddhima-pagal kahin ki...aise beemar kyun pad jaati hai tu...apna itna khayal toh rakhna chahiye na...

She is scared and kumkum hugs her back.

Kumkum-Riddhi...keval bukhar hai..main marne nahin wali hoon pagal..

sumit and Riddhima both stop her.she is astonished by their love for her.Riddhima has tears in her eyes.

riddhima-mera parivar aise hi bikhar chuka hai kk..ye shabd dobara mat kehna please....

She leaves..Kumkum looks on..Sumit sits besides her..

Sumit-chalo..abhi stress mat lo..let jao..aadhe ghante mein nikalte hain...

Kumkum-sumit..Riddhi se baat kar lo..

Sumit-mana loonga use main..tum aaram karo chalo...(he is a bit upset too)

Kumkum-sorry..

Sumit hugs her-aise mat bola karo na tum...ye khayal bhi mujhe dara jaata hai...paagal...mera aur koi nahin hai duniya mein...iss tarah mat bolna kabhi dobara..

Kumkum-sorry..ab nahin hogi ye galti dobaara

Sumit makes her lie down..and goes to Riddhima..

Fantastic. Yaar, teri story ke liye to compliments kam pad rahe hai. Magar amazing & keep writing & haan, kya aap mujse dosti karege? Javab ke liye intezar rahega, pm karna. & Once again the ff is mindblowing.