FF-pyar pg149 *Romance..SIZZLING HOT..!!* - Page 2

hi sonali! so u too started. keep it up and su-kk rocks. 😊

Fantastic Sonu 👏 ...

Ek hi dum mein rula diya 😭 ...

Good writing..bas pace lose mat karna 😳 ..aur jaldi jaldi mat bhaagna 😳 ..okk...

Its ur story..bindaas likh 😉 ..

(P.S - yeh above line chori ki hai 😆 ..one advice which I always follow 😳 )

ek writter dusari writter ko advice ki slow likhna 😆 😆 .
it was fab sonali 😛
no problem better luck next time kk 😳

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Fantastic Sonu 👏 ...

Ek hi dum mein rula diya 😭 ...

Good writing..bas pace lose mat karna 😳 ..aur jaldi jaldi mat bhaagna 😳 ..okk...

Its ur story..bindaas likh 😉 ..

(P.S - yeh above line chori ki hai 😆 ..one advice which I always follow 😳 )

oye...maine isiliye toh likhna shuru kiya hai..kyunki main apne jaise impatient logon ka dard samajhti hoon..😆

and yaa reshu..for the fanfic..u r truly my inspiration..thanks😳

Originally posted by: preethi

ek writter dusari writter ko advice ki slow likhna 😆 😆 .
it was fab sonali 😛
no problem better luck next time kk 😳

nahin nahin...i wont write slow guys..main aisi nahin hoon😆

Originally posted by: SEEMA GANDHI

hi sonali! so u too started. keep it up and su-kk rocks. 😊

m glad u liked it..thanks seema😳

Mindblowing,fantastic. 👏 keep it up.Buddy y don't u become a writer?Then i'll be a producer.It'll be gr8 fun na.And don't forget 2 thank me,Becz i was the first who commented on ur ff.😆

Part 3.

Kumkum breaks down into tears, holding sumit's feet...Sumit sits down with her.

Sumit-arrey?..kumkum..ye kya kar rahe ho sweety?..

Kumkum-I ..I am sorry Sumit..main tumhe ek tohfa bhi nahin de sakti..Sumit..

sumit-pagli..kya ho gaya..arrey..its ok na?..hmm?..koi baat nahin kumkum..ismein rone ki kya baat hai baby?..

Kumkum(hugs him tightly)-Sumit?..mere saath kyun ho raha hai aisa..Sumit...kya main kabhi maan nahin ban sakti?..

Sumit-nahin buddhu..aisa kisne kaha aapse?...kumkum..baba ye kya baat hui..aap aise rone lage?..my kumkum is a brave girl na?..bacchi?..

He is treating her like a toddler..She cries her heart out..

Kumkum-sumit..paanch saal ho gaye mahari shaadi ko..itni koshishon ke baad bhi..kuch nahin hua...jab main bahar jaati hoon...toh log poochte hain....mandir mein ..har baar panditji..

Sumit-kumkum?..baba..bhagwaan jab chahenge ab ye khushi bhi ayegi hamari zindagi mein...aur kumkum..logon ka kaam hi hota hai na bolna phir?..

Kumkum(still sobbing in his arms)-tumhe bhi to khushi nahin de paa rahi hoon..

Sumit-tum na..ek dum bachpan ki tarah hi ho..bilkul nahin badli..pagal..tum mere saath ho..toh mujhe zindagi mein kuch aur nahin chahiye...mere liye toh sab kuch tum hi ho na...jee hi tumhaare liye raha hoon main..hmm?..chalo..ab utho aur wash your face..dekho zara poora munh red ho gaya hai..aur bukhar ho jata hain na tumhe rone se?..abhi tabiyat kharab bhi hai..beemar pad jaogi..chalo come with me..

He takes her to the bathroom and she washes her face..
They sit on the bed..Sumit gives her water to drink..

Kumkum-sumit?..main kuch der akele rehna chahti hoon..main chat par jaoon?..

Sumit-royegi toh nahin na meri ladli?..

Kumkum-(gives a faint smile)..nahin...

sumit-accha pehle ye batao kitne saal ki ho tum?..

Kumkum-kyun?..

sumit-batao toh sahi..

Kumkum-27 ki..

Sumit-pata hai main tumhe 28 yrs se janta hoon..

Kumkum-kaise..

sumit-aap jab aane wali thin na?..tab se aapke intezar tha mujhe..aur rani sahiba samajhti hain ki mujhse chupa engi apne dil ki baat hai na?..

Kumkum hugs her warmly...

Kumkum-nahin..i m ok now..bas aise hi..

Sumit-accha baba..jao..par phir khaana khana hai..jaldi se aa jana ok?..

Kumkum-hmm..

She leaves to be alone for sometime..

sonili make everything normal 😛

Sonali dear Mindblowing 👏part.