FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 59

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Posted: 17 years ago
Ab jaldi se likhna..m veryyyyyyyy eager to read what happens next... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ jasmine : It's okk bachcha.... no need to be sorry.... ab padha lo.... 😛 😃

@ sonu : haan haan sweetu wahi karungi jo main chahti hun 😉

@ nitz : tu plz size bata de kitna lamba likhun.... 😆 😆

@ roku : Tu sorry mat bol bachcha..... glad u liked it 😛

@ Priya : Yaar plzz koi mere se sorry mat bolo 😳 😳 ab aa gayi ho.. now read it... haan I'll do something of this Asit 😉

@ Shafo : Thanks bachchaaaaa 😃 😃
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Sumit is busy in his shootings and Kumkum is getting bored. She simply sits there and luks at them shooting.

Kk : Films mein dekhne mein kitna achcha lagta hai yeh sab….. uff kitna boring hai.. 😕 Ek hi shot dus dus baar… Main to aadhi paagal ho gayi hun yeh sab dekhte dekhte…. To Sumit aur Prachi karte kaise honge…. 😆 😆

She gets up from there and moves at a distance, she sees a cliff,

Kk : Wahan chalti hun, yahan to ab bhi shooting chal rahi hai… 😛

She luks at them once and goes towards the cliff.

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Su : Prachi, Kumkum ne tumhe kuch bataya tha, kahan gayi hai? 😕

Pr : nahi to, kyun hotel nahi gayi? 😕

Sumit shakes his head negatively.

Pr : Don't worry, Soumy gaya hai, aas-paas hi hogi…. Aa jaayegi…. 😊

Su : Prachi wo yahan nayi hai, kuch nahi jaanti…. Kisi ko nahi…. 😳

They are tense, Soumy too comes and tells that she is not around.

Su : Yeh ladki bhi naa….

Then they hear a voice,

"Shoot poori ho gayi?" 😛

They turn and find Kumkum standing,

Su (goes near her) : Kahan chali gayi thi? Kitna pareshaan tha main… I mean hum sab… Kisi ko batana to chahiye tha naa….. 😡 😡

Kumkum is little afraid, at his scolding. 😉

Pr : Sumit, relax. Main poochti hun, Kumkum….. kahan gayi thi? 😳

Kk : Prachi, tum sab log to shooting mein busy rehte ho, main baithe baithe bore ho jaati hun…. To main….. (pointing towards the cliff) Wahan gayi thi… dekhne mein achchi lagi thi….. 😛 😛

They luk there.

Pr : Wahan…… (pointing her finger) Cliff pe….. 😲

Kumkum nods. 😛

So : Kumkum, tumhe pata hai, is mausam mein it's so dangerous to go there, wo bhi akele. 😕 😲

Kk : Mujhe kya pata? Mujhe dekhne mein achchi lagi to…. 😛 😳

Su (shouts) : Agar nahi pata to poochne ya batane mein kya jaata hai? 😡 😡

Pr : Sach men Kumkum, it's very risky….. khair Sumit yeh bhi sahi keh rahi hai ki yeh bore ho jaati hogi to…. 😳 😕

Sumit stares at Prachi, Prachi quickly turns towards Kumkum, 😡 😆

Pr : Nahi Kumkum, saari galti tumhari hai…. Very bad….(luking at Sumit now) Ab theek hai… 😆 😆

Kk : ohho sorry bola naa…. Achcha dekho main yeh kitne achche flowers laayi wahan se…. 😛 😛

They were pink and purple coloured flowers.

Kk (smiling) : Dekho naa….. 😊

She gives some to Prachi, Soumy and then goes to Sumit.

Kk : aap nahi lenge….?... Sorry kaha naa… 😳

She holds her ears. 😳 😳

Su : Kumkum…..

Then he sees a cut on her hand….

Su : Yeh kya hua? 😕

Kk : Ohh wo….. Phool todte waqt lag gayi, kaanta chubh gaya…. 😳

Su : Kumkum tum bhi naa…. Kya zarurat thi phool todne ki?..... Chalo main dawa laga dun. 😳 😳

He takes her, Prachi and Soumy smile at this. 😉 😛

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Sumit and Soumy enter, dressed properly in black suit , they luked very handsome.

So : Kya yaar …. Kumkum U r not ready? Prachi kya poora time sirf tum taiyaar hoti rahi….. 😕 😕 😆

Pr : Shut up…. 😆 . Yeh Kumkum na ….. Keh rahi hai ki iske paas gown nahi hai, aur party ka code gown hai.. 😕

So : Kumkum, pehle batana tha, itna time waste kiya taiyaar hone mein maine. 😆 😆

Su : Arey time waste kyun hum jaayenge naa…. Hai naa Kumkum? 😳 😉

Kk : Haan bilkul….. aap log jaaiye. 😕 😳

Su : Aap log nahi…. Hum sab jaayenge… 😃

Kk : Main…. Par code…. 😕

Su : Mujhe pata tha ki tumhare paas gown nahi hoga….. isliye maine tumhare liye already khareed liya tha…. Yeh lo Prachi, ab jaldi taiyaar hokar neeche aao. 😳 😳

Pr : How sweet….. 😛

Kk : Kya? 😕

Pr : Ermm…. How pretty….. yeh gown….. dekh naa….. Pink colour ka hai… It's beautiful na……. 😳 😳 😆

She makes Kumkum ready for the party.

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After half an hour,

So : I hope hum aaj hi party mein pohunch jaayen. 😆

Su : Haan yaar, ruk naa…….

Then Prachi comes down,

Pr : So here I present before u, Kumkum…. 😳

Kumkum comes out and she luked beautiful, Sumit keeps luking her,

Her hair were open, with small pink jewellery, a small pendant, her gown had V-shape infront, not too deep, had strips, and a small dori at back, the dori ends had small heart shaped pearls. The gown had a cut in between, near her legs.. from the knees to feet. 😉 😉

Prachi and Soumy leave.

Kumkum comes near Sumit,

Sumit keeps luking at her, he felt that she was a little uncomfortable. 😳 😳

Su : Kya hua? Dress achchi nahi hai? 😳 😕

Kk : Nahi…. (hesitating) Wo pehli baar…. Aisi dress pehni hai to…. 😳 😳

Su : Par tum bohut achchi lag rahi ho…. 😛 😉

Now she luks at him, he luked at her and slowly came closer

He gently brought his hand near her face. She closed her eyes. He slowly touched her eye and so some kajal came on his finger. Then he placed the finger near her hair , at the neck. 😳 😳 😉

Su : Tum par kisi ki bhi nazar pade, par tum qaid meri hi nazron mein rahogi, koi tumhe wahan se riha nahi kar sakta. 😳 😉

She opens her eyes, and luks at him.

Then they leave for the party.
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am on pg 13 of ur ff rite now.. 😆
will read n cover it soon.. 😉
i must say its very very interesting 😛
i am loving it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
What a part........just loved the way KK said sorry to Su & the flowers.....so KK is the 1st one 2 give flowers to Su.........the best part is this dialogue "Tum par kisi ki bhi nazar pade, par tum qaid meri hi nazron mein rahogi, koi tumhe wahan se riha nahi kar sakta"

Continue soon with some romantic scenes in the party...
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ jasmine : haan haan carry on..... abhi to tum Sukk ke milan tak bhi nahi pohunchi.... 😳 😳 😳

@ Priya : Thanku....... ya main koi aisa dialogue likhna chahti thi jo pehle kabhi bola na gaya ho.... 😳 😳 I didn't want anyone to say, Ohh yeh is movie ka dialogue hai.... ya is serial mein bola tha..... 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ohh 2 parts at a stretch 😃 ...good good 😆 ...keep on writing 😆 ...

IsabellaCullen thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow didi...!!..Nice update...but pls write a lonnnnnnnnnnnnnger one.. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
verni ithna baas 😆 😆
superb dec of kk looks 😳 😳 😳 huma suna may hii ya haal hii su kya hoga 😳 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Bachcha...KK Sumit ki nazron main qaid aur hum sab tumhari shabdon main qaid!! 👏

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