FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 60

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ anku : tu kuch nahi bhi kahegi to bhi I'll understand u..... 😳 😳

@ reshu : haan ab stretches pe hi kaam hogaaaa 😉 😉

@ sonu : plzzzzz mujhe long ki definition de do. 😆 😆

@ nitz : haan Sumit to flat hi ho gaya..... 😆 😆 😉

@ rahi : thanku bachcha.... bas yunhi qaid rehnaaa 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Long means more than 5000 words.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwww yeh achcha hai..... yeh long ki definition sirf mere liye? hmm.....

Tum sab ke liye nahi? 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

wowwwww yeh achcha hai..... yeh long ki definition sirf mere liye? hmm.....

Tum sab ke liye nahi? 😉 😉



Par jaldi se likhna...aapka n reshu di ka ff r fabulous...I m always eager to read more...
Jaldi se update karna didi?..pls pls pls pls pls..?.😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi di.. 😊
read it till pg 54.. 😉 😛
m sure kal tak cover karlungi..
actually aapne itna fab likha hai ki aakhein hataane ka mann nahi karta 😉 😆 😆
m loving it more day by day 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ sonu : am writing.... 😳 😳

@ jasmine : thankuuuu....... carry onnn 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago


All four reach at the party. Kumkum was mesmerized to see the beauty of the party, she has never been to any such party before. 😳 😳

After some time, she easily mixed with other people, but she always remained with Prachi. 😳 Sumit glanced at her between, he was having some feelings which he himself could not understand. He just wanted to be near her, caress her and love her. Then he notices something and he goes near her. 😉 😛

Actually he passes near her, and stays near her for 2 seconds, and then he slowly says in her ears,

Su : Tumhari dori.. 😉

Saying this, he quickly goes away. Kumkum realizes that her dori has got loose and so her strip may loosen and fall. 😕 Prachi was standing nearby, she holds Prachi's hand and signals,

Kk (whispers) : Prachi, meri dori loose ho gayi hai, main hall ke baahar jo rooms hain, unme se pehle waale room mein hun, plzz aa jao. 😳

Pr : Hmm chalo.

Kumkum goes first quickly, Prachi is about to go when the director calls her to meet some people. 😕

Sumit sees this and signals Prachi that he'll go. Prachi nods. 😳 😳

Kumkum was in the room and was trying to untie the knot and then tie it properly. Sumit comes in and sees her. 😳 😉

Kk (talking to herself) : Yeh Prachi bhi naa, Knot to itni tight hai ki khul hi nahi rahi, aur dori loose ho gayi… Uff… 😳 😳

Her hair were infront and she was trying, then Sumit walks near her, she notices that somebody has come,

Kk : Prachi, jaldi aa… yeh khol ke achche se baandh. 😉

Sumit comes near her and says slowly,

Su : Main kar dun? 😳

Kumkum understands that it is Sumit, she did not know what to say… she stood quietly. 😳 😳

Sumit slowly brought his hand forward and opened the string. 😳 😳 Kumkum closes her eyes, then he tightened the string and Kumkum moved her shoulders back, it was so tight, 😳 😳

Kk : Ouch…

Su (slowly) : Sorry….

Then he makes the dori a little loose, and then ties it.

When he has tied, this time he did not say, " ho gaya." Instead, he came closer and slowly kissed her back. ❤️ ❤️ Then he gently kissed her shoulder and then her neck. ❤️ Kumkum, before she could be swayed away in the emotion, opens her eyes and tries going, but Sumit held her by wrist. 😳 😳 😉

Kumkum turns and luks at him, he slowly went near her.

Kk : Su…. Sumit… dekhiye…. 😳

Sumit kept finger on her lips. He went closer and kissed her neck again. ❤️ He held her hands and slowly took his hands along her arms and held her back, with one hand and then one hand on her waist. His grip was tight on her waist. 😳 ❤️ They kept luking at each other, then they heard loud applauding in the hall. Kumkum takes her hand roughly away from him and runs away from there. When she does so, her bracelet remains in his hand. 😳

Su : dekhna Kumkum, tum ek din jab mere itne hi kareeb hogi tab main tumhe yeh khud pehnaonga. 😉

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They reach the hall, the dance was going to begin, everybody chose their partners. Soumy and Prachi were already on the dance floor. Kumkum was standing there, quiet cold after the experience she had a few minutes before. 😳 😳 Sumit, too, came and starts moving towards her to ask for dance, but a man comes in between and asks her for dance. She sees Sumit coming and agrees to dance with the person. Sumit stops seeing this, then a girl comes and asks Sumit for dance and Sumit agrees. 😕 😕

There was no song, only music, they were dancing, the light was very dim, so that people couldn't sees anyone except their partners. Sumit danced near Kumkum, so that he could see her. 😳 😳

Then after some time, the man dancing with Kumkum tried coming closer to Kumkum. He held her waist tightly and tried kissing her. 😡 😡 Kumkum, tried going but he held her tightly. She remembered those scenes when Asit tried raping her, she became very scared. 😭 Tears came into her eyes. Then the man felt a hand on his shoulder, it was Sumit. Sumit luked at Kumkum , who was very scared.

Su : Excuse me, I'll be dancing with her now. So please. 😡

The man could not say anything, he went away from there.

As he went, Sumit turned towards Kumkum, she stood with her head down.

Su : Darne ki baat nahi hai, wo chala gaya… 😳

Kumkum hugs him tightly, Sumit understood that she was scared and so he caressed her hair and hugged her back. 😳 😳 After some time, she moved away and stood there , wiping her tears.

Su : Main hun naa…. (after a pause) Theek hai, main dance nahi karunga tumhare saath, chalo, kaho to hum chalein. 😳 😳

Kumkum luks at him, with surprise, and thought, how much he cared for her feelings. 😳 😳

He is about to go, when Kumkum held his hand. He turned and luked at her. She slowly tuk his one hand and kept on her waist, 😳 😉 and held his other hand and kept her other hand on his shoulder. 😉

Kk : Mujhe aapke saath dance karna hai. (then making an innocent face) … Kar sakti hun? 😳 😳 😉

Sumit smiles and nods. They start dancing.
😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww....My didi...!!! 🤗 ..

Superb part...!!..my kind...

Pls ab koi problem nahin honi chahiye..at least aapke ff mein toh nahin...n make kk confess soon... 😳

Aakhir kab tak "chup tum raho..chup hum rahein?.."

It was very romantic...!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hila verni too good i thought fr a movment it was dream bt read the whole part again 😳
it was really humm superb 👏 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good verni...too good 👏 👏 ...

Romance part was defo good 😃 ...

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