FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 56

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Posted: 17 years ago
Verni both the parts were awwwwsome.
Just keep going.
Loved the saree wala scene.
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ roku : how sweet bachcha..... thanku..... will write soon... 😳 😳 😳

@ nitz : this is for u 🤗 ..... and agla part aaj nahi ho paayega... 😳 😳

@ sonu : haan re tujhe waise bhi sab pata hota hai..... 😆 .... aur jaldi bhej nahyi id..tu bhi naa.......paagall 😆 😆

@ reshu : I will keep up..... tu bhi kaam khatm karke likhhh 😳 😳 😛

@ rekha : thanku.. 😳 😳

@ shafu : thanks bachcha..... 😊 😛

@ raina : so sab ko saree waala scene kuch zyaada achcha laga..... thanksss 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Bachcha log..... see

main aaj nahi update karne waali.... kyunki aaj main apne school friends ke saath.... lunch pe jaa rahi hun.... 😃 😃 😃

itne din baad hum sab milenge.... 😊 😊 😳

aur shaam ko bhi shaayad jaana hai.... 😳 😳 😉

so kal ya parson 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanQQQQQQ

kaise ho aap?...

ye thankQ sirf isiliye kyunki aap kal ek part likhoge... 😆

Nice to see u as a lark n not as an owl.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
nahi sonu main owl hi hun..... aaj abhi isliye aayi bcoz main saara din nahi aa sakti and not at night too....

warna ask henna, anku, eks, nids, reshu main raat ko 10 baje ke baad chatting shuru karti hun 😆

dopahar mein soti hun....... aur raat mein jagtiiiii 😆 😆 😆

sonu main teri badi sis hun so no thanku samjhi 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hii ok verni humm sabh same ek hi thara hii 😆 😆
kal likhna 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
fabbb parts verni ... both of them 👏 👏 👏...

@reshu - khabardaar jo tune ff chhodne ke baare mein socha toh 😡 😡 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ nids : thanku sweetu.... haan reshu ko hum sab milke maarne waale the..... but ab to... she updatedto plan cancel 😃

@ nitz : yup we all are samee 😊 😉

Here's the next part..... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago


Sumit is sitting peacefully, with closed eyes. Suddenly he is disturbed by his phone's ring. He opens his eyes and picks up his mobile, and sees his house's number.

Su : Ghar se?....... Kumkum ka hoga….. par abhi…. 😕

Su : Hello.

Kk : Hello Sumit, aap pohunch gaye wahan….. 😆

Su (smiles) : Kumkum, abhi to main Mumbai mein hi hun, I told u ki yeh jagah Mumbai se thodi doori pe hai. Aur abhi mujhe ghar se nikle bhi sirf aadha ghanta hua hai. 😆 😳

Kk (in a low voice) : Ohh haan… Sorry, wo….

Su (smiling) : Kumkum, it's okk…. Fine….. U don't worry, main wahan pohunch ke phone kar dunga… hmm. 😛

Kumkum doesn't speak anything….. Both are quiet. Becoz Kumkum couldn't say what she felt, and Sumit knew what she felt but couldn't tell her that. 😳 😳 😉

After a pause,

Su : Kumkum, main apna khyaal rakhunga….. don't worry, U too take care. Okay. 😳

Kk : Hmm.

Su : Sure….. Don't be upset. Hmm. 😳

Kk : Hmm. Take care. Bye. 😳

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Kumkum sees the time, it's 12 noon.

Kk : Itni der ho gayi hai, ab tak to Sumit ko pohunch jaana chahiye tha…. 😕

She calls him. Somebody picks up the phone.

Kk : Hello Sumit.

Voice : Arey yaar, kabhi hume bhi yaad kar liya karo.. 😉

Kk (recognizing the voice) : Kaun…. Soumy? 😛

So : Haan yaar….. tum to bhool hi gayi ho…. Lagta hai meri dosti kuch pasand nahi aayi tumhe? 😆 😆

Kk : Nahi Soumy , aisi baat nahi hai…. Wo bas ….tum bhi to busy rehte ho hamesha…. 😆 😛

So : Very gud, actually u know what Kumkum, mujhe yeh art tum ladkiyon se seekhni chahiye ki kaise apni galti ka ilzaam saamne waale pe daalo. 😆 😆

Kk (smiles) : Achcha……. Okk…. Yeh batao Sumit ka mobile tumhare paas. 😕

So : Nahi wo, Sumit shoot kar raha hai, Prachi bhi wahin hai, main bore ho raha tha, to uski van mein baith gaya aake….. u know hum designers ka kaam jaldi ho jaata hai…. Abhi thodi der baad jaana hai…. To hi dekha tumhara call to utha liya….. par isse pehle bhi tumhare missed calls pade the right? Par tab main yahan tha nahi. 😛 😛

Kk : Ohh….. kab pohunche tum log?

So : Kaafi der pehle…. Maybe 10 baje. 😊

Kk : Okay…

So : Anything important…

Kk : No…. nothing…. Bas aise hi phone kiya tha… Okay bye…. 😕

So : Bye.

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Sumit and Prachi come to Soumy.

Su : Hii…. Yaar bohut thak gaye…. Jab se aaye hain, busy shooting.

Pr : Yeah , right… Chalo Soumy , mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai….

So : Yup sure… Chalo khaana khaate hain..

They start going,

So : Ohh haan Sumit,… Kumkum ne call kiya tha….

Su (stops there, remembers that Kumkum asked him to call) : Kya keh rahi thi?

So : Aisi hi bas….. haan missed calls bhi pade the…

Su : Okk.. Kitne baje kiya tha….? 😕

So : Umm….. around 12.

Su : Mar gaya…….. aur tu mujhe abhi bata vaha……. Kya yaar? 😡 😡

Pr (laughing) : Soumy Chad use….. aaj yeh gaya….. 😆 😆

Su (irritatingly) : Shut up….. 😆 😡

Prachi and Soumy leave for lunch and Sumit takes his mobile and goes to his van.

He calls his house. Kumkum picks up.

Kk : Hello.

Sumit is afraid to speak.

Kk : Khaana kha liya aapne? 😳

Su : Hunh….. nahi….Kumkum tumne kaise jaana ki main…. 😉

Kk : Nahi khaaya to kha lijiye jaake. Warna shooting mein phir busy ho jaayenge. 😳

Su (slowly) : I m sorry Kumkum. Mujhe dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha…. Tumhe phone karne ka…. Am sorry….

Kk : It's okk…….. fine….. No problem. 😳

Sumit remembers that he too speaks these things when Kumkum says sorry to him. 😛 😆

Su (smiling) : Matlab tum naaraz nahi ho naa….. 😃

Kk : Nahi. 😳

Su : Pakka naa….

Kk (smiling) : Pakka….

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It's night, 11:30p.m., Kumkum is very upset, as Sumit called her at 6:00 and said that they are to depart from there.

Kk : Itni der ho gayi….. abhi tak nahi aaye Sumit… Subah to isse kam time mein pohunch gaye the…. Traffic ho sakta hai….. 😕

She waits for another 15 minutes.

Kk : Main……. Main……. Soumy ko phone karti hun, kyunki Sumit ka phone lag nahi raha.

She calls Soumy,

Kk : Hello Soumy…

A man : Nahi Ma'am, main unka servant hun….. Sir to so gaye…..

Kk : Jee kab aaye wo?

Man : kareeb 45 minute pehle……. Umm 11 baje ke aas-paas.

Kk : Okk, Thanku.

She disconnects, and is very upset now.

Kk : Soumy to itne pehle aa gaya….. to Prachi bhi aa gayi hogi…. Ab kya karun?....... Kise phone karun? Sumit plzzz….. 😭

She is very disturbed, and frightened.

Then the door-bell rings. She rushes and opens the door…

She sees Sumit standing. On seeing him, she heaves a sigh of relief…. And a tear rolls down her cheek. 😃 😃

She hugs him tightly. 😃 😳

Sumit doesn't say anything, instead hugs her back with love and care. 😳 😳

They stand like that for sometime. Sumit caressing her hair all the time. 😊 😊

Su : Kumkum….. andar chalein. 😳

Kk (little embarrassed) : Haan…. 😳

She walks in, Sumit closes the door, and comes in..

Kumkum turns to ask him something, when she notices that Sumit wasn't walking properly.

Kk : Kya hua Sumit?........ 😕

Su : Haan…. Kuch nahi,… bas thodi moch hai.. 😛

Kk : Nahi Sumit.. aap.. (then she sees his hand bleeding) Sumit… aapka haath…. Dikhaiye…. 😕

She takes his hand and sees.

Kk : Sumit…. Yeh….

Su : Kuch nahin bas….. pehli baar gaadi drive ki naa…. itni raat ko itni door….. isliye….. wo chota sa accident ho gaya tha… am fine now… 😛 😛

Kk : Aapne drive ki….. Kyun driver gaya tha naa subah…..

Su : Wo….. hum jahan shooting peg aye the….. wahin paas ke gaon mein uska ghar tha….. uska bohut mann tha jaane ka…. To maine jaane diya… 😳 😳

Kk : Haan…. Apni chod ke sabki chinta kijiye….

She takes him to sofa….. and then folds his pant , in the leg…. Where it was hurt.

Kk : Sumit… yeh to swelling aa gayi hai….. kahin fracture na ho…..

Su : Arey nahi….. jerks ki wajah se….. ho gaya hoga…. 😛

Kk : Nahi Sumit….. Main abhi doctor ko bulati hun…. 😕

Su : Arey nahi….. iski zarurat nahi……. Kal subah dikha denge chal ke…. 😳

Kk : Sumit, main aapse pooch nahi rahi hun….. bata rahi hun ki main Doctor ko bula rahi hun. 😆 😆 😛

She says this and goes to call doctor.

Sumit smiles and thinks : Kaash tum hamesha aise hi mera khyaal rakhti raho.
😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Verni abhi aur mazaa aa raha hai!! 👏 👏 very well-written.....& I'm just loving Soumy too! 😳

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